2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---风雪遇暖，善意同行 导学案

该高中英语高考复习学案系统覆盖读后续写核心考点，整合文本分析（角色、视角、时空线等）、情节逻辑构建、语言表达（从句、非谓语等）等模块，通过细节问答、情节线梳理等问题链设计，引导学生自主梳理文本要素与情感脉络，形成“分析-构思-表达”的完整知识网络。 亮点在于诊断性自测与任务驱动式学习设计，如文本分析中的细节问答帮助学生自主诊断文本理解短板，情节构造环节通过衔接句任务驱动逻辑推理，培养思维品质与语言能力。续写框架与范文提供方法指导，助力学生自主提升表达精准度，教师可依据学情数据实施个性化指导，有效培养学生自主复习能力。

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Emily Sanders, a 25-year-old from Detroit, Michigan, set out on December 23rd with high hopes of reaching Toronto to meet her boyfriend for Christmas. Although she had heard warnings about an approaching snowstorm, she didn‘t give it much thought. She assumed that much like in Michigan, police would simply detour (使绕道) traffic around any closed sections of the highway. But that didn’t happen. As the snow came down more and more heavily, Emily was directed off the highway. She drove on for a while and found herself on an unfamiliar road toward a Canadian town. The blinding whiteout made driving nearly impossible. At one point, Emily‘s car got stuck. After a struggle, she managed to free the vehicle and continued inching along the snow-covered road. As night fell, panic set in. While Emily was driving on a narrow stretch of road, her car slid into a ditch (沟). She tried to call for help but found no signal on her phone. Seeing no hope of immediate rescue, Emily decided to spend the night in her car. She wrapped herself in a blanket, waiting for morning. To stay warm, she ran her engine for a few minutes every now and then. Eventually, she fell asleep. Emily awoke to a gentle knock on her car window. Standing outside were Daniel and his wife Rachel, who noticed the stranded (被困的) vehicle on their way home and stopped to see if they could help. When Emily rolled down the window, Rachel asked if she was okay and told her it was not safe to stay overnight in the car. With genuine warmth in her voice, Rachel said they could take Emily to a nearby cafe they knew. Grateful and relieved, Emily accepted the offer. In the cafe, the couple bought Emily a hot chocolate and listened patiently as she explained her desperate situation: she was about a hundred miles from her destination, her car was completely stuck, and her entire holiday plan could be ruined. 注意： （1）续写词数应为 150个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Daniel and Rachel suggested that Emily continue her journey by train. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Three days later, Emily returned to get her car. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 Emily drove to Toronto for Christmas ignoring snowstorm warnings--- _________________ --- Heavy snow trapped her car and cut off her phone signal--- _________________ --- She had to stay cold and scared overnight in the car--- _________________ --- Kind couple Daniel and Rachel found her and offered timely help--- _________________ 4. 细节问答 Why did Emily set out on December 23rd? ：___________________________________ Why did Emily get stranded finally?：_________________________________ What trouble did Emily meet after her car slid into a ditch?：________________________________________________ Who saved Emily from the dangerous cold night?：__________________________________________ Where did the couple take Emily to warm up?：_____________________________________________ What difficulties was Emily facing at that time?：_________________________________________________ What kind of people were Daniel and Rachel?：________________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 艾米丽无视暴风雪预警，驾车前往多伦多和男友共度圣诞→大雪封路被迫驶离高速，驶入陌生乡间小路→__________________________→被迫在寒冷车内过夜，身心俱疲且极度恐慌→清晨偶遇好心夫妇丹尼尔和雷切尔，被带去咖啡馆取暖休整→艾米丽倾诉困境，假期行程彻底泡汤→（续写）________________________→（续写）风雪散去艾米丽返程取车，专程登门致谢，善意跨越风雪温暖寒冬 6．情感线 Emily: hopeful and careless→___________→scared and desperate→___________→grateful and relieved→___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 温情善意类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Daniel and Rachel suggested that Emily continue her journey by train. 衔接句1——What help did the couple offer? How did Emily feel and what did she do next? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Three days later, Emily returned to get her car. 衔接句2——What did Emily see when she came back? How did she thank the couple? What did she learn from this experience? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：丹尼尔和雷切尔建议艾米丽乘坐火车继续行程。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：三天后，艾米丽返程取回自己的车。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写 Daniel and Rachel suggested that Emily continue her journey by train. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Three days later, Emily returned to get her car. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 Emily：出行大意、遭遇暴风雪被困、懂得感恩的年轻女孩；Daniel & Rachel：心地善良、热心助人、不求回报，在暴风雪中伸出援手的当地夫妇 2．视角 第三人称 3．时空线 Emily drove to Toronto for Christmas ignoring snowstorm warnings→heavy snow forced her off the highway→Heavy snow trapped her car and cut off her phone signal→she stayed cold and scared overnight in the car→kind couple Daniel and Rachel found her and offered timely help→they warmed her up in a cafe and listened to her trouble patiently 4. 细节问答 Why did Emily set out on December 23rd? ：She planned to go to Toronto to meet her boyfriend and spend Christmas together. Why did Emily get stranded finally?：She ignored the snowstorm warning and was trapped by the sudden heavy snow. What trouble did Emily meet after her car slid into a ditch?：She had no mobile phone signal and could not call anyone for help. Who saved Emily from the dangerous cold night?：A kind local couple named Daniel and Rachel saved her. Where did the couple take Emily to warm up?：They took her to a nearby warm cafe. What difficulties was Emily facing at that time?：Her car broke down completely, and she was far away from her destination with no way to ask for help. What kind of people were Daniel and Rachel?：They were warm-hearted, generous and helpful strangers willing to offer help without reward. What does the story tell us?：Kindness can warm people through cold hardships; always stay cautious in face of natural disasters and pass on kindness to others. 5．情节线 艾米丽无视暴风雪预警，驾车前往多伦多和男友共度圣诞→心存侥幸，误以为道路会正常疏导车流→大雪封路被迫驶离高速，驶入陌生乡间小路→风雪过大视线受阻，车辆滑入沟渠，手机无信号求救无门→被迫在寒冷车内过夜，低温与黑暗让她极度恐慌无助→清晨偶遇好心夫妇丹尼尔和雷切尔，被带去咖啡馆取暖休整→艾米丽倾诉困境，假期行程险些彻底泡汤→夫妇贴心建议改乘火车出行，全程包办购票与出行事宜→艾米丽顺利赴约，三天后风雪平息返程取车，专程致谢陌生人的雪中善意，感悟善意的力量 6．情感线 Emily: hopeful and careless→anxious and helpless→scared and desperate→relieved and thankful→warm and moved→grateful and inspired（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：女孩无视暴风雪预警驾车出行，途中车辆被困、失联受困，幸遇一对好心夫妇出手相助，在陌生人的善意帮助下顺利完成圣诞行程，寒冬风雪里的善意温暖了整场艰难旅途。 英文：Ignoring snowstorm warnings, Emily got trapped on a remote snowy road. Luckily, she was rescued by a warm-hearted couple. With their help, she finished her Christmas trip smoothly and felt the power of kindness in bitter cold winter. 8. 句式 让步状语从句：Although she had heard warnings about an approaching snowstorm, she didn’t give it much thought. 定语从句：Standing outside were Daniel and his wife Rachel, who noticed the stranded vehicle. 宾语从句：She didn’t expect that the snowstorm would bring her so much trouble. 非谓语动词：Seeing no hope of rescue, Emily decided to stay in her car overnight. 并列句：The snow blinded her sight and made driving totally impossible. 9. 本文主题 温情善意类：天灾无情，人间有爱；陌生人间不经意的善意，足以抵御困境与严寒；常怀善意，也学会敬畏自然、谨慎行事。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Daniel and Rachel suggested that Emily continue her journey by train. 衔接句1：夫妇告知大雪短期内无法清理完毕，公路持续封闭，开车出行风险依旧很高；随后主动帮忙查询列车信息、购买车票，还贴心准备热食，艾米丽深受感动，随后顺利乘车前往多伦多。 Paragraph 2: Three days later, Emily returned to get her car. 衔接句2：风雪彻底停止，道路全面解封，夫妇早已提前联系拖车修好车辆；艾米丽专程上门致谢并送上礼物，这段风雪奇遇让她深知善意的珍贵，也决定今后传递这份温暖。 三．段落续写框架 第一段：丹尼尔和雷切尔建议艾米丽乘坐火车继续行程。 →①夫妇耐心解释路况，说明公路暂未通车，驾车依旧危险→②主动帮忙订票、规划路线，备好旅途热餐给予暖心陪伴→③艾米丽放下焦虑，顺利乘车，如期和男友共度圣诞； 第二段：三天后，艾米丽返程取回自己的车。 →①风雪散尽道路畅通，夫妇提前帮忙修好被困车辆→②艾米丽登门真诚致谢，感念陌生人雪中援手→③她收获温暖与成长，立志将这份善意继续传递下去。 四.段落续写（满分范文，149词） Daniel and Rachel suggested that Emily continue her journey by train. They explained that local roads would remain closed for days due to heavy snow, making further driving extremely dangerous. Without hesitation, they helped Emily check the latest train schedule and bought her a ticket to Toronto. Besides, they prepared warm food and drinks for her long trip. Deeply touched by their selfless kindness, Emily boarded the train smoothly. Thanks to their help, she finally arrived in time and spent a warm Christmas with her boyfriend. Three days later, Emily returned to get her car. To her great surprise, the kind couple had already called a tow truck and got her car repaired well. Emily expressed her sincere gratitude repeatedly and gave them a delicate Christmas gift as a token of appreciation. This unforgettable experience taught Emily a precious lesson. Cold snowstorm could trap people physically, but kindness from strangers could always warm people’s hearts and light up the coldest winter days. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $