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新人教版 选必四
满分 25 分 续写词数 150 左右 续写两段,使之构成完整短文
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选择性必修四 Unit 1 Science and Scientists · 【科学探究 · 拯救校园花园】
满分 25 分 词数 150 左右 阅读材料,根据段落开头语续写两段。
Our school's little garden had always been my favourite corner, but that spring something was wrong. One by one, the green plants drooped and yellowed, and within weeks half the flowerbed lay withered. The gardener shook his head, blaming the weather, and prepared to dig everything up.
I could not accept that. Curious and stubborn, I began to investigate like a real scientist. I tested the soil, compared the dying plants with the healthy ones, and noted exactly which beds were affected.
Late one afternoon, kneeling by the worst patch, I noticed something the others had missed: a thin, oily film glistening on the surface of the watering channel.
Paragraph 1: Following the channel, I traced the strange film all the way to its source.
Paragraph 2: A month later, the garden was bursting with colour once more.
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选择性必修四 Unit 1 Science and Scientists · 【文本分析 · 写作思路】
【文本分析】
学校小花园的花草莫名枯萎,园丁归咎于天气、打算铲除;好奇执拗的“我”像科学家一样调查检测,终于在水渠表面发现一层油膜。
【写作思路】
第一段:顺着水渠追查到污染源(如附近油污渗入)→提出方案、清理并改用干净水源→以科学方法解决问题。
第二段:花园重焕生机、师生赞叹→自己倍感自豪→明白科学的意义在于好奇求真、用知识解决实际问题。
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选择性必修四 Unit 1 Science and Scientists · 【亮点词汇】
1. 低垂枯萎
1. droop and wither
2. 对…好奇
2. be curious about
3. 调查原因
3. investigate the cause
4. 把A与B作比较
4. compare A with B
5. 追查到源头
5. trace sth to its source
6. 仔细检查
6. examine sth with care
7. 想出解决办法
7. come up with a solution
8. 重新茁壮成长
8. thrive once more
9. 成就感
9. a sense of achievement
10. 造福世界
10. serve the world
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选择性必修四 Unit 1 Science and Scientists · 【高分句型】
1. (非谓语·现在分词作状语)我仔细检查每一份样本,寻找受损的原因。
Examining each sample with care, I searched for the cause of the damage.
2. (only 倒装)只有经过仔细检测,我才发现毒源来自何处。
Only after careful testing did I discover where the poison came from.
3. (定语从句)我清理了那条把油污带进土壤的水渠。
I cleaned the channel that had carried the oil into the soil.
4. (名词性从句·主语从句+表语从句)真正令我兴奋的是,科学竟能让花园重获生机。
What truly excited me was that science could bring the garden back to life.
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选择性必修四 Unit 1 Science and Scientists
【参考范文一 · 活用亮点词汇与高分句型】
Following the channel, I traced the strange film all the way to its source. Curious and unwilling to give up, I had investigated the dying beds and compared them with the healthy ones. Examining each sample with care, I searched for the cause of the damage. Only after careful testing did I discover where the poison came from. The culprit was a leaking drum of waste oil. At once I came up with a simple solution. I cleaned the channel that had carried the oil into the soil.
A month later, the garden was bursting with colour once more. The flowers I had saved now thrived in the clean, dark earth, and a deep sense of achievement filled my heart. What truly excited me was that science could bring the garden back to life. I understood at last that real science is curiosity that serves the world around us.
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选择性必修四 Unit 1 Science and Scientists
【参考范文二】
Following the channel, I traced the strange film all the way to its source. A cracked drum of waste oil behind the kitchen had been leaking into the water that fed the garden. At once I reported it, helped seal the leak, and flushed the beds with clean water for days. Slowly, the soil recovered, and tiny green shoots began to push up through the dark earth.
A month later, the garden was bursting with colour once more. Butterflies drifted between the flowers, and teachers stopped to admire the beds that had nearly been dug up. The gardener patted my shoulder, calling me "our little scientist." Standing among the blossoms I had helped save, I understood that real science is not about textbooks alone, but about curiosity that serves the world around us.
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选择性必修四 Unit 2 Iconic Attractions ·【地标 · 长城上的祖父】
满分 25 分 词数 150 左右 阅读材料,根据段落开头语续写两段。
For Ethan's fifteenth birthday, Grandpa said he wanted to take him somewhere special — the Great Wall. As a young man, he told Ethan, he had spent three years helping to repair a remote section of it, carrying stones up the steep ridges by hand.
Ethan had seen the Wall only in photos and on money, and to him it was just an old pile of bricks. On the bus there, he scrolled through his phone, only half-listening as Grandpa described the freezing winters and aching shoulders of his youth.
But when they finally climbed onto the ancient ramparts and the Wall unrolled across the mountains like a stone dragon, Ethan forgot all about his phone.
Paragraph 1: Standing on the very stones Grandpa had once carried, Ethan felt something stir inside him.
Paragraph 2: As the sun set over the endless mountains, Grandpa grew quiet beside him.
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选择性必修四 Unit 2 Iconic Attractions · 【文本分析 · 写作思路】
【文本分析】
十五岁生日,祖父带 Ethan 去长城——他年轻时曾徒手搬石修缮其中一段;起初只顾刷手机的 Ethan,看见长城如石龙铺展群山,忘了手机。
【写作思路】
第一段:Ethan 站在祖父当年亲手搬运的城砖上,听他讲述往事→震撼于古人的艰辛与伟大→对历史与劳动者心生敬意。
第二段:夕阳下祖父沉默动情、眼含泪光→Ethan 紧握他的手→明白地标不只是风景,更承载着一代代人的汗水与记忆。
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选择性必修四 Unit 2 Iconic Attractions · 【亮点词汇】
1. 刷(手机)
1. scroll through
2. 铺展开来
2. unroll across
3. 触动某人内心
3. stir sth inside sb
4. 敬畏地
4. in awe
5. 赤手空拳地
5. with one's bare hands
6. 饱经风霜的脸
6. a weather-beaten face
7. 文化遗产
7. cultural heritage
8. 传承
8. pass down
9. 哽咽
9. a lump in one's throat
10. 珍视…
10. treasure sth
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选择性必修四 Unit 2 Iconic Attractions · 【高分句型】
1. (非谓语·现在分词作状语+定语从句)仰望那一直延伸到视线之外的烽火台,Ethan 心中充满敬畏。
Gazing up at the towers that stretched beyond sight, Ethan was filled with awe.
2. (little 倒装)Ethan 此前几乎不知道,这些沉默的砖石曾耗费了多少汗水。
Little did Ethan know how much sweat these silent stones had cost.
3. (定语从句)祖父抚摸着这道半个世纪前他亲手帮忙修筑的城墙。
Grandpa touched the wall that he had helped to build half a century ago.
4. (强调句)正是在那一刻,Ethan 懂得了人们为何称长城为奇迹。
It was then that Ethan understood why people call the Wall a wonder.
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选择性必修四 Unit 2 Iconic Attractions
【参考范文一 · 活用亮点词汇与高分句型】
Standing on the very stones Grandpa had once carried, Ethan felt something stir inside him. Moments before he had been scrolling through his phone, but now the Wall unrolled across the mountains and left him speechless. Gazing up at the towers that stretched beyond sight, Ethan was filled with awe. Little did Ethan know how much sweat these silent stones had cost. In awe he touched a weather-beaten brick, raised long ago with men's bare hands.
As the sun set over the endless mountains, Grandpa grew quiet beside him. Grandpa touched the wall that he had helped to build half a century ago. A lump rose in Ethan's throat. It was then that Ethan understood why people call the Wall a wonder. He promised himself he would treasure this heritage and pass its story down to his own children one day.
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选择性必修四 Unit 2 Iconic Attractions
【参考范文二】
Standing on the very stones Grandpa had once carried, Ethan felt something stir inside him. He ran his fingers over the rough, weather-beaten bricks and tried to imagine a young man hauling them up the mountain with his bare hands. Suddenly the Wall was no longer cold or dead; it was alive with the toil of countless people like Grandpa. Looking out in awe, Ethan felt small, proud and deeply moved all at once.
As the sun set over the endless mountains, Grandpa grew quiet beside him. His weather-beaten face glowed in the golden light, and Ethan saw a tear shining in the corner of his eye. He slipped his hand into Grandpa's and held it tight, a lump rising in his throat. In that moment Ethan promised himself he would treasure this heritage and one day pass its story down to his own children.
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选择性必修四 Unit 3 Sea Exploration · 【海洋探索 · 风暴中的渔船】
满分 25 分 词数 150 左右 阅读材料,根据段落开头语续写两段。
Every summer I stayed with Grandpa, an old fisherman, in a small village by the sea. That year, for the first time, he agreed to take me out on his boat to check the nets far from shore. I was thrilled — the ocean had always called to me like a vast, mysterious world.
The morning sea was calm and silver, and we sailed out under a clear sky. But by noon the wind shifted, dark clouds raced in from the horizon, and the waves rose like grey walls around our little boat.
Grandpa's weathered face tightened. "Hold on tight," he shouted over the roar, gripping the wheel as the first wave crashed across the deck.
Paragraph 1: Soaked and terrified, I clung to the rail as Grandpa fought to turn the boat for home.
Paragraph 2: When at last the harbour lights appeared through the rain, I nearly wept with relief.
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选择性必修四 Unit 3 Sea Exploration · 【文本分析 · 写作思路】
【文本分析】
暑假随做渔民的祖父出海收网,向往大海的“我”兴奋不已;晌午风云突变、巨浪如墙,祖父神色一紧吼“我”抓紧,第一道浪已扑上甲板。
【写作思路】
第一段:在狂风巨浪中协助祖父稳住小船、调头返航→恐惧中学会镇定、按祖父指挥行动→体会大海的威力与渔民的勇敢。
第二段:终见港口灯火、安全靠岸→劫后余生、感激敬佩祖父→明白探索海洋既要热爱,也要敬畏与勇气。
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选择性必修四 Unit 3 Sea Exploration · 【亮点词汇】
1. 召唤;吸引
1. call to
2. 辽阔的大地
2. a vast land
3. 骤然转变
3. shift suddenly
4. 紧紧抓住
4. cling to
5. 湿透
5. soaked to the skin
6. 奋力(做)
6. fight to
7. 保持镇定
7. keep one's head
8. 如野兽般咆哮
8. roar like a beast
9. 令某人宽慰的是
9. to one's relief
10. 敬畏自然
10. respect nature
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选择性必修四 Unit 3 Sea Exploration · 【高分句型】
1. (非谓语·现在分词作状语)我用尽全力紧抓栏杆,完全照祖父喊的去做。
Clinging to the rail with all my strength, I did exactly as Grandpa shouted.
2. (never 倒装)我这辈子从未感受过大海如此狂野、如此强大。
Never in my life had I felt the sea so wild and so powerful.
3. (定语从句)我信任这位双手曾驾船穿越上百场风暴的老人。
I trusted the old man whose hands had steered through a hundred storms.
4. (让步状语从句)尽管巨浪高耸在我们头顶,祖父却始终保持镇定。
Although the waves towered above us, Grandpa never lost his calm.
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选择性必修四 Unit 3 Sea Exploration
【参考范文一 · 活用亮点词汇与高分句型】
Soaked and terrified, I clung to the rail as Grandpa fought to turn the boat for home. The vast sea that had once called to me now roared like a beast, and the wind had shifted without warning. Clinging to the rail with all my strength, I did exactly as Grandpa shouted. Never in my life had I felt the sea so wild and so powerful. Although the waves towered above us, Grandpa never lost his calm. I forced myself to keep my head.
When at last the harbour lights appeared through the rain, I nearly wept with relief. I trusted the old man whose hands had steered through a hundred storms. His steady courage had carried us home. To my relief, the battered boat slid gently against the dock. Standing on solid ground, I understood that to explore the ocean is to love it and to respect it, both at once.
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选择性必修四 Unit 3 Sea Exploration
【参考范文二】
Soaked and terrified, I clung to the rail as Grandpa fought to turn the boat for home. The wind screamed and the deck pitched beneath my feet, but his calm voice cut through the chaos, telling me when to duck, when to hold, when to bail the water. Forcing myself to keep my head, I obeyed every command. Inch by inch, wave by wave, the little boat clawed its way back toward the shore.
When at last the harbour lights appeared through the rain, I nearly wept with relief. Grandpa guided the battered boat gently against the dock, then rested a heavy, trembling hand on my shoulder and smiled. "You did well, child," he said. Standing on solid ground, my legs still shaking, I gazed back at the heaving sea and understood at last that to explore the ocean is to love it and to fear it, both at once.
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选择性必修四 Unit 4 Sharing · 【分享 · 空盒子里的幸福】
满分 25 分 词数 150 左右 阅读材料,根据段落开头语续写两段。
Every year before the Spring Festival, my mother and I made a big box of sweet sesame balls, my absolute favourite. I would count them jealously and guard them, refusing to share even one with my little cousins.
This winter, our class organised a visit to a children's home on the edge of town. I brought my precious box along, secretly planning to keep it for myself on the long bus ride. But when we arrived, I saw rows of children with patched clothes and shy, hungry eyes, children who had no family to make sweets for them.
One tiny girl stared at my box, then quickly looked away, ashamed of her own longing.
Paragraph 1: Hesitating only a moment, I opened the box and held it out to her.
Paragraph 2: By the time the bus left, my box was empty — and I had never felt so full.
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选择性必修四 Unit 4 Sharing · 【文本分析 · 写作思路】
【文本分析】
每年春节,“我”都小气地守着最爱的芝麻球;这个冬天随班级探访儿童之家,看见衣衫打补丁、眼神羞怯而渴望的孩子,一个小女孩盯着“我”的盒子又匆匆别开。
【写作思路】
第一段:犹豫片刻后把点心分给小女孩、再分给所有孩子→孩子们雀跃道谢、围拢过来→我在给予中体会到从未有过的快乐。
第二段:空盒子在手却心满意足、与孩子们依依惜别→明白分享非但不会失去,反而收获更大的幸福与温暖。
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选择性必修四 Unit 4 Sharing · 【亮点词汇】
1. 严密看守
1. guard sth closely
2. 小气地守着
2. jealously guard
3. 打补丁的衣服
3. patched clothes
4. 渴望做某事
4. long to do sth
5. 犹豫要不要做
5. hesitate to do sth
6. 递出;伸出
6. hold out
7. 喜笑颜开
7. light up
8. 慷慨之举
8. an act of generosity
9. 传递分发
9. pass around
10. 比……更有意义
10. mean more than
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选择性必修四 Unit 4 Sharing · 【高分句型】
1. (非谓语·现在分词作状语)我蹲下身与她平视,把一颗芝麻球放进她小小的手心。
Kneeling down to her level, I placed a sweet sesame ball in her small hand.
2. (not until 倒装)直到把点心分送出去,我才尝到真正的幸福。
Not until I gave my treats away did I taste true happiness.
3. (名词性从句·宾语从句)我终于明白,分享让快乐生长,而非减少。
I finally understood that sharing makes joy grow, not shrink.
4. (定语从句·whose)那些原本眼神忧伤的孩子,此刻正在我身边欢笑。
The children whose eyes had been so sad were now laughing all around me.
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选择性必修四 Unit 4 Sharing
【参考范文一 · 活用亮点词汇与高分句型】
Hesitating only a moment, I opened the box and held it out to her. For years I had guarded these sweets jealously, refusing to share a single one, yet the longing in this patched, thin little girl was more than I could bear. Kneeling down to her level, I placed a sweet sesame ball in her small hand. As her face lit up, I passed the rest around to the others.
By the time the bus left, my box was empty — and I had never felt so full. The children whose eyes had been so sad were now laughing all around me. Their thanks meant more than any treat ever could, and a quiet generosity warmed my chest. Not until I gave my treats away did I taste true happiness. I finally understood that sharing makes joy grow, not shrink.
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选择性必修四 Unit 4 Sharing
【参考范文二】
Hesitating only a moment, I opened the box and held it out to her. Her face lit up like a lantern, and soon other children gathered, shy but hopeful. I passed the box around, watching one treasured sweet after another disappear into eager fingers — and to my surprise, each one I gave away made my heart feel lighter. For the first time, I was glad to share what I had always kept for myself.
By the time the bus left, my box was empty — and I had never felt so full. The children waved until our bus turned the corner, their thanks ringing in my ears. I no longer thought of the sweets I had lost, only of the smiles I had gained. As the town slipped past the window, I understood that the more we share, the richer our hearts become.
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选择性必修四 Unit 5 Launching Your Career · 【启航职业 · 面包店的第一份工】
满分 25 分 词数 150 左右 阅读材料,根据段落开头语续写两段。
The summer I turned sixteen, I took my first job — a holiday helper at the busy corner bakery. I had imagined it would be easy: smile, take money, hand over bread. I was wrong.
On my very first morning, I mixed up orders, gave the wrong change, and dropped a whole tray of buns onto the floor. Customers sighed, the queue grew, and my face burned with shame. By noon I was ready to tear off my apron and walk out for good.
Then Mrs Guo, the kind old owner, drew me aside. Instead of scolding me, she smiled and said, "Everyone's first day is hard, child. What matters is whether you come back tomorrow."
Paragraph 1: Taking a deep breath, I tied my apron tighter and went back to the counter.
Paragraph 2: By the end of the summer, the bakery felt almost like a second home.
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选择性必修四 Unit 5 Launching Your Career · 【文本分析 · 写作思路】
【文本分析】
十六岁的“我”第一次在面包店打工,第一天就接连出错、窘迫得想辞工;好心的郭奶奶没有责备,只说每个人的第一天都很难。
【写作思路】
第一段:重整心态、虚心向 Mrs Guo 学习,记订单、练手脚→在忙乱中渐渐熟练、待客热情→从出错连连到独当一面。
第二段:暑期结束,顾客熟识、老板称赞,收获第一份工资与自信→明白任何事业都始于踏实与坚持,从不放弃开始。
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选择性必修四 Unit 5 Launching Your Career · 【亮点词汇】
1. 弄混
1. mix up
2. 羞愧得脸发烫
2. burn with shame
3. 责骂某人
3. scold sb
4. 拉到一旁
4. draw aside
5. 系紧
5. tie up
6. 掌握诀窍
6. get the hang of
7. 接待顾客
7. serve a customer
8. 自信地
8. with confidence
9. 见成效
9. pay off
10. 出发;着手
10. set out
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选择性必修四 Unit 5 Launching Your Career · 【高分句型】
1. (非谓语·过去分词作状语)我下定决心不放弃,仔细观察 Mrs Guo,模仿她的每一个动作。
Determined not to quit, I watched Mrs Guo closely and copied her every move.
2. (强调句)正是 Mrs Guo 的善意,给了我留下来的勇气。
It was Mrs Guo's kindness that gave me the courage to stay.
3. (时间状语从句)随着日子一天天过去,我渐渐掌握了忙碌柜台的诀窍。
As the days went by, I slowly got the hang of the busy counter.
4. (名词性从句·宾语从句)我渐渐看清,每一份事业都始于再试一次的勇气。
I came to see that every career begins with the courage to try again.
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选择性必修四 Unit 5 Launching Your Career
【参考范文一 · 活用亮点词汇与高分句型】
Taking a deep breath, I tied my apron tighter and went back to the counter. Only an hour before I had mixed up orders and burned with shame as Mrs Guo drew me aside; yet she had not scolded me. Determined not to quit, I watched Mrs Guo closely and copied her every move. As the days went by, I slowly got the hang of the busy counter. It was Mrs Guo's kindness that gave me the courage to stay.
By the end of the summer, the bakery felt almost like a second home. I now served every customer with confidence, and all those early struggles had finally paid off. As I set out on my own path one day, I would carry this first job with me. I came to see that every career begins with the courage to try again.
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选择性必修四 Unit 5 Launching Your Career
【参考范文二】
Taking a deep breath, I tied my apron tighter and went back to the counter. I watched how Mrs Guo greeted each customer by name, how her hands moved swiftly yet never rushed. I copied her, scribbling orders on my palm, repeating prices under my breath. Mistakes still came, but fewer each hour, and by closing time I had not dropped a single bun. For the first time, the work felt almost within my reach.
By the end of the summer, the bakery felt almost like a second home. Regular customers greeted me with smiles, and Mrs Guo trusted me to run the counter alone on busy mornings. On my last day she pressed my first wages and a warm loaf into my hands, telling me she was proud. Walking home in the evening light, I realised that this small, hard summer had taught me how every dream of a career truly begins.
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新人教版选必四 · 读后续写专项训练(导学案 · 学生版)
班级:____________ 姓名:____________ 学号:________ 得分:________
读后续写 1 · 选择性必修四 Unit 1 Science and Scientists 【科学探究 · 拯救校园花园】
满分 25 分 词数 150 左右。阅读下面材料,根据所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
【阅读材料】
Our school's little garden had always been my favourite corner, but that spring something was wrong. One by one, the green plants drooped and yellowed, and within weeks half the flowerbed lay withered. The gardener shook his head, blaming the weather, and prepared to dig everything up.
I could not accept that. Curious and stubborn, I began to investigate like a real scientist. I tested the soil, compared the dying plants with the healthy ones, and noted exactly which beds were affected.
Late one afternoon, kneeling by the worst patch, I noticed something the others had missed: a thin, oily film glistening on the surface of the watering channel.
【写作思路】
第一段:顺着水渠追查到污染源(如附近油污渗入)→提出方案、清理并改用干净水源→以科学方法解决问题。
第二段:花园重焕生机、师生赞叹→自己倍感自豪→明白科学的意义在于好奇求真、用知识解决实际问题。
【亮点词汇】(根据中文写出英文)
低垂枯萎
对…好奇
调查原因
把A与B作比较
追查到源头
仔细检查
想出解决办法
重新茁壮成长
成就感
造福世界
【高分句型】(根据中文及提示写出英文句子)
1. (非谓语·现在分词作状语)我仔细检查每一份样本,寻找受损的原因。
2. (only 倒装)只有经过仔细检测,我才发现毒源来自何处。
3. (定语从句)我清理了那条把油污带进土壤的水渠。
4. (名词性从句·主语从句+表语从句)真正令我兴奋的是,科学竟能让花园重获生机。
【续写训练】
Paragraph 1: Following the channel, I traced the strange film all the way to its source.
Paragraph 2: A month later, the garden was bursting with colour once more.
读后续写 2 · 选择性必修四 Unit 2 Iconic Attractions 【地标 · 长城上的祖父】
满分 25 分 词数 150 左右。阅读下面材料,根据所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
【阅读材料】
For Ethan's fifteenth birthday, Grandpa said he wanted to take him somewhere special — the Great Wall. As a young man, he told Ethan, he had spent three years helping to repair a remote section of it, carrying stones up the steep ridges by hand.
Ethan had seen the Wall only in photos and on money, and to him it was just an old pile of bricks. On the bus there, he scrolled through his phone, only half-listening as Grandpa described the freezing winters and aching shoulders of his youth.
But when they finally climbed onto the ancient ramparts and the Wall unrolled across the mountains like a stone dragon, Ethan forgot all about his phone.
【写作思路】
第一段:Ethan 站在祖父当年亲手搬运的城砖上,听他讲述往事→震撼于古人的艰辛与伟大→对历史与劳动者心生敬意。
第二段:夕阳下祖父沉默动情、眼含泪光→Ethan 紧握他的手→明白地标不只是风景,更承载着一代代人的汗水与记忆。
【亮点词汇】(根据中文写出英文)
刷(手机)
铺展开来
触动某人内心
敬畏地
赤手空拳地
饱经风霜的脸
文化遗产
传承
哽咽
珍视…
【高分句型】(根据中文及提示写出英文句子)
1. (非谓语·现在分词作状语+定语从句)仰望那一直延伸到视线之外的烽火台,Ethan 心中充满敬畏。
2. (little 倒装)Ethan 此前几乎不知道,这些沉默的砖石曾耗费了多少汗水。
3. (定语从句)祖父抚摸着这道半个世纪前他亲手帮忙修筑的城墙。
4. (强调句)正是在那一刻,Ethan 懂得了人们为何称长城为奇迹。
【续写训练】
Paragraph 1: Standing on the very stones Grandpa had once carried, Ethan felt something stir inside him.
Paragraph 2: As the sun set over the endless mountains, Grandpa grew quiet beside him.
读后续写 3 · 选择性必修四 Unit 3 Sea Exploration 【海洋探索 · 风暴中的渔船】
满分 25 分 词数 150 左右。阅读下面材料,根据所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
【阅读材料】
Every summer I stayed with Grandpa, an old fisherman, in a small village by the sea. That year, for the first time, he agreed to take me out on his boat to check the nets far from shore. I was thrilled — the ocean had always called to me like a vast, mysterious world.
The morning sea was calm and silver, and we sailed out under a clear sky. But by noon the wind shifted, dark clouds raced in from the horizon, and the waves rose like grey walls around our little boat.
Grandpa's weathered face tightened. "Hold on tight," he shouted over the roar, gripping the wheel as the first wave crashed across the deck.
【写作思路】
第一段:在狂风巨浪中协助祖父稳住小船、调头返航→恐惧中学会镇定、按祖父指挥行动→体会大海的威力与渔民的勇敢。
第二段:终见港口灯火、安全靠岸→劫后余生、感激敬佩祖父→明白探索海洋既要热爱,也要敬畏与勇气。
【亮点词汇】(根据中文写出英文)
召唤;吸引
辽阔的大地
骤然转变
紧紧抓住
湿透
奋力(做)
保持镇定
如野兽般咆哮
令某人宽慰的是
敬畏自然
【高分句型】(根据中文及提示写出英文句子)
1. (非谓语·现在分词作状语)我用尽全力紧抓栏杆,完全照祖父喊的去做。
2. (never 倒装)我这辈子从未感受过大海如此狂野、如此强大。
3. (定语从句)我信任这位双手曾驾船穿越上百场风暴的老人。
4. (让步状语从句)尽管巨浪高耸在我们头顶,祖父却始终保持镇定。
【续写训练】
Paragraph 1: Soaked and terrified, I clung to the rail as Grandpa fought to turn the boat for home.
Paragraph 2: When at last the harbour lights appeared through the rain, I nearly wept with relief.
读后续写 4 · 选择性必修四 Unit 4 Sharing 【分享 · 空盒子里的幸福】
满分 25 分 词数 150 左右。阅读下面材料,根据所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
【阅读材料】
Every year before the Spring Festival, my mother and I made a big box of sweet sesame balls, my absolute favourite. I would count them jealously and guard them, refusing to share even one with my little cousins.
This winter, our class organised a visit to a children's home on the edge of town. I brought my precious box along, secretly planning to keep it for myself on the long bus ride. But when we arrived, I saw rows of children with patched clothes and shy, hungry eyes, children who had no family to make sweets for them.
One tiny girl stared at my box, then quickly looked away, ashamed of her own longing.
【写作思路】
第一段:犹豫片刻后把点心分给小女孩、再分给所有孩子→孩子们雀跃道谢、围拢过来→我在给予中体会到从未有过的快乐。
第二段:空盒子在手却心满意足、与孩子们依依惜别→明白分享非但不会失去,反而收获更大的幸福与温暖。
【亮点词汇】(根据中文写出英文)
严密看守
小气地守着
打补丁的衣服
渴望做某事
犹豫要不要做
递出;伸出
喜笑颜开
慷慨之举
传递分发
比……更有意义
【高分句型】(根据中文及提示写出英文句子)
1. (非谓语·现在分词作状语)我蹲下身与她平视,把一颗芝麻球放进她小小的手心。
2. (not until 倒装)直到把点心分送出去,我才尝到真正的幸福。
3. (名词性从句·宾语从句)我终于明白,分享让快乐生长,而非减少。
4. (定语从句·whose)那些原本眼神忧伤的孩子,此刻正在我身边欢笑。
【续写训练】
Paragraph 1: Hesitating only a moment, I opened the box and held it out to her.
Paragraph 2: By the time the bus left, my box was empty — and I had never felt so full.
读后续写 5 · 选择性必修四 Unit 5 Launching Your Career 【启航职业 · 面包店的第一份工】
满分 25 分 词数 150 左右。阅读下面材料,根据所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
【阅读材料】
The summer I turned sixteen, I took my first job — a holiday helper at the busy corner bakery. I had imagined it would be easy: smile, take money, hand over bread. I was wrong.
On my very first morning, I mixed up orders, gave the wrong change, and dropped a whole tray of buns onto the floor. Customers sighed, the queue grew, and my face burned with shame. By noon I was ready to tear off my apron and walk out for good.
Then Mrs Guo, the kind old owner, drew me aside. Instead of scolding me, she smiled and said, "Everyone's first day is hard, child. What matters is whether you come back tomorrow."
【写作思路】
第一段:重整心态、虚心向 Mrs Guo 学习,记订单、练手脚→在忙乱中渐渐熟练、待客热情→从出错连连到独当一面。
第二段:暑期结束,顾客熟识、老板称赞,收获第一份工资与自信→明白任何事业都始于踏实与坚持,从不放弃开始。
【亮点词汇】(根据中文写出英文)
弄混
羞愧得脸发烫
责骂某人
拉到一旁
系紧
掌握诀窍
接待顾客
自信地
见成效
出发;着手
【高分句型】(根据中文及提示写出英文句子)
1. (非谓语·过去分词作状语)我下定决心不放弃,仔细观察 Mrs Guo,模仿她的每一个动作。
2. (强调句)正是 Mrs Guo 的善意,给了我留下来的勇气。
3. (时间状语从句)随着日子一天天过去,我渐渐掌握了忙碌柜台的诀窍。
4. (名词性从句·宾语从句)我渐渐看清,每一份事业都始于再试一次的勇气。
【续写训练】
Paragraph 1: Taking a deep breath, I tied my apron tighter and went back to the counter.
Paragraph 2: By the end of the summer, the bakery felt almost like a second home.
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