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新人教版必修三 · 读后续写专项训练(导学案 · 学生版)
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读后续写 1 · 必修三 Unit 1 Festivals and Celebrations 【节日 · 中秋的团圆】
满分 25 分 词数 150 左右。阅读下面材料,根据所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
【阅读材料】
The Mid-Autumn Festival had always been my favourite night of the year. As the full moon climbed over the rooftops, my family gathered on the balcony, sharing mooncakes and laughter. Everything felt warm and complete.
Then I happened to glance across the courtyard. In the window opposite, old Grandma Wang sat alone under a dim lamp, a single untouched mooncake on the table before her. Her children worked in a city far away and could not come home this year.
I remembered how she always smiled and saved sweets for the children in our building. Tonight, on this festival of reunion, she had no one to share the moon with. I put down my mooncake, an idea forming in my mind.
【写作思路】
第一段:端着月饼敲门→邀请奶奶过来一起赏月→奶奶惊喜感动,与我们围坐吃月饼、聊家常。
第二段:一家人和邻居都聚来,院里欢声笑语→奶奶笑中含泪→明白节日的意义在于团圆与分享温暖。
【亮点词汇】(根据中文写出英文)
聚到一起
瞥一眼
原封未动
家人团圆
容光焕发;亮起来
与某人分享
温暖感
……的真正含义
走;前往
熠熠生辉
【高分句型】(根据中文及提示写出英文句子)
1. (现在分词作状语)我捧着温热的盘子,穿过洒满月光的院子。
2. (not only 部分倒装)她不仅加入了我们,还端来了她拿手的甜汤。
3. (强调句)正是在那个皎洁的夜晚,我懂得了团圆的真正含义。
4. (名词性从句·宾语从句)我看到,没有人该独自度过团圆的节日。
【续写训练】
Paragraph 1: Carrying a plate of mooncakes, I knocked gently on Grandma Wang's door.
Paragraph 2: That night, our small courtyard glowed with more than just moonlight.
读后续写 2 · 必修三 Unit 2 Morals and Ethics 【品德 · 拾金不昧】
满分 25 分 词数 150 左右。阅读下面材料,根据所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
【阅读材料】
On my way home from school, I spotted a brown leather wallet lying on the rainy pavement. I picked it up and looked inside — it was stuffed with banknotes, more money than I had ever held in my life.
For a moment, my heart raced. My family was struggling that winter; my mother had been worried about the bills, and this money could solve so many problems. No one had seen me pick it up, and the street was empty.
Then I noticed a small photo tucked behind the cash: an old man holding the hand of a little girl, both smiling. Beside it was a hospital appointment card. My fingers tightened around the wallet.
【写作思路】
第一段:决定物归原主→凭医院卡片信息去找/联系失主→克制诱惑,几经内心挣扎仍选择诚实。
第二段:老人赶到,焦急地说钱是给孙女治病的→失而复得、激动道谢,欲酬谢被婉拒→明白诚信比金钱更珍贵。
【亮点词汇】(根据中文写出英文)
塞满
受到诱惑
艰难度日
抵制诱惑
追查到;找到
感激的
拒绝
无价之宝
下定决心
担忧得脸色发白
【高分句型】(根据中文及提示写出英文句子)
1. (as 引导让步倒装)尽管我被这笔钱所诱惑,但我知道自己绝不能据为己有。
2. (only 倒装)只有把钱包归还,我才能再次坦然面对镜中的自己。
3. (强调句)那个雨天的下午,我选择的是诚实,而非金钱。
4. (让步状语从句)尽管这笔钱本能缓解我们的窘境,我却从未想过据为己有。
【续写训练】
Paragraph 1: Taking a deep breath, I made up my mind.
Paragraph 2: When the old man finally arrived, his face was pale with worry.
读后续写 3 · 必修三 Unit 3 Diverse Cultures 【多元文化 · 跨越隔阂(第三人称)】
满分 25 分 词数 150 左右。阅读下面材料,根据所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
【阅读材料】
When Jack, an exchange student from abroad, joined the class, everyone was curious about him at first. But the novelty soon wore off. Jack struggled with their customs — he didn't know how to use chopsticks, mixed up the festivals, and often fell silent when the class laughed at jokes he couldn't follow.
Day by day, he grew quieter, eating lunch alone in a corner. Some classmates whispered that he was "strange" and kept their distance. Grace noticed how his eyes followed their games from far away, longing yet afraid to join.
The teacher had asked them to prepare a "Culture Sharing" afternoon. As Grace thought about Jack sitting alone, an idea came to her.
【写作思路】
第一段:Grace 邀请 Jack 搭档→一起备演:他介绍家乡文化,他们教他包饺子、写毛笔字→在合作中渐渐亲近,Jack 露出笑容。
第二段:台上 Jack 自信展示中外文化交融,全班喝彩→他真正融入集体→明白真诚与尊重能跨越文化隔阂。
【亮点词汇】(根据中文写出英文)
对…好奇
逐渐消失
在……上感到吃力
保持距离
渴望做某事
融入
打破隔阂
包容差异
主动靠近
属于这里
【高分句型】(根据中文及提示写出英文句子)
1. (非谓语·现在分词作状语)感受到他的孤独,Grace 决定主动靠近他。
2. (the+比较级)他们合作得越多,关系就越亲近。
3. (强调句)正是彼此的尊重打破了他们之间的隔阂。
4. (定语从句)他们共同建立起一段任何差异都无法割断的友谊。
【续写训练】
Paragraph 1: Grace walked over to Jack and asked if he would be her partner for the culture show.
Paragraph 2: On the day of the show, Jack stepped onto the stage, no longer the lonely boy in the corner.
读后续写 4 · 必修三 Unit 4 Adversity and Courage 【逆境 · 直面恐惧的演讲】
满分 25 分 词数 150 左右。阅读下面材料,根据所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
【阅读材料】
Ever since I was little, I had stuttered. Words would jam in my throat, and the harder I tried, the worse it became. So when our teacher announced a class speech contest and encouraged everyone to take part, my heart sank. I had spent years avoiding exactly this.
For days I practised alone in my room, reading aloud until my voice grew steadier. Still, the thought of standing before the whole class, of the giggles I might hear, filled me with dread.
On the morning of the contest, my hands were ice-cold as I waited for my name. One by one, my classmates delivered their speeches. Then the teacher called, "Next — you."
【写作思路】
第一段:上台,起初结巴、紧张→深呼吸、放慢语速→同学安静而鼓励的目光给了我力量,渐渐流畅,坚持讲完。
第二段:讲毕全班起立鼓掌→自己难以置信、热泪盈眶→老师赞许→明白勇气是直面恐惧,不被缺陷定义。
【亮点词汇】(根据中文写出英文)
有口吃
心沉下去
害怕做某事
稳住嗓音
克服恐惧
不顾一切困难
定义你是谁
赢得某人尊重
硬挤出(话)
模糊某人视线
【高分句型】(根据中文及提示写出英文句子)
1. (形容词/分词作状语)我浑身发抖却下定决心,硬是吐出了第一个词。
2. (never 倒装)我从未想过自己能在这么多人面前讲话。
3. (强调句)赢得他们尊重的是勇气,而非完美的口才。
4. (名词性从句·宾语从句)我向所有人证明,口吃无法让我噤声。
【续写训练】
Paragraph 1: On shaking legs, I walked to the front of the classroom.
Paragraph 2: When I spoke the final word, the room was silent — and then it exploded.
读后续写 5 · 必修三 Unit 5 The Value of Money 【金钱的价值 · 攒钱与给予】
满分 25 分 词数 150 左右。阅读下面材料,根据所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
【阅读材料】
For almost a year I had been saving every coin for one thing: a shiny new bicycle in the shop window. I skipped snacks, did extra chores, and counted my growing savings every night. The bike was finally within reach.
Then one morning our teacher told us quietly that Lin Tao, a boy in our class, would have to drop out of school. His father had fallen ill, and his family could no longer afford the fees. Lin Tao had always shared his books with me and helped me when I fell behind.
That evening I sat staring at my savings jar and the bicycle poster on my wall. Two pictures pulled at my heart.
【写作思路】
第一段:把攒了一年的钱装进信封→匿名交给老师帮助 Lin Tao→放弃心爱的自行车,内心由不舍到坦然。
第二段:Lin Tao 得知后来道谢、哽咽→我说友谊比自行车珍贵→明白金钱的价值在于给他人带来希望与温暖。
【亮点词汇】(根据中文写出英文)
攒钱
触手可及
辍学
负担得起做某事
犹豫要不要做
值得之事
比……更有意义
……的真正价值
放弃
紧紧攥住
【高分句型】(根据中文及提示写出英文句子)
1. (现在分词作状语)我紧紧攥着信封,走进了老师的办公室。
2. (as 引导让步倒装)尽管放弃那辆自行车很难,我却从未后悔自己的选择。
3. (强调句)真正让我快乐的不是那辆自行车,而是林涛的笑容。
4. (原因状语从句)因为林涛一直支持着我,我无法看着他离开。
【续写训练】
Paragraph 1: The next morning, I emptied my savings jar into a small envelope.
Paragraph 2: When Lin Tao learned who had helped him, he came to find me after class.
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新人教版 必修三
满分 25 分 续写词数 150 左右 续写两段,使之构成完整短文
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必修三 Unit 1 Festivals and Celebrations · 【节日 · 中秋的团圆】
满分 25 分 词数 150 左右 阅读材料,根据段落开头语续写两段。
The Mid-Autumn Festival had always been my favourite night of the year. As the full moon climbed over the rooftops, my family gathered on the balcony, sharing mooncakes and laughter. Everything felt warm and complete.
Then I happened to glance across the courtyard. In the window opposite, old Grandma Wang sat alone under a dim lamp, a single untouched mooncake on the table before her. Her children worked in a city far away and could not come home this year.
I remembered how she always smiled and saved sweets for the children in our building. Tonight, on this festival of reunion, she had no one to share the moon with. I put down my mooncake, an idea forming in my mind.
Paragraph 1: Carrying a plate of mooncakes, I knocked gently on Grandma Wang's door.
Paragraph 2: That night, our small courtyard glowed with more than just moonlight.
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必修三 Unit 1 Festivals and Celebrations · 【写作思路】
【写作思路】
第一段:端着月饼敲门→邀请奶奶过来一起赏月→奶奶惊喜感动,与我们围坐吃月饼、聊家常。
第二段:一家人和邻居都聚来,院里欢声笑语→奶奶笑中含泪→明白节日的意义在于团圆与分享温暖。
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必修三 Unit 1 Festivals and Celebrations · 【亮点词汇】
1. 聚到一起
1. gather together
2. 瞥一眼
2. glance at
3. 原封未动
3. remain untouched
4. 家人团圆
4. a family reunion
5. 容光焕发;亮起来
5. light up
6. 与某人分享
6. share sth with sb
7. 温暖感
7. a sense of warmth
8. ……的真正含义
8. the true meaning of
9. 走;前往
9. make one's way
10. 熠熠生辉
10. shine brightly
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必修三 Unit 1 Festivals and Celebrations · 【高分句型】
1. (现在分词作状语)我捧着温热的盘子,穿过洒满月光的院子。
Holding the warm plate in my hands, I made my way across the moonlit courtyard.
2. (not only 部分倒装)她不仅加入了我们,还端来了她拿手的甜汤。
Not only did she join us, but she also brought her famous sweet soup.
3. (强调句)正是在那个皎洁的夜晚,我懂得了团圆的真正含义。
It was on that bright night that I understood the true meaning of reunion.
4. (名词性从句·宾语从句)我看到,没有人该独自度过团圆的节日。
I saw that no one should spend a festival of reunion alone.
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必修三 Unit 1 Festivals and Celebrations
【参考范文一 · 活用亮点词汇与高分句型】
Carrying a plate of mooncakes, I knocked gently on Grandma Wang's door. Holding the warm plate in my hands, I made my way across the moonlit courtyard. As I glanced at the untouched mooncake on her table, her lonely face lit up. "Come and gather with us," I said softly, and a sense of warmth filled the small room. I saw that no one should spend a festival of reunion alone.
That night, our small courtyard glowed with more than just moonlight. Not only did she join us, but she also brought her famous sweet soup. She was glad to share it with everyone. As neighbours gathered and laughter rose toward the full moon, Grandma Wang's eyes shone with happy tears. It was on that bright night that I understood the true meaning of reunion.
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必修三 Unit 1 Festivals and Celebrations
【参考范文二】
Carrying a plate of mooncakes, I knocked gently on Grandma Wang's door. When she opened it and saw me standing there, her tired eyes widened in surprise. "Come and watch the moon with us," I said, taking her hand. She hesitated for a moment, then a warm smile spread across her face, and together we walked toward the lights of my home.
That night, our small courtyard glowed with more than just moonlight. My parents welcomed Grandma Wang like family, and soon the neighbours came too, each bringing a dish to share. Grandma Wang laughed until tears shone in her eyes, saying it was the happiest festival she had had in years. Looking at the round moon above us, I realised that reunion is not about who shares your blood, but who shares your heart.
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必修三 Unit 2 Morals and Ethics · 【品德 · 拾金不昧】
满分 25 分 词数 150 左右 阅读材料,根据段落开头语续写两段。
On my way home from school, I spotted a brown leather wallet lying on the rainy pavement. I picked it up and looked inside — it was stuffed with banknotes, more money than I had ever held in my life.
For a moment, my heart raced. My family was struggling that winter; my mother had been worried about the bills, and this money could solve so many problems. No one had seen me pick it up, and the street was empty.
Then I noticed a small photo tucked behind the cash: an old man holding the hand of a little girl, both smiling. Beside it was a hospital appointment card. My fingers tightened around the wallet.
Paragraph 1: Taking a deep breath, I made up my mind.
Paragraph 2: When the old man finally arrived, his face was pale with worry.
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必修三 Unit 2 Morals and Ethics · 【写作思路】
【写作思路】
第一段:决定物归原主→凭医院卡片信息去找/联系失主→克制诱惑,几经内心挣扎仍选择诚实。
第二段:老人赶到,焦急地说钱是给孙女治病的→失而复得、激动道谢,欲酬谢被婉拒→明白诚信比金钱更珍贵。
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必修三 Unit 2 Morals and Ethics · 【亮点词汇】
1. 塞满
1. be stuffed with
2. 受到诱惑
2. be tempted
3. 艰难度日
3. struggle to get by
4. 抵制诱惑
4. resist the temptation
5. 追查到;找到
5. track down
6. 感激的
6. be grateful
7. 拒绝
7. turn down
8. 无价之宝
8. a priceless treasure
9. 下定决心
9. make up one's mind
10. 担忧得脸色发白
10. pale with worry
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必修三 Unit 2 Morals and Ethics · 【高分句型】
1. (as 引导让步倒装)尽管我被这笔钱所诱惑,但我知道自己绝不能据为己有。
Tempted as I was by the money, I knew I could never keep it.
2. (only 倒装)只有把钱包归还,我才能再次坦然面对镜中的自己。
Only by returning the wallet could I look at myself in the mirror again.
3. (强调句)那个雨天的下午,我选择的是诚实,而非金钱。
It was honesty, not money, that I chose that rainy afternoon.
4. (让步状语从句)尽管这笔钱本能缓解我们的窘境,我却从未想过据为己有。
Although the money could have eased our hardship, I never thought of keeping it.
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必修三 Unit 2 Morals and Ethics
【参考范文一 · 活用亮点词汇与高分句型】
Taking a deep breath, I made up my mind. The wallet was stuffed with banknotes, and for one weak moment I had been tempted, for my family was struggling that winter. Tempted as I was by the money, I knew I could never keep it. I resisted the thought and used the hospital card to track down its owner. Although the money could have eased our hardship, I never thought of keeping it. Only by returning the wallet could I look at myself in the mirror again.
When the old man finally arrived, his face was pale with worry. Seeing the wallet safe in my hands, he was deeply grateful, explaining that the money was for his granddaughter's operation. He tried to give me a reward, but I turned it down with a smile. It was honesty, not money, that I chose that rainy afternoon. Such a choice, I knew, was priceless.
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必修三 Unit 2 Morals and Ethics
【参考范文二】
Taking a deep breath, I made up my mind. Using the hospital card inside, I hurried to the address and asked the staff to help me track down the owner. The whole way there, the thick stack of money seemed to burn in my pocket, yet I never once thought of turning back. Doing the right thing, I told myself, mattered more than anything money could buy.
When the old man finally arrived, his face was pale with worry. The moment he saw the wallet in my hands, tears of relief filled his eyes — the money, he explained, was for his granddaughter's operation. He tried to press a few notes into my hand as a reward, but I gently turned them down. Walking home with empty pockets but a full heart, I had never felt richer.
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必修三 Unit 3 Diverse Cultures · 【多元文化 · 跨越隔阂(第三人称)】
满分 25 分 词数 150 左右 阅读材料,根据段落开头语续写两段。
When Jack, an exchange student from abroad, joined the class, everyone was curious about him at first. But the novelty soon wore off. Jack struggled with their customs — he didn't know how to use chopsticks, mixed up the festivals, and often fell silent when the class laughed at jokes he couldn't follow.
Day by day, he grew quieter, eating lunch alone in a corner. Some classmates whispered that he was "strange" and kept their distance. Grace noticed how his eyes followed their games from far away, longing yet afraid to join.
The teacher had asked them to prepare a "Culture Sharing" afternoon. As Grace thought about Jack sitting alone, an idea came to her.
Paragraph 1: Grace walked over to Jack and asked if he would be her partner for the culture show.
Paragraph 2: On the day of the show, Jack stepped onto the stage, no longer the lonely boy in the corner.
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必修三 Unit 3 Diverse Cultures · 【写作思路】
【写作思路】
第一段:Grace 邀请 Jack 搭档→一起备演:他介绍家乡文化,他们教他包饺子、写毛笔字→在合作中渐渐亲近,Jack 露出笑容。
第二段:台上 Jack 自信展示中外文化交融,全班喝彩→他真正融入集体→明白真诚与尊重能跨越文化隔阂。
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必修三 Unit 3 Diverse Cultures · 【亮点词汇】
1. 对…好奇
1. be curious about
2. 逐渐消失
2. wear off
3. 在……上感到吃力
3. struggle with
4. 保持距离
4. keep one's distance
5. 渴望做某事
5. long to do sth
6. 融入
6. fit in
7. 打破隔阂
7. break down barriers
8. 包容差异
8. embrace differences
9. 主动靠近
9. reach out
10. 属于这里
10. belong here
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必修三 Unit 3 Diverse Cultures · 【高分句型】
1. (非谓语·现在分词作状语)感受到他的孤独,Grace 决定主动靠近他。
Sensing his loneliness, Grace decided to reach out to him.
2. (the+比较级)他们合作得越多,关系就越亲近。
The more they worked together, the closer they became.
3. (强调句)正是彼此的尊重打破了他们之间的隔阂。
It was mutual respect that broke down the barriers between them.
4. (定语从句)他们共同建立起一段任何差异都无法割断的友谊。
Together they built a friendship that no difference could break.
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必修三 Unit 3 Diverse Cultures
【参考范文一 · 活用亮点词汇与高分句型】
Grace walked over to Jack and asked if he would be her partner for the culture show. At first everyone had been curious about him, but that curiosity soon wore off, and he had struggled with their customs while they kept their distance. Sensing his loneliness, Grace decided to reach out to him. She could see how he had been longing to fit in. The more they worked together, the closer they became.
On the day of the show, Jack stepped onto the stage, no longer the lonely boy in the corner. Together they presented a performance where East met West, and the class cheered as their two cultures came alive as one. It was mutual respect that broke down the barriers between them. Together they built a friendship that no difference could break. From that day Jack truly belonged, and Grace learned that an open heart can embrace any difference.
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必修三 Unit 3 Diverse Cultures
【参考范文二】
Grace walked over to Jack and asked if he would be her partner for the culture show. His face, so often blank, lit up with surprise and joy. Over the next week they met every afternoon — he taught her words in his language and showed her photos of his hometown, while she guided his clumsy fingers to fold dumplings and hold a writing brush. With every shared laugh, the distance between them melted away.
On the day of the show, Jack stepped onto the stage, no longer the lonely boy in the corner. Together they presented a performance where East met West, and the whole class burst into applause. Afterwards, classmates who had once kept away crowded around him with questions and smiles. Watching Jack laugh among new friends, Grace understood that kindness speaks a language everyone can understand.
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必修三 Unit 4 Adversity and Courage · 【逆境 · 直面恐惧的演讲】
满分 25 分 词数 150 左右 阅读材料,根据段落开头语续写两段。
Ever since I was little, I had stuttered. Words would jam in my throat, and the harder I tried, the worse it became. So when our teacher announced a class speech contest and encouraged everyone to take part, my heart sank. I had spent years avoiding exactly this.
For days I practised alone in my room, reading aloud until my voice grew steadier. Still, the thought of standing before the whole class, of the giggles I might hear, filled me with dread.
On the morning of the contest, my hands were ice-cold as I waited for my name. One by one, my classmates delivered their speeches. Then the teacher called, "Next — you."
Paragraph 1: On shaking legs, I walked to the front of the classroom.
Paragraph 2: When I spoke the final word, the room was silent — and then it exploded.
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必修三 Unit 4 Adversity and Courage · 【写作思路】
【写作思路】
第一段:上台,起初结巴、紧张→深呼吸、放慢语速→同学安静而鼓励的目光给了我力量,渐渐流畅,坚持讲完。
第二段:讲毕全班起立鼓掌→自己难以置信、热泪盈眶→老师赞许→明白勇气是直面恐惧,不被缺陷定义。
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必修三 Unit 4 Adversity and Courage · 【亮点词汇】
1. 有口吃
1. have a stutter
2. 心沉下去
2. one's heart sinks
3. 害怕做某事
3. dread doing sth
4. 稳住嗓音
4. steady one's voice
5. 克服恐惧
5. overcome one's fear
6. 不顾一切困难
6. against all odds
7. 定义你是谁
7. define who one is
8. 赢得某人尊重
8. win one's respect
9. 硬挤出(话)
9. force out
10. 模糊某人视线
10. blur one's eyes
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必修三 Unit 4 Adversity and Courage · 【高分句型】
1. (形容词/分词作状语)我浑身发抖却下定决心,硬是吐出了第一个词。
Trembling but determined, I forced the first word out.
2. (never 倒装)我从未想过自己能在这么多人面前讲话。
Never had I imagined that I could speak before so many people.
3. (强调句)赢得他们尊重的是勇气,而非完美的口才。
It was courage, not perfect speech, that won their respect.
4. (名词性从句·宾语从句)我向所有人证明,口吃无法让我噤声。
I proved to everyone that a stutter could not silence me.
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必修三 Unit 4 Adversity and Courage
【参考范文一 · 活用亮点词汇与高分句型】
On shaking legs, I walked to the front of the classroom. For years my stutter had made me dread this very moment, and as I faced the crowd my heart sank. Trembling but determined, I forced the first word out. I breathed slowly to steady my voice, fighting to overcome the fear that had ruled me for so long. Against all odds, my words began to flow.
When I spoke the final word, the room was silent — and then it exploded. Never had I imagined that I could speak before so many people. My classmates rose to cheer, and tears blurred my eyes. I proved to everyone that a stutter could not silence me. It was courage, not perfect speech, that won their respect. From that day on, I refused to let my stutter define who I was.
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必修三 Unit 4 Adversity and Courage
【参考范文二】
On shaking legs, I walked to the front of the classroom. My first words came out broken, and a few heads turned. I paused, took a slow breath, and reminded myself why I had practised so hard. Little by little, my voice steadied. The room stayed quiet — not mocking, but listening — and that silence gave me the strength to go on, word after word, to the very end.
When I spoke the final word, the room was silent — and then it exploded. My classmates rose to their feet, clapping and cheering louder than for anyone before me. I stood frozen, tears blurring my eyes, hardly believing what I had done. Our teacher walked over and squeezed my shoulder. In that moment I understood that my stutter would never again decide who I could be.
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必修三 Unit 5 The Value of Money · 【金钱的价值 · 攒钱与给予】
满分 25 分 词数 150 左右 阅读材料,根据段落开头语续写两段。
For almost a year I had been saving every coin for one thing: a shiny new bicycle in the shop window. I skipped snacks, did extra chores, and counted my growing savings every night. The bike was finally within reach.
Then one morning our teacher told us quietly that Lin Tao, a boy in our class, would have to drop out of school. His father had fallen ill, and his family could no longer afford the fees. Lin Tao had always shared his books with me and helped me when I fell behind.
That evening I sat staring at my savings jar and the bicycle poster on my wall. Two pictures pulled at my heart.
Paragraph 1: The next morning, I emptied my savings jar into a small envelope.
Paragraph 2: When Lin Tao learned who had helped him, he came to find me after class.
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必修三 Unit 5 The Value of Money · 【写作思路】
【写作思路】
第一段:把攒了一年的钱装进信封→匿名交给老师帮助 Lin Tao→放弃心爱的自行车,内心由不舍到坦然。
第二段:Lin Tao 得知后来道谢、哽咽→我说友谊比自行车珍贵→明白金钱的价值在于给他人带来希望与温暖。
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必修三 Unit 5 The Value of Money · 【亮点词汇】
1. 攒钱
1. save up
2. 触手可及
2. within reach
3. 辍学
3. drop out
4. 负担得起做某事
4. afford to do sth
5. 犹豫要不要做
5. hesitate to do sth
6. 值得之事
6. a worthwhile thing
7. 比……更有意义
7. mean more than
8. ……的真正价值
8. the true value of
9. 放弃
9. give up
10. 紧紧攥住
10. clutch sth tightly
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必修三 Unit 5 The Value of Money · 【高分句型】
1. (现在分词作状语)我紧紧攥着信封,走进了老师的办公室。
Clutching the envelope tightly, I walked into the teacher's office.
2. (as 引导让步倒装)尽管放弃那辆自行车很难,我却从未后悔自己的选择。
Hard as it was to give up the bike, I never regretted my choice.
3. (强调句)真正让我快乐的不是那辆自行车,而是林涛的笑容。
It was not the bicycle but Lin Tao's smile that made me truly happy.
4. (原因状语从句)因为林涛一直支持着我,我无法看着他离开。
Because Lin Tao had always stood by me, I could not let him leave.
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必修三 Unit 5 The Value of Money
【参考范文一 · 活用亮点词汇与高分句型】
The next morning, I emptied my savings jar into a small envelope. For almost a year I had saved up for the bike, and it had been within reach at last. I hesitated, my hand hovering over the bicycle poster, but Lin Tao's family could no longer afford his fees, and he might drop out. Because Lin Tao had always stood by me, I could not let him leave. Clutching the envelope tightly, I walked into the teacher's office. Hard as it was to give up the bike, I never regretted my choice.
When Lin Tao learned who had helped him, he came to find me after class, his eyes shining with tears. He said no one had ever done something so worthwhile for him. I told him that a true friend means more than any bicycle. It was not the bicycle but Lin Tao's smile that made me truly happy. That day I finally understood the true value of money.
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必修三 Unit 5 The Value of Money
【参考范文二】
The next morning, I emptied my savings jar into a small envelope. For a moment my hand hovered over the bicycle poster, and a sigh escaped me. Then I thought of Lin Tao's empty desk, and my doubts faded. I slipped the envelope to our teacher and asked her not to say where it had come from. Walking to class with lighter pockets, I felt strangely light inside too.
When Lin Tao learned who had helped him, he came to find me after class. His eyes were red, and for a while he could not speak. "You gave up your bike for me," he finally whispered. I smiled and told him that a friend in school was worth far more than any bicycle. As we walked home together under the autumn sky, I realised that money is only truly valuable when it gives someone else hope.
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