Unit 5 课时4 Section 3 Writing（分层作业）英语新教材沪教版八年级下册

Unit 5 Saving animals in danger Section 3 Writing分层练习 基础达标 01 能力提升 02 拓展培优 03 【短语积累】 1 / 9 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1.______________________________处于极大危险中 2.______________________________濒危动物 3.______________________________在野外； 4.______________________________照顾；照料 5.______________________________多达； 6.______________________________充分利用 7.______________________________绰绰有余；足够多的 8.______________________________失去家园 9.______________________________为了纪念；以纪念…… 10.______________________________变得越来越少 11.______________________________砍伐森林 12.______________________________为了钱猎杀动物 13.______________________________制定严格的法律 14.______________________________建立自然保护区 15.______________________________停止捕杀动物 16.______________________________多种树 17.______________________________采取行动 18.______________________________尽某人最大努力做…… 19.______________________________和平共处 20.______________________________保持生态平衡 21.______________________________保护动物就是保护我们自己 【句式积累】 一、开头：引出话题 + 点明濒危 1.大熊猫是中国最濒危的动物之一。 2.华南虎处于极度危险之中，可能很快就会消失。 二、中间：介绍基本信息与生活习性，分析濒危原因。 3.它们生活在中国南方的山林里。 4.它们很强壮，以小动物为食。 5.人们捕杀它们，破坏它们的栖息地。 6.它们黑白相间，看起来非常可爱。 7.它们生活在竹林里，以竹子为食。 8.因为人们砍伐竹林，它们正在失去家园。 结尾：保护倡议 + 升华主题 9.保护大熊猫是我们的责任 10.我们必须采取行动拯救华南虎。 11.保护动物就是保护我们的世界。 话题分析 如何介绍濒临灭绝的动物 本单元以 “保护濒危动物与生物多样性” 为主题，归属于 “人与自然” 主题语境范畴，聚焦 “濒危动物的生存现状与保护” 这一子主题。借由对亚洲象等濒危物种的外貌、栖息地、生活习性及濒危原因的了解，掌握介绍动物外形、描述生活环境、分析生存威胁、呼吁保护行动的词汇和句型，完成对濒危动物的全面介绍与保护倡议的输出。 一、开头：引出话题，点明物种身份与濒危状态。 二、中间：介绍基本信息与生活习性，分析濒危原因。 三、结尾：发出保护倡议，升华主题。 Basic structure of how to write an endangered animal 通用句式 一、开头：引出话题，点明物种身份与濒危状态 ... is one of the most endangered animals in the world. …… 是世界上最濒危的动物之一。 You may know ... as a symbol of ..., but now it is in great danger. 你可能知道…… 是…… 的象征，但如今它正处于极度危险之中。 Have you ever heard of ...? It is a rare animal that we must protect. 你听说过…… 吗？它是一种我们必须保护的珍稀动物。 二、中间：介绍基本信息与生活习性，分析濒危原因。 Part 1: 介绍基本信息与生活习性 They are ... (appearance). They live in ... (habitat) and feed on ... (food). 它们……（外貌）。它们生活在……（栖息地），以…… 为食。 They usually ... (behaviour) and can live up to ... years in the wild. 它们通常……（行为），在野外可以活到…… 岁。 These gentle giants are known for ... (unique feature). 这些温和的巨兽以……（独特特征）而闻名。 Part 2: 分析濒危原因 However, they are facing serious danger. People are cutting down forests, so they are losing their homes. 然而，它们正面临严重的危险。人们砍伐森林，导致它们失去家园。Another big problem is that people kill them for ... (tusks/ fur/ other parts). 另一个大问题是人们为了……（象牙 / 皮毛 / 其他部位）而捕杀它们。 As a result, their numbers are becoming smaller and smaller. 结果，它们的数量越来越少。 三、结尾：发出保护倡议，升华主题 It is our duty to protect ... We should take action to save them. 保护…… 是我们的责任。我们应该采取行动拯救它们。 Let’s work together to build a safe home for ... and keep them alive on Earth.让我们共同努力，为…建造一个安全的家园，让它们在地球上生存下去。 If we do nothing, ... may disappear forever. So we must act now! 如果我们什么都不做，…可能会永远消失。所以我们必须立刻行动！Protecting animals is protecting ourselves. Let’s love nature and all living things. 保护动物就是保护我们自己。让我们热爱自然，热爱所有生命。 【实战演练一】 3月3日是联合国 “世界野生动植物日”，保护濒危动物，人人有责。你校的英文广播站正在征集主题为 “How to save the wild animals” 的演讲稿。请你根据以下内容要点，选择一种濒危动物，写一篇英文演讲稿。 1. 介绍该动物的外貌、栖息地、食物等； 2. 濒临灭绝的原因； 3. 列举两条保护措施； 4. 呼吁大家保护这种动物。 注意： 1. 包含所有要点，不必逐句翻译，可适当发挥； 2. 书写规范、工整，条理清晰； 3.100词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear students, There are many endangered animals in the world. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【实战演练二】 随着环境的破坏，世界上有很多珍稀动物濒临灭绝，比如中华鲟、老虎、白犀牛等。我们应该拯救这些野生动物，创造一个人与自然和谐共处的美好未来。请以“The Animals We Should Protect”为题，写一篇英语短文。 提示： 1. Why are some of the wild animals endangered? 2. Why is it important to protect the wild animals? 3. How do we protect the wild animals? 要求： 1. 短文须包括提示中的要点，可适当发挥，至少补充一个要点。 2. 短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。 3. 词数80个左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 提示词语：destroy 破坏；fur 皮；take measures 采取措施 The Animals We Should Protect ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【实战演练三】 为了增强同学们对野生动物的保护意识，你校英文报正在举办主题为 “Saving Our Animal Friends” 的征文活动。请你作为学校“生物探秘”兴趣小组的一员，介绍一种你们小组关注的濒危动物： 1、简要描述该动物（如：外形特征、生活习性、栖息地等）； 2、说明其濒危的主要原因及现状； 3、提出至少两条保护该动物的具体措施。 要求：1.表达完整，减少语误；书写规范，卷面整洁； 2.可适当增加细节，以使语句通顺、条理清楚、意义连贯； 3.词数不少于100；开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Saving Our Animal Friends In our Biology Explorers Club, we are deeply concerned about the endangered animals around the world. One animal that particularly worries us is _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ $Unit 5 Saving animals in danger Section 3 Writing分层练习 基础达标 01 能力提升 02 拓展培优 03 【短语积累】 1 / 9 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1.______________________________处于极大危险中 2.______________________________濒危动物 3.______________________________在野外； 4.______________________________照顾；照料 5.______________________________多达； 6.______________________________充分利用 7.______________________________绰绰有余；足够多的 8.______________________________失去家园 9.______________________________为了纪念；以纪念…… 10.______________________________变得越来越少 11.______________________________砍伐森林 12.______________________________为了钱猎杀动物 13.______________________________制定严格的法律 14.______________________________建立自然保护区 15.______________________________停止捕杀动物 16.______________________________多种树 17.______________________________采取行动 18.______________________________尽某人最大努力做…… 19.______________________________和平共处 20.______________________________保持生态平衡 21.______________________________保护动物就是保护我们自己 【答案】1.in great danger 2.endangered animal 3.in the wild 4.take care of 5.up to 6.make good use of 7.more than enough 8.lose one’s home 9.in memory of 10.become fewer and fewer 11.cut down forests 12.hunt animals for money 13.make strict laws 14.build nature reserves 15.stop killing animals 16.plant more trees 17.take action 18.try one’s best to do…19.live in peace 20.keep the balance of nature 21.protect animals is protecting 【句式积累】 一、开头：引出话题 + 点明濒危 1.大熊猫是中国最濒危的动物之一。 The giant panda is one of the most endangered animals in China. 2.华南虎处于极度危险之中，可能很快就会消失。 The South China tiger is in great danger and may disappear soon. 二、中间：介绍基本信息与生活习性，分析濒危原因。 3.它们生活在中国南方的山林里。 They live in the mountains and forests of South China. 4.它们很强壮，以小动物为食。 They are strong and feed on small animals. 5.人们捕杀它们，破坏它们的栖息地。 People kill them and destroy their living areas. 6.它们黑白相间，看起来非常可爱。 They are black and white, and they look very cute. 7.它们生活在竹林里，以竹子为食。 They live in bamboo forests and feed on bamboo. 8.因为人们砍伐竹林，它们正在失去家园。 They are losing their homes because people cut down bamboo forests. 结尾：保护倡议 + 升华主题 9.保护大熊猫是我们的责任 It’s our duty to protect the giant panda. 10.我们必须采取行动拯救华南虎。 We must take action to save the South China tiger. 11.保护动物就是保护我们的世界。 Protecting animals is protecting our world. 话题分析 如何介绍濒临灭绝的动物 本单元以 “保护濒危动物与生物多样性” 为主题，归属于 “人与自然” 主题语境范畴，聚焦 “濒危动物的生存现状与保护” 这一子主题。借由对亚洲象等濒危物种的外貌、栖息地、生活习性及濒危原因的了解，掌握介绍动物外形、描述生活环境、分析生存威胁、呼吁保护行动的词汇和句型，完成对濒危动物的全面介绍与保护倡议的输出。 一、开头：引出话题，点明物种身份与濒危状态。 二、中间：介绍基本信息与生活习性，分析濒危原因。 三、结尾：发出保护倡议，升华主题。 Basic structure of how to write an endangered animal 通用句式 一、开头：引出话题，点明物种身份与濒危状态 ... is one of the most endangered animals in the world. …… 是世界上最濒危的动物之一。 You may know ... as a symbol of ..., but now it is in great danger. 你可能知道…… 是…… 的象征，但如今它正处于极度危险之中。 Have you ever heard of ...? It is a rare animal that we must protect. 你听说过…… 吗？它是一种我们必须保护的珍稀动物。 二、中间：介绍基本信息与生活习性，分析濒危原因。 Part 1: 介绍基本信息与生活习性 They are ... (appearance). They live in ... (habitat) and feed on ... (food). 它们……（外貌）。它们生活在……（栖息地），以…… 为食。 They usually ... (behaviour) and can live up to ... years in the wild. 它们通常……（行为），在野外可以活到…… 岁。 These gentle giants are known for ... (unique feature). 这些温和的巨兽以……（独特特征）而闻名。 Part 2: 分析濒危原因 However, they are facing serious danger. People are cutting down forests, so they are losing their homes. 然而，它们正面临严重的危险。人们砍伐森林，导致它们失去家园。Another big problem is that people kill them for ... (tusks/ fur/ other parts). 另一个大问题是人们为了……（象牙 / 皮毛 / 其他部位）而捕杀它们。 As a result, their numbers are becoming smaller and smaller. 结果，它们的数量越来越少。 三、结尾：发出保护倡议，升华主题 It is our duty to protect ... We should take action to save them. 保护…… 是我们的责任。我们应该采取行动拯救它们。 Let’s work together to build a safe home for ... and keep them alive on Earth.让我们共同努力，为…建造一个安全的家园，让它们在地球上生存下去。 If we do nothing, ... may disappear forever. So we must act now! 如果我们什么都不做，…可能会永远消失。所以我们必须立刻行动！Protecting animals is protecting ourselves. Let’s love nature and all living things. 保护动物就是保护我们自己。让我们热爱自然，热爱所有生命。 【实战演练一】 3月3日是联合国 “世界野生动植物日”，保护濒危动物，人人有责。你校的英文广播站正在征集主题为 “How to save the wild animals” 的演讲稿。请你根据以下内容要点，选择一种濒危动物，写一篇英文演讲稿。 1. 介绍该动物的外貌、栖息地、食物等； 2. 濒临灭绝的原因； 3. 列举两条保护措施； 4. 呼吁大家保护这种动物。 注意： 1. 包含所有要点，不必逐句翻译，可适当发挥； 2. 书写规范、工整，条理清晰； 3.100词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear students, There are many endangered animals in the world. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Dear students, There are many endangered animals in the world. Whales are also in great danger. They live in the sea and they eat small fish and other sea life since they are one of the biggest animals in the sea. However, there are fewer and fewer whales because humans kill whales for meat. Some whales die because of water pollution. To save the whales, on the one hand, we should make rules on whale protection and everyone should follow them. On the other hand, we should stop putting rubbish into the sea. Let’s work together to save the whales and make a difference to the world. 【实战演练二】 随着环境的破坏，世界上有很多珍稀动物濒临灭绝，比如中华鲟、老虎、白犀牛等。我们应该拯救这些野生动物，创造一个人与自然和谐共处的美好未来。请以“The Animals We Should Protect”为题，写一篇英语短文。 提示： 1. Why are some of the wild animals endangered? 2. Why is it important to protect the wild animals? 3. How do we protect the wild animals? 要求： 1. 短文须包括提示中的要点，可适当发挥，至少补充一个要点。 2. 短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。 3. 词数80个左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。 提示词语：destroy 破坏；fur 皮；take measures 采取措施 The Animals We Should Protect ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The Animals We Should Protect Do you know about any endangered animals? Why are they in danger? I think there are many endangered animals in the world, such as tigers and pandas. When people cut down trees, tigers can no longer hide and hunt. Many tigers are killed by people who want to sell their fur for money. And there are few places where pandas can live. We are not alone in the world. We human beings could not live without all the plants and animals around us. So protecting wild animals is very important. We must take measures to keep plants from being destroyed and stop animals from being killed. If each of us can plant a tree and build a birdhouse, the world will be more beautiful. It is very easy but useful. 【实战演练三】 为了增强同学们对野生动物的保护意识，你校英文报正在举办主题为 “Saving Our Animal Friends” 的征文活动。请你作为学校“生物探秘”兴趣小组的一员，介绍一种你们小组关注的濒危动物： 1、简要描述该动物（如：外形特征、生活习性、栖息地等）； 2、说明其濒危的主要原因及现状； 3、提出至少两条保护该动物的具体措施。 要求：1.表达完整，减少语误；书写规范，卷面整洁； 2.可适当增加细节，以使语句通顺、条理清楚、意义连贯； 3.词数不少于100；开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Saving Our Animal Friends In our Biology Explorers Club, we are deeply concerned about the endangered animals around the world. One animal that particularly worries us is _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： 基础版 In our Biology Explorers Club, we are deeply concerned about the endangered animals around the world. One animal that particularly worries us is the Asian elephant. These gentle giants have grey skin, big ears, and long trunks. They live in forests and grasslands in Asia, often traveling in groups. They eat plants, fruits, and sometimes crops. However, their survival is threatened. Human activities, such as cutting forests for farming and building roads, destroy their habitats. Worse still, illegal hunting for ivory continues, despite strict laws. Now, only about 50,000 Asian elephants remain in the wild. To protect them, governments should create more nature reserves and strengthen anti-poaching laws. Meanwhile, raising public awareness about refusing ivory products is crucial. Let’s act now before these magnificent creatures disappear forever! 进阶版 In our Biology Explorers Club, we are deeply concerned about the endangered animals around the world. One animal that particularly worries us is the Asian elephant, an endangered species we focus on. With grey, wrinkled skin and a long trunk, these gentle giants live in forests and grasslands across Asia. They eat plants, use their trunks to drink, and travel in herds, showing strong family bonds. However, Asian elephants are facing serious dangers. Their habitats are shrinking due to deforestation and farming expansion. Also, illegal hunting for ivory still exists despite international bans. What’s worse, when elephants destroy crops or villages, which sometimes causes conflicts with humans so locals might hurt or kill them. Now, only about 50,000 Asian elephants remain in the wild, and their number keeps dropping. To protect them, we must take action. Governments should build more nature reserves and strictly punish poachers. Schools and communities can organize activities to teach people about elephant conservation. For example, in Yunnan, local projects teach farmers to grow crops that elephants dislike, reducing human-elephant conflicts. Every creature matters on Earth. Let’s work together to save Asian elephants before it’s too late! $Unit 5 Saving animals in danger Section 3 Writing分层练习 【短语积累】 1 / 9 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 【答案】1.in great danger 2.endangered animal 3.in the wild 4.take care of 5.up to 6.make good use of 7.more than enough 8.lose one’s home 9.in memory of 10.become fewer and fewer 11.cut down forests 12.hunt animals for money 13.make strict laws 14.build nature reserves 15.stop killing animals 16.plant more trees 17.take action 18.try one’s best to do…19.live in peace 20.keep the balance of nature 21.protect animals is protecting 【句式积累】 一、开头：引出话题 + 点明濒危 1.The giant panda is one of the most endangered animals in China. 2.The South China tiger is in great danger and may disappear soon. 二、中间：介绍基本信息与生活习性，分析濒危原因。 3.They live in the mountains and forests of South China. 4.They are strong and feed on small animals. 5.People kill them and destroy their living areas. 6.They are black and white, and they look very cute. 7.They live in bamboo forests and feed on bamboo. 8.They are losing their homes because people cut down bamboo forests. 结尾：保护倡议 + 升华主题 9.It’s our duty to protect the giant panda. 10.We must take action to save the South China tiger. 11.Protecting animals is protecting our world. 【实战演练一】 Dear students, There are many endangered animals in the world. Whales are also in great danger. They live in the sea and they eat small fish and other sea life since they are one of the biggest animals in the sea. However, there are fewer and fewer whales because humans kill whales for meat. Some whales die because of water pollution. To save the whales, on the one hand, we should make rules on whale protection and everyone should follow them. On the other hand, we should stop putting rubbish into the sea. Let’s work together to save the whales and make a difference to the world. 【实战演练二】 【答案】例文 The Animals We Should Protect Do you know about any endangered animals? Why are they in danger? I think there are many endangered animals in the world, such as tigers and pandas. When people cut down trees, tigers can no longer hide and hunt. Many tigers are killed by people who want to sell their fur for money. And there are few places where pandas can live. We are not alone in the world. We human beings could not live without all the plants and animals around us. So protecting wild animals is very important. We must take measures to keep plants from being destroyed and stop animals from being killed. If each of us can plant a tree and build a birdhouse, the world will be more beautiful. It is very easy but useful. 【实战演练三】 【答案】例文： 基础版 In our Biology Explorers Club, we are deeply concerned about the endangered animals around the world. One animal that particularly worries us is the Asian elephant. These gentle giants have grey skin, big ears, and long trunks. They live in forests and grasslands in Asia, often traveling in groups. They eat plants, fruits, and sometimes crops. However, their survival is threatened. Human activities, such as cutting forests for farming and building roads, destroy their habitats. Worse still, illegal hunting for ivory continues, despite strict laws. Now, only about 50,000 Asian elephants remain in the wild. To protect them, governments should create more nature reserves and strengthen anti-poaching laws. Meanwhile, raising public awareness about refusing ivory products is crucial. Let’s act now before these magnificent creatures disappear forever! 进阶版 In our Biology Explorers Club, we are deeply concerned about the endangered animals around the world. One animal that particularly worries us is the Asian elephant, an endangered species we focus on. With grey, wrinkled skin and a long trunk, these gentle giants live in forests and grasslands across Asia. They eat plants, use their trunks to drink, and travel in herds, showing strong family bonds. However, Asian elephants are facing serious dangers. Their habitats are shrinking due to deforestation and farming expansion. Also, illegal hunting for ivory still exists despite international bans. What’s worse, when elephants destroy crops or villages, which sometimes causes conflicts with humans so locals might hurt or kill them. Now, only about 50,000 Asian elephants remain in the wild, and their number keeps dropping. To protect them, we must take action. Governments should build more nature reserves and strictly punish poachers. Schools and communities can organize activities to teach people about elephant conservation. For example, in Yunnan, local projects teach farmers to grow crops that elephants dislike, reducing human-elephant conflicts. Every creature matters on Earth. Let’s work together to save Asian elephants before it’s too late! $