2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---明月寄相思，文化藏心间 导学案

该高中英语高考复习学案系统梳理了读后续写题型的核心考点，涵盖文本解读（角色、视角、时空线）、情节发展与情感逻辑分析，通过问题链（如细节问答）和任务单（如情节构造衔接句）引导学生自主构建续写思维框架，体现考点梳理的系统性和层次性。 亮点在于诊断性自测与个性化学习路径设计，开篇设置细节问答（如“Why did Jade dislike festivals?”）诊断文本理解能力，通过情感线分析（Jade从bored到understanding）培养文化意识与思维品质。每个模块配有续写框架填写任务和范文对比反思，帮助学生自主提升语言表达能力，教师可依据学情精准指导，支持因材施教。

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Jade was a 16-year-old Chinese girl who had lived in the US since she was a baby. Her parents had always insisted on celebrating traditional Chinese festivals, no matter how busy their lives were. But Jade had never really understood why. To her, these festivals meant boring preparations, strange-tasting food, and missing out on fun plans with her American friends. Mid-Autumn Festival was approaching. Early that morning, Jade’s mom was up at dawn, bustling around the kitchen. The scent of osmanthus (桂花) cake and braised pork filled the house. On the dining table, there were mooncakes of different flavors. Jade frowned as she glanced at the spread. She had already made plans to have fun with her friends. “Mom, I can’t stay for the Mid-Autumn celebration,” Jade said, with her backpack over her shoulder. “My friends are waiting for me.” Her mom wiped her hands on her apron (围裙) and sat down beside Jade. Instead of scolding her, Mom took out an old photo album from the cabinet. Inside were pictures of her and Dad when they first moved to the US — young, smiling, standing in front of a small apartment with a mooncake in their hands. “This festival isn’t just about mooncakes and lanterns,” Mom said, her voice gentle. “When I was a little girl in Guangzhou, every Mid-Autumn, my family would gather on the rooftop. We’d eat mooncakes, drink chrysanthemum tea, and stare at the full moon. Back then, I thought it was just a fun night. But when I moved here, far away from my parents, the moon became a link to my hometown. No matter where we are, the same moon shines over us and our family in China. Celebrating this festival is our way of keeping that connection alive.” Mom closed the photo album and patted Jade’s hand. “You don’t have to stay if you don’t want to. Go have fun with your friends.” Jade stared at her mom’s face, seeing the faint glimmer of homesickness in her eyes. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Jade hesitated for a moment, and then dropped off her backpack. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ As the moon rose high in the sky, the family sat together on the balcony (阳台). ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 Jade grew up in America and disliked Chinese traditional festivals--- _________________ --- She planned to hang out with friends on Mid-Autumn Festival--- _________________ --- Mom prepared abundant traditional festival food early in the morning--- _________________ --- Mom showed old photos and shared her hometown memories and homesickness--- _________________ --- Mom understood Jade and allowed her to go out freely--- _________________ --- Jade noticed obvious homesickness hidden in her mother’s eyes 4. 细节问答 Why did Jade dislike Chinese traditional festivals? ：___________________________________ What did Mom prepare for Mid-Autumn Festival?：_________________________________ Why did Mom value this traditional festival so much?：________________________________________________ What does the full moon mean for overseas Chinese?：__________________________________________ How did Mom respond to Jade’s refusal?：_____________________________________________ What change will happen to Jade later?：_________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________________________ 5．情节线 女孩杰德自幼在美国长大，一直反感中国传统节日，觉得枯燥无趣→中秋来临，母亲早起精心准备各类中秋美食→杰德执意赴约和朋友外出游玩，不愿在家过节→母亲没有责备，拿出老照片讲述家乡中秋回忆与深埋心底的乡愁→明月是连接游子与故土的纽带，坚守节日是守住文化与乡愁→母亲体谅女儿，主动放行，杰德看见了母亲眼底浓浓的思乡之情→（续写）杰德心软留下，决定陪伴家人共度中秋，主动帮忙准备节日物品→（续写）一家人月下团圆，杰德读懂中秋与乡愁，真正理解中华传统节日的意义 6．情感线 Jade：bored and impatient→___________→confused and stubborn→___________→softened and understanding→___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 文化成长类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Jade hesitated for a moment, and then dropped off her backpack. 衔接句1——Why did Jade change her mind? What did she do to help? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: As the moon rose high in the sky, the family sat together on the balcony (阳台). 衔接句2——What did the family do together? What did Jade realize finally? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：杰德犹豫片刻，放下了背上的书包。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：皓月当空，一家人一同坐在阳台上。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写 Jade hesitated for a moment, and then dropped off her backpack. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ As the moon rose high in the sky, the family sat together on the balcony (阳台). ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 Jade（自幼旅居美国、起初排斥中国传统文化，后期读懂乡愁、认同中华文化的华裔少女）；Jade’s mother（心怀故土、深藏乡愁，坚守传统节日、重视文化根脉的华人母亲）；Jade’s father（陪伴家人、坚守家国情怀的华人父亲） 2．视角 第________三____人称 3．时空线 Jade grew up in America and disliked Chinese traditional festivals--- She thought traditional festivals boring and preferred hanging out with foreign friends --- She planned to hang out with friends on Mid-Autumn Festival--- She was eager to join outdoor activities and looked down upon festival preparations --- Mom prepared abundant traditional festival food early in the morning--- She made mooncakes, osmanthus cakes and traditional Chinese dishes --- Mom showed old photos and shared her hometown memories and homesickness--- She told Jade the full moon connected overseas Chinese and hometown --- Mom understood Jade and allowed her to go out freely--- She never forced Jade to accept traditional culture --- Jade noticed obvious homesickness hidden in her mother’s eyes and changed her mind 4. 细节问答 Why did Jade dislike Chinese traditional festivals? ：She thought festival preparations were boring and festival food tasted strange, and she would miss activities with friends. What did Mom prepare for Mid-Autumn Festival?：She prepared mooncakes, osmanthus cakes, braised pork and other traditional festival food. Why did Mom value this traditional festival so much?：The festival and the full moon connect overseas Chinese with their hometown and carry deep homesickness. What does the full moon mean for overseas Chinese?：It acts as a spiritual link connecting overseas wanderers and their hometown and family. How did Mom respond to Jade’s refusal?：She did not scold Jade and chose to respect her choice freely. What change will happen to Jade later?：She comes to understand her mother’s homesickness and falls in love with Chinese traditional culture gradually. What does the story tell us?：Traditional festivals carry cultural roots and deep homesickness; we should never forget our cultural origin no matter where we go. 5．情节线 女孩杰德自幼在美国长大，一直反感中国传统节日，觉得枯燥无趣→她更愿意和外国朋友玩乐，无法理解父母坚守传统的行为→中秋来临，母亲早起精心准备各类中秋美食，满怀仪式感过节→杰德执意赴约和朋友外出游玩，不愿在家度过无聊的节日→母亲没有责备，拿出老照片讲述家乡中秋回忆与深埋心底的乡愁→一轮明月千里共，明月是连接游子与故土的精神纽带，坚守节日就是守住文化根脉→母亲体谅女儿，主动放行，杰德看见了母亲眼底藏不住的思乡落寞→（续写）杰德内心触动，放弃外出计划留下过节，主动帮忙摆放食物、布置阳台→（续写）一家人月下团圆，品尝美食共赏圆月，杰德彻底读懂乡愁与传统意义，接纳并热爱中华传统文化 6．情感线 Jade：bored and impatient→stubborn and eager→confused and stubborn→softened and touched→understanding and grateful→proud and attached（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：自幼在美国长大的杰德原本排斥中国中秋传统，听完母亲诉说深藏心底的乡愁后，她选择留下陪伴家人，最终读懂中秋明月承载的乡愁与文化根脉，理解了坚守传统节日的意义。 English: Brought up in the US, Jade used to reject Chinese Mid-Autumn Festival. However, touched by her mother’s homesickness, she stayed to celebrate the festival with her family and finally understood the cultural meaning and deep nostalgia behind traditional festivals. 8. 句式 状语从句：No matter where we are, the same moon shines over us and our family in China. 非谓语动词：She stared at her mom’s face, seeing the faint glimmer of homesickness. 宾语从句：Jade had never really understood why her parents stuck to Chinese festivals. 定语从句：The old photos that Mom took reminded her of sweet hometown memories. 并列句：The air was filled with sweet smell of desserts, and the house was full of festival warmth. 9. 本文主题 文化成长类：传统节日承载乡愁与民族文化根脉；身在异乡，明月寄相思，坚守本土文化，铭记来路与故土，是每一位游子永恒的精神归宿。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Jade hesitated for a moment, and then dropped off her backpack. 衔接句1——Why did Jade change her mind? What did she do to help? Moved by her mother’s hidden homesickness, Jade gave up her plan to hang out. She helped her mom arrange festival food and decorate the balcony patiently. Paragraph 2: As the moon rose high in the sky, the family sat together on the balcony (阳台). 衔接句2——What did the family do together? What did Jade realize finally? They enjoyed mooncakes and admired the full moon together. Jade finally understood the meaning of traditional festivals and her mother’s deep nostalgia. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：杰德犹豫片刻，放下了背上的书包。 →①看见母亲眼底的乡愁，杰德内心深受触动，瞬间打消外出念头→②她主动向母亲道歉，坦言自己从前不懂父母的思乡之情→③随后主动帮忙摆盘月饼、布置阳台，用心准备中秋夜晚的团圆时刻； 第二段：皓月当空，一家人一同坐在阳台上。 →①一家人围坐在一起，品尝月饼、共赏一轮圆满明月→②母亲继续讲述家乡趣事，杰德静静聆听，内心满是温暖→③杰德彻底领悟：节日从不是枯燥的仪式，而是游子连接故土、铭记根脉的牵挂。 四.段落续写参考范文 Jade hesitated for a moment, and then dropped off her backpack. The look of homesickness in her mother’s eyes struck her deeply. She felt regretful for being self-centered and ignoring her parents’ feelings all the time. She apologized sincerely to her mom and gave up her appointment with friends without hesitation. After that, she helped her mom arrange mooncakes and tasty dishes on the table, and decorated the balcony gently. She hoped to create a warm and peaceful festival night for her homesick parents. As the moon rose high in the sky, the family sat together on the balcony. The bright full moon hung quietly over the foreign land, warm and shining. They shared delicious mooncakes and listened to Mom’s interesting childhood stories about Mid-Autumn Festival. Staring at the round moon, Jade suddenly understood the true meaning of this festival. It was never boring food or tedious preparations, but a spiritual bond connecting overseas Chinese to their hometown. From that night on, she began to cherish every Chinese traditional festival from the bottom of her heart. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $