内容正文:
八年级英语 Unit 5 写作学案
项目主题:为自然俱乐部写一篇濒危动物保护博客
Project Goal: It is Wildlife Protection Week. Our club is collecting blog posts about animals in danger.
Phase 1: 解构专家模型 (Deconstruct the Model) - 搭建结构脚手架
Task 1: Read the blog post about Asian elephants. Match the subheadings (a-f) with the paragraphs (1-6).
Subheadings (小标题备选):
a. Appearance (外貌) b. Behaviour (行为/生活习性) c. Food (食物)
d. Home (栖息地) e. Life (寿命) f. Why in danger (为何濒危)
Paragraph (1): Asian elephants are huge and grey... [ ]
Paragraph (2): Asian elephants live in the grasslands... [ ]
Paragraph (3): Asian elephants usually eat grass... [ ]
Paragraph (4): Asian elephants often move in large groups... [ ]
Paragraph (5): In the wild, Asian elephants may live for up to... [ ]
Paragraph (6): People are cutting down forests... [ ]
Task 2: Language Focus - Find the useful chunks.
1. 重达5400公斤:________________________________
2. 高达3.2米:________________________________
3. 生活在东南亚的草原和森林:________________________________
4. 成群结队地移动:________________________________
5. 在野外:________________________________
6. 砍伐森林:________________________________
Phase 2: 知识储备库 (Knowledge Building) - 搭建内容脚手架
你打算写哪种动物?由于我们对它们不够了解,老师为你准备了两个“动物情报局”档案。请选择其中一个,并完成词汇填空。
Option A: 守护国宝大熊猫 (The Giant Panda)
Word Bank: bamboo (竹子) / black and white (黑白相间) / cut down (砍伐) / Sichuan (四川) / alone (独自)
· (Appearance): They are cute. They are ____________.
· (Home): They live in the forests of ____________, China.
· (Food): They usually eat ____________ leaves.
· (Behaviour): They like to live ____________. They sleep a lot.
· (Why in danger): People ____________ forests. They have no place to live.
Option B: 拯救海洋霸主蓝鲸 (The Blue Whale)
Word Bank: oceans (海洋) / sea animals (海洋动物) / water pollution (水污染) / huge (巨大的) / group (群体)
· (Appearance): They are ____________ and blue. They are the biggest animals.
· (Home): They live in the ____________ all over the world.
· (Food): They eat small ____________.
· (Behaviour): They usually swim in a ____________.
· (Why in danger): The biggest danger is ____________. Sometimes people hunt them.
Phase 3: 写作框架生成 (Drafting Framework) - 搭建语言脚手架
Step 1: My Plan (我的规划)
· The animal I want to write about is: ________________________.
· The subheadings I will use are: Appearance, Home, ___________, ___________, and Why in danger.
Step 2: My First Draft (我的初稿 - 请根据你选择的动物,填入具体信息完成博客)
Title: Our amazing friend — the __________________ (动物名称)
(1) ________________ (填小标题)
________________ (动物复数) are ________________ (形容词描述外貌). They weigh up to thousands of kilograms.
(2) ________________ (填小标题)
Where do they live? They live in the ________________ (栖息地/地点).
(3) ________________ (填小标题)
What do they eat? They usually eat ________________ (食物).
(4) ________________ (填小标题)
However, they are in danger now. People are ________________________________ (人类的破坏行为).
It is important for us to protect them. Let's act now!
[ 在此处画一张该动物的配图吸引读者 ]
Phase 4: 评估与修改 (Evaluate and Revise) - 评价脚手架
评价标准 (Checklist)
Self-check (自评)
Peer-check (同桌互评)
1. I used subheadings (使用了小标题).
2. I included interesting facts (包含具体的动物信息).
3. I added a picture to attract readers (添加了配图).
4. I used the correct words from this unit (正确使用了本单元词汇).
5. I checked spelling and grammar (检查了拼写和语法,无大错).
【教师参考答案与使用建议】
一、 参考答案 (Answer Key)
Phase 1:
Task 1: Matching
(1) a. Appearance
(2) d. Home
(3) c. Food
(4) b. Behaviour
(5) e. Life
(6) f. Why in danger
Task 2: Language Focus
1. weigh up to 5,400 kilograms
2. up to 3.2 metres tall
3. live in the grasslands and forests of South East Asia
4. move in large groups
5. in the wild
6. are cutting down forests
Phase 2:
Option A: The Giant Panda
Appearance: black and white
Home: Sichuan
Food: bamboo
Behaviour: alone
Why in danger: cut down
Option B: The Blue Whale
Appearance: huge
Home: oceans
Food: sea animals
Behaviour: group
Why in danger: water pollution
Phase 3: 参考范文 (Model Texts)
范文 A:The Giant Panda
Title: Our amazing friend — the giant panda
Appearance
Giant pandas are black and white. They are very cute and weigh up to thousands of kilograms.
Home
Where do they live? They live in the forests of Sichuan, China.
Food
What do they eat? They usually eat bamboo leaves.
Why in danger
However, they are in danger now. People are cutting down forests and they have no place to live.
It is important for us to protect them. Let's act now!
范文 B:The Blue Whale
Title: Our amazing friend — the blue whale
Appearance
Blue whales are huge and blue. They are the biggest animals and weigh up to thousands of kilograms.
Home
Where do they live? They live in the oceans all over the world.
Food
What do they eat? They usually eat small sea animals.
Why in danger
However, they are in danger now. The biggest danger is water pollution. Sometimes people hunt them.
It is important for us to protect them. Let's act now!
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