2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---充满爱意的手工礼服 导学案

该高中英语高考复习学案系统梳理了读后续写专题的核心考点，涵盖情节发展、人物情感、逻辑衔接等要素，通过角色分析、时空线梳理、细节问答等多维度文本解构，构建“文本分析-情节构造-续写框架”的知识网络，以问题链引导学生自主推导叙事逻辑，形成完整的续写思维体系。 亮点在于自主诊断与分层指导设计，如开篇设置细节问答自测题诊断学生对文本要素的把握，通过情节线、情感线梳理任务培养学生的语言能力和思维品质。每个模块配有续写框架搭建工具和范文对比分析，帮助学生个性化提升，教师可依据学情精准指导，有效培养学生自主复习能力。

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Liza, a young girl with bright eyes and a hopeful smile, was excited about her upcoming prom (舞会). She was eager to get a designer dress she saw online, but her mother said it was too expensive. Liza argued, "But Mom, everyone at school is talking about their designer dresses. I don't want to be the only one without one." Her mother shook her head gently, "Honey, I understand, but spending that much money on a dress isn't practical. Besides, someone has a surprise for you today. You might not need to buy a dress." Soon after, Liza's grandmother, Pam, arrived with a package. "Hello, dear! I brought you something special," Pam said warmly, handing the package to Liza. Inside was a beautiful dress, carefully made by hand with lovely details. But Liza's excitement faded quickly as she realized it wasn't the designer dress she had been dreaming of. "I'm not wearing this!" she shouted. She didn't consider how hurtful her words might be to her grandmother. Liza's mother tried to calm her, "Liza, please, at least try it on. Your grandmother made it with so much love." Reluctantly (不情愿地), Liza tried on the dress but still refused to wear it to prom. "It's not even branded (有品牌的)! How will I answer when they ask which store I bought it from?" she complained. Finally, her mother gave in and ordered the designer dress Liza wanted. Pam quietly accepted Liza's choice and carefully packed away the dress she had made. On prom night, Liza arrived at the school feeling excited in her new designer dress. However, her joy faded the moment she spotted the most popular girl in school wearing exactly the same dress. The popular girl approached Liza with a confident smile. "Nice dress, Liza. Too bad it looks better on me," she said, making fun of Liza. Liza felt humiliated (羞辱的) and ran out of the hall in tears. 注意： （1）续写词数应为 150个左右； （2）续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。 As Liza cried uncontrollably, she heard a familiar voice. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ As she stepped back into the hall, everyone turned to look at her. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 Liza looked forward to the school prom--- _________________ --- Grandma made a handmade dress for Liza--- _________________ --- Liza refused the handmade dress and bought a designer one--- _________________ --- She was laughed at for wearing the same dress and ran away sadly 4. 细节问答 What did Liza long for for the prom? ：___________________________________ What gift did Grandma prepare for Liza?：_________________________________ Why did Liza turn down the handmade dress?：________________________________________________ What embarrassed Liza on prom night?：__________________________________________ Why did Liza feel humiliated and cry?：_____________________________________________ What lesson will Liza learn from this experience?_________________________________________________ 5．情节线 莉萨期盼校园舞会，渴望一条名牌礼服→_________________ →奶奶亲手缝制一条专属礼服送给她→_________________ →莉萨嫌弃礼服无品牌，拒绝穿着，执意购买同款名牌礼服→舞会上撞衫还被校花嘲讽，莉萨羞愧落泪跑出场馆→_________________ →（续写）奶奶现身安慰，莉萨幡然醒悟换回手工礼服→（续写）手工礼服收获全场赞美，莉萨懂得爱意远比名牌珍贵 6．情感线 Liza：excited and vain→___________→dissatisfied and rude→___________→humiliated and upset→___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式（摘抄文中对应长难句） 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 成长感悟类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: As Liza cried uncontrollably, she heard a familiar voice. 衔接句1——Who came to comfort her? What did Liza realize?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: As she stepped back into the hall, everyone turned to look at her. 衔接句2——How did people react to her handmade dress? What change did Liza have?______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：莉萨控制不住大哭时，她听到了熟悉的声音。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：当她重新走进舞会大厅时，所有人都看向了她。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写答题区（词数150左右） As Liza cried uncontrollably, she heard a familiar voice. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ As she stepped back into the hall, everyone turned to look at her. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 Liza（爱慕虚荣、不懂珍惜爱意，后期知错悔改、心智成长的少女）；Grandma Pam（温柔慈祥、疼爱孙女、用心制作礼物的老人）；Liza's mother（理性温和、善于劝解的母亲）；the popular girl（傲慢无礼、喜欢嘲讽他人的校花） 2．视角 第三人称 3．时空线 Liza looked forward to the school prom--- She dreamed of an expensive designer dress --- Grandma made a handmade dress for Liza--- Liza was disappointed and rude to her grandma --- Liza refused the handmade dress and bought a designer one--- She met the same dress worn by the popular girl --- She was laughed at for wearing the same dress and ran away sadly 4. 细节问答 What did Liza long for for the prom? ：She longed for a fashionable and expensive designer dress. What gift did Grandma prepare for Liza?：She prepared a delicate handmade dress made with full love. Why did Liza turn down the handmade dress?：She thought it had no brand and would not look fashionable among classmates. What embarrassed Liza on prom night?：She wore the same designer dress as the most popular girl in her school. Why did Liza feel humiliated and cry?：The popular girl laughed at her and said the dress looked better on herself. What lesson will Liza learn from this experience?：Love behind gifts is far more precious than famous brands and appearances. 5．情节线 莉萨期盼校园舞会，渴望一条名牌礼服→母亲认为礼服价格昂贵，奶奶准备了手工礼服作为惊喜→奶奶亲手缝制一条专属礼服送给她→莉萨嫌弃礼服没有品牌，出言伤害奶奶，执意购买名牌礼服→莉萨嫌弃礼服无品牌，拒绝穿着，执意购买同款名牌礼服→舞会上撞衫还被校花嘲讽，莉萨羞愧落泪跑出场馆→奶奶上前安慰，莉萨意识到自己的错误，换回饱含爱意的手工礼服→（续写）奶奶现身安慰，莉萨幡然醒悟换回手工礼服→（续写）手工礼服收获全场赞美，莉萨懂得爱意远比名牌珍贵 6．情感线 Liza：excited and vain→disappointed and impolite→dissatisfied and rude→ashamed and heartbroken→humiliated and upset→regretful and grateful（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：少女莉萨爱慕虚荣，嫌弃奶奶亲手缝制的无品牌礼服，执意购买名牌舞会礼服，不料舞会上撞衫被人嘲讽，最终醒悟：饱含心意与爱的手工礼物，远比昂贵的名牌更加珍贵。 英文：Vain Liza refused her grandma’s loving handmade dress and chose an expensive designer one, only to be laughed at for wearing the same dress as others. Eventually she realized that sincere love is priceless and superior to any famous brand. 8. 句式（摘抄文中对应长难句） 状语从句：However, her joy faded the moment she spotted the most popular girl in school wearing exactly the same dress. 非谓语动词：She didn't consider how hurtful her words might be to her grandmother. 宾语从句：I don't want to be the only one without one. 定语从句：Inside was a beautiful dress, carefully made by hand with lovely details. 并列句：She felt humiliated and ran out of the hall in tears. 9. 本文主题 成长感悟类：切勿盲目攀比追逐名牌与外表，真心的爱意与独一无二的心意，才是最珍贵、无可替代的财富。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: As Liza cried uncontrollably, she heard a familiar voice. 衔接句1——Who came to comfort her? What did Liza realize? It was her grandma who followed her out to comfort her. Seeing the handmade dress grandma took along, Liza regretted her previous rude words and decided to change into the unique dress. Paragraph 2: As she stepped back into the hall, everyone turned to look at her. 衔接句2——How did people react to her handmade dress? What change did Liza have? All classmates admired the delicate handmade dress and praised its unique design. Liza grew up overnight and understood the true value of love. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：莉萨控制不住大哭时，她听到了熟悉的声音。 →①奶奶悄悄跟了出来，温柔安抚崩溃哭泣的莉萨，带来了那条手工礼服→②看着一针一线缝制的礼服，莉萨满心愧疚，为自己之前的刻薄言行道歉→③她立刻换下撞衫的名牌礼服，决心穿着奶奶的心意重回舞会； 第二段：当她重新走进舞会大厅时，所有人都看向了她。 →①精致独特的手工礼服惊艳全场，没有人与她撞衫，收获所有人的称赞→②之前嘲讽她的校花面露尴尬，无言以对→③莉萨彻底放下虚荣心，懂得独一无二的爱意远比昂贵名牌更有意义，内心满是感恩。 四.高分续写范文（高考标准，词数149） As Liza cried uncontrollably, she heard a familiar voice. Turning around, she saw Grandma standing beside her with gentle eyes. Grandma comforted her patiently and took out the handmade dress she had brought along. Staring at the delicate stitches on the dress, Liza was filled with deep regret. She apologized sincerely for her previous rude and selfish behavior. Without hesitation, she changed into the warm handmade dress, feeling peaceful inside. As she stepped back into the hall, everyone turned to look at her. The unique handmade dress with special details was absolutely one-of-a-kind, winning loud admiration from all classmates. No one had the same dress as hers anymore. The popular girl lowered her head awkwardly, having nothing to say. At that moment, Liza realized that true beauty never lies in famous brands. Nothing can compare to the priceless love hidden behind every stitch of her grandma’s handmade dress. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $