2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---藏在心底的新年礼物 导学案

该高中英语高考复习学案聚焦读后续写专题，系统梳理文本分析（角色、视角、时空线）、情节逻辑构建、情感线把握及句式运用等核心考点，按“文本解构-情节设计-语言表达”层次组织，通过细节问答问题链和续写框架任务驱动，引导学生自主构建续写知识网络。 亮点在于自主诊断与分层指导设计，开篇设置细节问答自测题诊断文本分析能力，续写框架分步骤引导情节构思，培养语言能力（句式仿写）和思维品质（逻辑推断）。含学情记录表助学生自主归因，教师可依数据精准指导，支持个性化复习，提升学生自主备考能力。

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The footsteps of the Horse Year Spring Festival were drawing near. The air was filled with the smell of fried meatballs, and every household was busy preparing New Year goods. I held the pocket money I’d saved for a year in my hand, a tiny but firm plan forming in my mind: I wanted to buy a New Year gift for my father, who worked outside all year round. He always said his old mobile phone often froze when making video calls, and I hated seeing him struggle to see my face clearly. Hiding the secret from my grandma, I hurried to the mobile phone shop in the town. However, I quickly found my savings were far from enough. I felt upset, but I didn’t give up. The shopkeeper, a kind old man with a white beard, smiled gently when he learned my purpose. He said I could pay some money first and the rest after the New Year. Full of joy, I got the phone packed in a small box, and then ran home as fast as I could, waiting eagerly for my father’s return. On New Year’s Eve, my father finally came back. Tired and bloodshot-eyed, he still smiled gently and stroked my hair. I had kept the gift close to my chest earlier, planning to surprise him greatly. Just as I was about to take it out, my father took a brand-new schoolbag out of his suitcase and handed it to me warmly. “I know your old schoolbag is worn out, so I bought a new one for you. Your favorite candies are inside it.” I stretched out both hands to accept the gift. I held the bag tightly, staring at my father’s rough, hard-working hands. The gift hidden inside my clothes suddenly felt extremely heavy. All the words I had prepared stuck in my throat. Bright fireworks exploded in the night sky, lighting up the gray hairs at his temples(鬓角)and the mixed feelings on my face. I stood quietly for a moment, unable to say a single word. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为180词左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Taking a deep breath, I took the gift out from my clothes. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Father took the phone and his eyes turned red at once. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 The Spring Festival was approaching--- _________________ ---I saved pocket money to buy a new phone for my tired father--- _________________ ---I bought the phone with the shopkeeper’s help--- _________________ ---Father came back and gave me a new schoolbag first---I was touched and too emotional to speak 4. 细节问答 Why did the author want to buy a new phone for Dad? ：___________________________________ What difficulty did the author meet when buying the phone?：_________________________________ How did the kind shopkeeper help the author?：________________________________________________ What gift did father prepare for the author?：__________________________________________ Why did the hidden gift feel extremely heavy suddenly?：_____________________________________________ What details showed father’s hard work?：_________________________________________________ What feeling filled the author’s heart at that moment?：________________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________________________ 5．情节线 马年春节将至，家家户户筹备年货→_________________ →我攒了一年零花钱，想给常年在外务工的父亲换一部新手机→_________________ →零花钱不足，好心店主允许我分期付款，我顺利买下手机等待父亲归家→除夕夜父亲疲惫归来，先送给我新书包和糖果→看到父亲粗糙双手与鬓角白发，我百感交集说不出话→（续写）我鼓起勇气拿出准备好的手机礼物，诉说自己的心意→（续写）父亲感动落泪，双向的爱意温暖除夕夜，我读懂沉默又深沉的父爱 6．情感线 I: sincere and expectant→___________→delighted and excited→___________→moved and guilty→___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式（摘抄原文对应句式） 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 亲情温情类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Taking a deep breath, I took the gift out from my clothes. 衔接句1——What did I say to father? How did I explain this gift? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Father took the phone and his eyes turned red at once. 衔接句2——How did father react? What did he say? What was our final feeling? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：我深吸一口气，从衣服里拿出了礼物。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：父亲接过手机，眼眶瞬间红了。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 4、 标准续写 Taking a deep breath, I took the gift out from my clothes. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Father took the phone and his eyes turned red at once. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 I：懂事孝顺、心怀感恩、深爱父亲的孩子；Father：常年外出务工、沉默寡言、默默疼爱孩子、为家庭辛劳付出的父亲；Kind shopkeeper：心地善良、乐于助人、体谅孩子孝心的镇上手机店店主 2．视角 第一人称 3．时空线 The Spring Festival was approaching---I planned to buy a new phone for my hard-working father with one-year savings---I didn’t have enough pocket money to cover the phone cost---I bought the phone with the shopkeeper’s help of delayed payment---Father came back and gave me a new schoolbag first---I was touched deeply by father’s love and too emotional to speak 4. 细节问答 Why did the author want to buy a new phone for Dad? ：Because father’s old phone often froze during video calls, making it hard for him to see the author clearly. What difficulty did the author meet when buying the phone?：His saved pocket money was not enough to pay for the new mobile phone. How did the kind shopkeeper help the author?：He allowed the author to pay part of the money first and pay off the rest after the Spring Festival. What gift did father prepare for the author?：He bought a brand-new durable schoolbag with the author’s favorite candies inside. Why did the hidden gift feel extremely heavy suddenly?：He was touched by father’s selfless love and felt guilty for making father work so hard. What details showed father’s hard work?：Father looked tired with bloodshot eyes, rough hands and obvious gray hairs on his temples. What feeling filled the author’s heart at that moment?：Moved, guilty and warm. What does the story tell us?：Parental love is silent and selfless, and love between family members is mutual and precious. 5．情节线 马年春节将至，家家户户筹备年货→我目睹父亲旧手机卡顿，决定用一年零花钱为父亲换新手机→我攒了一年零花钱，想给常年在外务工的父亲换一部新手机→零花钱远远不足，好心店主体谅孝心同意延期付款，我满心期待父亲归来→除夕夜父亲拖着疲惫身躯回家，第一时间送给我崭新书包和糖果→看到父亲疲惫神态、粗糙双手与鬓角白发，我被深沉父爱打动，一时哽咽无言→（续写）我平复情绪拿出包装好的手机，诉说自己心疼父亲常年辛苦、想要方便日常视频通话的心意→（续写）父亲强忍泪水紧紧抱住我，除夕夜双向奔赴的爱意格外温暖，我彻底读懂沉默厚重的父爱 6．情感线 I: sincere and expectant→upset and worried→delighted and excited→shocked and touched→moved and guilty→warm and blessed 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：春节前夕，我攒钱想给辛劳的父亲买新手机当作新年礼物，除夕夜父亲却先送给我新年书包，我深受触动后拿出礼物，双向的亲情温暖了整个除夕夜晚。 英文：Before the Spring Festival, I saved money to buy my hard-working father a new mobile phone as a gift. However, my father gave me a new schoolbag first on New Year’s Eve. Deeply touched, I presented my gift and felt the mutual love between father and me. 8. 句式（摘抄原文对应句式） 状语从句：He always said his old mobile phone often froze when making video calls. 非谓语动词：I held the pocket money I’d saved for a year in my hand, a tiny but firm plan forming in my mind. 宾语从句：I hated seeing him struggle to see my face clearly. 定语从句：I wanted to buy a New Year gift for my father, who worked outside all year round. 并列句：Tired and bloodshot-eyed, he still smiled gently and stroked my hair. 9. 本文主题 亲情温情类：父爱沉默无言却厚重无私，家人之间的爱是双向奔赴，懂得感恩与回馈才是亲情最好的模样。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Taking a deep breath, I took the gift out from my clothes. 衔接句1——What did I say to father? How did I explain this gift? I told father I noticed his old phone always broke down during video calls. I hoped the new phone could bring him convenience and ease his tiredness after hard work. Paragraph 2: Father took the phone and his eyes turned red at once. 衔接句2——How did father react? What did he say? What was our final feeling? Father held me tightly in his arms and praised me for growing up. We shared warm hugs under fireworks, feeling the most precious mutual family love. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：我深吸一口气，从衣服里拿出了礼物。 →①我平复激动又愧疚的心情，递出包装精致的手机礼盒→②我坦诚说出自己留意到父亲旧手机卡顿，心疼他常年在外奔波→③我希望这部手机能方便我们日常通话，也能缓解父亲工作之余的疲惫； 第二段：父亲接过手机，眼眶瞬间红了。 →①父亲强忍泪水，轻轻抚摸礼盒，满眼都是欣慰与感动→②父亲紧紧抱住我，坦言所有辛苦都因我的懂事变得值得→③漫天烟火之下，双向的爱意温暖除夕夜，我读懂了沉默深沉的父爱。 四、标准续写范文（词数：179） Taking a deep breath, I took the gift out from my clothes. Holding the tightly wrapped box with both hands, I handed it to my father nervously. With eyes full of tears welling up, I told him softly that I had noticed his old phone failed frequently during video calls. I added that I felt upset every time I saw him trying hard to see my face. Although I still owed some money for this phone, I hoped it could bring him convenience and accompany him during his lonely working days outside. All my hidden love and care for father poured out along with my words. Father took the phone and his eyes turned red at once. He stroked the delicate gift box gently without saying a word for a long time. Then he pulled me into his warm arms tightly, whispering that I was the best gift for him. The brilliant fireworks continued blooming in the night sky, lighting up our warm hugs. At that moment, I realized father’s love was always silent but powerful. This special New Year’s Eve made me understand that love is mutual. We give love to each other and warm each other’s lonely days all the time. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $