2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---意外的旅途与温暖的回忆 导学案

该高中英语高考复习导学案系统梳理了读后续写专题核心考点，涵盖文本角色分析、情节发展逻辑、情感变化脉络等要素，通过时空线梳理、细节问答等结构化任务，引导学生自主构建续写逻辑框架，形成从文本解读到情节构思的完整认知体系。 亮点在于诊断性细节问答和进阶式续写框架设计，如设置“情节线补全”“情感变化填空”等自测题诊断文本理解能力，通过“衔接句设计—段落框架搭建—范文对比分析”任务链培养思维品质与语言能力。每个模块配有个性化反思表，帮助学生自主归因提升，教师可依据学情精准指导，有效支持因材施教。

阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My mom and I had been planning a weekend trip to the coastal town of Brighton for months. I’d always dreamed of walking along its sunny beaches, collecting seashells, and trying the famous fish and chips there. This trip meant more than just a fun getaway. My mom was a nurse who worked night shifts almost every week. I barely got to share a meal with her, let alone have a proper chat. I hoped this weekend, we could forget about work and hospital schedules, and just be with each other. The night before, I packed my bag with a beach towel, a shell-collecting jar, and a notebook to jot down little moments with Mom. I placed it by the door and went to bed with a big smile, too excited to sleep. Sure enough, I tossed and turned all night. Every time I closed my eyes, I imagined the sound of waves and Mom’s laughter as we walked along the shore. I kept checking the clock, waiting for dawn to come. As soon as the sun rose, we loaded the car and set off. The first hour was wonderful—we sang along to Mom’s old favorite songs and talked about what we’d do first in Brighton. But halfway there, the car made a strange noise and slowed down. Mom pulled over, popped the hood, and frowned. “The engine’s acting up,” she said. She tried calling a tow truck（拖车）, but there was no signal. The only way to get help was to wait for a passing car and ask for a ride to the next town. Mom waved at every car that went by, but one after another, they drove on. Thirty minutes passed, and I started to feel hopeless. Mom knelt down, held my hand, and said, “Don’t worry, honey. We’ll get there, even if it takes a little longer.” I nodded, but I could see the worry in her eyes—she didn’t want to let me down. She stood up again and kept waving, her arm getting tired but her resolve still strong. 注意： 续写词数应为 150 个左右； 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Just when I was about to give up, a blue van stopped beside us. On our way back home Sunday evening, we passed the same stretch of road where we’d broken down. 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 The author and Mom planned a Brighton weekend trip for months--- _________________ --- Mom was a busy night-shift nurse with little family time--- _________________ --- The author prepared carefully and waited eagerly for the trip--- _________________ --- They set off happily but the car broke down halfway with no phone signal--- They failed to get help from passing cars and felt hopeless 4. 细节问答 What was the author’s dream trip? ：___________________________________ Why was this trip especially meaningful?：_________________________________ How did the author prepare for the trip?：________________________________________________ What accident happened on the way?：__________________________________________ Why couldn’t they call for help?：_____________________________________________ What did Mom do to seek help?：_________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 作者和母亲期盼数月，计划布莱顿海边周末之旅→_________________ →母亲身为夜班护士极度忙碌，母女相处时间极少，作者格外珍惜此次出行→作者精心准备行李，彻夜难眠、满心期待→旅途中途车辆突发故障，无手机信号无法求救→_________________ →多次拦车无果，作者心生绝望，母亲温柔安慰、坚持求助→（续写）陌生司机停车相助，二人顺利抵达海边、共度美好时光→（续写）返程回望路途，感悟意外造就独特温暖回忆 6．情感线 I：eager and joyful→___________→hopeless and disappointed→___________→grateful and warm（续写） Mom：expectant and loving→___________→firm and comforting→___________ 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 温情成长类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Just when I was about to give up, a blue van stopped beside us. 衔接句1——Who was the driver? How did he help them? What did they do later? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: On our way back home Sunday evening, we passed the same stretch of road where we’d broken down. 衔接句2——What did they recall? What feeling and insight did they gain? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：就在我快要放弃时，一辆蓝色货车停在了我们身旁。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：周日傍晚返程时，我们再次经过了那段抛锚的公路。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写 Just when I was about to give up, a blue van stopped beside us. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ On our way back home Sunday evening, we passed the same stretch of road where we’d broken down. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 作者：渴望陪伴母亲、细腻感性、珍惜亲子时光的孩子；妈妈：勤劳尽责的护士、温柔坚韧、深爱孩子、不愿让孩子失望；陌生司机：善良热心、乐于助人的陌生人 2．视角 第一人称 3．时空线 The author and Mom planned a Brighton weekend trip for months--- The author dreamed of seaside scenery and precious time with Mom --- Mom was a busy night-shift nurse with little family time--- The trip became a rare chance for mother-daughter bonding --- The author prepared carefully and waited eagerly for the trip--- They set off happily with joyful conversations and songs --- They set off happily but the car broke down halfway with no phone signal--- They failed to get help from passing cars and felt hopeless 4. 细节问答 What was the author’s dream trip? ：She dreamed of visiting Brighton’s beaches, collecting seashells and tasting local fish and chips with her mom. Why was this trip especially meaningful?：Her mom was a busy night-shift nurse, so they barely had time to eat or chat together. The trip was a rare chance for bonding. How did the author prepare for the trip?：She packed a beach towel, a shell-collecting jar and a notebook to record sweet moments with her mom. What accident happened on the way?：Their car broke down halfway to Brighton due to engine problems. Why couldn’t they call for help?：There was no mobile phone signal in that area, making it impossible to call a tow truck. What did Mom do to seek help?：She kept waving to every passing car patiently, hoping to get a ride to the next town for help. What does the story tell us?：Unexpected accidents cannot ruin happiness. Precious family bonding and warm kindness from strangers make trips far more memorable. 5．情节线 作者和母亲期盼数月，计划布莱顿海边周末之旅→作者满心憧憬海边美景与专属母女时光→母亲身为夜班护士极度忙碌，母女相处时间极少，作者格外珍惜此次出行→作者精心准备行李，彻夜难眠、满心期待→旅途中途车辆突发故障，无手机信号无法求救→多次拦车求助无果，母女陷入无助与失落→多次拦车无果，作者心生绝望，母亲温柔安慰、坚持求助→（续写）陌生司机停车相助，二人顺利抵达海边、共度美好时光→（续写）返程回望路途，感悟意外造就独特温暖回忆 6．情感线 I：eager and joyful→disappointed and hopeless→hopeless and disappointed→relieved and delighted→grateful and warm（续写） Mom：expectant and loving→worried and anxious→firm and comforting→relaxed and joyful 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：作者与忙碌的母亲期盼已久的海边之旅中途遭遇车辆故障，陷入无助，幸得陌生好心人相助，最终顺利出行，这场充满小意外的旅途，让母女情谊与人间温暖更加珍贵难忘。 英文：The author and her mother’s long-awaited seaside trip was interrupted by a car breakdown. Fortunately, a kind stranger offered help, allowing them to enjoy their precious bonding time. The unexpected experience turned out to be the most unforgettable memory. 8. 句式 定语从句：My mom and I had been planning a weekend trip to the coastal town of Brighton for months. 状语从句：Even if it takes a little longer, we will get there eventually. 宾语从句：I could see the worry in her eyes—she didn’t want to let me down. 非谓语动词：I placed it by the door and went to bed with a big smile, too excited to sleep. 并列句：Every time I closed my eyes, I imagined the sound of waves and Mom’s laughter. 9. 本文主题 温情成长类：生活难免有意外波折，但善意与陪伴能治愈所有遗憾，不完美的经历反而会成就最珍贵的独家回忆。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Just when I was about to give up, a blue van stopped beside us. 衔接句1——Who was the driver? How did he help them? What did they do later? A warm-hearted driver stopped to offer help, took them to the town to fix the car, and finally they arrived at Brighton and spent a sweet day together. Paragraph 2: On our way back home Sunday evening, we passed the same stretch of road where we’d broken down. 衔接句2——What did they recall? What feeling and insight did they gain? They recalled the unexpected accident and the stranger’s kindness, realizing that imperfect journeys bring warmer and more unforgettable memories. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：就在我快要放弃时，一辆蓝色货车停在了我们身旁。 →①热心司机主动停车询问、伸出援手→②帮忙联系修车人员，载她们前往小镇休整→③母女顺利抵达布莱顿，尽情享受专属温馨时光； 第二段：周日傍晚返程时，我们再次经过了那段抛锚的公路。 →①回望道路，母女二人回忆起白天的意外与温暖相助→②畅谈旅途点滴，珍惜难得的陪伴时光→③心生感悟：波折的旅途，造就最难忘的温情回忆。 四.段落续写（标准范文） Just when I was about to give up, a blue van stopped beside us. A kind middle-aged driver rolled down the window and asked about our trouble. Learning that our car broke down and we had no signal for help, he generously offered to take us to the nearest town to find a repairman. Grateful and relieved, we got on the van immediately. Thanks to his timely help, our car was fixed soon. We finally arrived at Brighton in the afternoon. We walked along the sunny beach, collected delicate seashells and tasted delicious fish and chips, enjoying every precious moment together. On our way back home Sunday evening, we passed the same stretch of road where we’d broken down. The quiet road looked totally different to me. I no longer felt frustrated about the accident. Instead, I was full of warmth and gratitude. That tiny unexpected trouble did not ruin our trip, but added special sweetness to it. Chatting happily with Mom in the car, I realized that the most precious part of a journey was never the perfect scenery, but the warm company and unexpected kindness we encountered along the way. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $