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应用文写作 指导与训练 之倡议书
倡议书-—发现问题,呼吁行动
一、写作架构搭建
倡议书是发起呼吁、号召行动的号召性短文,结构分为:标题、称呼、正文、
结尾、落款。语言要有号召力、感染力。
三段式行文逻辑:1. 开篇:点明倡议背景、现状,说明发起倡议的目的
2. 主体:分点列出具体倡议做法、可行建议
3. 篇尾:发出号召,表达共同行动的决心与美好期许
二、亮眼素材积累
第一段:介绍倡议背景
1. A regulation has been issued recently that all citizens shall wear a helmet while riding an electric bicycle.
最近颁布了一项规定,所有公民骑电动自行车时都必须佩戴头盔。
2. To improve the situation, we must live a low-carbon life to reduce greenhouse gas emissions.
为改善现状,我们必须践行低碳生活,减少温室气体排放。
3. It is everyone's responsibility to protect the environment. If we can change our way of life, we can make a big difference to the Earth.
保护环境人人有责。若我们转变生活方式,就能给地球带来巨大改变。
第二段:提出具体建议
1. First of all, we must save energy in our daily lives, such as water, electricity, and gas.
首先,我们日常生活中必须节约能源,例如水、电、燃气。
第三段:发出行动号召
1. Let's make joint efforts to create a green and harmonious environment.
让我们齐心协力,共建绿色和谐的环境。
2. So let's take action right now! I'm sure our efforts will eventually pay off!
所以我们立刻行动起来吧!我坚信我们的付出终会有所收获。
三、经典佳作展示
假定你是李华,受学生会委托在校宣传栏“英语天地”写倡议书《Say No to Food Waste》,内容:
1. 活动理由;2. 具体做法;3. 呼吁节约粮食。词数80词左右
Dear fellow students,
The Students’ Union
高分范文1:
Dear fellow students,
We all feel concerned when seeing leftovers piled in the bins of the canteen. To arouse our awareness of saving food, our school is to launch a campaign against meal waste.
Treasuring food, which has been passed down for thousands of years, is not just a virtue but a responsibility for every Chinese. As for us students, please don’t order too much food that we can’t finish. Furthermore, we should remind each other to clear the plates or pack leftovers whether at school or at a restaurant.
Remember, every grain of rice comes from hard work. Let’s save food and do it from now on.
The Students’ Union
专家点评:
1. 逻辑清晰:提出粮食浪费问题→分析珍惜粮食的意义→给出具体行动建议,
符合倡议书行文逻辑。
2. 语言亮点:固定搭配、定语从句、whether…or…复合句式丰富,用词贴合节
约主题。
3. 改进建议:建议增加食堂针对性措施,示例:In the canteen, we can use the
“half-portion” option when ordering, so we won’t waste extra food.
参考范文2:
Dear fellow students,
To improve the serious food waste situation in our canteen, we are launching a campaign against wasting food. It is everyone's responsibility to cherish grain, and our small changes will make a big difference.
First of all, we must order proper amounts of food in daily meals instead of taking more than we can finish. Whether dining at school or outside, we should clear our plates or take leftovers home to cut waste.
Let's make joint efforts to develop a good habit of saving food. I'm sure our efforts will eventually pay off!
The Students' Union
模拟实战演练
模拟题一、
城市推行“绿色出行 Green Transportation”,投放大量公共自行车。请以李华身份给市民写倡议书,要点:
1. 表明绿色出行观点;2. 倡导理由;3. 呼吁市民绿色出行。词数80词左右
My dear friends,
Citizen Li Hua
参考范文1:
My dear friends,
To cut down pollution and ease traffic jams, we should choose green transportation. It is everyone's responsibility to protect the environment, and cycling can make a big difference to our city.
First of all, we can ride public shared bikes for short trips instead of driving private cars. To improve the environmental situation, this low-carbon way helps reduce harmful gas emissions greatly.
Let's make joint efforts to build a fresh and green city. So let's take action right now! Our efforts will surely pay off.
Citizen Li Hua
参考范文2:
My dear friends,
A regulation has been issued recently that more shared bikes are offered to encourage low-carbon travel. To improve air conditions, we must live a low-carbon life to reduce greenhouse gas emissions.
First of all, we must choose cycling or buses for short trips, instead of driving private cars all the time. It is everyone's responsibility to protect the environment, and cycling can make a big difference to the Earth.
So let's take action right now! Our efforts will eventually pay off!
Li Hua
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