2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---意外的冬日馈赠 导学案

该高中英语高考复习学案聚焦读后续写核心考点，系统整合文本分析（角色、视角、时空线等）、情节构造与续写框架，按“文本解读—情节逻辑—语言表达”层次构建知识网络。通过细节问答、情节线梳理等问题导向设计，引导学生自主梳理文本要素，形成从理解到创作的完整能力链。 亮点在于自主诊断与个性化学习支持，如开篇设置细节问答自测题（如Why couldn’t the family buy Dad the new coat?）帮助学生定位文本理解薄弱点，结合情节线、情感线分析任务培养思维品质与语言能力。续写框架中的衔接句设计（如What did they find about the coat?）引导学生自主构建逻辑，教师可通过学生完成情况精准指导，提升备考实效。

阅读下面材料, 根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段, 使之构成一篇完整的短文。 “I don’t think we can afford it right now. Maybe it will go on sale after Christmas,” said my mom. “It’s okay, I can make my pea coat last one more winter.” I didn’t mean to overhear my parents’ conversation, but we lived in a small house. I was about seven years old and the third of four children. Christmas was coming and we were getting excited about what might be under the tree for us. Hearing my dad talk about making do with his coat, though, made me a little sad. Dad had worn the blue wool coat for as long as I could remember. I am ashamed to say I remember being embarrassed when he wore that coat. The wool had been patched in spots and I can’t remember how many times my mom sewed on the buttons with the anchors on them. He needed a new coat, but I’d never thought about how much it would cost – or how often my parents made sacrifices like this so we children could have the clothes or shoes we needed or, in this case, some presents under the Christmas tree. Earlier that day, my parents had gone shopping and he’d seen a winter jacket that he really liked. It was a heavyweight green and black plaid wool. He felt it was the coat for him, but then he saw the price. It was far more expensive than their budget would allow. It was a daily struggle just to pay the bills and feed and clothe four children. It was only a week or so later when Dad was on his way home from work, he saw a large red gift box in the middle of a crossing. He pulled over and went to get it. Having waited about twenty minutes in vain, he carried the box to his car and went home. My father brought the mysterious red box into our living room. "I found it in the middle of a crossing," he said, brushing snow from his old coat. We all gathered around the box, guessing what it would be in the box. After a thoughtful silence, Mom gently suggested we look inside, not for the gift, but for an owner. 注意： 1．续写词数应为150左右; 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Para1：Inside was a fine winter coat, along with a receipt with a phone number. Para 2：Dad called the number on the receipt immediately. 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 The author overheard parents’ conversation that they couldn’t afford a new coat for Dad--- _________________ --- Dad’s old patched blue coat had been worn for years and embarrassed the author before--- _________________ --- Dad fell in love with a plaid wool coat but gave it up for tight family budget--- _________________ --- Dad found a mysterious red gift box on his way home and decided to find its owner 4. 细节问答 Why couldn’t the family buy Dad the new coat? ：___________________________________ What was wrong with Dad’s old coat?：_________________________________ How did the author feel about Dad’s old coat before?：________________________________________________ What kind of new coat did Dad like?：__________________________________________ Why did Dad give up buying the coat he liked?：_____________________________________________ What did Dad find on his way home one day?：_________________________________________________ What did Mom suggest doing with the box?：________________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 作者无意间听到父母对话，得知家里拮据，无法为父亲购置新外套→_________________ →父亲的旧外套破旧补丁、反复缝补，年幼的作者曾为此尴尬→父亲看中一件格纹羊毛外套，却因价格远超预算忍痛放弃→家庭日常开支紧张，父母时常为孩子默默牺牲→_________________ →父亲下班途中捡到神秘红色礼盒，苦等失主无果后带回家→家人商议开箱寻找失主线索→（续写）开箱发现崭新外套与带号码的收据→（续写）父亲致电失主，坚守诚信收获暖心结局 6．情感线 The author: ignorant and embarrassed→___________→sympathetic and grateful→___________→curious and expectant→___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 品德温情类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1:Inside was a fine winter coat, along with a receipt with a phone number. 衔接句1——What did they find about the coat? How did the family feel? What decision did they make?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2：Dad called the number on the receipt immediately. 衔接句2——Who answered the phone? What did the owner say? What was the final warm ending and theme?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：盒子里是一件精致的冬款外套，还有一张带有电话号码的收据。→①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：爸爸立刻拨通了收据上的电话号码。→④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写 Inside was a fine winter coat, along with a receipt with a phone number. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Dad called the number on the receipt immediately. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 The author（幼时懵懂、后懂得体谅父母、心怀感恩的孩子）；Dad（勤俭顾家、善良正直、坚守诚信的父亲）；Mom（温柔体贴、勤俭持家、明事理的母亲）；The coat owner（慷慨善良、懂得温暖他人的陌生人） 2．视角 第一人称 3．时空线 The author overheard parents’ conversation that they couldn’t afford a new coat for Dad--- Dad’s old patched coat had accompanied him for years and once made the author embarrassed--- Dad loved a new plaid coat but abandoned it due to tight family budget--- The family struggled to support four children with limited income--- Dad found a red gift box on the way home and failed to wait for the owner--- The family decided to open the box to find the owner’s information 4. 细节问答 Why couldn’t the family buy Dad the new coat? ：The family had a tight budget and struggled to pay bills and support four children. What was wrong with Dad’s old coat?：It was worn out with patched wool and repeatedly sewn buttons. How did the author feel about Dad’s old coat before?：The author once felt embarrassed when Dad wore the shabby old coat. What kind of new coat did Dad like?：He liked a heavyweight green and black plaid wool winter coat. Why did Dad give up buying the coat he liked?：The coat was too expensive and far beyond their family budget. What did Dad find on his way home one day?：He found a large red gift box in the middle of a crossing. What did Mom suggest doing with the box?：She suggested opening the box to find clues to locate its owner. What does the story tell us?：Honesty is the most precious virtue. Kindness and integrity will eventually bring warm rewards and beautiful surprises. 5．情节线 作者偶然听见父母对话，知晓家境拮据，无力为父亲购置新冬衣→父亲常年穿着缝补多次的破旧外套，年幼的作者曾因此心生尴尬→父亲看中一件心仪的格纹羊毛外套，却因价格昂贵、家庭开支紧张主动放弃→父母默默牺牲自我，倾尽所有养育四个孩子→父亲下班途中捡到精致红色礼盒，原地等候失主无果后带回家→全家商议开箱寻找失主线索，坚守拾金不昧本心→（续写）开箱发现正是父亲心仪的外套与带号码收据→（续写）父亲主动致电归还，失主深受触动，善意馈赠，温暖落幕 6．情感线 The author: ignorant and embarrassed→sad and guilty→sympathetic and grateful→curious and surprised→sincere and warm→grateful and touched（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：家境拮据的父亲舍不得购买心仪的新外套，却在路边意外捡到一件全新冬衣，一家人坚守诚信、主动联系失主，最终善良与正直收获了暖心的惊喜馈赠。 English：Unable to afford his dream winter coat due to tight family budget, the father accidentally picked up a brand-new coat. His family stuck to honesty and took the initiative to find the owner, and their integrity finally brought them a warm and unexpected reward. 8. 句式 状语从句：Hearing my dad talk about making do with his coat, though, made me a little sad. 非谓语动词：Having waited about twenty minutes in vain, he carried the box to his car and went home. 宾语从句：I didn’t mean to overhear my parents’ conversation. 定语从句：It was a heavyweight green and black plaid wool coat that he really liked. 9. 本文主题 品德温情类：坚守诚信本心，心怀善意与感恩，真诚正直的美好品质终将收获岁月温柔馈赠。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1:Inside was a fine winter coat, along with a receipt with a phone number. 衔接句1——What did they find about the coat? How did the family feel? What decision did they make? The coat was exactly the plaid one Dad had longed for, making the family surprised, but they still insisted on returning it to its owner. Paragraph 2：Dad called the number on the receipt immediately. 衔接句2——Who answered the phone? What did the owner say? What was the final warm ending and theme? The grateful owner explained he had dropped the box and generously gave the coat to the honest family as a warm Christmas gift. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：盒子里是一件精致的冬款外套，还有一张带有电话号码的收据。→①众人惊讶发现，这正是父亲此前看中的格纹羊毛外套→②看着崭新合身的外套，一家人满心感慨却不忘初心→③大家一致决定联系失主，将物品完好归还； 第二段：爸爸立刻拨通了收据上的电话号码。→①电话接通后，失主坦言不慎遗失礼盒，万分焦急→②得知父亲苦等归还，失主深受触动，执意赠予外套→③诚信终获回馈，平凡善意温暖了整个冬日。 四.段落续写范文（150词） Inside was a fine winter coat, along with a receipt with a phone number. To our great surprise, it was exactly the green and black plaid wool coat that Dad had admired and given up due to its high price. The new coat looked warm and delicate, fitting Dad perfectly. A wave of emotion welled up in everyone’s heart. Despite being badly in need of a new coat, Dad showed no desire to keep it. He firmly decided to return the precious coat to its rightful owner without hesitation. Dad called the number on the receipt immediately. A warm-spirited man answered the phone, sighing with relief after learning the whole story. He explained that he had accidentally dropped the gift box on his way home. Moved by Dad’s honesty and selflessness, the owner insisted on gifting the coat to Dad as a special Christmas present. We were deeply touched. It was Dad’s persistent integrity that brought this unexpected warmth, letting us know honesty is always the most valuable treasure. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $