Week 11 Monday 跟着名著学续写（课件PPT）-高中英语提分写作周周赢读后续写（高中通用）

这是一份高中英语同步教学课件，主题为“校园生活 & 欢声笑语篇”，围绕名著《小镇传奇》选段，以学习支架形式引导学生分析人物笑的描写手法，包括修饰语运用、场景描绘，还设置了仿效补全短文及背诵任务。 资料特色鲜明，融合核心素养，通过分析“not very pleasantly修饰smiled”“咧嘴微笑露出牙齿”等具体描写提升语言理解与表达能力，引导学生分析笑的语境情感培养思维品质，借助仿效练习强化学习能力。针对高中学生需提升语言运用细腻度的学情，能帮助学生掌握细节描写技巧，为教师提供生动教学支架。

Week 11 校园生活&欢声笑语篇 Monday　跟着名著学续写 第 ‹#› 页 Week 11　校园生活&欢声笑语篇 《小镇传奇》的主人公邓瑞所生活的小镇叫伯斯利,邓瑞天生是个乐天派,当他遇到麻烦时,绝不会认输言败,他会主动寻找机会,一旦发现机会,就会牢牢把握。伯爵夫人的舞会上,他是如何邀请到伯爵夫人跳舞的呢? 阅读下面的节选部分(选自牛津英语3《小镇传奇》),学习仿效文中描写人物的笑的手法。 第 ‹#› 页 Week 11　校园生活&欢声笑语篇 The conversation in the group was about the Countess (伯爵夫人). All the important older men in the town were standing around her, but she was not dancing. Perhaps she didn’t want to, but perhaps they were all afraid to ask. “Why doesn’t someone ask her to dance?”asked Denry suddenly. “Why don’t you?”said Shillitoe.“It’s a free country. Perhaps I will,”Denry said. Harold Etches looked at Denry for a moment.“You won’t ask her,”he said. Then he smiled, not very pleasantly.①“I’ll give you five pounds if you do.” “All right,”said Denry and quickly walked away. 第 ‹#› 页 Week 11　校园生活&欢声笑语篇 Suddenly he found himself standing in front of the Countess.“Could I have this dance with you?”he said quickly, but smiling and showing his teeth②. (“I’ve won that fiver, Mr. Etches!”he said to himself.) The Countess had to accept. She could see that everyone else was afraid to ask—and she did want to dance! So they danced together, and all the men watched with open mouths. When the music stopped, the Countess looked at Denry and saw that he was really just a boy. “You dance well!”she said, smiling almost like an aunt③. “Do I?”he smiled back.④“It’s the first time I’ve ever danced, except in a 第 ‹#› 页 Week 11　校园生活&欢声笑语篇 lesson.” “Really? You pick things up easily, I suppose.”“Yes,”he said.“Do you?” Something in Denry’s question amused the Countess very much.⑤ She put her head back and laughed, and everybody in the room could see that Denry had made the Countess laugh.⑥ She was still laughing, and so was he⑦, when he thanked her for the dance. 第 ‹#› 页 Week 11　校园生活&欢声笑语篇 ①用修饰语not very pleasantly修饰smiled,说明这个笑是让人不太舒服的笑 ②咧嘴微笑,露出牙齿的微笑 ③笑得和姑妈一样,表现伯爵夫人的和蔼 ④礼貌地回之以微笑 ⑤⑥⑦伯爵夫人被邓瑞逗乐,仰着头哈哈大笑,邓瑞也笑,这一段描绘了一个两人欢笑的场景 第 ‹#› 页 Week 11　校园生活&欢声笑语篇 仿效再背诵　尝试仿效上文中的描写方式补全短文,并背诵 　　Jeremy has a great sense of humour that is admired by everybody, except his six-year-old daughter, Jenny. Recently, one of Jeremy’s closest friends asked him to make a speech at a wedding reception. He prepared the speech carefully and went to the wedding with Jenny. He had included a large number of funny stories in the speech and, of course, ①　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (每个人都被逗乐了,他们仰着头哈哈大笑). As soon as he had finished, Jenny told him she wanted to go home. Jeremy was a little disappointed by this but he everybody was amused and they put their heads back and laughed 第 ‹#› 页 Week 11　校园生活&欢声笑语篇 did as his daughter asked. On the way home, he asked Jenny if she had enjoyed the speech. To his surprise, she said she hadn’t. Jeremy asked her why this was so and she told him that she did not like to ②　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (看到那么多的人嘲笑他)!  see so many people laughing at him 第 ‹#› 页 Week 11　校园生活&欢声笑语篇 $