2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---漂流瓶里的跨越山海之约 导学案

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 On an ordinary morning, Diane was taking her usual walk along a beach in Tasmania when something unusual caught her eye in the surf — a bottle rolling in on the waves. Curious, she picked it up and discovered a note inside. To her surprise, the message was written in Spanish. Determined to figure out what it said, Diane sought help from locals, including her brother, who had just returned from Chile with a Spanish dictionary. Word by word, they struggled to piece together a rough translation: “Life has taught me that anything is possible.” But the most important clues were easy to spot: a name, a Colombian address and an email. Those details led Diane to Erika, a woman from Colombia, who had been working on a cruise ship years earlier. One evening, bored and looking for something fun to do, Erika wrote a note, sealed it in an empty bottle, and threw it overboard. She had imagined it reaching someone, though the possibility felt impossibly small. As life grew busy — work, family, the endless routines of daily life — she rarely checked that old email account. Yet on quiet evenings, she sometimes caught herself wondering: had anyone ever found that bottle? She once mentioned to her family that if someone did, she would love to meet them — maybe even walk together on the very beach where it landed. Diane stared at the faded ink on the note, wondering who this stranger was and how her message had traveled so far. She decided to send an email to the address, sharing the story of finding the bottle and expressing her curiosity. Days turned into weeks, then months. No reply ever came. Each time she opened her inbox, her hope faded a little more. Had the address changed? Had Erika ever received it? Diane placed the bottle on her shelf, a quiet reminder of the mystery that might never be solved. 注意： 1．词数150左右； 2．按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。 Then one day, an unexpected email arrived. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The big day they had long imagined finally came. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （一）文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 On an ordinary morning, Diane took a walk along a beach in Tasmania--- _________________ --- She found a bottle with a Spanish note inside--- _________________ --- With her brother’s help, she translated the note and found Erika’s name, address and email--- _________________ --- Erika (from Colombia) threw the bottle when she worked on a cruise ship years ago, hoping someone would find it--- _________________ --- Diane sent an email to Erika, sharing the story and her curiosity--- _________________ --- No reply came for months, Diane placed the bottle on the shelf, thinking the mystery would never be solved 4. 细节问答 What did Diane find on the beach? ：___________________________________ Why did Diane seek help from locals?：_________________________________ What was the translation of the note?： ________________________________________________ Who was Erika? What did she do years earlier?： __________________________________________ Why did Erika throw the bottle overboard?： _____________________________________________ What did Diane do after finding the clues?： _________________________________________________ How did Diane feel when no reply came for months?： ________________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 一个普通的早晨，Diane像往常一样在塔斯马尼亚的海滩散步→_________________ →她在海浪中发现了一个不寻常的东西——一个随波翻滚的瓶子→_________________ →出于好奇，她捡起瓶子，发现里面有一张纸条，令她惊讶的是，纸条上的留言是用西班牙语写的→_________________ →Diane决心弄明白纸条的意思，于是向当地人寻求帮助，包括刚从智利回来、带了西班牙语词典的哥哥→_________________ →他们逐字逐句费力地拼凑出大致的翻译：“生活教会我，一切皆有可能。”→_________________ →纸条上最显眼的是关键线索：一个名字、一个哥伦比亚地址和一个邮箱→这些线索让Diane找到了Erika，一位来自哥伦比亚的女士，多年前她曾在一艘游轮上工作→_________________ →多年前的一个晚上，Erika感到无聊，想找些有趣的事做，于是写了一张纸条，封进空瓶子里扔出了船外→_________________ →她曾想象过瓶子会被某人捡到，尽管这种可能性小得不可思议→随着生活变得忙碌——工作、家庭、日复一日的琐碎日常，她很少查看那个旧邮箱→_________________ →但在安静的夜晚，她有时会忍不住想：有人捡到那个瓶子吗？她曾跟家人提起，如果有人捡到，她很想见见那个人，甚至一起在瓶子着陆的海滩上散步→_________________ →Diane盯着纸条上褪色的字迹，好奇这个陌生人是谁，她的留言如何旅行了这么远→_________________ →她决定给那个邮箱发一封邮件，分享捡到瓶子的故事，并表达自己的好奇→_________________ →日子一天天过去，几周、几个月都没有收到回复→每次打开收件箱，她的希望就渺茫一分→她怀疑邮箱地址是否变了，Erika是否收到了邮件→_________________ →Diane把瓶子放在书架上，作为那个可能永远无法解开的谜团的无声纪念→（续写）有一天，一封意想不到的邮件来了，是Erika发来的，解开了所有谜团→（续写）她们一直想象的那一天终于到来，两人在海滩相遇，完成了跨越山海的约定 6．情感线 Diane：curious→___________→hopeful→___________→disappointed→___________（续写） Erika：bored→___________→curious→___________→excited（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式（找出原文中的对应句式，各举1例） 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 缘分与希望类：_______________________________________ （二）情节构造 Paragraph 1: Then one day, an unexpected email arrived. 衔接句1——Who sent the email? What did the email say? How did Diane and Erika feel?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: The big day they had long imagined finally came. 衔接句2——Where did they meet? What did they do? What did they realize from the experience?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （三）段落续写框架 第一段：然后有一天，一封意想不到的邮件来了。→①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：她们一直想象的那一天终于到来了。→④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 （四）段落续写 Then one day, an unexpected email arrived. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The big day they had long imagined finally came. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 （一）文本分析 1．角色 Diane（细心、好奇、有耐心，善于发现生活中的小美好，执着于解开漂流瓶的谜团，最终收获一段跨越山海的友谊）；Erika（来自哥伦比亚，曾在游轮工作，热爱生活、心怀期待，扔出漂流瓶寄托美好心愿，最终与Diane相遇，实现了多年的期待） 2．视角 第三人称 3．时空线 On an ordinary morning, Diane took a walk along a beach in Tasmania--- she found a bottle rolling in the surf--- She found a bottle with a Spanish note inside--- With her brother’s help, she translated the note and found Erika’s name, address and email--- Erika (from Colombia) threw the bottle when she worked on a cruise ship years ago, hoping someone would find it--- Diane sent an email to Erika, sharing the story and her curiosity--- No reply came for months, Diane placed the bottle on the shelf, thinking the mystery would never be solved 4. 细节问答 What did Diane find on the beach? ：A bottle with a Spanish note inside. Why did Diane seek help from locals?：Because the note in the bottle was written in Spanish, and she couldn’t understand it. What was the translation of the note?：“Life has taught me that anything is possible.” Who was Erika? What did she do years earlier?：She was a woman from Colombia. She had been working on a cruise ship years earlier. Why did Erika throw the bottle overboard?：Because she was bored and looking for something fun to do, and she hoped someone would find it. What did Diane do after finding the clues?：She sent an email to Erika’s address, sharing the story of finding the bottle and expressing her curiosity. How did Diane feel when no reply came for months?：She felt disappointed, and her hope faded little by little. She thought the mystery might never be solved. What does the story tell us?：Miracles happen when we least expect them; a small act of curiosity or a casual wish can connect people across mountains and seas, and hope and persistence can turn an impossible mystery into a beautiful encounter. 5．情节线 一个普通的早晨，Diane像往常一样在塔斯马尼亚的海滩上散步，享受着清晨的宁静→突然，海浪中一个不寻常的东西吸引了她的目光——一个随波翻滚的瓶子→出于好奇，她弯腰捡起瓶子，摇晃了一下，发现里面有一张折叠的纸条→令她惊讶的是，纸条上的留言是用西班牙语写的，她完全看不懂→Diane下定决心要弄明白纸条的意思，于是向身边的当地人寻求帮助，其中包括她刚从智利回来的哥哥，哥哥带了一本西班牙语词典→她们围坐在一起，逐字逐句地琢磨、翻译，费力地拼凑出纸条上的大致内容：“生活教会我，一切皆有可能。”→纸条上除了这句话，最显眼的就是几个关键线索：一个名字Erika、一个哥伦比亚的地址和一个邮箱→凭借这些线索，Diane辗转找到了Erika——一位来自哥伦比亚的女士，多年前她曾在一艘游轮上工作→原来，多年前的一个晚上，Erika在游轮上感到无聊，想找些有趣的事打发时间，于是写下了这张纸条，封进一个空瓶子里，用力扔出了船外→她曾幻想过瓶子会被某个陌生人捡到，尽管心里清楚，这种跨越山海的可能性小得不可思议→后来，生活变得越来越忙碌，工作、家庭、日复一日的琐碎日常填满了她的生活，她几乎再也没有查看过那个旧邮箱→但在每个安静的夜晚，她偶尔还是会忍不住想起那个漂流瓶，心里默默疑惑：有人捡到它吗？她甚至曾跟家人提起，如果真的有人捡到，她很想见见那个人，说不定还能一起在瓶子着陆的那片海滩上散步→Diane盯着纸条上褪色的字迹，心里充满了好奇：这个叫Erika的陌生人是谁？她的留言是在什么样的心情下写下的？这只瓶子又如何跨越了遥远的距离，来到了这片海滩？→带着满心的疑惑，Diane决定给纸条上的邮箱发一封邮件，详细分享了自己捡到瓶子的经过，也表达了想要了解Erika的好奇心→日子一天天过去，几周、几个月的时间悄然流逝，邮箱里始终没有任何回复→每次打开收件箱，Diane的希望就渺茫一分，她开始怀疑：是不是邮箱地址已经变了？Erika到底有没有收到她的邮件？→最后，Diane无奈地把瓶子放在了书架上，让它成为那个可能永远无法解开的谜团的无声纪念→（续写）然后有一天，一封意想不到的邮件来了，正是Erika发来的。她在邮件里说，自己偶然登录旧邮箱看到了消息，既惊喜又感动，详细讲述了当年扔漂流瓶的心情，还热情地邀请Diane见面。Diane看到邮件后欣喜若狂，立刻回复了Erika，约定在那片捡到瓶子的海滩相见。→（续写）她们一直想象的那一天终于到来了。Erika专程从哥伦比亚来到塔斯马尼亚，两人在海滩上相遇，紧紧拥抱在一起。她们沿着海滩散步，聊着漂流瓶的故事，聊着这些年的生活，仿佛认识了很久的老朋友。那一刻，她们都明白，生活真的充满了奇迹，一只小小的漂流瓶，竟能跨越山海，连接起两个陌生女孩的缘分。 6．情感线 Diane：curious→determined→hopeful→disappointed→desperate→overjoyed（续写） Erika：bored→playful→hopeful→forgetful→surprised→excited（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：Diane在塔斯马尼亚的海滩上捡到一个装有西班牙语纸条的漂流瓶，在哥哥的帮助下翻译出纸条内容，并通过纸条上的线索找到瓶子的主人Erika。Diane给Erika发了邮件，但数月没有收到回复，她以为谜团永远无法解开。直到有一天，Erika发来邮件，两人约定见面，最终在捡到瓶子的海滩相遇，收获了一段跨越山海的友谊，也见证了生活中的奇迹。 英文：Diane found a bottle with a Spanish note on a beach in Tasmania. With her brother’s help, she translated the note and found Erika, the owner of the bottle, through the clues on it. Diane sent an email to Erika but got no reply for months, thinking the mystery would never be solved. Until one day, Erika sent an email, and they agreed to meet. Finally, they met on the beach where the bottle was found, gaining a friendship across mountains and seas and witnessing a miracle in life. 8. 句式（找出原文中的对应句式，各举1例） 宾语从句：She once mentioned to her family that if someone did, she would love to meet them. 定语从句：Diane sought help from locals, including her brother, who had just returned from Chile with a Spanish dictionary. 状语从句：On an ordinary morning, Diane was taking her usual walk along a beach in Tasmania when something unusual caught her eye in the surf. 非谓语：Determined to figure out what it said, Diane sought help from locals. 并列句：As life grew busy — work, family, the endless routines of daily life — she rarely checked that old email account. 9. 本文主题 缘分与希望类：生活充满未知与奇迹，一只小小的漂流瓶，能跨越山海连接起两个陌生人的缘分；心怀希望、保持好奇，不轻易放弃，那些看似渺茫的期待，终有一天会变成美好的现实；偶然的相遇，往往能带来意想不到的温暖，让我们相信，一切皆有可能。 （二）情节构造 Paragraph 1: Then one day, an unexpected email arrived. 衔接句1——Who sent the email? What did the email say? How did Diane and Erika feel?：It was from Erika. She said she accidentally logged into her old email and was surprised and moved by Diane’s message, sharing her feeling of throwing the bottle and inviting Diane to meet. Diane was overjoyed and replied immediately to make an appointment. Paragraph 2: The big day they had long imagined finally came. 衔接句2——Where did they meet? What did they do? What did they realize from the experience?：They met on the beach where Diane found the bottle. They walked along the beach, talked about the bottle and their lives, and felt like old friends. They realized that life is full of miracles and a small bottle can connect people across distances. （三）段落续写框架 第一段：然后有一天，一封意想不到的邮件来了。→①邮件是Erika发来的，她说自己偶然登录旧邮箱看到了消息，又惊又喜→②她分享了当年扔漂流瓶的心情，还热情邀请Diane见面→③Diane欣喜若狂，立刻回复邮件，约定在捡到瓶子的海滩相见； 第二段：她们一直想象的那一天终于到来了。→①Erika专程赶来，两人在海滩上相遇，紧紧拥抱→②她们沿着海滩散步，聊着漂流瓶的故事和这些年的生活→③她们深深体会到，生活充满奇迹，一只小小的漂流瓶，竟能跨越山海，成就一段珍贵的友谊。 （四）段落续写 Then one day, an unexpected email arrived. It was from Erika, who explained she had accidentally logged into her old email account and was deeply moved by Diane’s message. She shared her boredom that evening on the cruise ship and how she’d hoped the bottle would reach someone. Erika expressed great excitement and invited Diane to meet on the very beach where the bottle had landed. Overjoyed, Diane replied at once, agreeing eagerly to the meeting. The big day they had long imagined finally came. Erika traveled all the way from Colombia to Tasmania, and they met on the beach at sunrise. They hugged warmly, then walked along the shore, chatting about the bottle’s journey and their lives over the years. As waves crashed gently nearby, they both realized that life’s miracles often come unexpectedly, and a small bottle had tied their hearts across thousands of miles. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $