浙江省强基联盟2025-2026学年高二下学期5月阶段检测英语试题 应用文和续写写作策略指导

该高中英语知识清单聚焦“是否取消眼保健操”应用文写作，涵盖图表描述专用词组、观点表态句型、理由阐述词组及衔接逻辑词等核心范畴，搭建从语料积累到句型运用再到范文仿写的递进式学习支架。 清单通过“核心语料库分类+万能句型模块化”呈现知识体系，如将图表描述词组单列便于快速调用，观点表态句型分中立/支持/反对三类，培养学生语言能力与思维品质。设计“考场避坑提醒”标注数据转述、逻辑词分层等要点，不同基础学生可高效掌握，教师能据此设计针对性教学活动，提升课堂实效。

哥哥烟囱被困弟弟机智解救的续写技巧点拨和知识迁移 一、Brief English Summary 1. 故事脉络 Plot outline On Christmas Eve, their parents went shopping. Ten-year-old naughty Leo intended to sneak a look at Christmas presents by climbing down the chimney. He slipped and got stuck tightly, unable to move or breathe properly. His seven-year-old brother Milo spotted him. After failing to pull Leo free with hands and a wooden spoon, Milo saved Leo with a rope. Their parents came back later. The danger passed, and the two boys reflected and grew. 2. 人物 Characters • Leo (10): curious and mischievous; panicked while trapped, guilty afterward • Milo (7): calm, brave, kind, quick to take action in emergencies 3. 人物情绪 Emotional changes • Leo: excited → flustered → terrified → relieved → remorseful → self-disciplined • Milo: shocked and nervous → calm → fully devoted to rescue → delighted after saving his brother 4. 续写结构 Fixed writing structure for continuation Para 1: Milo thought of using a rope, carried out the rescue and pulled Leo out successfully. Para 2: Parents returned, saw the scene, gently educated the boys. The brothers apologized and reflected, ending with the theme of growth. 2、 Writing Materials （一）核心高分动词 1. 困境动作：slip（打滑）、get stuck（被困）、squeeze（挤压）、struggle（挣扎）、gasp for breath（喘息） 2. 救援动作：rush to（冲向）、fetch（取来）、fasten（系紧）、pull hard（用力拉）、drag free（拉出） 3. 情绪动作：tremble（颤抖）、panic（恐慌）、sigh with relief（松一口气）、lower one’s head（低头愧疚） （二）高分形容词&副词 panicked（恐慌的）、desperate（绝望的）、anxious（焦急的）、firmly（牢牢地）、gently（温和地）、immediately（立刻） （三）实用句型（分场景，可直接套用） ※突发险境句型 1. A wave of panic swept over him, leaving him at a loss what to do. 一阵恐慌席卷全身，他不知所措。 2. He was firmly stuck in the narrow chimney, unable to move up or down. 他牢牢卡在狭窄的烟囱里，动弹不得。 ※冷静施救句型 1. Without hesitation, the little boy rushed to the garage to fetch a thick rope. 小男孩毫不犹豫冲向车库取粗绳。 2. Gathering all his strength, he pulled the rope steadily, trying to free his brother. 他用尽全身力气稳稳拉动绳子，试图救出哥哥。 ※脱困治愈句型 1. After repeated attempts, Leo was finally dragged out of the dark chimney safely. 反复尝试后，利奥终于被安全拉出漆黑的烟囱。 2. The moment he landed on the ground, he collapsed slightly out of tiredness and fear. 落地瞬间，他因疲惫和恐惧微微瘫软。 ※反思升华句型（结尾万能） 1. Realizing his foolish behavior, Leo hung his head in shame and made a sincere apology. 意识到自己的荒唐行为，利奥羞愧低头，真诚道歉。 2. What happened on Christmas Eve taught Leo a valuable lesson about self-discipline. 圣诞夜的这场意外，让利奥学会了自律，收获成长。 三、题型万能迁移素材（所有遇险救援续写通用） （适配：被困、落水、迷路、受伤、意外受困、亲友施救、自我救赎所有续写场景） 1. 心态描写万能句 • Despite the overwhelming fear, he forced himself to stay calm and think of a solution. 纵使恐惧万分，他仍强迫自己冷静思考对策。 • A sense of guilt and gratitude filled his heart the instant he was saved. 获救的那一刻，愧疚与感激填满他的内心。 2. 救援过程万能句 • Time was pressing, but he kept a clear head and took effective measures immediately. 时间紧迫，但他保持清醒头脑，立刻采取有效措施。 • Every effort he made finally paid off, bringing an end to the dangerous situation. 他所有的努力终有回报，成功化解危机。 3. 结尾升华万能句 • This unforgettable experience became a precious memory, teaching him to obey rules and cherish safety.这段难忘的经历成为珍贵回忆，教会他遵守规则、敬畏安全。 • Courage and calmness in danger are the most precious gifts on this special Christmas Eve. 危难中的勇气与冷静，是这个圣诞夜最珍贵的礼物。 四、优秀范文1 Then, a great idea struck him — the rope in the garage.Without a second thought, Milo sprinted to the garage and grabbed a sturdy long rope. Hurrying back to the fireplace, he carefully threw one end of the rope up to Leo and instructed his brother to fasten it tightly around his waist. Trembling with fear, Leo followed the instructions faithfully. Gathering all his tiny strength, Milo pulled the rope steadily and patiently. After several tough attempts, the bricks finally loosened. With a soft thud, Leo was successfully dragged out of the narrow chimney. Covered in soot all over, he coughed constantly but felt incredibly relieved to be safe and sound. The front door opened.It was Leo and Milo’s parents returning with Christmas gifts. Shocked by their dirty and messy appearance, parents rushed forward out of concern. After hearing the whole story, they let out a sigh of relief instead of scolding them. Dad gently told Leo that curiosity was good, but safety and discipline always came first. Filled with deep shame, Leo lowered his head and apologized sincerely for his foolish and risky behavior. This special Christmas experience taught Leo a lifelong lesson: never take dangerous risks out of blind curiosity. 优秀范文2 Then, a great idea struck him — the rope in the garage. He rushed to fetch the rope, tying one end firmly around Leo’s ankle and the other around his own waist to gain strength. Bracing his feet on the ground, Milo pulled hard while Leo pushed against the brick walls desperately. After a tough struggle, Leo finally slipped out of the narrow chimney. Covered in soot and coughing badly, he was safe at last. Before they could clean up the messy living room, they heard the sound of their parents’ car outside. The front door opened. Mom and Dad came back with lots of Christmas supplies. Shocked by the dirty mess and the sooty boys, they soon learned the whole story. They blamed Leo for his silly and risky behavior, but praised Milo for his quick wit and bravery. Though they messed up the house, the two brothers gained precious experience. It turned out to be a special and unforgettable Christmas Eve memory for the family. 烟囱里被卡的续写语料知识迁移 句式1：a great idea struck sb( It hit/struck/ occurred to sb. that…) ※迁移 1. 场景：遇到难题突发妙计 A brilliant idea struck me — the old umbrella leaning against the wall. 我突然想到一个绝妙主意——靠在墙边的那把旧雨伞。 2. 场景：救人想办法 A smart idea struck her — the life ring floating on the lake. 她灵光一闪——湖面上漂浮的救生圈。 句式2：现在分词作伴随状语（高考续写高频句式） 原句：He rushed to fetch the rope, tying one end firmly around Leo’s ankle and the other around his own waist to gain strength. 结构：主句, doing A and doing B to do… ※迁移 1. 跑步救人 She dashed forward, stretching out her arms and shouting loudly to attract attention. 她冲上前，伸出双臂大声呼喊来吸引注意。 2. 安慰他人 I stepped closer, patting her shoulder and whispering soft words to calm her down. 我走近她，轻拍她的肩膀柔声安抚她。 句式3：Bracing his feet on the ground, Milo pulled hard while Leo pushed against… 结构：现在分词前置作状语 + 主句 + while引导并列对比动作 Bracing…（做好某种姿态），主句A while 主句B 一边……一边…… ※迁移 1. 合力搬重物 Grasping the box tightly, we lifted it up while guiding it slowly through the door. 我们紧紧攥住箱子，合力抬起，慢慢把它挪进门。 2. 共同脱困 Holding each other’s hands, we walked forward while watching out for hidden stones. 我们手牵着手往前走，同时留意脚下暗藏的石头。 句式4：Covered in soot and coughing badly, he was safe at last. 结构：过去分词 + 现在分词并列前置状语，描述人物状态 ※迁移（续写描写人物狼狈/疲惫万能） 1. 淋雨赶路 Wet all over and trembling with cold, we finally reached the warm cottage. 浑身湿透、冻得发抖，我们终于抵达了温暖的小屋。 2. 激动落泪 Overjoyed and bursting into tears, she hugged her long-lost friend tightly. 喜极而泣，她紧紧抱住了久别重逢的朋友。 句式5：Before they could …, they heard the sound of … 含义：还没来得及……，就听见……（制造紧张感，续写高频） ※迁移 1. 来不及藏东西 Before I could hide the gift, my mom walked into the room. 我还没来得及藏好礼物，妈妈就走进了房间。 2. 来不及解释 Before we could explain the truth, the teacher called us over. 我们还没来得及解释真相，老师就把我们叫了过去。 句式6：Shocked by …, they soon learned the whole story. 结构：过去分词作原因状语，主句 ※迁移 1. 看到惨状吃惊 Shocked by the broken vase, my parents asked me what had happened. 看到打碎的花瓶，父母十分震惊，连忙问我发生了什么。 2. 被善举打动 Moved by his kindness, everyone wanted to give him a hand. 被他的善意打动，所有人都想帮他一把。 句式7：They blamed A for …, but praised B for … 万能对比句型：批评一方，赞扬另一方（家庭/师生/人际续写万能） ※迁移 1. 同学犯错互助 The teacher blamed Tom for being careless, but praised Lily for offering timely help. 老师批评汤姆粗心，却表扬莉莉及时伸出援手。 2. 家人事件 Dad blamed me for being impulsive, but praised my sister for staying calm. 爸爸指责我冲动，却夸赞妹妹保持冷静。 句式8：Though they messed up …, sb gained precious experience. 让步状语：尽管搞砸了/有缺憾，但收获成长（升华结尾万能句） ※迁移 1. 比赛失利 Though we lost the game, we gained precious friendship and courage. 虽然我们输掉了比赛，却收获了珍贵的友谊与勇气。 2. 搞砸手工 Though I messed up the handmade card, I learned how to be patient. 虽然我把手工贺卡做坏了，但我学会了耐心。 句式9：It turned out to be a special and unforgettable … memory for sb 结尾升华万能句：这件事最终成为某人一段特别难忘的……回忆 ※迁移（读后续写结尾句） 1. 一次冒险 It turned out to be a special and unforgettable adventure memory for all of us. 这最终成为我们所有人一段特别难忘的冒险回忆。 2. 一次犯错成长 It turned out to be a precious and unforgettable lesson memory for me. 这最终成为我一段珍贵又难忘的成长一课。 ( 1 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 是否该取消眼保健操的应用文写作思路和策略 一、核心语料库 （一）图表描述专用词组（第一段必用） 1. 开展调查：conduct a survey / carry out a survey 2. 关于……的调查：a survey on whether... 3. 数据显示：The data shows that... / According to the survey 4. ……百分比的学生：XX percent of the students 5. 持三种不同观点：hold three different opinions 6. 认为……有效：think sth. is effective 7. 认为……毫无用处：consider sth. useless 8. 效果有限：have limited effect 9. 户外锻炼：outdoor activities 10. 取消眼保健操：cancel eye exercises 11. 保留眼保健操：keep/retain eye exercises （二）观点表态万能句型（第二段表态） 中立/支持/反对百搭开头 1. From my perspective, … 在我看来…… 2. As far as I am concerned, … 就我而言…… 3. Personally, I am in favor of keeping eye exercises. 我个人支持保留眼保健操 4. Personally, I think it unnecessary to keep eye exercises. 我认为没必要保留 5. When it comes to this issue, I hold the view that… 谈及这个问题，我认为…… （三）理由阐述高级词组（论证加分） 支持保留眼保健操理由 1. protect our eyesight 保护视力 2. relieve eye strain 缓解眼部疲劳 3. ease tired eyes 舒缓疲惫的双眼 4. prevent short-sightedness 预防近视 5. a simple and convenient way 简便易行的方式 6. take up little time 占用时间短 觉得效果有限/不如户外的理由 1. stare at screens for long hours 长时间盯着屏幕 2. fresh air and natural light 新鲜空气与自然光 3. relax our eyes fully 让眼睛充分放松 4. more beneficial to eyes 对眼睛更有益 5. ignore the importance of outdoor exercise 忽视户外活动的重要性 （4） 衔接逻辑词 图表分层衔接：First of all / What’s more / Finally 首先/此外/最后 观点过渡：However / Nevertheless 然而 理由递进：Besides / Moreover / Furthermore 此外；而且 总结：In short / In conclusion / All in all 总而言之 二、万能百搭句型 模块1：描述调查开篇句（图表类作文固定开头） 1. Recently, our school has conducted a survey on whether we should retain eye exercises. 近期我校开展了一项关于是否该保留眼保健操的调查。 2. The results of the survey show that students hold three different views. 调查结果显示学生持有三种不同观点。 模块2：分述数据万能句 1. 30 percent of the students believe eye exercises are effective and we need to keep them. 30%的学生认为眼保健操有效，应当保留。 2. Another 20% consider it useless and suggest canceling it. 另外20%的学生觉得它毫无用处，建议取消。 3. The remaining 50% think it has limited effect, and 5-minute outdoor activities work better. 剩下50%的学生认为它效果有限，五分钟户外活动效果更佳。 模块3：个人观点表态句（三选一） 版本1（支持保留） As far as I’m concerned, we ought to keep eye exercises. 在我看来，我们应当保留眼保健操。 版本2（中立偏向户外） From my perspective, eye exercises are not enough, and outdoor activities matter more. 在我看来，眼保健操远远不够，户外活动更重要。 版本3（反对取消） Personally, it is wrong to cancel eye exercises completely. 我个人认为彻底取消眼保健操是不可取的。 模块4：理由拓展万能句 1. The main reason is that most students spend long time reading books and using electronic devices.主要原因是大多数学生长时间看书、使用电子设备。 2. Doing eye exercises can effectively ease our tired eyes and reduce the risk of near-sightedness. 做眼保健操能有效舒缓眼部疲惫，降低近视风险。 3. However, only eye exercises are not enough. Short outdoor breaks can provide natural light for our eyes.但仅有眼保健操远远不够，短暂户外休息能给眼睛提供自然光。 模块5：结尾总结句 1. All in all, eye exercises are helpful, but we also need more outdoor time to protect our eyes. 总而言之，眼保健操有益，但我们也需要更多户外时间保护视力。 三、优秀范文： Should We Keep Eye Exercises? Recently, our school has carried out a survey on whether we should retain eye exercises, and students have three totally different opinions. Thirty percent of the students think eye exercises are effective and we must keep doing them. Twenty percent regard it as useless and want to cancel it. The rest fifty percent hold that it only has limited effect, and five-minute outdoor activities are a better choice. As far as I am concerned, we should not give up eye exercises. Nowadays, most students bury themselves in study and stare at screens every day, which puts huge pressure on our eyes. Eye exercises are a quick, easy way to relieve eye tiredness and prevent short-sightedness. However, I also agree that outdoor time is vital. Natural light outside can relax our eyes more thoroughly. All in all, eye exercises play a positive role, but we still need to combine them with short outdoor breaks to protect our eyesight well. 四、拓展：换立场仿写模板 简易改写思路（快速转换立场） 1. 表态句替换：From my perspective, eye exercises have limited effect, and outdoor activities are more important. 2. 理由替换： Eye exercises can only massage（按摩） our eyes briefly, but natural light outdoors is the best way to protect our eyes. Staying indoors all day makes our eyes strained（疲劳） easily. A five-minute walk outside can let our eyes look at distant scenery, which is far more helpful. 3. 结尾：Therefore, we can keep eye exercises, but schools should offer more short outdoor breaks for students. 5、 考场避坑提醒 1. 三个要点必须全覆盖：描述数据→个人态度→理由，缺一个直接扣分 2. 图表数据不能照抄中文，要用英文转述百分比与观点 3. 观点不要极端，中立辩证更容易拿高分（承认眼保健操有用，但户外更重要；或支持保留同时建议增加户外） 4. 逻辑词分层，让阅卷老师一眼看清结构 5. 标题题目已经给出，不用自己重新写标题！ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $