2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---生死救援与挚爱坚守 导学案

该高中英语高考复习学案系统梳理了读后续写专题，将文本分析（角色、视角、时空线等）、情节构造、续写框架等核心考点按“理解-分析-创造”逻辑构建知识网络，通过问题导向的细节问答和任务驱动的情节线梳理，引导学生自主推导文本逻辑与情感脉络，形成续写的整体认知框架。 亮点在于诊断性文本分析和分层式续写指导，如文本分析环节设置角色定位、情感线梳理等自测问题，学生通过细节问答自主诊断文本理解短板，培养语言能力与思维品质。续写框架按“衔接-展开-升华”步骤分解任务，配有参考答案对比反思，帮助学生建立个性化续写策略，教师可通过学生的情节构造成果精准指导，实现因材施教。

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Kell Morris and Jo Roop were warm-hearted middle-aged divorcees who fell in sincere love and got married after going through previous unhappy marriages. After decades of hard-working days, they finally retired to a quiet small city in Idaho, escaping from the noisy, fast‑paced modern urban life. In the year 2024, eager for a more peaceful and natural lifestyle, they moved to Alaska to start their long‑expected new life surrounded by wild scenery. One sunny morning, the couple decided to go hiking outdoors to enjoy the fresh air. Unluckily, Morris was suddenly trapped under a huge 700-pound boulder(巨石) by accident when crossing a shallow creek. The icy cold creek water kept rushing around his body, and his left leg was tightly pinned down by piles of smaller rocks. Worse still, low-temperature hypothermia began to set in quickly. Morris gradually felt extremely weak, with his speech becoming slower and more unclear. Roop stayed anxiously by her husband’s side all the time, holding his head steadily above the rushing water to keep him from drowning in the cold stream. Luckily, professional rescuers arrived at the scene soon. Harrington, the experienced incident commander, judged the whole situation seriously at once. The rapidly rising water and the extremely heavy boulder made the whole rescue work extremely risky. If they failed to lift the rock properly, Morris might be crushed to death immediately. Therefore, they had to race against time without a second to lose. While waiting for more manpower and rescue equipment, rescuers carefully examined Morris’s twisted boot, worrying that his leg would suffer serious permanent injury. Morris tried hard to wiggle his toes again and again but failed completely. Everyone present thought he was going to lose his leg for good. Time was running out rapidly. Filled with deep love, Roop kept encouraging her husband firmly not to give up no matter how hard the situation was. 注意： （1） 续写词数应为150个左右： （2） 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 With more rescuers and heavy-duty tools arriving, the rescue operation got underway right away. _______________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Hours of hard work finally paid off. __________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 Kell and Jo remarried happily and retired to a quiet city--- _________________ --- They moved to Alaska for a peaceful and natural life--- _________________ --- Kell was trapped by a heavy boulder in a cold creek and suffered hypothermia--- _________________ --- Professional rescuers arrived and judged the situation risky--- Rescuers worried Kell would lose his leg while Jo kept encouraging him 4. 细节问答 What kind of life did the couple live before moving to Alaska? ： ___________________________________ What accident happened to Kell during hiking?： _________________________________ What dangers was Kell facing?： ________________________________________________ What did Jo do to save her husband?： __________________________________________ Why was the rescue operation extremely risky?： _____________________________________________ What terrible result did people worry about?： _________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?： ________________________________________________ 5．情节线 历经不幸婚姻的夫妇重逢相爱，退休后向往宁静生活→_________________ →二人迁居阿拉斯加，开启自然闲适的新生活→徒步途中丈夫意外被巨石压住左腿，身处冰水、体温骤降、生命垂危→_________________ →妻子坚守陪伴、不断鼓励，救援队抵达评估险情，救援难度极大→众人担忧丈夫永久截肢，时间紧迫→（续写）救援团队就位，争分夺秒开展高危救援→（续写）救援成功，丈夫脱险，真爱与坚持创造奇迹 6．情感线 Couple：peaceful and hopeful→___________→desperate and dangerous →___________→relieved and grateful（续写） Rescuers：calm and professional→___________→relieved and joyful（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文： ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文： ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 温情励志类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: With more rescuers and heavy-duty tools arriving, the rescue operation got underway right away. 衔接句1——How did the rescuers carry out the risky rescue? What difficulties did they overcome? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Hours of hard work finally paid off. 衔接句2——What was the final result? How did the couple feel and what did they learn? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：随着更多救援人员和重型设备抵达，救援工作立刻展开。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：数小时的艰苦努力终于有了回报。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写 With more rescuers and heavy-duty tools arriving, the rescue operation got underway right away. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hours of hard work finally paid off. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 Kell Morris：历经坎坷、热爱生活、遇险顽强坚持的丈夫；Jo Roop：深情专一、勇敢坚韧、不离不弃、全力守护丈夫的妻子；Harrington & rescuers：专业冷静、不惧危险、争分夺秒、尽职尽责的救援人员 2．视角 第三人称 3．时空线 Kell and Jo remarried happily and retired to a quiet city--- They longed for peaceful natural life away from busy urban life --- They moved to Alaska for a peaceful and natural life--- Kell got trapped by a huge boulder while hiking on a sunny morning --- Kell was trapped by a heavy boulder in a cold creek and suffered hypothermia--- Jo protected him carefully and encouraged him constantly --- Professional rescuers arrived and judged the situation risky--- Rescuers worried Kell would lose his leg while Jo kept encouraging him 4. 细节问答 What kind of life did the couple live before moving to Alaska? ：They remarried after unhappy marriages, retired from busy work and lived a quiet life in a small city. What accident happened to Kell during hiking?：He was trapped under a 700-pound boulder in a shallow icy creek with his left leg pinned. What dangers was Kell facing?：He suffered from icy cold water, severe hypothermia, physical weakness and possible drowning or leg amputation. What did Jo do to save her husband?：She kept holding his head above water to avoid drowning and encouraged him firmly not to give up. Why was the rescue operation extremely risky?：The water was rising rapidly and the boulder was extremely heavy. Improper operation would kill Kell instantly. What terrible result did people worry about?：They worried that Kell’s injured leg would be permanently damaged and have to be cut off. What does the story tell us?：True love can support people through desperate difficulties, and perseverance and professional efforts can create miracles in life-and-death situations. 5．情节线 历经不幸婚姻的夫妇重逢相爱，退休后向往宁静生活→厌倦都市喧嚣，渴望自然平和的生活状态→二人迁居阿拉斯加，开启自然闲适的新生活→徒步途中丈夫意外被巨石压住左腿，身处冰水、体温骤降、生命垂危→妻子全程守护、奋力施救、不断鼓励濒临虚脱的丈夫→救援队抵达评估险情，救援难度极大→众人担忧丈夫永久截肢，时间紧迫→（续写）救援团队就位，争分夺秒开展高危救援→（续写）救援成功，丈夫脱险，真爱与坚持创造奇迹 6．情感线 Couple：peaceful and hopeful→scared and desperate→desperate and dangerous→persistent and determined→relieved and grateful（续写） Rescuers：calm and professional→tense and urgent→relieved and joyful（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：一对历经生活坎坷的夫妇迁居阿拉斯加追寻宁静生活，丈夫徒步遇险被巨石压住、身陷冰水绝境，妻子不离不弃坚守鼓励，救援队全力高危救援，最终成功救人，诠释了真爱与坚持的力量。 英文：A retired couple moved to Alaska for a peaceful life but met a deadly accident. Trapped by a heavy boulder and icy water, the husband struggled for survival. With the wife’s constant encouragement and rescuers’ professional efforts, they finally survived the desperate crisis. 8. 句式 定语从句：Kell Morris and Jo Roop were warm-hearted middle-aged divorcees who fell in sincere love and got married. 状语从句：If they failed to lift the rock properly, Morris might be crushed to death immediately. 宾语从句：rescuers carefully examined Morris’s twisted boot, worrying that his leg would suffer serious permanent injury. 非谓语动词：Morris gradually felt extremely weak, with his speech becoming slower and more unclear. 并列句：The rapidly rising water and the extremely heavy boulder made the whole rescue work extremely risky. 9. 本文主题 温情励志类：绝境之中，真爱是最坚定的支撑，专业的坚守与永不放弃的信念，能够冲破险境、创造生命奇迹。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: With more rescuers and heavy-duty tools arriving, the rescue operation got underway right away. 衔接句1——How did the rescuers carry out the risky rescue? What difficulties did they overcome? Rescuers worked in teams, using professional tools to stabilize the boulder and drain the rising water, trying their best to avoid secondary injury and race against time. Paragraph 2: Hours of hard work finally paid off. 衔接句2——What was the final result? How did the couple feel and what did they learn? Kell was successfully rescued without losing his leg. The couple was extremely grateful, realizing true love and perseverance can help people defeat desperate difficulties. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：随着更多救援人员和重型设备抵达，救援工作立刻展开。 →①救援人员分组协作，一边控水一边固定巨石→②全员高度专注、争分夺秒规避二次伤害→③妻子全程守候，不断为丈夫打气支撑； 第二段：数小时的艰苦努力终于有了回报。 →①巨石被成功移开，丈夫顺利脱困、腿部保住→②夫妻二人满心感激，动容不已→③二人深刻体悟真爱与坚持的珍贵与力量。 四.段落续写（标准范文） With more rescuers and heavy-duty tools arriving, the rescue operation got underway right away. Led by Harrington, rescuers divided into two teams. One team drained the rapidly rising creek water to prevent further hypothermia, while the other carefully fixed the huge boulder with professional devices to avoid sudden collapse. The whole operation was extremely tense and risky. Jo stayed firmly beside her husband, holding his hand tightly and whispering constant encouragement. Though exhausted and numb, Morris clung to hope and struggled to stay conscious. Hours of hard work finally paid off. The heavy boulder was slowly and steadily lifted up. Rescuers carefully pulled Morris out of the cold creek and sent him to receive emergency treatment. To everyone’s great relief, his leg was saved without permanent injury. Deeply moved, Morris held his wife’s hands tightly, knowing clearly that it was her love and perseverance that saved his life. The unforgettable experience made them cherish their precious life and sincere love more than ever before. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $