2027届高考英语应用文写作之建议信指导与训练 讲义
应用文写作 指导与训练
之建议信
03 建议信——分析问题，献计献策
一、写作架构搭建：
建议信是向别人提出合理的建议，让对方接受自己的想法、主张，解决有关问题的一种信件。
1. 建议信要简明扼要，目的明确，理由充分。
2. 写作时以第一、二人称和一般现在时为主。
• 开篇：点明目的，表达观点
• 主体：重点提出具体建议，并阐述理由
• 篇尾：总结并表达期待
二、亮眼素材积累：
第一段：表达写信目的
1. I am writing to give you some suggestions/offer you some advice.
我写信给你一些建议/忠告。
- You have asked me for my advice regarding/with regard to how to learn
Chinese, and I think the following tips can help you.
你询问我关于如何学习汉语的建议，我认为以下建议可能会帮到你。
第二段：针对问题，提出建议
- As far as I am concerned/In my opinion, it would be wise to take the
following measures.
在我看来，采取如下措施是明智的。
- To begin with, I suggest organizing a walking tour around the city to explore
the green spaces in Beijing.
首先，我建议组织一次围绕城市的徒步游览，以探索北京的绿色空间。
- As for fine food, you can try Beijing Roast Duck, Zhajiangmian and
Bingtanghulu.
至于美食，你可以尝试北京烤鸭、炸酱面和冰糖葫芦。
第三段：希望采纳建议，并表示谢意
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1. I hope these suggestions above will be of some help/benefit/use to you.
我希望以上建议将对你有所帮助/有益/有用。
2.I would appreciate it if you could take my advice into account/consideration
seriously.
如果你能认真考虑我的建议，我将不胜感激。
三、经典佳作展示
（2025·北京卷改编）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。联合国正面向全球青少年开展倡议征集活动。你的外国好友Jim也打算参加这次活动，为此发来邮件，就倡议内容询问你的建议。请你用英文作出回复。
内容包括：(1)提出的建议；
(2)建议的理由。
注意：(1)写作词数应为80个左右；
(2)请按如下格式作答。
参考词汇：倡议 proposal
Dear Jim，
Yours,
Li Hua
参考高分范文1：
Dear Jim,
I’m glad to hear that you want to take part in the UN’s campaign for global teenagers. Here’s my advice.
I suggest focusing on environmental protection. As we know, the environment is under serious threat, which affects everyone’s life. If we can raise awareness about it and encourage more people to take action, it will make a big difference. Another idea
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is to promote cultural exchange. By sharing our cultures and learning from each other, we can build a more harmonious global community.
I hope these suggestions help! Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
专家点评：
1. 内容评价：文章紧扣题目要求，针对联合国全球青少年倡议提出了两条具体建议（环境保护和文化交流），内容完整。
2. 语言表达：语篇主题词汇（左栏加黑）和句式结构丰富（左栏加下画线），使用了 raise awareness、make a big difference、build a more harmonious global community、suggest focusing、which 引导的非限制性定语从句、非谓语等地道高级的表达。
3. 段落清晰：首段表明写作目的，中间段分别阐述两个建议，结尾段礼貌收束过渡自然，使用“another idea”等连接词。
4. 改进建议：建议部分可增加具体案例（如组织校园环保活动、创建文化交流平台等），丰富句式变化（如使用强调句、虚拟语气等）。
参考高分范文2：
Dear Jim,
I am writing to offer you some practical advice on your UN youth proposal for global teenagers.
As far as I am concerned, it would be wise to put forward two valuable suggestions. To begin with, we should raise people’s awareness of environmental protection to fight widespread pollution around the world. As for cultural exchange, we can organize regular online sharing activities to know diverse traditions from different countries, creating a much warmer harmonious global community.
I sincerely hope these suggestions above will be of some great help to you.
Yours,
Li Hua
新高考英语建议信 模拟实战演练
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