2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---A Glass of Milk 导学案

该高中英语高考复习学案系统覆盖读后续写核心考点，将角色分析、时空线梳理、情节逻辑构建、情感发展脉络等考点按文本理解到创作输出的层级组织，通过细节问答问题链和情节构造任务单，引导学生自主梳理故事要素，形成完整的续写思维框架。 亮点在于自主诊断与方法指导结合，如开篇设置细节问答自测文本理解，通过情节线、情感线分析任务培养语言能力和思维品质。续写框架提供分层写作指导，学生可对照参考答案反思优化，教师能通过学生任务完成情况精准定位薄弱环节，支持个性化复习与因材施教。

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 On a cold and windy day, Howard Kelly, a poor boy, was going from door to door, trying to sell things to pay for his school. But he didn’t make any sales. Feeling very sad, he almost wanted to give up. Also, his stomach was growling loudly because he hadn’t eaten for days. With no other option, he decided to ask for food at the next house. He was a bit scared as he knocked on the door, not sure what to say. When the door opened, a young woman stood there, a faint scar across her left cheek. Howard got even more nervous. “Could… could you give me a drink of water?” he asked, looking down at his feet. The woman saw how thin and tired the boy was. She thought he needed something more than just water to feel better, so she brought him a glass of milk instead. Howard held the cup with his small hands and drank the milk slowly. Then he asked, “How much do I have to pay you?” The woman smiled kindly and said, “You don’t need to pay me anything. My mother always told me that we should help others without asking for money in return.” Howard was so touched. “Thank you so much!” he said with a big smile. As he walked away, he felt not only stronger in his body but also more hopeful about people. Many years passed. The kind young woman became very sick. Years of frequent medical treatment had almost emptied her savings, leaving her trapped in poverty. The doctors in her small town couldn’t help her, so they sent her to a big hospital in the city. There, many famous doctors would try to cure her. One of them was Dr. Howard Kelly. When he heard where the sick woman came from, he remembered something important. He quickly got up and rushed to her room. 注意： （1）续写词数应为 150个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Entering the room, Dr. Kelly saw the woman lying weakly on the bed. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The hospital bill she had long feared arrived. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 poor boy Howard sold goods for tuition--- _________________ --- a kind woman gave him free milk--- _________________ --- Howard grew up into a famous doctor--- _________________ --- the kind woman got seriously ill and was sent to his hospital 4. 细节问答 Why did little Howard sell things door to door? ：___________________________________ What did Howard plan to ask for at first?：_________________________________ What did the woman give Howard instead of water?：________________________________________________ Did the woman ask Howard for payment? Why?：__________________________________________ What trouble did the woman meet many years later?：_____________________________________________ Who was the top doctor in charge of the woman’s treatment?：_________________________________________________ What will Dr. Kelly do to repay the woman’s kindness?：________________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 贫穷男孩霍华德沿街售卖物品赚取学费，饥寒交迫、走投无路→_________________ →好心女士没有给他白水，而是赠送一杯热牛奶且分文不取→这份善意温暖了男孩，让他重拾希望→多年后男孩成为知名医生→好心女士重病缠身，耗尽积蓄，转入霍华德所在的医院治疗→（续写）霍华德认出恩人，全力亲自救治女士，下定决心报答当年恩情→（续写）女士收到高额账单惶恐不安，发现账单已被医生付清，读懂善意轮回 6．情感线 Howard：hungry and desperate→___________→grateful and hopeful→___________→shocked and determined→___________（续写） The woman：warm and generous→___________→worried and anxious→___________→surprised and moved 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 温情感恩类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Entering the room, Dr. Kelly saw the woman lying weakly on the bed. 衔接句1——Did Dr. Kelly recognize the woman? What would he do for her treatment? What decision did he make? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: The hospital bill she had long feared arrived. 衔接句2——How did the woman feel facing the bill? What was written on the bill? What final change did she have? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：走进病房，凯利医生看见虚弱躺在床上的女士。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：她一直担心的医疗账单终于送到了。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写（答题区） Entering the room, Dr. Kelly saw the woman lying weakly on the bed. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The hospital bill she had long feared arrived. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 Howard Kelly：年少贫困饥饿、铭记善意、长大之后知恩图报、医术高明的医生；the kind woman：心地善良、乐于助人、施恩不图回报、晚年重病陷入困境的女士 2．视角 第三人称 3．时空线 poor boy Howard sold goods for tuition--- suffered from hunger and asked for water--- a kind woman gave him free milk--- Howard regained hope and kept the kindness in mind--- Howard grew up into a famous doctor--- the kind woman got seriously ill and was sent to his hospital 4. 细节问答 Why did little Howard sell things door to door? ：He needed to earn money to pay for his school tuition. What did Howard plan to ask for at first?：He planned to ask for a cup of water. What did the woman give Howard instead of water?：She gave him a full glass of warm milk. Did the woman ask Howard for payment? Why?：No, she believed people should help others without asking for rewards. What trouble did the woman meet many years later?：She suffered from severe illness and ran out of savings for treatment. Who was the top doctor in charge of the woman’s treatment?：Dr. Howard Kelly was in charge of her treatment. What will Dr. Kelly do to repay the woman’s kindness?：He will cure her carefully and pay off all her medical fees secretly. What does the story tell us?：Kindness will come back eventually; always be kind to others without expecting rewards. 5．情节线 贫穷男孩霍华德沿街售卖物品赚取学费，饥寒交迫、走投无路→他上门想要讨要一杯水解渴→好心女士没有给他白水，而是赠送一杯热牛奶且分文不取→这份善意温暖了男孩，让他重拾希望并铭记于心→多年后男孩刻苦求学，成为知名外科医生→好心女士重病缠身，耗尽积蓄，转入霍华德所在的医院治疗→（续写）霍华德一眼认出恩人，亲自牵头制定治疗方案，竭尽全力救治女士，决心报答当年恩情→（续写）女士收到天价账单满心惶恐，翻开账单发现费用已全部结清，落款：一杯牛奶，读懂善意终有回响 6．情感线 Howard：hungry and desperate→nervous and shy→grateful and hopeful→calm and professional→shocked and determined→thankful and fulfilled（续写） The woman：warm and generous→weak and painful→worried and anxious→astonished and moved 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：饥寒交迫的穷男孩得到陌生女士一杯免费牛奶的善意帮助，多年后男孩成长为名医，恰逢这位女士重病入院，医生全力救治并悄悄付清全部医药费，完成了一场跨越多年的善意回馈。 英文：A poor hungry boy received a free glass of milk from a warm-hearted woman. Years later, the boy became a skilled doctor. He recognized the sick woman, cured her with all efforts and paid all medical bills to repay the past kindness. 8. 高分原句句式摘抄（贴合高考考点） 状语从句：As he walked away, he felt not only stronger but also more hopeful. 非谓语动词：Feeling very sad, he almost wanted to give up selling goods. 宾语从句：He remembered that a kind woman once helped him out of trouble. 定语从句：The small town doctors couldn’t cure her illness, which forced her to go to the city hospital. 并列句：She was poor and weak, but she still offered help to a strange boy years ago. 9. 本文主题 温情感恩类：善有善报，善意从不会被辜负；勿以善小而不为，微小的善意可以照亮他人一生，也终将回馈自身。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Entering the room, Dr. Kelly saw the woman lying weakly on the bed. 衔接句1：他一眼认出这位左脸颊带有浅疤的恩人；他亲自全程负责诊疗，动用最好的医疗资源；他默默下定决心，一定要治好女士并偿还这份恩情。 Paragraph 2: The hospital bill she had long feared arrived. 衔接句2：女士看着高昂账单满心绝望，无力承担；她发现账单上的费用已被全额免除，附带一行暖心备注；她终于明白主治医生就是当年那个小男孩，深深感慨善意轮回。 三．段落续写框架 第一段：走进病房，凯利医生看见虚弱躺在床上的女士。 →①他一眼认出女士脸颊的疤痕，确认这就是当年帮助自己的恩人→②他亲自接管诊疗工作，召集专家会诊，用心救治恩人→③他暗中决定，独自承担所有昂贵的治疗费用； 第二段：她一直担心的医疗账单终于送到了。 →①看到高额账单，女士陷入绝望，担忧无力偿还债务→②翻开账单，她发现所有费用已结清，备注写着：一杯牛奶的费用→③女士恍然大悟，感慨善意终有回报，内心满是温暖与感动。 四.段落续写（高考标准高分范文，149词） Entering the room, Dr. Kelly saw the woman lying weakly on the bed. Instantly, he spotted the faint scar on her left cheek and recognized her at once—the very kind woman who had helped him years ago. Deep emotion welled up inside him. He devoted himself fully to her treatment, holding regular expert meetings to work out the best cure plan. Besides top-tier medical care, he often visited her in person to comfort her. He made up his mind secretly to repay the priceless kindness she had given him decades ago. The hospital bill she had long feared arrived. Hesitantly, she opened it, prepared for the huge sum she could never afford. Unexpectedly, words written on the bill caught her eyes: Paid in full with a glass of milk. Tears flooded her eyes immediately. She finally realized the famous doctor was exactly the poor little boy she had helped long ago. What a precious circle of kindness! 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $