读后续写技能提升（八）-2027届高三英语二轮复习写作备考专项

该高中英语高考复习任务单聚焦读后续写技能提升，系统整合教材语料积累、话题素材拓展及场景应用训练，以情感描写（愤怒）为核心，构建“词汇-语块-佳句-场景”的递进式考点体系，通过任务驱动引导学生自主梳理比喻修辞、独立主格等表达结构，形成结构化知识网络。 亮点在于场景化分层训练与自主诊断设计，如设置三个愤怒情境填空练习，学生可对照参考答案进行语言表达的自我校验，有效提升语言能力和思维品质。每个场景融入多样化句式训练，帮助学生建立个性化表达库，教师可通过学生练习反馈实施精准指导，支持因材施教。

读后续写技能提升篇（八） 2027高三二轮写作专项备考 一 积累教材续写语料 —— 有效强化教考衔接 【词汇积累】 情感描写：be fond of 人物描写：elegant； lack； sculptor 动作描写：greet； fold； demonstrate； stimulate；sponsor； get a load of 【佳句积累】 1.One moment she seems to be laughing at me, but then again I catch a sense of sadness in her smile. （人物描写） 2.Day after day, Han Gan painted the horses, his brush presenting every detail that he saw with his own eyes. （动作描写） 二 拓展续写话题素材 —— 精准构建表达基石 情感描写：愤怒 【经典词汇】 rage n. 盛怒，狂怒 v. 发怒 mad/cross adj. 十分生气的，气愤的 anger n. 愤怒 vt. 激怒（某人） →angry adj. 愤怒的，生气的 →angrily adv. 愤怒地 【靓点语块】 1.be filled with anger 满腔怒火 2.cloud over with anger 满面怒容 3.be dark with rage 气得面色铁青 4.get mad/cross with sb 生某人的气 5.to one’s annoyance 令某人生气的是 6.flash/glitter with anger 闪现出怒火 7.glare at sb/stare hard at sb 怒视某人 8.be/turn white with fury 气得脸色发白 9.clench one’s fists/teeth 握紧拳头/咬紧牙关 10.be/go red/flame/be flushed with anger 气得脸通红 11.give sb a look/glance of burning anger 怒气冲冲地看/瞥了某人一眼 【出彩佳句】 1.Her reply fueled his anger and he erupted like a volcano. 她的回答激起了他的愤怒，他像火山一样爆发了。 （比喻修辞） 2.My voice trembled with anger when I heard the rude words. 当我听到那些粗鲁的话时，我的声音因愤怒而颤抖。 3. Filled with fury/anger, I could hardly utter a single word. 我满腔愤怒，一个字也说不出来。 （过去分词短语作状语） 4.Burning with anger, Jim pushed back his chair and stood up from the table. （动词 - ing 短语作状语） 吉姆勃然大怒，一把推开椅子，从桌子旁站了起来。 5.He grasped the fence with both hands with a fire of rage burning in his heart. （with 复合结构） 他双手抓住栅栏，一股怒火在心中燃烧。 6.He had always been known for his good temper, but when he discovered the truth, his eyes flashed with rage, and he slammed the door so hard that the windows shook. 他一向以好脾气著称，但当他发现真相时，他的眼睛闪烁着愤怒，他如此猛烈地摔门，以至于窗户都在震动。 7. Boiling with rage, he shook his fist at me fiercely. 他勃然大怒，猛烈地向我挥舞拳头。 （动词 - ing 短语作状语） 8. Being scolded without reason, he stamped his foot in anger. 因为被毫无缘由地责骂，他气得直跺脚。 9. She slapped her palm against the desk in fury. 她愤怒地用手掌拍打桌子。 三 重拳锤炼续写场景 —— 积累内化应用提升 （一） 场景导入：弟弟不小心损坏了 “我” 的新画，“我” 大发雷霆，但在看到被吓坏的弟弟后，“我” 逐渐平静下来…… Being on pins and needles, my brother galloped forward and whispered timidly, “I accidentally damaged your newly-created painting.” My color went up, and ___________1___________（一股强烈的怒火像乌云一样笼罩着我；比喻；独立主格结构）. I gave him a glance of burning anger and stamped my feet heavily, _____2______（牙齿咯咯作响；with 复合结构）. I let out a cry of anger, ___________3__________（我的眼睛里闪烁着愤怒；动词 - ing 短语作状语）, roaring, “Why did you do that?” _______________4______________（我紧握双拳，努力克制着不去打他）. Seeing my frightened brother, I gradually calmed down. （二） 场景导入：好友失手打翻了我熬夜完成的手绘参赛作品，我瞬间怒火攻心，可望见对方满脸愧疚、慌乱无措的模样，我的情绪慢慢平复下来…… Trembling all over, my best friend stepped forward and murmured anxiously, “I accidentally knocked over your competition painting that you finished staying up late.” My face burned hot, and ___________________1____________________（一腔怒火如同烈火瞬间席卷了我；比喻；独立主格结构）. I shot him a furious glare and stamped my foot hard, ________2_______（牙关紧紧咬紧；with 复合结构）. I let out a sharp shout of rage, ________3________（眼底翻涌着浓烈怒火；动词 - ing 短语作状语）, yelling, “How could you be so careless?” ________________4_____________（我攥紧双拳，拼命克制自己不对他大吼大叫）. Staring at my friend’s tearful and guilty face, I calmed down step by step. （三） 场景导入：同桌不小心打翻墨水，彻底弄脏了我耗费数日完成的素描参赛稿，我当即怒火上涌，可看见他惶恐落泪、满心自责的模样，内心的火气渐渐消散…… Shaking nervously, my deskmate crept up to me and said in a trembling voice, “I accidentally knocked over the ink bottle and ruined your sketch entry you spent days finishing.” My face instantly darkened, and ______________1_____________（怒火如同狂风暴雨一般将我裹挟；比喻；独立主格结构）. I threw him an angry stare and slammed my palm on the desk violently, ___________2____________（牙齿紧紧咬在一起；with 复合结构）. I raised my voice out of rage, __________________3_________________（双眼迸发出熊熊怒火；现在分词作伴随状语）, roaring, “How could you be so reckless?” _________________________4_________________________（我攥紧双拳，竭尽全力克制自己不去严厉指责他）. Watching my deskmate’s tear-streaked face filled with guilt, I cooled down little by little. 参考答案 （一） 1. a heavy rage came over me like a dark cloud 2. teeth chattering 3. with my eyes shining with annoyance 4. I clenched my fists, trying not to hit him (二) 1.a wave of burning anger swept over me like a blazing wildfire 2.jaws tightening 3.with my eyes blazing with fury 4.I clenched my fists, struggling to hold myself back from shouting at him （三） 1.a fierce rage washed over me like a towering storm 2.teeth grinding hard 3.with my eyes flashing with burning anger 4.I clenched my fists, trying my utmost to refrain myself from blaming him harshly 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $