2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---不必完美，亦是好父亲 导学案

该高中英语高考复习学案系统梳理了读后续写专题，围绕情节构造、情感发展、人物塑造及句式运用等核心考点，通过角色分析、时空线梳理、细节问答等模块构建知识体系，以问题导向和任务驱动引导学生自主梳理文本逻辑，形成读后续写的整体认知框架。 亮点在于自主诊断与分层指导设计，如通过细节问答自测文本分析能力，借助情节线梳理和续写框架任务引导学生自主构建合理情节，培养思维品质与语言能力。每个模块配有情感线分析和句式运用示例，帮助学生建立个性化写作策略，教师可通过学生续写框架和细节问答反馈精准指导，提升备考实效。

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Mark had a secret: he couldn’t ride a bike. It wasn’t because he never tried. His father taught him one summer when he was seven. He ran alongside him, holding the seat, and shouting “Keep pedalling (踩踏板)!” But Mark’s balance was terrible. He fell into the bushes, and both knees bled. After two weeks of trying, his dad sighed, “Maybe next year.” But that “next year” never came. The childhood shame stayed with him. Then, he grew up and had a family of his own. He never shared the secret with anyone but his wife, Lena. Most of the time, it didn’t matter. When friends invited him on bike trips, he volunteered to drive and bring snacks. When the kids were old enough to learn to ride, Lena offered to teach them. But lately, his twelve-year-old daughter Alice and seven-year-old son Bob were planning the first-ever “Family Bike Adventure.” They had picked a campsite (营地) by the lake and mapped a biking route around it. Every night, they’d argue about who would win the family race. Mark smiled through every conversation, but inside, his stomach tightened. In every other way, Mark was a perfect dad. He never missed a school event and could fix everything in the house. Admitting he couldn’t ride? That was hard. So he made a plan. After the kids went to bed, he slipped out and wheeled a bike to the empty market parking lot to practise. But thirty years after that summer, his body still remembered nothing. The bike seemed to have a mind of its own, and he just couldn’t control it. His legs shook. His hands ached. Sometimes he would crash into the wall. The next day, Alice, a considerate girl, asked about his bruised (淤青的) knees. But he said nothing. After several nights, Lena said to him, “You don’t have to do this. The kids don’t care. No one can do everything.” Mark shook his head. “They think I can. Let me try a little longer.” One night, after he fell off the bike again, he heard a voice. “Dad?” His heart stopped. 注意： 1. 续写词数应为150左右; 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 It was Alice, who had followed him out of curiosity. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That Saturday, when his family went biking, Mark stayed at the campsite happily. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 Mark failed to learn cycling in childhood and kept this secret--- _________________ --- He hid his weakness and avoided all bike-related activities--- _________________ --- His kids planned a family bike trip happily--- _________________ --- Mark felt anxious and afraid of losing kids’ respect--- _________________ --- He secretly practised cycling late at night but failed repeatedly--- _________________ --- His wife persuaded him to stop practicing but he insisted--- _________________ --- His daughter found his secret practice accidentally 4. 细节问答 Why couldn’t Mark ride a bike? ：___________________________________ How did Mark avoid bike activities before?：_________________________________ Why did Mark insist on practising cycling secretly?：________________________________________________ What did Mark do to practise cycling?：__________________________________________ Who knew Mark’s secret all the time?：_____________________________________________ What did Mark worry about most?：_________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________________________ 5．情节线 马克童年学车屡屡摔倒，一直不会骑自行车，心底埋下自卑与羞耻→成年后他对所有人隐瞒这个秘密，刻意避开一切骑行活动→儿女策划全家环湖骑行之旅，满心期待家庭骑行比赛→马克害怕打破完美父亲形象，不敢坦白短板→深夜独自前往停车场偷偷练车，屡次摔倒依旧毫无进步→妻子劝说他不必强求完美，马克依旧想维持在孩子心中无所不能的形象→女儿好奇尾随，意外撞见父亲笨拙练车的画面→（续写）马克尴尬坦白秘密，女儿暖心安慰，告知孩子心中父亲早已足够伟大→（续写）马克坦然放下执念，留守营地打理琐事，一家人各司其职，完美父亲从不需要无所不能，真诚与陪伴才是父爱真谛 6．情感线 Mark：ashamed and inferior→___________→anxious and pressured→___________→embarrassed and upset→___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 亲情成长类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: It was Alice, who had followed him out of curiosity. 衔接句1——How did Mark feel? What did Alice say to comfort him? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: That Saturday, when his family went biking, Mark stayed at the campsite happily. 衔接句2——What did Mark do at the campsite? What change happened to Mark? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：是爱丽丝，她出于好奇悄悄跟了出来。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：周六当天，家人外出骑行时，马克坦然开心地留在营地。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写 It was Alice, who had followed him out of curiosity. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That Saturday, when his family went biking, Mark stayed at the campsite happily. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 Mark（力求完美、渴望维持完美父亲形象，内心自卑敏感，后期学会接纳自身不完美的父亲）；Alice（心思细腻、懂事体贴、理解包容父亲的女儿）；Bob（天真可爱、期待家庭骑行活动的小儿子）；Lena（温柔通透、体谅丈夫、善于开导的妻子） 2．视角 第________三____人称 3．时空线 Mark failed to learn cycling in childhood and kept this secret--- He suffered frequent falls and gave up cycling completely in childhood --- He hid his weakness and avoided all bike-related activities--- He chose to drive rather than ride bikes with others --- His kids planned a family bike trip happily--- The two children looked forward to the family cycling adventure greatly --- Mark felt anxious and afraid of losing kids’ respect--- He feared failing to be a perfect dad in children’s eyes --- He secretly practised cycling late at night but failed repeatedly--- He got bruised knees and still could not balance himself --- His wife persuaded him to stop practicing but he insisted--- He still wanted to live up to children’s expectation --- His daughter found his secret practice accidentally 4. 细节问答 Why couldn’t Mark ride a bike? ：He fell badly many times when learning cycling as a child and never picked up cycling again. How did Mark avoid bike activities before?：He volunteered to drive cars instead of riding bikes with others. Why did Mark insist on practising cycling secretly?：He wanted to keep his perfect image and never wanted to disappoint his children. What did Mark do to practise cycling?：He practiced riding bikes alone in an empty parking lot late at night after kids fell asleep. Who knew Mark’s secret all the time?：Only his wife Lena knew his secret. What did Mark worry about most?：He worried that his children would think he was not perfect any longer. What does the story tell us?：Nobody is perfect. True love lies in acceptance rather than pretending to be flawless. 5．情节线 马克童年学车屡屡摔倒，一直不会骑自行车，心底埋下自卑与羞耻→成年后他对所有人隐瞒这个秘密，刻意避开一切骑行活动，一直充当司机回避骑车→儿女满心欢喜策划全家环湖骑行之旅，期待家庭骑行比赛→马克极度焦虑，害怕自己的短板暴露，毁掉在孩子心中无所不能的完美父亲形象→他瞒着家人深夜独自练车，一次次摔倒，膝盖布满淤青却毫无成效→妻子温柔开导他不必强求完美，没有人可以擅长所有事，马克依旧固执坚持→女儿深夜好奇尾随，撞见父亲狼狈练车的模样→（续写）马克尴尬又羞愧坦白埋藏多年的秘密，女儿暖心安慰，直言父亲的陪伴与付出远比会骑车更重要→（续写）马克彻底放下心理包袱，坦然留守营地，精心准备野餐与篝火，家人骑行归来共享温馨时光，他终于明白：真实不完美的自己，依旧是孩子心中最好的父亲 6．情感线 Mark：ashamed and inferior→pretended and calm→anxious and pressured→frustrated and tired→embarrassed and upset→relieved and peaceful（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：父亲马克因童年阴影一直不会骑车，为守住完美父亲形象偷偷深夜练车，被女儿撞见秘密后，在女儿的安慰下卸下伪装，最终明白不必刻意追求完美，真诚的陪伴就是最好的父爱。 English: Mark hid his inability to ride a bike and practiced secretly to keep a perfect father image. After his daughter found out his secret and comforted him, he finally accepted his imperfection and understood the true meaning of fatherly love. 8. 句式 状语从句：After several nights of hard practice, Mark still failed to balance himself well. 非谓语动词：He slipped out at night, hoping to master cycling before the family trip. 宾语从句：Mark worried that his children would look down upon his weakness. 定语从句：Alice, who was considerate, noticed her father’s bruised knees earlier. 并列句：His legs shook constantly, and his palms ached with continuous practice. 9. 本文主题 亲情成长类：人无完人，不必刻意伪装完美迎合他人；最好的亲情是彼此接纳包容，真诚长久的陪伴远胜于毫无瑕疵的人设。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: It was Alice, who had followed him out of curiosity. 衔接句1——How did Mark feel? What did Alice say to comfort him? Mark felt extremely embarrassed and admitted his secret honestly. Alice comforted him patiently and told him he was always the best dad regardless of the weakness. Paragraph 2: That Saturday, when his family went biking, Mark stayed at the campsite happily. 衔接句2——What did Mark do at the campsite? What change happened to Mark? Mark prepared delicious food and tidy campsite for his family. He let go of his pressure and realized imperfection never ruined his image as a father. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：是爱丽丝，她出于好奇悄悄跟了出来。 →①马克瞬间窘迫万分，手足无措地停下练车，内心满是羞愧→②他坦然说出埋藏三十年的秘密，诉说自己害怕让孩子失望的心事→③女儿温柔安抚父亲，坦言父亲日常的陪伴早已无可替代； 第二段：周六当天，家人外出骑行时，马克坦然开心地留在营地。 →①马克卸下所有心理包袱，安心打理营地、准备丰盛野餐→②家人尽兴骑行归来，围着马克分享沿途趣事，毫无失望情绪→③马克彻底释然，懂得接纳不完美，真实的自己就足够伟大。 四.段落续写参考范文 It was Alice, who had followed him out of curiosity. Caught red-handed, Mark froze instantly, face burning with embarrassment. He had no choice but to admit his long-kept secret, explaining his childhood failure and inner pressure. To his surprise, Alice walked up and hugged him gently. She told him firmly that he was still the greatest dad in her heart. He was always there for every important moment and fixed all broken things at home. Being unable to ride a bike would never change her love and respect for him. That Saturday, when his family went biking, Mark stayed at the campsite happily. He enjoyed his time peacefully, preparing tasty snacks and building a warm campfire for his family. When the kids returned excitedly, they shared every wonderful moment of the bike trip with him vividly. Free from heavy pressure, Mark felt extremely relaxed. It suddenly dawned on him that no one needed to be perfect. His sincere company and endless love were enough to make him a qualified and beloved father. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $