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I used to be a boy who had little interest in science, and I often got distracted in physics classes. Nothing seemed exciting enough to stir my plain teenage life until I accidentally picked up a science fiction book on my parents’ bookshelf last summer. The blue cover, printed with shining stars, immediately caught my eye. Without hesitation, I started to read it, unaware that this casual choice would quietly reshape my perspective towards the world. The book described vivid adventures in outer space, telling how humans explored unknown planets and bravely overcame countless difficulties in the universe.
At first, I read the book merely to kill time. Gradually, however, I was deeply absorbed in the magical sci-fi world. The author described starry skies, vast outer space and mysterious alien creatures with delicate wording. What impressed me most was a simple sentence: Exploration is the eternal (永恒的) fuel for human progress. For a long time, I had been passive in studying, never daring to explore beyond textbooks. The sci-fi book awakened my long-buried passion for natural science and the mysterious universe.
Instead of putting the book aside after finishing it, I made up my mind to turn fictional imagination into real practice. I even became remarkably focused in physics classes, which took my teachers and classmates completely by surprise. One day, my physics teacher, Mr Smith, stared at me in surprise and whispered, “You have never been so devoted in class before.” Inspired by his words, I became more determined.
I searched for popular science videos online and recorded detailed notes about astronomical knowledge. I also saved my pocket money to buy a cheap astronomical telescope. Every clear night, I would set up the telescope on my balcony, aiming it at the quiet night sky. I tried to identify stars, observe the faint moonlight and then take some photographs of them, attempting to touch the magnificent universe described in the science fiction book with my own eyes.
注意:
(1)续写词数应为150个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
However, my family and classmates thought my hobby was impractical.
Then Mr Smith recommended me to enter the city star photography competition.
一、文本分析
1.角色
________________________________________________________
2.视角
第________人称
3. 时空线
I was indifferent to science and distracted in physics class--- _________________ --- I read a sci-fi book accidentally and fell in love with space exploration--- _________________ --- I changed my learning attitude and focused on physics class--- _________________ --- I learned astronomy knowledge and bought a telescope to observe the night sky--- _________________
4. 细节问答
Why was the boy uninterested in physics before? :___________________________________
What changed the author’s attitude towards science?:_________________________________
What sentence touched the author deeply?:________________________________________________
What changes happened to the author’s study and life?:__________________________________________
What did the author do to explore the universe?:_____________________________________________
What was the physics teacher’s reaction to his changes?_________________________________________________
What conflict will appear in the first paragraph?________________________________________________________
What does the story tell us?:________________________________________________
5.情节线
我原本对理科毫无兴趣,物理课总走神→_________________ →偶然读到一本科幻书,被太空探索内容深深吸引→_________________ →书中话语唤醒我的探索欲,我上课态度彻底转变→课后自学天文知识、购置望远镜观测星空→_________________ →(续写1)家人同学不理解我的爱好,我陷入迷茫但坚守初心→(续写2)老师推荐我参加星空摄影比赛,我收获认可与成长
6.情感线
I:bored and absent-minded→___________→fascinated and inspired→___________→confused and upset→___________(续写)
7. 综合概括(中英各一句)
中文:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
英文:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
8. 高分句式梳理(原文原句摘抄)
状语从句:________________________________________________________________
非谓语动词:________________________________________________________________
宾语从句:________________________________________________________________
定语从句:________________________________________________________________
9. 本文主题
成长感悟类:_______________________________________
二.情节构造
Paragraph 1: However, my family and classmates thought my hobby was impractical.
衔接句1——What doubts did others have? How did I feel and react?
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Paragraph 2: Then Mr Smith recommended me to enter the city star photography competition.
衔接句2——What efforts did I make? What was the result? What realization did I have?
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
三.段落续写框架
第一段:然而,家人和同学都认为我的爱好不切实际。
→①__________________→②__________________→③_______________;
第二段:随后史密斯老师推荐我参加市级星空摄影大赛。
→④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。
四.段落续写(150词左右)
However, my family and classmates thought my hobby was impractical.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Then Mr Smith recommended me to enter the city star photography competition.
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参考答案
一、文本分析
1.角色
I(曾经厌学迷茫、后来坚守热爱、勇敢追梦的少年);Mr Smith(细心负责、善于鼓励学生的物理老师);family and classmates(不理解作者爱好、眼光功利的旁观者)
2.视角
第一人称
3. 时空线
I was indifferent to science and distracted in physics class---I picked up a sci-fi book by chance last summer --- I read a sci-fi book accidentally and fell in love with space exploration--- The book inspired me and aroused my passion for science --- I changed my learning attitude and focused on physics class--- I got surprised praise from my physics teacher --- I learned astronomy knowledge and bought a telescope to observe the night sky--- Others doubted my hobby while my teacher supported me
4. 细节问答
Why was the boy uninterested in physics before? :He had little interest in science and always got distracted in physics classes.
What changed the author’s attitude towards science?:A science fiction book about space exploration.
What sentence touched the author deeply?:Exploration is the eternal fuel for human progress.
What changes happened to the author’s study and life?:He concentrated on physics classes and began to explore astronomy in spare time actively.
What did the author do to explore the universe?:He watched science videos, took notes and observed stars with a telescope every night.
What was the physics teacher’s reaction to his changes?:The teacher was surprised and praised him for his devotion.
What conflict will appear in the first paragraph?:His family and classmates disapproved of his star-watching hobby.
What does the story tell us?:Stick to our true passion bravely, and every sincere love will eventually pay off.
5.情节线
我原本对理科毫无兴趣,物理课总走神→偶然翻阅一本科幻太空书籍→偶然读到一本科幻书,被太空探索内容深深吸引→书中名言唤醒我的探索热情,学习态度彻底转变→课后自学天文知识、购置望远镜观测星空→身边人质疑我的爱好,唯有老师认可我→(续写1)家人同学不理解我的爱好,我陷入迷茫但坚守初心→(续写2)老师推荐我参加星空摄影比赛,我收获认可与成长
6.情感线
I:bored and absent-minded→curious→fascinated and inspired→determined→confused and upset→confident and fulfilled(续写)
7. 综合概括(中英各一句)
中文:曾经厌学物理的我,因一本科幻书爱上太空探索,坚持观测星空却遭到身边人质疑,最终在老师帮助下参加摄影比赛,证明了热爱的价值。
英文:Once lacking interest in physics, I fell in love with space exploration because of a sci-fi book. Though doubted by people around me, I stuck to my hobby and finally gained recognition with my teacher’s support.
8. 高分句式梳理(原文原句摘抄)
状语从句:Without hesitation, I started to read it, unaware that this casual choice would quietly reshape my perspective towards the world.
非谓语动词:I tried to identify stars, observe the faint moonlight and then take some photographs of them, attempting to touch the magnificent universe.
宾语从句:What impressed me most was a simple sentence: Exploration is the eternal fuel for human progress.
定语从句:I used to be a boy who had little interest in science, and I often got distracted in physics classes.
9. 本文主题
成长感悟类:热爱可抵岁月漫长,坚守内心的热爱与探索欲,不惧他人质疑,终能遇见更好的自己。
二.情节构造
Paragraph 1: However, my family and classmates thought my hobby was impractical.
衔接句1——What doubts did others have? How did I feel and react?
My parents worried my hobby would affect my academic performance while classmates laughed at my crazy obsession with stars. Feeling upset, I still refused to give up my dream of exploring the universe.
Paragraph 2: Then Mr Smith recommended me to enter the city star photography competition.
衔接句2——What efforts did I make? What was the result? What realization did I have?
I devoted my spare time to taking perfect star photos and finally won the first prize. My efforts were recognized, and I realized that true passion would never be useless.
三.段落续写框架
第一段:然而,家人和同学都认为我的爱好不切实际。
→①家人担心爱好耽误学习,同学嘲笑我不务正业→②我一度陷入自我怀疑,但想起书中话语重新坚定初心→③我坚持利用课余时间观测星空,绝不耽误日常学业;
第二段:随后史密斯老师推荐我参加市级星空摄影大赛。
→①我用心拍摄星空照片,反复筛选打磨参赛作品→②我斩获一等奖,彻底改变了身边人对我的看法→③我深刻领悟探索与热爱的意义,彻底爱上理科学习。
四.高分续写范文(148词,适配高考标准)
However, my family and classmates thought my hobby was impractical. My parents constantly reminded me to focus more on schoolwork instead of staring at stars every night. My classmates even teased me, saying I was wasting time on useless things. For a short while, I was trapped in frustration and doubt. But recalling the sentence from the sci-fi book, I cheered up again. I promised myself to balance study and hobby perfectly and never abandon my love for space exploration.
Then Mr Smith recommended me to enter the city star photography competition. Full of passion, I carefully picked my best photos taken on quiet nights and submitted them. To my great surprise, I won the first prize. Seeing my award-winning works, my family and classmates finally understood and supported my hobby. From this experience, I firmly believe that every exploration starts with simple love, and sticking to our dreams will always lead us to brightness.
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