温情治愈 陌生人善良类读后续写-误会制造寒意，善意点亮春节 Matt一家人的春节故事讲义- 浙江强基联盟2024-2025学年高二下学期5月联考英语试题

该高中英语复习讲义通过表格与框架图系统构建了读后续写的知识体系，将文章分类（情感治愈+道德冲突类）、故事山模式（开端-发展-高潮-结局）、续写框架（两段内容要点）等核心要点分层呈现，并用对比表格梳理伏笔（自行车声、手工灯笼）与冲突点（偷窃误解vs意外修复），清晰展现知识内在逻辑与重难点分布。 讲义亮点在于“续写示范+语言策略”双轨设计，提供4个版本续写范例，结合非谓语动词、独立主格等语法技巧（如“His fingers trembling, Matt clutched the lantern”），培养学生语言能力与思维品质。通过高级词汇替换表（如“sad”升级为“melancholic”）和动作心理描写例句，基础学生可掌握情感表达模板，优秀学生能深化逻辑衔接，助力教师实施分层教学与学生自主复习。

标黑加粗斜体（环境描写）可积累文本，绿色衔接点！！黑色块 动词积累或动作串；蓝色（宾从）红色（定从）单下划线（状从）；非谓语形式都会标注；其他重点，红色字体为重要单词B-eli-eve in daily accumulation!(注释)! () 浙江强基联盟2025年5月高二联考英语试题 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 “Mommy, daddy!” young Matt screamed, running into the house(现在分词做伴随动作). “Our lantern is gone,” he explained as he tried to catch his breath. Matt, with his mother and father following, walked outside and looked at the Spring Festival decorations adorning(现在分词短语做后置定语) the front of their house. “It's gone,” his father sighed, noticing the missing lantern(现在分词做伴随动作). “I bet it was stolen by a neighbor.” “That lantern was my favorite decoration,” Matt sadly noted. “Do you think we can get it back?” “I don't know, son,” his father replied in a frustrated tone. All three retreated back into the house. The atmosphere had changed from happy and cheery to somber and reflective. An uncharacteristic silence had smothered the holiday spirit. Darkness fell with Matt and his father standing on the sidewalk(现在分词短语做后置定语)gazing at the lighted decorations. Their eyes kept returning to the empty place where the lantern had been hung. Both Matt and his father remained void of any holiday cheer. Matt’s mother came outside to join them. “Come on guys,” she pleaded, “cheer up... it’s Spring Festival.” “I miss my lantern, Mommy. We made it with our own hands(灯笼重要的原因). Not worth a lot of money but it does have a lot of memories,” Matt replied with a sad tone. “I just can't understand why someone would steal it,” Matt's father added. “Look,” Matt’s mother interrupted, “you two are letting this ruin your festival. We have each other, a beautiful home, and look at all those wonderful decorations on our house and the other houses on our street.”(刻画母亲的形象) “I keep hoping my lantern will come home,” Matt sighed. “Well, I will go inside and turn on some good music and try to enjoy the evening,” Matt’s mother proclaimed as she walked away. A distant crisp jangling of the bicycle interrupted the discussion. They looked at that direction as two figures approached. “It looks like a man and a boy,” Matt’s father observed. “and that’s our lantern behind their bicycle seat!” 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: The man came over and asked politely, “Is this your house?”Paragraph 2: The boy proudly handed back the beautifully restored lantern. 浙江强基联盟2025年5月高二联考英语试题 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 “Mommy, daddy!” young Matt screamed, running into the house. “Our lantern is gone,” he explained as he tried to catch his breath. Matt, with his mother and father following, walked outside and looked at the Spring Festival decorations adorning the front of their house. “It's gone,” his father sighed, noticing the missing lantern. “I bet it was stolen by a neighbor.” “That lantern was my favorite decoration,” Matt sadly noted. “Do you think we can get it back?” “I don't know, son,” his father replied in a frustrated tone. All three retreated (离开) back into the house. The atmosphere had changed from happy and cheery to somber and reflective. An uncharacteristic silence had smothered the holiday spirit. Darkness fell with Matt and his father standing on the sidewalk gazing at the lighted decorations. Their eyes kept returning to the empty place where the lantern had been hung. Both Matt and his father remained void of any holiday cheer. Matt’s mother came outside to join them. “Come on guys,” she pleaded, “cheer up... it’s Spring Festival.” “I miss my lantern, Mommy. We made it with our own hands. Not worth a lot of money but it does have a lot of memories,” Matt replied with a sad tone. “I just can't understand why someone would steal it,” Matt's father added. “Look,” Matt’s mother interrupted, “you two are letting this ruin your festival. We have each other, a beautiful home, and look at all those wonderful decorations on our house and the other houses on our street.” “I keep hoping my lantern will come home,” Matt sighed. “Well, I will go inside and turn on some good music and try to enjoy the evening,” Matt’s mother proclaimed (明确表示) as she walked away. A distant crisp jangling of the bicycle interrupted the discussion. They looked at that direction as two figures approached. “It looks like a man and a boy,” Matt’s father observed. “and that’s our lantern behind their bicycle seat!” 注意:1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: The man came over and asked politely, “Is this your house?”Paragraph 2: The boy proudly handed back the beautifully restored lantern. 1. 文章分类与续写思路分析 文章类型：情感治愈+道德冲突类 续写构思方向：主题：通过失而复得的灯笼，体现人与人之间的善意与节日的真正意义（亲情、宽容、信任）。 布局： 第一段：陌生人归还灯笼的对话（解释误会，铺垫善意）。 第二段：灯笼修复的细节与情感升华（家庭重获节日喜悦）。 框架提炼： 段落 内容要点 第一段 陌生人解释“偷窃”实为意外损坏后的修复；Matt一家从怀疑转为惊讶。 第二段 男孩归还修复的灯笼，Matt一家感动并邀请对方共庆节日。 实施要点： 承接原文的“自行车声”“两人身影”伏笔，解释 lantern 消失的原因。 通过对话和动作描写体现情感转折（愤怒→疑惑→感激）。 注意事项： 承接原文：保留人物性格（Matt的纯真、父亲的直率、母亲的乐观）；延续环境描写（节日灯光）；呼应关键词（“memories”“handmade”）。 巧妙设计：加入修复灯笼的细节（如男孩用红纸补破损），呼应“memories”；用音乐、笑声恢复节日氛围。 2. 故事山模式与原文分析 故事山模式： 阶段 原文内容 续写对应 开端 家庭装饰节日灯笼 陌生人出现 发展 灯笼丢失，家庭沮丧 解释误会（非偷窃） 高潮 发现自行车上的灯笼 归还并修复灯笼 结局 - 家庭重聚，节日精神恢复 衔接点与关键分析： 分析角度 内容 原文反应句 人物刻画 Matt天真重感情；父亲直接；母亲理性 “I miss my lantern... it does have a lot of memories.” 情感层次 愤怒→悲伤→希望→感动 “The atmosphere had changed from happy... to somber.” 关键情节点 灯笼丢失→发现自行车上的灯笼 “that’s our lantern behind their bicycle seat!” 语言特色 口语化对话，情感形容词 “somber and reflective”“sad tone” 关键词分析 “memories”“handmade” 强调灯笼的情感价值 心理描写 Matt对灯笼的执念 “I keep hoping my lantern will come home.” 动作描写 凝视空缺处、走向自行车 “gazing at the lighted decorations” 环境描写 节日灯光与黑暗对比 “Darkness fell... lighted decorations” 隐含主题 节日的真正意义是善意与团聚 母亲强调“we have each other” 情感转折 从失落转为惊喜 “It looks like... our lantern!” 空间转换 屋内→街道→自行车方向 “walked outside”“looked at that direction” 时间过渡 傍晚到夜晚 “Darkness fell” 伏笔与冲突点：伏笔：自行车声（暗示有人靠近）；灯笼手工制作（为修复铺垫）。 冲突点：邻居偷窃的误解 vs. 实际是意外损坏后修复。 隐含线索：灯笼对Matt的意义（手工制作、回忆）→ 续写需强调修复细节。 解决方案：陌生人主动归还并解释，家庭选择宽容与感激。 续写段落示范（提纲） Paragraph 1:男人礼貌询问，解释真相（如：“我们发现灯笼被风吹落，破损后带回去修复”）。Matt一家从警惕到惊讶，父亲道歉。 衔接原文：“memories”“handmade”→ 男人提到“看到灯笼上的家庭签名”。Paragraph 2:男孩展示修复细节（如新绘的图案或加固的支架）。 Matt一家邀请对方留下吃节日点心，母亲播放音乐。 环境描写：灯笼重新挂起，灯光“比之前更温暖”。 3. 英文例句与高级替换词 动作描写（Action Descriptions） He clutched the lantern tightly, his fingers trembling. （他紧紧抓着灯笼，手指颤抖。） The boy dashed forward, his eyes wide with excitement. （男孩冲上前，眼睛因兴奋而睁大。） She reached out hesitantly, brushing her fingers against the restored lantern. （她犹豫地伸出手，指尖轻轻触碰修复好的灯笼。） Matt’s father crossed his arms, his expression shifting from anger to curiosity. （Matt的父亲双臂交叉，表情从愤怒转为好奇。） The man bent down to adjust the lantern’s hook, his movements careful and deliberate. （男人弯下腰调整灯笼的挂钩，动作小心而谨慎。） A gentle breeze rustled the decorations, making the lantern sway slightly. （微风吹动装饰品，灯笼轻轻摇晃。） The boy fumbled in his backpack before pulling out a small repair kit. （男孩在背包里摸索，然后拿出一个小修理工具包。） Matt’s mother stepped forward, her voice warm but firm. （Matt的母亲走上前，声音温和但坚定。） They exchanged glances, a silent understanding passing between them. （他们交换眼神，无声的理解在彼此间传递。） The stranger wiped his hands on his coat, leaving faint smudges of paint. （陌生人在外套上擦了擦手，留下淡淡的颜料痕迹。） 心理描写 A wave of relief washed over Matt as he recognized the familiar lantern. （当Matt认出熟悉的灯笼时，一阵宽慰涌上心头。） Doubt gnawed at his mind—had they really taken it by mistake? （怀疑啃噬着他的心——他们真的是误拿了吗？） His chest tightened with a mix of hope and lingering anger. （他的胸口因希望和残留的愤怒而发紧。） She bit her lip, torn between frustration and gratitude. （她咬着嘴唇，在沮丧和感激之间挣扎。） The weight of disappointment slowly lifted, replaced by cautious joy. （失望的重量慢慢消散，被谨慎的喜悦取代。） His earlier resentment melted away, leaving only curiosity. （他先前的怨恨消散了，只剩下好奇。） A flicker of recognition crossed his face—had he seen them before? （他的脸上闪过一丝似曾相识的神情——他之前见过他们吗？） The boy’s earnest expression dissolved any remaining suspicion. （男孩真诚的表情消除了剩余的怀疑。） She exhaled slowly, letting go of the tension she’d held all evening. （她缓缓呼气，释放了整个晚上紧绷的情绪。） For the first time that night, Matt’s heart felt light again. （那晚第一次，Matt的心再次感到轻松。）环境描写（Environmental Descriptions）The street was bathed in the warm glow of festival lights. （街道沐浴在节日灯光的温暖光辉中。） Shadows danced across the pavement as lanterns swayed in the breeze. （灯笼在微风中摇曳，影子在人行道上舞动。） A distant hum of laughter and music floated through the night air. （远处笑声和音乐的回响在夜空中飘荡。） The crisp jingling of bicycle bells cut through the quiet evening. （自行车铃声清脆地划破宁静的夜晚。） The scent of roasted chestnuts lingered in the chilly air. （烤栗子的香气在寒冷的空气中萦绕。） Golden light spilled from the windows of nearby houses. （金色的灯光从附近房屋的窗户洒出。） The decorations shimmered like stars against the dark sky. （装饰品在黑暗的天空下像星星一样闪烁。） A hush fell over the street as the two figures approached. （当两个人影走近时，街道陷入寂静。） The lantern’s soft glow cast long, flickering shadows on the ground. （灯笼柔和的光芒在地上投下摇曳的长影。） The night seemed to hold its breath as they waited for an explanation. （当他们等待解释时，夜晚似乎屏住了呼吸。） 4. 高级替换词 & 固定搭配分析 高级替换词（按场景分类） 基础词 高级替换 适用场景 happy elated, jubilant, cheerful 节日氛围、人物情绪 sad melancholic, somber, disheartened 失落、沮丧 look gaze, peer, scrutinize 观察、凝视 take retrieve, reclaim, procure 拿回物品 fix restore, mend, refurbish 修理、修复 固定搭配 & 词法解析 catch one’s breath（喘口气） Matt tried to catch his breath after running. She paused to catch her breath before speaking. void of（缺乏） The room was void of any decoration. His expression was void of emotion. smother the holiday spirit（压抑节日气氛） The argument smothered the cheerful mood. Bad news smothered their excitement. interrupt the discussion（打断谈话） A loud noise interrupted their conversation. She didn’t mean to interrupt the discussion. hand back（归还） He handed back the book with a smile. The boy proudly handed back the lantern. 可积累的语料（生词短语） adorn (v.) – 装饰（近：decorate / 反：strip） The house was adorned with colorful lights. She adorned her hair with flowers. plead (v.) – 恳求（近：beg / 反：demand） She pleaded with him to stay. He pleaded for another chance. proclaim (v.) – 宣布（近：declare / 反：conceal） The king proclaimed a new law. She proclaimed her love for him. crisp (adj.) – 清脆的（近：sharp / 反：muffled） The crisp sound of leaves crunching underfoot. His voice was crisp and clear. linger (v.) – 徘徊（近：remain / 反：vanish） The scent of coffee lingered in the air. Memories of that day still linger in his mind. 5. Possible Versions(4) Version 1 Paragraph 1: The man came over and asked politely, “Is this your house?” Hearing the question(现在分词做伴随动作), Matt's father straightened up, nodded warily, and stepped forward(动作串并列). “Yes, it is,” he replied, still eyeing the lantern suspiciously(现在分词做伴随动作). The man smiled gently and explained, “We found this lantern by the roadside this morning. My son insisted on fixing it up—it was torn and the tassels were tangled.” His tone was sincere, and the boy beside him held the lantern with great care. Matt’s eyes widened. “You fixed it?” he asked softly. The boy nodded, a bit shyly(补语). “We didn’t want to keep it. It just looked too special to throw away.” At that moment, a subtle warmth crept back into the cold night. Matt's father exchanged glances with his son, both starting to understand(现在)—perhaps it had never been stolen after all, just lost and rescued. Paragraph 2: The boy proudly handed back the beautifully restored lantern. As the glowing red paper swayed in the gentle breeze(无灵主语句), Matt reached out with both hands, his fingers trembling slightly(独立主格). “It looks even better than before,” he whispered. The boy beamed. “I added some gold paint and reattached the tassels. My grandpa taught me how to fix things.” A moment of silence hung in the air before Matt’s father cleared his throat. “Thank you,” he said, his voice softer than before(独立主格). “We misjudged you.” The man chuckled. “It happens. Let’s not let a lantern ruin the Spring Festival.” Matt’s mother stepped out, music playing behind her(独立主格), and smiled at the sight(动作串).Matt’s father invited them in for snacks. For the first time that night, laughter returned to the house, and the lantern, now brighter than ever, found its rightful place(无灵主语句)—shining above the door(现在分词做后置定语), just as it had always meant to. Version 2 Paragraph 1: The man came over and asked politely, “Is this your house?” Startled(过去分词adj做主语补语), Matt’s father hesitated before answering, “Yes, it is. That’s our lantern…” His voice trailed off, unsure(adj做主语补语) whether to express anger or curiosity. The man nodded and said gently, “I believe this belongs to you. We found it early this morning, lying by the road. It must’ve fallen during the night wind.” The boy added, “We didn’t mean to upset anyone. I just thought it was too beautiful to leave lying in the dirt.” Matt stepped forward, his eyes locked on the lantern(独立主格). He remembered the hours he had spent making it with his parents, gluing every fold carefully(现在分词做伴随动作). “Did you fix the torn part?” he asked. “Yes,” the boy nodded, “I used red paper from an old gift box.” A silence fell again, this time no longer cold, but filled with the stirrings of gratitude. Paragraph 2: The boy proudly handed back the beautifully restored lantern. Matt took the lantern and traced the patch with his fingers. It wasn’t perfect—but that made it all the more meaningful. “Thank you,” he said. “You didn’t just return a lantern. You brought back the festival spirit.” The boy’s cheeks flushed with pride. “I’m glad I could help,” he replied. Matt’s mother called from the doorway, “Matt, let’s hang it back together!” The boy helped them secure it above the entrance, where it swayed gently under the starry sky. Music drifted through the air, and for the first time that evening, Matt’s father smiled. “Sometimes, the kindness of strangers is the best festival gift,” he said. The family and their unexpected guests stood together for a moment—no longer strangers, but neighbors linked by a shared moment of light(过去分词做后置定语). Version 3 Paragraph 1: The man came over and asked politely, “Is this your house?” “Yes, sir,” Matt’s father responded, his brows furrowed(独立主格刻画人物神态) as he glanced at the lantern behind the bike. The man quickly explained, “I’m terribly sorry if we caused concern. My son found this in the gutter this morning, wet and torn(adj短语做补语). He insisted we try to clean it up. We didn’t know whom it belonged to.” The boy nodded eagerly, his hands nervously fidgeting(独立主格刻画人物). “I thought someone must miss it.” Matt stepped closer, studying the patched lantern(现在分词做伴随动作). “You… fixed it up?” he asked, voice trembling with a mix of hope and disbelief(独立主格). “We tried,” the boy replied. “My mom always says things made with love(过去分词做后置定语) deserve a second chance.” That single sentence warmed Matt’s heart, melting the tension(现在分词做伴随动作) that had clouded their Spring Festival night. Paragraph 2: The boy proudly handed back the beautifully restored lantern. Taking it gently(现在分词做伴随动作), Matt examined the careful repairs—the dried glue, the re-drawn patterns, even a small smiley face(名词并列) drawn in the corner(过去分词做后置定语). “It’s perfect,” Matt whispered, his voice choked with emotion(独立主格刻画人物). The man smiled, “We’re glad it’s home.” Matt’s father placed a hand on the boy’s shoulder. “You brought back more than just a lantern,” he said, “You reminded us of the good in people.” The music inside swelled as Matt’s mother stepped out with warm drinks. “Join us?” she offered. The boy looked up at his dad, who nodded. Laughter soon replaced silence as the lantern took its rightful place, glowing above the door(现在分词做后置定语)—a small light carrying a powerful message(独立主格): kindness, even in the smallest act, makes festivals meaningful(无灵主语句). 常用搭配与短语替换 原词 升级表达 同义/近义替换 fix restore / repair patch up beautiful exquisite / well-crafted delicate smile beam / grin a faint smile spread looked at gazed at / cast a glance glanced at said softly whispered / murmured spoke gently 情绪与动作描写短语 类型 表达短语 情绪描写 a subtle warmth crept in / a flicker of hope returned / his voice choked with emotion / cheeks flushed with pride 动作描写 stepped forward warily / traced the patch with his fingers / hands trembling slightly / exchanged glances / reached out with both hands 写作语料升级积累 常用词 升级词 例句 help assist The boy assisted Matt in hanging the lantern. happy delighted / thrilled Matt was thrilled to see the lantern glowing again. think reflect / consider He reflected on how a simple act changed their evening. make craft / create The lantern was crafted with care and love. Version 4 Paragraph 1: The man came over and asked politely, “Is this your house?” Matt’s father, arms crossed(独立主格刻画人物神态), studied the stranger’s face for any hint of dishonesty. But the man’s eyes were earnest as he continued. The man gestured toward the lantern behind his bicycle seat. “We found it lying on the ground, damaged by the wind(过去分词做原因状语),” he explained. “My son insisted we fix it before returning it.” Matt’s eyes widened—the lantern looked even brighter now, its red paper carefully patched with gold trim(独立主格). His earlier anger melted into gratitude. “Thank you,” he murmured, his voice barely above a whisper. The boy, no older than Matt, grinned shyly and adjusted the lantern’s hook. Paragraph 2: The boy proudly handed back the beautifully restored lantern. “We added some extra designs,” he said, pointing to small painted symbols along the edges(现在分词做伴随动作)—a rabbit for luck and a blooming flower for new beginnings. Matt’s mother, touched by their kindness(过去分词做原因状语), invited them inside for hot tea. As the adults chatted, Matt and the boy compared their favorite festival traditions. Laughter soon filled the house, blending with the distant sound of firecrackers(现在分词做伴随动作). Outside, the lantern glowed warmly, casting a golden hue(现在分词做结果状语) over the reunited family and their unexpected guests. The Spring Festival spirit, once dimmed, now shone brighter than ever. 地道搭配 & 替换词 原文词汇 升级替换 例句 happy elated, jubilant The family was elated when the lantern returned. sad melancholic, somber His somber expression softened upon seeing the repairs. look gaze, scrutinize Matt scrutinized the lantern for familiar marks. give back return, restore They restored not just the lantern, but trust. fix mend, refurbish The boy had refurbished it with painstaking care. 情绪 & 动作描写亮点情绪描写 A pang of guilt shot through him.（一阵愧疚涌上心头。） Her voice was laced with tentative hope.（她的声音带着试探性的希望。） 动作描写 He traced the stitches with reverence.（他虔诚地抚摸着缝线。） Laughter bubbled up, unstoppable.（笑声抑制不住地涌出。）高级语法加分点倒装句： Not only was the lantern repaired, but it was also enhanced. 非谓语动词： Seeing the lantern, Matt’s eyes welled up. One possible version: The man came over and asked politely, “Is this your house?” Matt’s father nodded cautiously, noticing their lantern(现在分词做伴随动作). “We found it damaged on the sidewalk,” the boy explained shyly. “The frame was bent and the candle holder loose — we just wanted to fix it.” Matt’s eyes widened. “So you didn’t steal it?” Relief washed over the family as the boy shook his head. “Thank you,” Matt’s father said sincerely. “This means so much to us.” The man smiled warmly, “Spring Festival should be about kindness.” The boy proudly handed back the beautifully restored lantern. Its frame was straightened, silk polished(独立主格或同构句省略形式), with a new tassel gleaming. “It’s better than before!” Matt gasped. His mother clasped her hands, “You've given us more than a decoration.” Touched(过去分成做adj主语补语), Matt’s father invited them in for snacks. As laughter filled the house, Matt realized the true festival magic wasn’t in decorations, but in the kindness that made them special. Outside, neighborhood lights twinkled like stars, mirroring their joy(现在分词做结果状语). 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $