Week 1 Monday 跟着名著学续写（课件PPT）-高中英语提分写作周周赢读后续写（高中通用）

这是一份高中英语同步教学课件，围绕“比赛表演 & 高兴篇”展开，以《秘密花园》为素材，通过名著片段赏析、动作与心理描写手法解析、仿效补全短文及背诵练习，搭建从理解到运用的学习支架。 资料特色在于融合新课标核心素养，通过解析“肢体动作+心理活动”“对话描写”等手法（如玛丽发现花园时的心跳加速、双手颤抖描写），培养语言理解与表达能力，借助名著素材涵养文化意识，引导学生仿效创作提升思维品质与学习能力，适合高一学生适应高中英语读写学习，夯实基础，能帮助学生掌握情感描写技巧，为教师提供生动的读写教学范例。

Week 1 比赛表演&高兴篇 Monday　跟着名著学续写 第 ‹#› 页 Week 1　比赛表演&高兴篇 《秘密花园》是美国女作家弗朗西丝·霍奇森·伯内特创作的儿童文学作品。故事讲述了性情古怪孤僻的小女孩玛丽·伦罗克斯在父母双亡后,生活在姨父神秘阴沉的大房子里,一次神奇的经历使玛丽闯入禁闭已久且荒芜的花园。玛丽、农家小子迪肯和常年被关在阴暗房间里的病态少爷柯林找到了开启快乐的钥匙。 第 ‹#› 页 Week 1　比赛表演&高兴篇 Mary skipped all the way to the secret garden wall. And there was the robin (知更鸟)! He had followed her! Mary was very pleased.① “You showed me where the key was yesterday,”she laughed.②“I’ve got it in my pocket. So you ought to show me the door today!” The robin hopped on to an old climbing plant on the wall, and sang his most beautiful song.③ Suddenly the wind made the plant move, and Mary saw something under the dark green leaves. The thick, heavy plant was covering a door. 第 ‹#› 页 Week 1　比赛表演&高兴篇 ④ Mary’s heart was beating fast and her hands were shaking as she pushed the leaves away and found the keyhole.⑤ She took the key out of her pocket, and it fitted the hole. Using both hands, she managed to unlock the door. Then she turned round to see if anyone was watching. But there was no one, so she pushed the door, which opened, slowly, for the first time in ten years. She walked quickly in and shut the door behind her.⑥ At last she was inside the secret garden! 第 ‹#› 页 Week 1　比赛表演&高兴篇 ①肢体动作描写+心理活动描写+情感形容词,表现出玛丽雀跃、欢快的心情 ②神态描写+对话描写,利用人物的“笑”,表现玛丽的开心、快乐 ③借助描写知更鸟欢快的动作和动听的歌声,烘托玛丽快乐、雀跃的心情 ④利用拟人的修辞手法描写风,侧面烘托玛丽的激动、快乐 ⑤利用“无灵”主语句,描写玛丽的心跳加速;描写“双手颤抖”,突出玛丽的激动和紧张 ⑥利用双连动词,再次烘托玛丽走进花园时的激动和紧张 第 ‹#› 页 Week 1　比赛表演&高兴篇 仿效再背诵　尝试仿效上文中的描写方式补全短文,并背诵 　　① (她正在秘密花园的长长的围墙边蹦蹦跳跳), when a most wonderful thing happened. She suddenly realized the robin was following her. ②　　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (她感到非常高兴、非常激动) by this, and cried out, “You like me, don’t you? And I like you too!” As he hopped along beside her, She was skipping beside the long wall of the secret garden She felt very pleased and excited 第 ‹#› 页 Week 1　比赛表演&高兴篇 ③　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 (她也一样跳着唱着) to show him that she was his friend. Just then he stopped where a dog had dug a hole in the ground. As Mary looked at the hole, something caught her eye. ④　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　 (玛丽的心跳加快,双手在颤抖) as she put her hand in and pulled it out. It was a key. A long, rusty key.   she hopped and sang too Mary’s heart was beating fast and her hands were shaking 第 ‹#› 页 Week 1　比赛表演&高兴篇 $