2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---跨越山海，生命相赠 导学案

该高中英语高考复习学案聚焦读后续写核心考点，系统整合角色分析、情节线梳理、情感线追踪及句式运用等关键要素，通过“文本分析-情节构造-续写框架”三阶架构建立知识联系。学案以细节问答为导向、续写任务为驱动，引导学生自主梳理故事逻辑与情感变化，形成从理解到表达的完整认知体系。 亮点在于自主诊断与分层引导设计，如开篇设置“细节问答”诊断题检测学生对故事要素的掌握，续写框架通过“衔接句设计-段落框架搭建”任务培养学生的语言能力与思维品质。每个模块配备情节线思维导图绘制与情感线分析表，帮助学生构建个性化写作策略，教师可依据学情精准指导，有效提升学生自主复习效率与备考实效。

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 At 33, Kaedi's life took a sudden turn for the worse when she was told she had a serious blood disease. The doctor said the disease could be deadly if not treated in time, and the only hope was a stem cell transplant (干细胞移植). Kaedi was terrified, but she refused to give up, and her boyfriend Mikey stayed by her side through every tough moment. As days passed, her condition worsened, and she often lay awake at night, wondering if she would ever get to see another sunrise. Kaedi started intensive chemotherapy(化疗) and waited anxiously for a matched donor. Doctors searched global registries for months, but no match was found. Finally, one day, good news came: A 26-year-old man from Poland named Karol was a perfect match. Karol, who had registered as a donor years ago, didn't hesitate to agree when he was asked for help. He had once watched his beloved aunt suffer from the same disease and pass away because no donor was found, so when the call came, he thought of her, knowing this was his chance to spare someone else's pain. The transplant went smoothly, and Kaedi slowly recovered. She and Mikey decided to get married, and Kaedi had a special wish: to find Karol and invite him to their wedding. It took them months to contact him as donors and recipients typically remain anonymous to each other for a period. Karol readily agreed to fly from Poland to Chicago. He wanted to witness the new life he had helped Kaedi gain. Kaedi and Mikey kept Karol's presence a secret, planning to surprise all the guests. On their wedding day, the reception was joyful. Suddenly, Mikey took the microphone with a smile.“Our guest of honor is here with us tonight,” he said. The guests looked around in confusion until Karol stood up. The whole room fell silent for a moment, and then broke into loud applause. 注意： （1）续写词数应为 150个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Kaedi walked to Karol tearfully. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: At Kaedi's heartfelt words, Karol smiled humbly and spoke of his donation. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 Kaedi suffered from a deadly blood disease and needed a transplant--- _________________ --- Doctors failed to find a matched donor for a long time--- _________________ --- Karol volunteered to donate stem cells out of personal experience--- _________________ --- Kaedi recovered and invited her savior Karol to her wedding secretly--- _________________ 4. 细节问答 What was wrong with Kaedi? ：___________________________________ What was the only way to save Kaedi?：_________________________________ Why did Karol choose to donate his stem cells without hesitation?：________________________________________________ What special wish did Kaedi have after recovery?：__________________________________________ Why did it take long for Kaedi to contact Karol?：_____________________________________________ Why did Karol agree to attend the wedding?：_________________________________________________ What is the bond between Kaedi and Karol?：________________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 凯迪患上致命血液病，生命垂危，急需干细胞移植救命→_________________ →全球骨髓库长期找不到匹配捐献者，希望渺茫→波兰男子卡罗尔匹配成功，因亲历亲人离世义无反顾捐献→手术顺利，凯迪痊愈并筹备婚礼，一心想要当面感谢救命恩人→历经数月打破捐献双方匿名规则，邀请卡罗尔远赴美国参加婚礼→婚礼现场揭晓神秘嘉宾，全场宾客动容鼓掌→（续写）凯迪含泪走向恩人，真诚诉说感激之情→（续写）卡罗尔温和回应，讲述捐献初心，善意跨越国界延续生命希望 6．情感线 Kaedi: scared and desperate→___________→hopeful and grateful→___________→excited and moved→___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 温情善意类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Kaedi walked to Karol tearfully. 衔接句1——What did Kaedi say to Karol? How did she feel when facing her savior? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: At Kaedi's heartfelt words, Karol smiled humbly and spoke of his donation. 衔接句2——What did Karol share? What was the final touching ending? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：凯迪泪流满面地走向卡罗尔。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：听完凯迪发自内心的话语，卡罗尔谦逊一笑，讲述了自己捐献的初心。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写 Kaedi walked to Karol tearfully. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ At Kaedi's heartfelt words, Karol smiled humbly and spoke of his donation. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 Kaedi（身患重病、珍惜重生机会、心怀感恩的新娘）；Mikey（不离不弃、陪伴爱人、用心筹备惊喜婚礼的新郎）；Karol（心怀悲悯、无私善良、跨越国界捐献干细胞的波兰捐献者） 2．视角 第三人称 3．时空线 Kaedi suffered from a deadly blood disease and needed a transplant--- she received painful chemotherapy and waited hopelessly--- Doctors failed to find a matched donor for a long time--- A perfect donor Karol was found finally--- Karol volunteered to donate stem cells out of personal experience--- Kaedi recovered and invited her savior Karol to her wedding secretly--- They held a wedding surprise for all guests and introduced Karol publicly 4. 细节问答 What was wrong with Kaedi? ：She suffered from a serious and deadly blood disease. What was the only way to save Kaedi?：She needed an urgent stem cell transplant. Why did Karol choose to donate his stem cells without hesitation?：He witnessed his aunt die of the same disease due to lack of donors, so he hoped to save others. What special wish did Kaedi have after recovery?：She hoped to meet and thank Karol face to face and invite him to her wedding. Why did it take long for Kaedi to contact Karol?：Because donors and recipients should stay anonymous for a period of time. Why did Karol agree to attend the wedding?：He wanted to witness the new life he had brought to Kaedi. What is the bond between Kaedi and Karol?：Karol’s selfless donation gave Kaedi a second life and a happy marriage. What does the story tell us?：Kindness has no borders; small selfless kindness can rebuild others’ lives and bring endless warmth. 5．情节线 凯迪患上致命血液病，生命垂危，急需干细胞移植救命→长期化疗饱受病痛折磨，一直苦苦等待匹配捐献者→全球骨髓库长期找不到匹配捐献者，希望渺茫→波兰男子卡罗尔匹配成功，因亲历亲人离世义无反顾捐献→手术顺利，凯迪痊愈并筹备婚礼，一心想要当面感谢救命恩人→历经数月打破捐献双方匿名规则，邀请卡罗尔远赴美国参加婚礼→婚礼现场揭晓神秘嘉宾，全场宾客动容鼓掌→（续写）凯迪含泪走向恩人，真诚诉说感激之情，感恩对方赐予自己新生与幸福→（续写）卡罗尔温和回应，讲述捐献初心，坦言见证幸福便是最好回馈，善意跨越国界完成生命接力 6．情感线 Kaedi: scared and desperate→painful and hopeless→hopeful and grateful→excited and expectant→moved and thankful→blessed and warm（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：新娘凯迪身患重病，在波兰男子卡罗尔无私捐献干细胞后重获新生，她跨越国界邀请恩人出席婚礼当面致谢，一场婚礼见证了无国界善意与生命的温暖接力。 英文：After receiving a life-saving stem cell donation from a Polish stranger Karol, Kaedi recovered completely. She invited her savior to her wedding to express sincere gratitude, showing that kindness crosses national borders and lights up precious lives. 8. 句式 状语从句：If the disease was not treated in time, it would be deadly. 定语从句：Karol, who had registered as a donor years ago, agreed to help without hesitation. 宾语从句：Kaedi wondered if she would ever see another sunrise. 非谓语动词：Planning to surprise guests, they kept Karol’s visit secret. 并列句：The room fell silent briefly, and then burst into warm applause. 9. 本文主题 温情善意类：善意从无国界，无私的举手之劳可以挽救濒危生命；心怀感恩、传递温暖，平凡善意也能铸就不凡的生命奇迹。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Kaedi walked to Karol tearfully. 衔接句1：凯迪满含热泪走到卡罗尔面前，真诚表达心底的感激，坦言没有对方的无私捐献，自己就无法收获新生与美满的婚姻，全场宾客为之动容。 Paragraph 2: At Kaedi's heartfelt words, Karol smiled humbly and spoke of his donation. 衔接句2：卡罗尔说起姨妈离世的遗憾，坦言捐献只是不想悲剧重演，他不求任何回报，能够亲眼看见凯迪收获幸福便是最大的收获，这份跨越山海的善意温暖全场。 三．段落续写框架 第一段：凯迪泪流满面地走向卡罗尔。 →①凯迪眼含热泪，声音哽咽，难掩内心激动→②当面真诚致谢，点明对方赐予自己第二次生命和幸福婚姻→③全场宾客静静聆听，全场弥漫着温暖与感动； 第二段：听完凯迪发自内心的话语，卡罗尔谦逊一笑，讲述了自己捐献的初心。 →①卡罗尔平静讲述亲人离世的伤痛，解释自己捐献的初衷→②表明善意无需回报，见证对方幸福足矣→③婚礼被善意照亮，善意跨越国界，温暖生生不息。 四.段落续写（满分范文，149词） Kaedi walked to Karol tearfully. Trembling slightly, she held out her hands and thanked him from the bottom of her heart. She told Karol that she had once despaired of surviving the severe disease. It was his selfless donation that pulled her back from the edge of death and gave her a chance to marry her beloved Mikey. Without him, she could never embrace such sweet happiness. Her sincere thanks touched every guest present, and warm applause filled the wedding hall again. At Kaedi's heartfelt words, Karol smiled humbly and spoke of his donation. He said he still felt sad about his aunt’s death from the same disease. He just wanted to prevent the same pain from happening to others and never expected any reward. He added that witnessing Kaedi’s happy wedding was the best gift for him. This selfless kindness crossed thousands of miles and connected two strangers. The wedding became more meaningful, carrying endless gratitude and warm kindness forever. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $