2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---善意破冰，温暖比邻 导学案

该高中英语高考复习学案聚焦读后续写核心考点，通过文本分析系统梳理角色、视角、时空线、情节线及情感线，构建“文本理解-情节发展-情感表达”的内在逻辑网络，借助问题链和任务驱动引导学生自主推导叙事规律，形成完整的语篇构建认知体系。 亮点在于诊断性细节问答与结构化续写框架设计，如设置“角色动机分析”“情节转折预测”等自测题帮助学生自主诊断文本解读能力，续写框架分步骤引导情节衔接与情感升华，培养语言能力和思维品质。每个模块配有参考答案对比反思表，助力学生个性化提升，教师可通过学生作答精准把握学情，实现因材施教。

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 When I moved into a new neighborhood with my two lovely dogs, people in the neighborhood warned me about my next-door neighbor, Mr. Henderson, a retired man. Everyone in the community thought he was bad-tempered and difficult to get along with, as he disliked noisy pets and would get annoyed over small matters. Having lost his wife years earlier, he had lived alone for a long time, growing quiet, cold and distant from all his neighbors. I soon felt Mr. Henderson’s cold attitude myself after settling down. Whenever I greeted him with a smile, he would merely glance at me and walk off in silence. The only time he approached me was to complain that my dogs’ constant barking ruined his peace. At one point, he even warned me seriously that he would call the police if I failed to keep my dogs under control. Hoping to avoid trouble, I tried hard to keep my dogs quiet and kept them away from his property as much as possible. Even so, a cold, unspoken divide always lay between us. One freezing winter afternoon, overnight snow had covered the whole neighborhood, leaving the sidewalk coated with slippery ice. The bitter cold kept most people indoors, making the streets unusually quiet. I was busy with housework inside my house, while my dogs wandered and played in the fenced yard. All was calm until my dogs suddenly broke into sharp, desperate barks, nothing like their usual playful noise. Shocked at their strange reaction, I rushed to the window to check. I spotted my dogs circling anxiously around a figure on the icy sidewalk. I leaned forward and realized it was Mr. Henderson. He must have slipped on the frozen pavement and taken a hard fall. Completely alone in the biting wind, he lay there lifelessly. Great concern flooded my mind, as I knew he would face serious risks from the freezing weather if no one helped him right away. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Without hesitation, I rushed out to give a hand. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Days later, Mr. Henderson showed up at my doorstep with a bag of dog treats. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 I moved to a new community with two pet dogs--- ___________________________ ---He lived alone and became cold and distant from others --- Mr. Henderson kept distant from me and complained about my noisy dogs--- _______________________--- We kept an awkward cold relationship all the time---Mr. Henderson slipped and fell on icy sidewalk on a freezing snowy day 4. 细节问答 Why did neighbors think Mr. Henderson hard to get along with? ：___________________________________ Why was Mr. Henderson cold and lonely?：_________________________________ What did Mr. Henderson complain about?：________________________________________________ What caused Mr. Henderson’s fall?：__________________________________________ Why did the dogs bark sharply that afternoon?：_____________________________________________ What danger would Mr. Henderson face without timely help?：_________________________________________________ How would the accident change the relationship between us?：________________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________________________ 5．情节线 我带着两只狗狗搬进新小区，邻居都提醒我提防古怪的邻居亨德森先生→______________________________________→老人从不回应我的问候，还多次投诉狗狗吵闹，双方隔阂很深→寒冬大雪过后路面结冰，气温极低，街道空无一人→__________________________________→（续写）我立刻出门救助老人，搀扶他进屋保暖并联系医生，悉心照料→（续写）老人登门道谢，为之前的苛刻态度致歉，放下偏见，冰冷的邻里关系彻底回暖 6．情感线 I：polite and friendly→___________→embarrassed and careful→___________→worried and urgent→___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 温情人际类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Without hesitation, I rushed out to give a hand. 衔接句1——What did I do to help Mr. Henderson? How was he after the fall? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Days later, Mr. Henderson showed up at my doorstep with a bag of dog treats. 衔接句2——What did Mr. Henderson say and do? What change happened to him? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：我毫不犹豫地冲出门前去帮忙。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：几天后，亨德森先生拿着一袋狗狗零食来到我家门口。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写 Without hesitation, I rushed out to give a hand. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Days later, Mr. Henderson showed up at my doorstep with a bag of dog treats. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 I（友善包容、心地善良、不计前嫌的住户）；Mr. Henderson（丧偶独居、外表冷漠内心孤独，后期被善意感化的退休老人）；two pet dogs（警觉忠诚，及时发现老人险情的宠物犬） 2．视角 第________一____人称 3．时空线 I moved to a new community with two pet dogs--- Neighbors warned me about the bad-tempered lonely neighbor ---He lived alone and became cold and distant from others --- Mr. Henderson kept distant from me and complained about my noisy dogs--- He ignored my greetings and warned me seriously --- We kept an awkward cold relationship all the time---Mr. Henderson slipped and fell on icy sidewalk on a freezing snowy day 4. 细节问答 Why did neighbors think Mr. Henderson hard to get along with? ：He was bad-tempered and hated noisy pets, and he cared too much about tiny things. Why was Mr. Henderson cold and lonely?：He lost his wife long ago and had been living alone all these years. What did Mr. Henderson complain about?：He complained that my two dogs’ barking disturbed his quiet life. What caused Mr. Henderson’s fall?：He slipped on the slippery ice-covered sidewalk after heavy snow. Why did the dogs bark sharply that afternoon?：They found Mr. Henderson lying on the ground and sensed his danger. What danger would Mr. Henderson face without timely help?：He would suffer from cold injury or even worse health problems in such freezing weather. How would the accident change the relationship between us?：Our previous cold barrier would be broken, and we would get along well with each other. What does the story tell us?：True kindness can melt indifference and coldness, and mutual understanding helps build warm interpersonal relationships. 5．情节线 我带着两只狗狗搬进新小区，邻居都提醒我提防古怪的邻居亨德森先生→老人早年丧妻常年独居，慢慢变得冷漠孤僻，厌烦宠物噪音→老人从不回应我的问候，还多次投诉狗狗吵闹，双方隔阂很深→寒冬大雪过后路面结冰，气温极低，街道空无一人→狗狗突然反常狂吠，我发现老人结冰路面滑倒倒地，独自身处险境→（续写）我立刻出门救助老人，搀扶他进屋保暖并联系医生，悉心照料→（续写）老人登门道谢，为之前的苛刻态度致歉，放下偏见，冰冷的邻里关系彻底回暖 6．情感线 I：polite and friendly→awkward and uneasy→embarrassed and careful→anxious and frightened→worried and urgent→warm and relieved（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：我和冷漠孤僻、反感宠物的邻居一直相处尴尬，一场大雪天老人意外滑倒，我不计过往出手相救，最终善意融化了彼此的隔阂，修复了冰冷的邻里关系。 English: I had an awkward cold relationship with my lonely and bad-tempered neighbor. However, I saved him without hesitation when he slipped on icy roads. My kindness melted his indifference and bridged the gap between us. 8. 句式 状语从句：Whenever I greeted him with a smile, he would walk away silently. 非谓语动词：The sidewalk coated with slippery ice was extremely dangerous for passers-by. 宾语从句：I knew he would be in great danger without timely help. 定语从句：I spotted my dogs circling anxiously around a figure who lay on the sidewalk. 并列句：The wind was biting cold, and few people chose to go out that day. 9. 本文主题 温情人际类：冷漠往往源于孤独，真诚与善意能够消融人与人之间的隔阂，包容与体谅可以温暖彼此、拉近心灵距离。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Without hesitation, I rushed out to give a hand. 衔接句1——What did I do to help Mr. Henderson? How was he after the fall? I helped him stand up slowly, sent him to my warm house immediately and called the doctor to check his injury. Paragraph 2: Days later, Mr. Henderson showed up at my doorstep with a bag of dog treats. 衔接句2——What did Mr. Henderson say and do? What change happened to him? He thanked me sincerely and apologized for his previous rude attitude. He no longer minded the dogs and became friendly to me. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：我毫不犹豫地冲出门前去帮忙。 →①寒风刺骨，我快步跑到倒地的老人身边查看伤情→②我小心翼翼搀扶老人进屋取暖，及时联系医生前来检查→③老人慢慢恢复意识，向我表达谢意，神情满是愧疚； 第二段：几天后，亨德森先生拿着一袋狗狗零食来到我家门口。 →①他真诚为之前苛刻抱怨的态度向我道歉→②他坦言自己因孤独变得冷漠，不再介意狗狗的叫声→③冰冷隔阂彻底消散，我们成为了和睦友善的邻居。 四.段落续写参考范文 Without hesitation, I rushed out to give a hand. Biting wind swept over my face the moment I stepped outside. I hurried to him and found he could barely move because of the painful fall. I supported him gently and helped him into my warm house right away. After wrapping him with a thick blanket, I called a doctor to examine his injury. While waiting, I made him a cup of hot drink to help him warm up gradually. He kept silent all the time, looking ashamed of his former cold behavior. Days later, Mr. Henderson showed up at my doorstep with a bag of dog treats. He apologized sincerely for his previous rudeness and constant complaints about my dogs. He admitted that loneliness made him become cold and bad-tempered. He also said my dogs actually saved his life by barking to warn me. From then on, he always smiled and greeted me actively. The invisible wall between us disappeared completely, and we got along as warm and close neighbors. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $