2-附录二 跟着教材积累最佳读后续写素材（课件PPT）-高中英语提分写作周周赢读后续写（高中通用）

这是一份高中英语同步教学课件，聚焦读后续写素材积累，分动作、情感、神态、环境、人物外貌描写及续写结尾、修辞手法等模块，精选外研版、人教版教材例句，为学生提供结构化学习支架。 资料特色显著，紧扣语言能力培养，通过教材同步素材提升表达准确性，融合比喻“swam as fast as lightning”、无灵主语句“Wednesday night saw...”等修辞实例，助力思维品质提升，既帮助学生丰富续写细节，又为教师提供实用教学资源，适合高中各年级尤其是高三备考使用。

附录二 跟着教材积累最佳读后续写素材 1.I was organising my words in my head when the girl next to me gave me a nudge.我正在整理我的语言,这时我旁边的女孩推了我一下。(外研B1) 2.I was running out of the classroom when I bumped into a girl literally.我跑出教室的时候撞到了一个女孩。(外研B1) 3.Doubtfully, Bob unfolded the note. His hands were shaking by the time he had finished reading. 鲍勃疑惑地展开纸条。他看完纸条,双手颤抖。(外研B1) 第 ‹#› 页 附录二　跟着教材积累最佳读后续写素材 4.Somehow, I forced my finger to press the button.不知怎么的,我强迫自己按下了按钮。(外研B1) 5.One woman tripped over the stone and her water pot went crashing to the ground. She picked herself up and limped away in tears.一个妇女被石头绊倒了,她的水罐摔在地上。她爬起来,含着泪一瘸一拐地走了。(人教B3) 6.After a while, a group of women came along, each balancing a pot of water on her head.过了一会儿,一群妇女走了过来,每个人头上都顶着一罐水。(人教B3) 第 ‹#› 页 附录二　跟着教材积累最佳读后续写素材 7.A shocked Winton watched as the majority of people rose to their feet.温顿震惊地看着大多数人都站了起来。(外研B3) 8.I reached down, expecting rice and vegetables, but instead stuck my hand into a bowl of warm, thick soup.我伸出手,以为会碰到米饭和蔬菜,结果手却伸进了一碗温热的浓汤里。(外研选B1) 9.Spotting the car with its window left open, the greedy thief didn’t hesitate.看到那辆车车窗开着,这个贪婪的小偷没有迟疑。(外研选B2) 第 ‹#› 页 附录二　跟着教材积累最佳读后续写素材 11.My muscles were aching and my knees shaking as we dragged ourselves down the mountain towards home. 当我们拖着沉重的脚步下山回家时,我的肌肉酸痛,膝盖发抖。(人教选B4) 第 ‹#› 页 附录二　跟着教材积累最佳读后续写素材 1.Everyone started laughing. I looked at them in panic.大家笑起来。我惊慌失措地看着他们。(外研B1) 2.I gathered all my courage to take a bite and was amazed to find it wasn’t so bad.我鼓足勇气咬了一口,惊奇地发现尝起来还不错。(外研B1) 3.I was very afraid and I felt so alone and discouraged.我非常害怕,感到既孤独又沮丧。(人教B2) 第 ‹#› 页 附录二　跟着教材积累最佳读后续写素材 4.On the day of the concert, I was so nervous that I woke up with butterflies in my stomach.在音乐会那天,我很紧张,醒来时心里忐忑不安。(人教B2) 5.Disappointed by his behaviour, I said all this to my best friend.我对他的行为感到失望,便把这一切都告诉了我最好的朋友。(外研B3) 6.Embarrassed and ashamed, I can’t concentrate on anything. 我既尴尬又羞愧,无法集中注意力。(外研B3) 7.At first Ryan was nervous, but soon a great warmth filled him.一开始瑞恩很紧张,但他很快就充满了热情。(外研B3) 第 ‹#› 页 附录二　跟着教材积累最佳读后续写素材 8.Stepping out of the station with a heavy heart, I suddenly feel a fresh wind on my face.怀着沉重的心情走出车站,我突然感到一阵清风吹在脸上。(外研B3) 9.And when the ship sank, our hearts sank with it.船沉了,我们的心也跟着沉了。(人教选B3) 10.I feel low. It’s cold and windy.我情绪低落。天气寒冷,还刮着风。(人教选B3) 11.I was so frightened that I just froze.我吓呆了。(人教选B3) 第 ‹#› 页 附录二　跟着教材积累最佳读后续写素材 12.It was like being hit by a huge wave of excitement.就像被巨大的兴奋浪潮击中。(外研选B1) 13.I was also caught up in the excitement and cheered so hard that I thought my lungs would burst!我也兴奋极了,拼命欢呼着,我觉得我的肺都要炸了! (外研选B1) 14.As we pass Cuona Lake, I feel a sense of pride and achievement.我们经过措那湖时,一股自豪感和成就感油然而生。(外研选B1) 15.You can see the joy and pride on the faces of the Chinese fans.你可以看到中国球迷的脸上洋溢着喜悦和骄傲。(外研选B1) 第 ‹#› 页 附录二　跟着教材积累最佳读后续写素材 16.With each person I met, I felt a growing sense of pride as part of this extraordinary team, whose devotion to the cause shone from their eyes.能够和在这里遇到的人一起,成为这个杰出小组的一员,我心中的自豪感油然而生,大家眼中都熠熠闪耀着对这项事业的执着和投入。(外研选B2) 17.Todd cried out in shock and waved his arm at the pale blue screen hovering above the breakfast table.托德惊叫一声,朝早餐桌上盘旋的淡蓝色屏幕挥舞着手臂。(外研选B3) 18.Mum was so excited that she dropped the phone into the sea. This time it was Dad’s turn to get mad!妈妈太兴奋了,结果手机掉进了海里。这下轮到爸爸生气了!(外研B3) 第 ‹#› 页 附录二　跟着教材积累最佳读后续写素材 1.He broke into a joyful smile.他高兴地笑了。(外研B3) 2.Their eyes barely move, and they always have the same distant expression on their faces. It is as though they are asleep with their eyes open. 他们的眼睛几乎不动,脸上总是带着同样的茫然神情,好像他们在睁着眼睛睡觉。(人教选B1) 3.One moment she seems to be laughing at me, but then again I catch a sense of sadness in her smile.有那么一会儿她像在嘲笑我,但我又从她的微笑中感到一丝悲伤。(外研B3) 第 ‹#› 页 附录二　跟着教材积累最佳读后续写素材 4.Her eyes are wide and her mouth is parted, just as if she were about to speak.她眼睛睁得大大的,嘴巴张开,好像要说话。(外研选B1) 5.A tear swam in the eye of Quasimodo, but did not fall.一滴泪珠在卡西莫多的眼眶里滚动,却没落下来。(外研选B3) 6.Jimmy held Robutt tightly. He was frowning, too, and the desperate look on his face meant that he wouldn’t change his mind.吉米紧紧抱着罗布特。他也皱着眉头,脸上绝望的表情意味着他不会改变心意。(外研选B3) 7.Jimmy looked at Robutt, who was squeaking again, a very low, slow squeak that seemed frightened.吉米看了看又在吼叫的罗布特,它的叫声非常低沉缓慢,好像受到了惊吓。(外研选B3) 第 ‹#› 页 附录二　跟着教材积累最佳读后续写素材 风 1.I wake up to the sound of the wind buffeting the cloth of my tent.风猛烈地拍打着我的帐篷,我在这声响中醒来。(人教B2) 2.However, these happy memories are soon interrupted by a sudden cold rush of air.然而,这些美好的回忆很快就被一阵冷风打断了。(人教选B3) 3.Out at sea it was calm. No wind came up. Yet from every direction—east, west, north, and south—strong winds blew upon the unlucky city and those whose homes had once stood in its green city.海上风平浪静。没有一丝风。然而,强劲的风从东南西北四面八方刮向这个不幸的城市,刮向那些曾 第 ‹#› 页 附录二　跟着教材积累最佳读后续写素材 生活在这座绿色城市里的人们。(人教B1) 4.I remember us all lying under the midnight sky and looking up at the stars.我记得我们躺在午夜的天空下,仰望星空。(外研B3) 山 5.Reaching as far as the eye can see, these terraces cover tall mountains, often from the bottom to the very top.目之所及,梯田包裹着巍峨的高山,往往从山脚一直绵延到山顶。(外研B1) 6.The peaceful landscape of the“Emerald Isle”and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes, with its rolling green hills dotted with 第 ‹#› 页 附录二　跟着教材积累最佳读后续写素材 14 sheep and cattle.“绿宝石(爱尔兰)”岛风光宁静秀美,郡里草木葱茏,青山连绵起伏,牛羊点缀其中,堪称一场名副其实的视觉盛宴。(人教B2) 7.Imagine mountains wrapped in silver water, shining in the spring sun. Summer sees the mountains turn bright green with growing rice. During autumn, these same mountains are gold, and in winter they are covered in sheets of white frost.想象一下:春日,群山被银白色的水包裹着,在阳光下闪闪发光;盛夏,佳禾吐绿,将群山染成一片青翠;秋收,满山黄金;而隆冬,它们又披上了冰霜做成的白被单。(外研B1) 8.To our left, snow-covered mountains disappear into clouds that seem 第 ‹#› 页 附录二　跟着教材积累最佳读后续写素材 almost close enough to touch.在我们的左边,白雪皑皑的群山消失在似乎触手可及的云层中。(人教B2) 海、河、湖 9.And down by the sea, the roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coast.在海边,海浪的咆哮和海鸟的叫声合奏成海岸的乐曲。(人教B2) 10.Standing in the distance, they were astonished to see misty clouds rising from the great Niagara Falls, which is on the south side of the lake.她们站在远处眺望,看到湖的南边从巨大的尼亚加拉瀑布中升腾而起的水雾, 第 ‹#› 页 附录二　跟着教材积累最佳读后续写素材 感到非常震撼。(人教选B2) 11.The shore was lined with shining sand, and was being softly lapped by waves.海岸上布满闪闪发光的沙子,海浪轻轻地拍打着海岸。(人教选B3) 12.Around this sea stood a huge rock wall that was being worn away by the endless action of the waves.海边矗立着一堵巨大的岩壁,它正在被无休止的海浪冲刷着。(人教选B3) 13.Water birds playing in the lake, and cattle and sheep wandering the grasslands bring the scenery to life.水鸟在湖中嬉戏,牛羊在草原上游荡, 第 ‹#› 页 附录二　跟着教材积累最佳读后续写素材 让这片风景充满勃勃生机。(外研选B1) 树 14.Soon in front of us appeared a tall, dense forest, composed of trees formed like umbrellas. 很快,我们面前出现了一片高大茂密的森林,棵棵树如伞。(人教选B4) 15.The bushes and maple trees outside the windows were red, gold and orange, and there was frost on the ground, confirming that fall had arrived in Canada.窗外的灌木和枫树变成了红色的、金色的、橘色的,地上铺了层霜,宣告加拿大的秋天来了。(人教选B2) 第 ‹#› 页 附录二　跟着教材积累最佳读后续写素材 空气、气味 16.It was August, so it was really, really hot and it smelled so bad everywhere!8月份的天气酷热,到处都散发着难闻的气味! (外研B3) 17.I walk through the doors into the waiting area, where there’s a familiar atmosphere of boredom and tension.我穿过几道门,走进候诊区,那里有一种熟悉的无聊而紧张的气氛。(外研选B1) 第 ‹#› 页 附录二　跟着教材积累最佳读后续写素材 1.In his thirties, he was quite thin and pale, and he had red, bushy hair.三十多岁时,他很瘦,脸色苍白,有一头浓密的红色头发。(外研B1) 2.She still has smooth skin and straight black hair, and jogging has kept her slim and fit.她的皮肤仍然很光滑,头发又直又黑。慢跑使她苗条和健康。(外研B1) 3.Indeed, his slim but strong body was just like that of millions of Chinese farmers, to whom he had devoted his life.的确,他身体瘦削而强壮,就像他为之奉献了一生的千百万的中国农民一样。(人教选B1) 第 ‹#› 页 附录二　跟着教材积累最佳读后续写素材 4.To the public, he was seen as a sightly odd-looking but kind and funny man. He had a thick moustache and long white hair, which sometimes stood on end as though he had just received an electric shock. 在公众眼中,他是一个长得有点丑但善良有趣的人。他胡须浓密,头发又长又白,有时会像刚遭了电击似的竖起来。(人教选B1) 第 ‹#› 页 附录二　跟着教材积累最佳读后续写素材 1.Distance tests a horse’s strength. Time reveals a person’s character. 路遥知马力,日久见人心。(人教B1) 2.There’s just one sure delight: friendship, like sunrise, warm and bright.仅有一种确切的快乐:友谊像日出,温暖而明亮。(外研B1) 3.Don’t always complain about people. Try to look on the bright side.不要总是抱怨别人。尽量往好的方面看。(外研B3) 4.Even though we had lost a lot, moments like those gave us hope for the future.尽管我们失去了很多,但这样的时刻给了我们对未来的希望。(外研B3) 第 ‹#› 页 附录二　跟着教材积累最佳读后续写素材 5.In the same way, we need struggle to grow strong and survive. We must go through some difficult things if we really wish to spread our wings and fly.同样地,我们需要奋斗来变得强大并生存下来。如果我们真的想展翅飞翔,就必须经历磨难。(外研选B3) 6.From time to time I look at the photo as a reminder to show respect to all animals. It is after all we who are the visitors to their world.我不时地看这张照片,以此提醒自己要尊重所有的动物。毕竟,我们才是动物世界的访客。(外研B1) 7.I realized what makes a good teacher. A good teacher is someone who is 第 ‹#› 页 附录二　跟着教材积累最佳读后续写素材 in love with what she or he is teaching.我意识到什么样的老师才是好老师。一个好老师是热爱自己所教的东西的人。(人教B1) 8.Tangshan city has proved to China and the rest of the world that in times of disaster, people must unify and show the wisdom to stay positive and rebuild for a brighter future.唐山向中国、向世界证明,在灾难时刻,人们必须团结起来,展现智慧,保持乐观,重建一个更美好的未来。(人教B1) 9.Only when we learn to exist in harmony with nature can we stop being a threat to wildlife and to our planet.只有学会和大自然和谐共处,我们才不会成为野生生物和地球的威胁。(人教B2) 第 ‹#› 页 附录二　跟着教材积累最佳读后续写素材 􀎱 􀎰 比喻 1.He swam as fast as lightning, just like a seal!他游得就像一只海豹,快如闪电!(人教选B4) 2.Far away in the ocean, where the water is as clear as glass, lives the Sea King.海王住在遥远的海洋里,那里的海水像玻璃一样清澈。(人教选B4) 3.Although she has delicate skin like a rose-leaf and eyes as blue as the deepest sea, she has no feet but a fish tail just like her sisters.虽然她有玫瑰般娇嫩的皮肤,像最深的大海一样蓝的眼睛,但她就像她的姐妹们一 第 ‹#› 页 附录二　跟着教材积累最佳读后续写素材 􀎱 􀎰 样没有脚,只有鱼尾。(人教选B4) 4.Bricks covered the ground like red autumn leaves, but no wind could blow them away.砖块就像秋天的红叶覆盖着地面,但是没有风能将其吹走。(人教B1) 5.A traveller without observation is a bird without wings.一个不会观察的旅行者就如同一只没有翅膀的鸟。(人教B1) 6.After singing some songs, the competitors danced onto the green field, waving their arms in the air as if they were eagles.几首歌唱毕,选手们开始在草地上翩翩起舞,他们挥动着双臂,宛如雄鹰。(人教B3) 第 ‹#› 页 附录二　跟着教材积累最佳读后续写素材 拟人 7.Tangshan started to revive itself and get back on its feet.唐山重新站起来,获得了新生。(人教B1) 8.Slowly, the city began to breathe again.慢慢地,这个城市又开始呼吸了。(人教B1) 9.The ship struggled on the stormy sea, rolling with each heavy wave.这条船在波涛汹涌的海面上挣扎,随着巨浪颠簸。(人教选B4) 第 ‹#› 页 附录二　跟着教材积累最佳读后续写素材 夸张 10.It felt like my brain had doubled in size.感觉我的头大了一倍。(人教B1) 11.The noise they make could wake the dead! Frightening!它们发出的声音可以吵醒死人!太可怕了!(人教选B4) 第 ‹#› 页 附录二　跟着教材积累最佳读后续写素材 1.Wednesday night saw the destruction of the very heart of the city.周三晚上,这座城市的中心被毁。(人教B1) 2.The solar rays shone through the watery mass easily, and consumed all colour, and I clearly distinguished objects at a distance of a hundred and fifty yards.阳光轻易地穿过海水,把所有的颜色都吞没了,我能清楚地分辨出150码外的物体。(外研B3) 3.Friendship won’t fail to make you smile when you’re feeling down.当你不开心的时候,友谊一定会让你微笑。(外研B1) 第 ‹#› 页 附录二　跟着教材积累最佳读后续写素材 $