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Writing 1 体育 | 首次野外徒步活动
假定你是李华,你班计划组织首次野外徒步活动,请给酷爱户外运动的外教Mr. Green写邮件,内容包括:1.活动筹备情况;2.请求专业指导。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.请按如下格式在以下位置作答。
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Dear Mr. Green,_______________________________________________
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Best regards,
Li Hua
教考衔接:人教B1U2,人教选B2U4,外研B2U5;
请参考素材3“求助”,素材7“感谢”,附录一~二
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审题谋篇
文体:求助信
人称:第一、第二人称
时态:一般现在时(说明当前计划和一般事实)、现在完成时(描述已完成的筹备工作)
读者意识:酷爱户外运动的外教 Mr. Green既是指导者(需要展现对他的专业尊重),也是潜在参与者(可以提出邀请),同时需体现对他的爱好和经验的了解。语气应礼貌、诚恳、略带请求
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Dear Mr. Green,
Hope this email finds you well.问候寒暄 Our class is organizing its first hiking trip and we’d love your expertise to ensure its success.引入活动+写信目的
We’ve chosen a beginner-friendly trail in Green Valley, scheduled for next Saturday. Basic preparations—route research, packing lists (maps, first-aid kits, water, and snacks), and group assignments—are complete.活动筹备情况 However, as beginners, we’d greatly value your professional input (专业的建议). Could you kindly review our plan for safety and practicality (n. 可行性)?
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Additionally, we’d appreciate your suggestions on pacing or equipment checks.请求专业指导
Your experience would make this adventure both safe and memorable.重申能力 Please let us know if you can join or advise us.表达期盼 Thank you!致谢
Best regards,
Li Hua
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佳句 We’ve chosen a beginner-friendly trail in Green Valley, scheduled for next Saturday. (分词短语作定语)
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Writing 2 智育 | 向外籍教师求助
假定你是李华,高考后想报考英语专业,但是你的口语太差,你偶然在网上发现外籍教师Anna在线辅导英语口语,请根据以下要点写一封求助信,内容包括:1.介绍自己的情况;2.向外教求助;3.表示感谢并期盼回复。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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教考衔接:人教B1U5,外研B1U2;
请参考素材3“求助”,素材7 “感谢”,附录一~二
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审题谋篇
文体:求助信
人称:第一、第二人称
时态:一般现在时(描述当前状态)、现在完成时(描述已有的知识储备)、一般将来时/现在进行时表将来(描述未来计划)
读者意识:外教Anna,一位提供在线口语辅导的专业人士, 需体现对其专业能力的认可、对其时间的尊重,并清晰说明自己的需求
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Dear Anna,
I’m Li Hua, a senior three student.自我介绍 Learning on the Internet that you help students online with oral English, I am writing to ask you for guidance.写信目的
During the past ten years, I’ve acquired about 3,100 English words and some basic grammar. I am planning to major in (主修) English in college after graduating from high school. However, so poor is my oral English that I can’t communicate with others in English fluently.介绍自己的情况 Therefore, I am
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dying to (渴望做) improve my oral English with professional guidance.提出求助
I would appreciate it if you could consider offering me some assistance, like a brief trial session.表示感谢 Thank you for your time and I’m looking forward to your early reply.期盼答复
Yours,
Li Hua
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佳句 However, so poor is my oral English that I can’t communicate with others in English fluently.(倒装句,说明自己的问题)
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