2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习 接纳局限，无需逞强 导学案

该高中英语高考复习学案聚焦读后续写专题，系统梳理文本分析（角色、视角、时空线）、情节构造（衔接句、段落框架）、语言表达（核心句式）等核心考点，通过问题链（细节问答）和任务单（续写框架）引导学生自主构建情节与情感发展脉络，形成读后续写的完整认知体系。 亮点在于诊断性文本分析和个性化续写指导，如设置细节问答自测文本理解，提供续写框架模板引导自主构思，培养学生的语言能力和思维品质。每个模块配有参考答案对比和情感线梳理表，帮助学生自主诊断提升，教师可通过学生答题情况精准指导，支持因材施教。

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 In my photo album lies an old picture that never fails to transport me back in time. There we stand — Dad, my two sisters, and I — arm in arm in front of Magnum, the world’s tallest roller coaster at the time. Though a decade has passed, my memory about the scene still remains vivid: golden sunlight warming our shoulders, buttery popcorn smell floating through the air, and most importantly, Dad’s quiet wisdom that still echoes (回响) in my ears, “Don’t ever apologize for knowing your limits.” That day began with my younger sisters’ eager request to conquer Magnum, the newly-built roller coaster in an amusement park. They didn’t know their older brother had a secret fear of heights. “If the girls can do it,” I reasoned, “how can I show weakness?” But as we inched through the long waiting line, my heartbeat sped up with the coaster’s distant screams. “You’re their role model,” I whispered to myself when we reached the loading platform. “And you have to do it.” However, when the car came to a stop and the gate swung open, I froze there. At that moment, I knew I could not make it. “I can’t do this. I am scared of heights,” I admitted to the attendant. To my relief, a kind staff member offered to guide me through the emergency exit while my little sisters were yelling excitedly as their cars were getting higher and higher. Too embarrassed to say anything, I simply called over my shoulder to Dad, “I’m quitting!” Dad was already in his car and there wasn’t time for him to say anything. When I was on the way out, I kept telling myself, “Whatever punishment or ridicule (嘲笑) I would have to face for chickening out! It is the price I am ready to pay!” 注意： 1. 续写词数应为 150词左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1 Waiting outside the exit, I did not know how my family would react. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2 “What happened to you up there?” Dad approached me and asked. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 The writer keeps an old photo reminding him of a valuable lesson--- _________________ --- Sisters expected to ride the tallest roller coaster--- _________________ --- The writer feared heights but wanted to be a good role model--- _________________ --- He felt frightened while waiting and finally gave up riding--- _________________ --- He left via emergency exit and felt ashamed of giving up halfway--- He waited outside nervously, fearing blame and laughter 4. 细节问答 What lesson did the writer learn from his father that day? ：___________________________________ Why did the writer force himself to ride the roller coaster at first?：_________________________________ What stopped the writer from getting on the roller coaster finally?：________________________________________________ How did the writer leave the roller coaster platform?：__________________________________________ What was the writer worried about after quitting the ride?：_____________________________________________ Why did the writer feel extremely embarrassed?_________________________________________________ How would Dad comfort and enlighten the writer?________________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________________________ 5．情节线 作者珍藏一张老照片，时刻铭记父亲一句人生箴言→_______________________________→排队过程中听到过山车尖叫愈发恐慌，依旧逼迫自己坚持上车→临近登车内心彻底崩溃，坦然承认恐高并从紧急出口离场→____________________________________→（续写）过山车运行结束，妹妹们满脸兴奋，作者愈发自卑局促，低头不敢直视家人→（续写）父亲察觉他的不安，温柔询问缘由，没有丝毫责备，反而开导他不必强迫自己，接纳自身局限绝非懦弱，呼应开篇名言，作者彻底释怀 6．情感线 The writer: nostalgic→___________→anxious and pressured→___________→ashamed and guilty→___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式摘抄（原文五大核心句式） 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 人生感悟类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Waiting outside the exit, I did not know how my family would react. 衔接句1——How did the writer feel while waiting? What did his sisters do after getting off the ride? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: “What happened to you up there?” Dad approached me and asked. 衔接句2——How did the writer answer? What wisdom did Dad share to comfort him? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：我等在出口外，不知道家人会作何反应。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：父亲走向我，问道：“你刚刚怎么中途离开了？” →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写（学生答题区） Waiting outside the exit, I did not know how my family would react. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ “What happened to you up there?” Dad approached me and asked. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 The writer：深爱妹妹、想要做好榜样的哥哥，内心敏感，因恐高半途放弃而极度自卑羞愧；Dad：温柔睿智、善于引导孩子的父亲，尊重孩子的真实感受，教会孩子接纳自我；younger sisters：天真活泼、热爱刺激项目的妹妹，无心嘲笑哥哥；amusement park staff：友善贴心的园区工作人员 2．视角 第一人称 3．时空线 The writer keeps an old photo reminding him of a valuable lesson→the family planned to ride a huge roller coaster together→The writer feared heights but wanted to be a qualified role model→He suffered great fear during waiting and gave up riding eventually→He left via emergency exit and felt ashamed of chickening out→He waited outside nervously for his family→Dad comforted him and taught him to accept personal limits bravely 4. 细节问答 What lesson did the writer learn from his father that day? ：We should never apologize for knowing and accepting our own limits. Why did the writer force himself to ride the roller coaster at first?：He wanted to act as a brave role model for his two younger sisters. What stopped the writer from getting on the roller coaster finally?：His extreme fear of heights made him unable to move forward. How did the writer leave the roller coaster platform?：He left the platform through the emergency exit with the staff’s help. What was the writer worried about after quitting the ride?：He feared his family’s blame and his sisters’ ridicule for his cowardice. Why did the writer feel extremely embarrassed?：He failed to keep his promise and gave up in front of his family. How would Dad comfort and enlighten the writer?：Dad would tell him that admitting weakness is not shameful and there is no need to force himself. What does the story tell us?：It is wise to recognize our own limits; admitting our weakness is not cowardice. 5．情节线 作者珍藏一张老照片，时刻铭记父亲一句人生箴言→妹妹们想要挑战超高过山车，身为哥哥的作者恐高却碍于面子想要逞强→排队过程中听到过山车尖叫愈发恐慌，依旧逼迫自己坚持上车→临近登车内心彻底崩溃，坦然承认恐高并从紧急出口离场→作者满心羞愧，担心家人指责、妹妹嘲笑，独自在出口忐忑等待→（续写）过山车缓缓返程，妹妹们兴奋地畅谈游玩感受，作者垂头低头，满心自责，全程不敢抬头面对家人，做好了被批评的准备→（续写）父亲看穿儿子内心的窘迫与自卑，温柔询问缘由，听完作者的坦白后没有一丝责备，而是道出核心道理：每个人都有自身局限，不必强行逞强，接纳自己的短板从来不是懦弱；作者彻底释怀，也永远记住了这句人生忠告 6．情感线 The writer: nostalgic→pressured and stubborn→anxious and terrified→ashamed and awkward→uneasy and self-critical→relieved and enlightened（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：作者因恐高中途放弃过山车，内心羞愧不安，父亲温柔开导他不必强行逞强，要坦然接纳自身局限，这段经历成为作者长久铭记的人生一课。 英文：The writer gave up riding a roller coaster halfway due to his fear of heights and felt ashamed. His father enlightened him gently that accepting personal limits is not cowardice, leaving him a lifelong precious lesson. 8. 句式摘抄（原文五大核心句式） 状语从句：Though a decade has passed, my memory about the scene still remains vivid. 非谓语动词：I kept telling myself to prepare for possible blame and laughter. 宾语从句：I knew I could not make it when the gate swung open. 并列句：Golden sunlight warmed our shoulders and sweet popcorn smell filled the air. 定语从句：I faced the huge roller coaster which brought me great fear. 9. 本文主题 人生感悟类：不必为自身局限感到愧疚，接纳自己的短板、不盲目逞强，也是一种难得的智慧。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Waiting outside the exit, I did not know how my family would react. 衔接句1——How did the writer feel while waiting? What did his sisters do after getting off the ride? The writer was filled with guilt and embarrassment. After the ride ended, his sisters talked excitedly about the thrilling experience, making him feel even worse. Paragraph 2: “What happened to you up there?” Dad approached me and asked. 衔接句2——How did the writer answer? What wisdom did Dad share to comfort him? The writer admitted his fear of heights honestly. Dad comforted him patiently and told him never to feel sorry for knowing his own limits. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：我等在出口外，不知道家人会作何反应。 →①我内心忐忑不安，满心愧疚，低头反复自责自己半途而废→②过山车到站，妹妹们兴奋分享刺激的游玩体验→③我愈发局促，默默等待家人的指责与调侃； 第二段：父亲走向我，问道：“你刚刚怎么中途离开了？” →①我坦诚说出自己恐高，无法克服内心恐惧才选择放弃→②父亲没有责备，反而温柔开导，点明不必盲目逞强→③我彻底解开内心枷锁，牢牢记住父亲的人生箴言。 四.段落续写（满分范文，148词） Waiting outside the exit, I did not know how my family would react. My heart pounded wildly with embarrassment and self-blame. I hung my head tightly, too ashamed to look up. Soon the roller coaster returned to the platform. My two sisters ran out cheerfully, talking enthusiastically about the breathtaking ride. Their excitement made my guilt swell sharply. I was fully prepared for their teasing and Dad’s blame for my cowardice. “What happened to you up there?” Dad approached me and asked. I gathered my courage and admitted that I was defeated by my fear of heights. Unexpectedly, Dad wore a gentle smile instead of blame. He patted my shoulder softly and told me that everyone had invisible limits. There was no need to force myself to take risky challenges just to maintain a brave image. His words struck me deeply. From then on, I fully understood that knowing our limits is never weakness. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $