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暑假作业13应用文写作
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应用文写作常见的几种类型是邮件(书信)、演讲稿、通知和欢迎词等。根据不同的写作目的,可将邮件(书
信)细分为邀请类、致歉类、感谢类、求助类、建议类、推荐类、介绍类、申请类、投诉类等。北京高考英
语近几年的应用文写作以邮件(书信)为主,其中,建议类考查次数最多、邀请类次之。
备考策略
1.以读促写:增加语言输入,促进语言输出
平时多阅读英语报刊,扩大课外阅读量。在阅读的过程中积累写作词汇、地道的表达和国内外文化知识。平
时可以记英语日记或撰写读书笔记。
2.养成良好的写作习惯,通过拓展思维挑战高分写作
(1)全面审题。清楚题目要求是成功写作的起点。
(2)分析写作内容,搭建文章的内容框架。列好提纲,写作时可避免跑题,同时,可以预先设计好需要详写和略写
的内容,使文章层次清晰。
(3)要运用分析、判断、推理思维,表达出与文章切题的情感态度。除了全面和清楚地表达要点,还要思考内
容背后所蕴含的思想和精神。
3.培养模仿意识,实现从文章仿写到独立输出的飞跃
(1)研读和背诵真题中应用文写作的范文,模仿范文中的经典搭配、地道表达、句子间的衔接方式及文章的
结构。
(②)把自己写的文章与范文进行对比,总结自己常用的错误搭配和不地道表达并改正,学会运用范文中的巧妙
表达。
3)做好独立写作计划,保证常考的应用文类型都练到,对不同类型的应用文的相关的词汇、地道表达及文章
结构熟稔于心。
4.了解高考英语应用文写作的评分原则及标准
评分原则及标准为学生提供了明确的英语写作方向,学生写作时可以根据评分级别设置自己的写作目标,找
到写作中的不足,有的放矢地提升写作技巧和水平。根据评分原则及标准,从内容、语言和结构这些方面升
级写作,例如,运用不同类型的应用文的高频、高级写作词汇,写作时逻辑清晰、连贯等。
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(24-25高二下·吉林长春·期末)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Chris刚结束北京之旅,参观了紫禁城(The
Forbidden City)后仍意犹未尽,发邮件问除了紫禁城,中国还有什么能展现独特文化魅力的地方?请你用
英文回复邮件,推荐另一个能代表中国文化特色的景点。
内容包括:1.简要介绍该景点:
2.说明推荐的理由:
3.表达祝愿。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答:
Dear Chris,
Yours,
Li Hua
(2)
(24-25高二下·黑龙江哈尔滨期末)假定你是李华,参加了学校英语社团的“时空穿越者”活动,今天是
2026年7月15日,你已顺利结束高考并填报完理想志愿,现有机会通过时空邮箱和一年前的自己对话,
请你写一封英语邮件,内容包括:
1.对自己未来一年的建议:
2.对自己的寄语。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
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(22-23高二下·山东潍坊期末)假定你是李华,你校下月将组织高二学生参观中国航空工业历史博物馆
(Chinese aviation history museum),请你写一封邮件,邀请英国朋友Georget:参加,内容包括:
1集合地点、出发时间、出行方式:
2.参观内容:
3.参观时的注意事项。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右:
2请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Georget,
Yours,
Li Hua
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(23-24高二下山西忻州期末)假定你是李华。你对历史课上的一个关于美国的历史事件不甚理解,故求
助于来自美国的交换生To,他给你进行了解答。请你给他写一封邮件,表示感谢,内容包括:
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1.回顾Tom对你的帮助:
2.你的感受。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom.
Yours,
Li Hua
(5)
(24-25高二下·贵州六盘水期末)假设你是李华,你在完成外教Johnson布置的作业时遇到困难,导致未
能按时提交(原定截止日期:7月10日)。请给外教写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1.道歉并说明原因;
2.协商补救措施。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Johnson.
Yours sincerely,
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(24-25高二下·河南南阳·期末)假定你是李华,你的加拿大朋友Richard计划暑假和家人来你居住的城市
旅游,他想提前了解一下情况。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.城市的基本情况(位置、景点等):
2.期待他们的到来。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右:
2请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Richard,
Yours,
LiHua
(2)
(25-26高二下·天津蓟州期中)假设你是晨光中学学生李津。在英语课的“畅想未来”主题讨论中,老师
请同学们围绕“A Day in My Future Home'这一话题,分享你的设想。请你选择以下l-2个方面,用英语写
篇发言稿:
Home&Entertainment(家居与娱乐)
Learning&Studying(学习)
Eating&Health(饮食与健康)
Socialising(社交)
内容包括:
(1)简单描述在未来家庭生活中可能发生的变化:
(2)对比这些变化与你当前日常生活的不同;
(3)简要说明这些变化对你个人可能带来的意义。
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注意:
(1)词数不少于100:
(2)可以适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
A Day in My Future Home
Good morning,I'd like to share my vision of a day in my future home.
That's all for my sharing.Thank you!
(3)
(2425高二下湖北荆门期末)假设你是李华,将参加学校举办的“科技与教育”主题演讲比赛,请以
“The Impacts of Deepseek on Our Learning'为题写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:
(1)积极影响;
(2)不利方面;
3)个人感受。
注意:①)写作词数应为80个左右。开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数:
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
The Impacts of Deepseek on Our Learning
Dear teachers and classmates,
My name is Li Hua.
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Thank you for listening!
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(23-24高二下·江苏苏州期末)假定你是李华,下周你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你围绕“Learning for
lfe”写一篇演讲稿参赛,内容包括:
1.终身学习的重要性:2.如何做到终身学习:3.你的呼吁。
注意:
1.词数80左右:
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯:
3.开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
Good morning,everyone!I'm Li Hua.
Thanks for your listening!
(5)
(24-25高二下·天津南开·期末)2025年上海合作组织峰会即将在天津举行。假设你是李津,作为天津的
名高中生,请你以“Youth Vision for a Shared Future”(青年视角,共创未来)为题,写一封倡议书,表
达你对国际合作与青年责任的理解。内容包括:
(1)结合所给图表分析上合峰会在天津举办的原因;
(②)分析上合会议对天津发展的积极影响(如吸引更多游客、促进经济发展等):
(3)号召青少年积极为上合峰会贡献自己的力量(如志愿服务、文化交流等)。
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天津与上合组织成员国进出口额
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420
400
380
360
2023
2024
一进出口额/亿元
注意:
(1)词数100以上:
(②)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
上海合作组织峰会Shanghai Cooperation Organization Summit(简称SCO Summit)
成员国member countries
进出口import and export
Youth Vision for a Shared Future
My fellow students,
LiJin
脑洞实验室创新拓展
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(23-24高二下·贵州六盘水期末)假定你是李华,对读后续写这一题型感到困惑。请你给外教M.Smih
写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)写信目的:
(2)具体问题或困惑。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右:
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇:读后续写continuation writing
Dear Smith,
Yours,
Li Hua
(2)
(24-25高二下·安徽黄山期末)假定你是李华,你的美国笔友i的发来邮件,提及许多同学使用AI完
成作业,并询问你对此现象的看法。请你写一封回信,内容包括:
1你的观点及理由:
2.你的建议。
注意:
1.词数80左右:
2开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Emily
Glad to hear from you!You mentioned that many of your classmates use AI to do their homework
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(24-25高二下浙江嘉兴·期末)假定你是一名旅游博主,近期网上正在讨论“Travel:Exploration or
Relaxation??'这一话题,请你写一篇英文博客,内容包括:
(1)你的观点:
(2)给旅行者的建议。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右:
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Travel:Exploration or Relaxation?
(4)
(24-25高二下四川绵阳·期末)假定你是李华,在上周的高二年级读后续写竞赛中,你的得分为14分
(满分25分),你觉得此分数偏低不太合理。请你给外教评委Rym用英语写一份邮件,内容包括:
1.说明问题:
2.给出理由。
注意
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1.写作词数应为80个左右:
2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯:
参考词汇:读后续写continuation writing
Dear Ryan,
Yours,
Li Hua
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(24-25高二下·上海浦东新期末)Directions::Write an English composition in 120-l50 words according to the
instructions given below in Chinese.
你的英国笔友Jny计划今年暑假与父母一同来中国旅游。为期一周的中国之行中,他们将在上海停留一
天。Jeny的父亲对中国历史比较感兴趣,她的母亲对中式建筑饶有兴致,而Jeny本人则对中华美食
情。有独钟。她希望你能为他们一家设计一个旅行安排,满足三人的各自需求。你的回信需包含以下内
容:
1.具体的行程安排(可以从参观景点、游览顺序、食宿推荐等方面展开);
2.如此安排的理由。
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暑假作业13 应用文写作
应用文写作常见的几种类型是邮件(书信)、演讲稿、通知和欢迎词等。根据不同的写作目的,可将邮件(书信)细分为邀请类、致歉类、感谢类、求助类、建议类、推荐类、介绍类、申请类、投诉类等。北京高考英语近几年的应用文写作以邮件(书信)为主,其中,建议类考查次数最多、邀请类次之。
备考策略
1. 以读促写;增加语言输入,促进语言输出
平时多阅读英语报刊,扩大课外阅读量。在阅读的过程中积累写作词汇、地道的表达和国内外文化知识。平时可以记英语日记或撰写读书笔记。
2. 养成良好的写作习惯,通过拓展思维挑战高分写作
(1)全面审题。清楚题目要求是成功写作的起点。
(2)分析写作内容,搭建文章的内容框架。列好提纲,写作时可避免跑题,同时,可以预先设计好需要详写和略写的内容,使文章层次清晰。
(3)要运用分析、判断、推理思维,表达出与文章切题的情感态度。除了全面和清楚地表达要点,还要思考内容背后所蕴含的思想和精神。
3. 培养模仿意识,实现从文章仿写到独立输出的飞跃
(1)研读和背诵真题中应用文写作的范文,模仿范文中的经典搭配、地道表达、句子间的衔接方式及文章的结构。
(2)把自己写的文章与范文进行对比,总结自己常用的错误搭配和不地道表达并改正,学会运用范文中的巧妙表达。
(3)做好独立写作计划,保证常考的应用文类型都练到,对不同类型的应用文的相关的词汇、地道表达及文章结构熟稔于心。
4. 了解高考英语应用文写作的评分原则及标准
评分原则及标准为学生提供了明确的英语写作方向,学生写作时可以根据评分级别设置自己的写作目标,找到写作中的不足,有的放矢地提升写作技巧和水平。根据评分原则及标准,从内容、语言和结构这些方面升级写作,例如,运用不同类型的应用文的高频、高级写作词汇,写作时逻辑清晰、连贯等。
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(24-25高二下·吉林长春·期末)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Chris刚结束北京之旅,参观了紫禁城(The Forbidden City)后仍意犹未尽,发邮件问除了紫禁城,中国还有什么能展现独特文化魅力的地方?请你用英文回复邮件,推荐另一个能代表中国文化特色的景点。
内容包括:1. 简要介绍该景点:
2. 说明推荐的理由:
3. 表达祝愿。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答:
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Chris,
I’m delighted you enjoyed the Forbidden City! For a completely different cultural experience, I highly recommend the Terracotta Warriors in Xi’an. This UNESCO World Heritage site features thousands of life-sized clay soldiers guarding China’s first emperor since 210 BCE.
Unlike the Forbidden City’s imperial architecture, these remarkable figures showcase ancient China’s military might and artistic sophistication. Each warrior’s unique facial expression reveals incredible craftsmanship. The site’s archaeological significance makes it one of China’s most valuable cultural treasures.
I’m certain you’ll be amazed by this historical wonder. Wishing you another fascinating cultural discovery in China!
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Chris,
How wonderful that you appreciated the Forbidden City! For a contrasting cultural perspective, may I suggest the Classical Gardens of Suzhou? These exquisite UNESCO-listed gardens, dating back to the 6th century, embody China’s traditional scholar aesthetics.
While the Forbidden City represents imperial power, Suzhou gardens demonstrate the Chinese philosophy of harmony between man and nature. Their delicate pavilions, winding paths and carefully arranged rocks create peaceful retreats that inspired poets and painters for centuries.
I’m sure you’ll find their timeless beauty enchanting. Wishing you further wonderful explorations in China!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给英国笔友Chris回一封邮件,推荐另一个能代表中国文化特色的景点,介绍景点、说明推荐理由并表达祝愿。
【详解】(范文1)1.词汇积累
高兴的:delighted → pleased
推荐:recommend → suggest
显著的:remarkable → extraordinary
展示:showcase→ exhibit
2.句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:I’m delighted you enjoyed the Forbidden City!
拓展句:I’m delighted, because you enjoyed the Forbidden City!
【点睛】【高分句型1】Heritage site features thousands of life-sized clay soldiers guarding China’s first emperor since 210 BCE.(运用了现在分词guarding作定语)
【高分句型2】I’m certain you’ll be amazed by this historical wonder.(运用了省略引导词that的宾语从句)
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(24-25高二下·黑龙江哈尔滨·期末)假定你是李华,参加了学校英语社团的“时空穿越者”活动,今天是2026年7月15日,你已顺利结束高考并填报完理想志愿,现有机会通过时空邮箱和一年前的自己对话,请你写一封英语邮件,内容包括:
1. 对自己未来一年的建议;
2. 对自己的寄语。
注意:1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dearest me,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dearest me,
I hope this email finds you well. I’m future you one year later who has just passed the college entrance examination and applied for my ideal major. As a more mature you, I would like to offer some personal suggestions.
To begin with, the course of progress is anything but sweet and smooth. Ahead lie obstacles to overcome and bravery to perfect your academic performance. Additionally, growth is more than mere focus on scores. I sincerely advise you to put equal care to build up your health and enrich your mind with invaluable and unique experience every single day.
It is diligence and optimism that can bridge the gap between the present and your rosy future dreams. I am looking forward to seeing a better version of you in 2026!
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以一年后自己的身份给现在的自己写一封邮件表达建议和寄语。
【详解】1.词汇积累
提供:offer→provide
首先:to begin with→first of all
诚挚地:sincerely→genuinely
无价的:invaluable→ priceless
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:I sincerely advise you to put equal care to build up your health and enrich your mind with invaluable and unique experience every single day.
拓展句:I sincerely advise that you should put equal care to build up your health and enrich your mind with invaluable and unique experience every single day.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 I’m future you one year later who has just passed the college entrance examination and applied for my ideal major.(运用了who引导的限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】 It is diligence and optimism that can bridge the gap between the present and your rosy future dreams.(运用了it is+被强调部分+that……构成的强调句)
(3)
(22-23高二下·山东潍坊·期末)假定你是李华,你校下月将组织高二学生参观中国航空工业历史博物馆(Chinese aviation history museum),请你写一封邮件,邀请英国朋友Georget参加,内容包括:
1.集合地点、出发时间、出行方式;
2.参观内容;
3.参观时的注意事项。
注意:1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Georget,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Georget,
It is a great privilege for me to invite you to take part in the visit to Chinese aviation history museum. The relevant contents are as follows.
As is scheduled, we will gather at the school gate at 8 a.m. on the first Sunday of next month by school bus. Not only can we visit all kinds of aircraft models but also learn about the development of China’s space industry. As for matters needing attention, it is demanded that no pictures should be taken and we’d better not make loud noise.
Hope you won’t miss the joyful activity. Your attendance is greatly expected.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。假定你是李华,你校下月将组织高二学生参观中国航空工业历史博物馆(Chinese aviation history museum),请你写一封邮件,邀请英国朋友Georget参观中国航空工业历史博物馆,内容包括:1.集合地点、出发时间、出行方式;2.参观内容;3.参观时的注意事项。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
荣幸:privilege→honour
参加:take part in→participate in
相关的:relevant→related
各种各样的:all kinds of→varieties of
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:It is a great privilege for me to invite you to take part in the visit to Chinese aviation history museum.
拓展句:It is a great privilege for me to invite you to take part in the visit that is about Chinese aviation history museum.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Not only can we visit all kinds of aircraft models but also learn about the development of China’s space industry. (运用了部分倒装)
【高分句型2】As for matters needing attention, it is demanded that no pictures should be taken and we’d better not make loud noise. (运用了that引导的主语从句)
(4)
(23-24高二下·山西忻州·期末)假定你是李华。你对历史课上的一个关于美国的历史事件不甚理解,故求助于来自美国的交换生Tom,他给你进行了解答。请你给他写一封邮件,表示感谢,内容包括:
1. 回顾Tom对你的帮助;
2. 你的感受。
注意: 1. 写作词数应为80个左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Tom.
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________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom,
I can’t wait to express my gratitude to you for your timely help. Feeling very confused about an event in American history in my history class last week, I was worried about how to finish the relevant homework. So I turned to you for help. You told me every detail of this historical event and compared it to a similar event in Chinese history. Your vivid analysis made me immediately understand and remember the knowledge, which also gave me a lot of inspiration to finish the homework better.
Thanks again for your help
Yours
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给来自美国的交换生Tom写一封邮件,感谢他帮助解答了一个有关美国历史事件的问题。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
感激:gratitude→appreciation
困惑的:confused→bewildered
担心:be worried about→be concerned about
理解:understand→have an understanding of
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Feeling very confused about an event in American history in my history class last week, I was worried about how to finish the relevant homework.
拓展句:Feeling very confused about an event which happened in American history in my history class last week, I was worried about how to finish the relevant homework.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Feeling very confused about an event in American history in my history class last week, I was worried about how to finish the relevant homework.(运用了现在分词作状语,特殊疑问词+不定式作宾语)
【高分句型2】Your vivid analysis made me immediately understand and remember the knowledge, which also gave me a lot of inspiration to finish the homework better. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
(5)
(24-25高二下·贵州六盘水·期末)假设你是李华,你在完成外教Johnson布置的作业时遇到困难,导致未能按时提交(原定截止日期:7月10日)。请给外教写一封电子邮件,内容包括:
1. 道歉并说明原因;
2. 协商补救措施。
注意:
1. 写作词数应为80左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Johnson,
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________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Johnson,
I’m writing to express my sincere apologies for not submitting the assignment on time, as the original deadline was July 10th. I deeply regret any inconvenience this may have caused you.
The reason for the delay is that I faced some unexpected challenges while completing the assignment. These problems were more complex than I initially thought. Despite my best efforts, I was unable to finish it by the deadline.
Could I please submit the assignment until July 15th? I assure you that I will work diligently to ensure that it is completed to the highest standard. Thank you for your understanding and consideration.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文中的电子邮件写作。要求考生以李华的身份给外教Johnson写邮件,就未按时提交作业进行道歉并协商补救措施。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
意外的:unexpected → unforeseen
努力:effort → endeavor
保证:assure → guarantee
标准:standard → criterion
理解:understanding → empathy
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Despite my best efforts, I was unable to finish it by the deadline.
拓展句:Although I made best efforts, I was unable to finish it by the deadline.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I deeply regret any inconvenience this may have caused you. (运用了省略了关系代词that的定语从句)
【高分句型2】The reason for the delay is that I faced some unexpected challenges while completing the assignment. (运用了that引导的表语从句和while引导的时间状语从句的省略)
(1)
(24-25高二下·河南南阳·期末)假定你是李华,你的加拿大朋友Richard计划暑假和家人来你居住的城市旅游,他想提前了解一下情况。请你给他写一封邮件,内容包括:
1.城市的基本情况(位置、景点等);
2.期待他们的到来。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Richard,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Richard,
I’m excited that you and your family are visiting this summer. My city in southern China mixes modern life with history, perfect for family trips. Summer here are warm but the weather is changeable, so taking light clothes and umbrellas is wise.
For top spots, I recommend Green Lake Park(great for family boat rides), the 500-year-old Wisdom Temple with beautiful gardens, and the Night Market with tasty local foods like dumplings. The City Museum has fun activities, too.
Looking forward to seeing you and your family. Ask me anything.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给加拿大朋友Richard写一封邮件,向他介绍自己居住城市的基本情况并期待Richard一家的到来。
【详解】1.词汇积累
兴奋的:excited→thrilled
参观:visit→pay a visit
明智的:wise→advisable
美味的:tasty→delicious
2.句式拓展
同义句
原句:Summer here are warm but the weather is changeable, so taking light clothes and umbrellas is wise.
拓展句:Summer here are warm but the weather is so changeable that taking light clothes and umbrellas is wise.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m excited that you and your family are visiting this summer.(运用了that引导的宾语从句)
【高分句型2】My city in southern China mixes modern life with history, perfect for family trips.(运用了形容词作状语)
(2)
(25-26高二下·天津蓟州·期中)假设你是晨光中学学生李津。在英语课的“畅想未来”主题讨论中,老师请同学们围绕“A Day in My Future Home”这一话题,分享你的设想。请你选择以下1-2个方面,用英语写一篇发言稿:
Home & Entertainment(家居与娱乐) Learning & Studying(学习)
Eating & Health(饮食与健康) Socialising(社交)
内容包括:
(1)简单描述在未来家庭生活中可能发生的变化;
(2)对比这些变化与你当前日常生活的不同;
(3)简要说明这些变化对你个人可能带来的意义。
注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可以适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
A Day in My Future Home
Good morning, I’d like to share my vision of a day in my future home.
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That’s all for my sharing. Thank you!
【答案】范文
A Day in My Future Home
Good morning, I’d like to share my vision of a day in my future home.
First, my future home will be very smart. For example, devices will control the lights and temperature automatically to make me feel comfortable. For entertainment, I can watch movies with VR, which will make me feel like I am inside the movie. This is very different from my life now, where I have to turn things on and off by myself and I only have a regular TV or phone.
Second, my kitchen will help me eat better. A smart assistant will suggest healthy meals based on my needs and cook them quickly. In contrast, I often eat unhealthy fast food now because I am too busy and have no time to cook.
In my opinion, these changes will make my life much easier and healthier. I will have more time to relax and do what I love. A future home like this is not just about technology; it is about helping me live a happier life.
That’s all for my sharing. Thank you!
【导语】要求考生以李津的身份,围绕“A Day in My Future Home”话题,从指定方面中选取一到两个,用英语写一篇发言稿,描述未来家庭生活的变化并对比当下,说明其个人意义。
【详解】1.词汇积累
智能的:smart → intelligent
娱乐:entertainment → amusement
建议:suggest→ propose
忙碌的:busy→ occupied
2.句式拓展
合并句子
原句:First, my future home will be very smart. For example, devices will control the lights and temperature automatically to make me feel comfortable.
拓展句:First, my future home will be very smart, in which devices will control the lights and temperature automatically to make me feel comfortable.
【点睛】【高分句型1】For entertainment, I can watch movies with VR, which will make me feel like I am inside the movie. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】In contrast, I often eat unhealthy fast food now because I am too busy and have no time to cook. (运用了because引导的原因状语从句)
(3)
(24-25高二下·湖北荆门·期末)假设你是李华,将参加学校举办的“科技与教育”主题演讲比赛,请以“The Impacts of Deepseek on Our Learning”为题写一篇演讲稿,内容包括:
(1)积极影响;
(2)不利方面;
(3)个人感受。
注意:(1)写作词数应为80个左右。开头结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
The Impacts of Deepseek on Our Learning
Dear teachers and classmates,
My name is Li Hua.
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Thank you for listening!
【答案】
The Impacts of DeepSeek on Our Learning
Dear teachers and classmates:
My name is Li Hua. It’s an honour to make a speech titled “The Impacts of DeepSeek on Our Learning”. With the development of technology, DeepSeek has become an important part of our learning, bringing both opportunities and challenges.
On the one hand, not only does it guide us step by step to find solutions, but also enriches our understanding with diverse sources, thus tailoring explanations to our needs. On the other hand, depending on it too much may weaken our independent and critical thinking. Excessive information might make it difficult for us to stay focused.
Personally, I view DeepSeek as a double-edged sword. Only by balancing technology with our own efforts can we truly grow.
Thank you for listening!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“The Impacts of Deepseek on Our Learning”为主题,写一篇演讲稿,参加演讲比赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
发表演讲:make a speech→deliver a speech
重要的:important→crucial
机会:opportunity→chance
各种各样的:diverse→various
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:With the development of technology, DeepSeek has become an important part of our learning, bringing both opportunities and challenges.
拓展句:With the development of technology, DeepSeek, which has become an important part of our learning, is bringing both opportunities and challenges.
【点睛】【高分句型1】On the one hand, not only does it guide us step by step to find solutions, but also enriches our understanding with diverse sources, thus tailoring explanations to our needs.(运用了not only置于句首引出的部分倒装)
【高分句型2】Only by balancing technology with our own efforts can we truly grow.(运用了Only+状语置于句首引出的部分倒装)
(4)
(23-24高二下·江苏苏州·期末)假定你是李华,下周你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你围绕“Learning for life”写一篇演讲稿参赛,内容包括:
1.终身学习的重要性;2.如何做到终身学习;3.你的呼吁。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
Good morning, everyone! I’m Li Hua.
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Thanks for your listening!
【答案】
Good morning, everyone! I’m Li Hua. Today I’d like to talk about “”Learning for Life.” In today’s fast-paced world, lifelong learning is vital. It empowers us to keep up with change, enhancing personal growth and career prospects.
To achieve this, we must cultivate a thirst for knowledge. Read widely, explore diverse fields, and embrace online courses. Setting goals and holding ourselves accountable are key. Additionally, we should practice active listening and engage in discussions, which can foster deeper understanding. So I urge you all to make lifelong learning a lifestyle. Let’s not be satisfied with what we know. Remember, it’s not just about learning to live, but living to learn. Let’s embark on this thrilling quest together, for the joy of learning knows no limits.
Thanks for your listening!
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“Learning for life”为题写一篇演讲稿,参加学校举办的英语演讲比赛。
【详解】1.词汇积累
重要的:vital→important
除此之外:additionally→besides
参与:engage in→take part in
令人兴奋的:thrilling→exciting
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:It empowers us to keep up with change, enhancing personal growth and career prospects.
拓展句:It empowers us to keep up with change, which in turn enhances our personal growth and career prospects.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Additionally, we should practice active listening and engage in discussions, which can foster deeper understanding. (运用了which引导的非限定性定语从句)
【高分句型2】Let’s not be satisfied with what we know.(运用了what引导的宾语从句)
(5)
(24-25高二下·天津南开·期末)2025年上海合作组织峰会即将在天津举行。假设你是李津,作为天津的一名高中生,请你以“Youth Vision for a Shared Future”(青年视角,共创未来)为题,写一封倡议书,表达你对国际合作与青年责任的理解。内容包括:
(1) 结合所给图表分析上合峰会在天津举办的原因;
(2) 分析上合会议对天津发展的积极影响(如吸引更多游客、促进经济发展等);
(3) 号召青少年积极为上合峰会贡献自己的力量(如志愿服务、文化交流等)。
注意:
(1) 词数100以上;
(2) 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3) 开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:
上海合作组织峰会Shanghai Cooperation Organization Summit (简称SCO Summit)
成员国member countries
进出口import and export
Youth Vision for a Shared Future
My fellow students,
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Li Jin
【答案】One possible version:
Youth Vision for a Shared Future
My fellow students,
With the 2025 SCO Summit approaching in Tianjin, we stand at a pivotal moment for international cooperation. The selection of our city as the host reflects its growing economic ties with SCO member countries, which is evidenced by the surge in import-export volume from 41 billion yuan in 2023 to over 47 billion yuan in 2024. This summit will further boost Tianjin’s global profile, attracting tourists and stimulating economic growth through enhanced trade and cultural exchanges.
As youth, we must actively contribute. By volunteering as translators or guides, organizing multicultural events, or promoting sustainable practices, we can bridge cultures and shape a shared future. Let’s embrace this opportunity to demonstrate Tianjin’s vitality and our generation’s commitment to global solidarity!
Li Jin
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。题目要求学生以李津的身份,为即将在天津举行的2025年上海合作组织峰会写一封倡议书,需首先根据所给图表分析上合峰会在天津举办的原因,再指出会议举办对本地发展的积极影响,最后号召青少年为会议贡献力量。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
关键的:pivotal→critical/crucial
联系:tie→bond/connection
猛增:surge→explosion/upsurge
吸引:attract→appeal to
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:With the 2025 SCO Summit approaching in Tianjin, we stand at a pivotal moment for international cooperation.
拓展句:As the 2025 SCO Summit approaches in Tianjin, we stand at a pivotal moment for international cooperation.
【点睛】[高分句型1] The selection of our city as the host reflects its growing economic ties with SCO member countries, which is evidenced by the surge in import-export volume from 41 billion yuan in 2023 to over 47 billion yuan in 2024. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2] This summit will further boost Tianjin’s global profile, attracting tourists and stimulating economic growth through enhanced trade and cultural exchanges. (运用了现在分词作状语)
(1)
(23-24高二下·贵州六盘水·期末)假定你是李华,对读后续写这一题型感到困惑。请你给外教Mr. Smith写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)写信目的;
(2)具体问题或困惑。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
参考词汇:读后续写 continuation writing
Dear Smith,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Smith,
I hope this message finds you well. As I prepare to enter my final year of high school, I’ve encountered challenges with the continuation writing task in English. Specifically, I find myself struggling to come up with reasonable plots and accurate expressions. Could you please provide me with advice on how to develop coherent and engaging story-lines? Additionally, I have no idea how to ensure that my continuation writing remains in line with the original text. Your guidance on these aspects would be greatly appreciated.
I eagerly anticipate your insights and appreciate any assistance you can offer.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份,就对读后续写这一题型感到困惑一事,给外教Mr. Smith写一封邮件求助。
【详解】词汇积累
准备:prepare to → get ready to
困惑:puzzling → confusing
合理的:reasonable → rational
指导:guidance → direction
句式拓展
同义句改写
原句:Your guidance on these aspects would be greatly appreciated.
拓展句:Your instruction on these matters would be immensely valued.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Specifically, I find myself struggling to come up with reasonable plots and accurate expressions.(使用了现在分词做宾补)
【高分句型2】Additionally, I have no idea how to ensure that my continuation writing remains in line with the original text.(使用了连词that连接的宾语从句)
(2)
(24-25高二下·安徽黄山·期末)假定你是李华,你的美国笔友Emily发来邮件,提及许多同学使用AI完成作业,并询问你对此现象的看法。请你写一封回信,内容包括:
1.你的观点及理由;
2.你的建议。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Emily,
Glad to hear from you! You mentioned that many of your classmates use AI to do their homework.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Emily,
Glad to hear from you! You mentioned that many of your classmates use AI to do their homework.
In my opinion, using AI to finish homework entirely is unwise. Homework is designed to help us practice skills and deepen understanding. Relying on AI directly means losing opportunities to think independently, which will affect our ability to solve problems on our own in the long run.
But AI can be a good helper if used properly. We can use it to clarify confusing points or check our answers. This way, it supports our learning instead of replacing our efforts. After all, true learning comes from our own thinking.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书信写作属于应用文。要求考生给美国笔友Emily写回信,回应她关于许多同学使用AI完成作业的询问,阐述自己的观点及理由,并给出建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
完全地:entirely→completely
依靠:rely on→depend on
长期:in the long run→over the long term
恰当的:properly→appropriately
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Homework is designed to help us practice skills and deepen understanding.
拓展句:Since homework is designed to help us practice skills and deepen understanding, relying on AI entirely is counterproductive.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Relying on AI directly means losing opportunities to think independently, which will affect our ability to solve problems on our own in the long run.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】We can use it to clarify confusing points or check our answers.(运用了不定式作目的状语)
(3)
(24-25高二下·浙江嘉兴·期末)假定你是一名旅游博主,近期网上正在讨论“Travel: Exploration or Relaxation?”这一话题,请你写一篇英文博客,内容包括:
(1)你的观点;
(2)给旅行者的建议。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Travel: Exploration or Relaxation?
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________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Version 1:
Travel: Exploration or Relaxation?
Travel is a mix of exploration and relaxation. Exploring new places lets us experience different cultures and see amazing things. But relaxation is equally important. Taking time to rest and enjoy peaceful moments can make travel more fun.
My suggestion is to find a balance. Plan some exciting activities but leave time for leisure. Maybe spend a quiet morning or take a peaceful walk. Travel should be about creating meaningful memories, not just ticking off destinations.
So, pack your curiosity and a desire to relax. The magic of travel lies in combining adventure with calm.
Version 2:
Travel: Exploration or Relaxation?
Travel isn’t about picking sides. It’s most fulfilling when blending both. Exploration satiates curiosity, thrusting us into unfamiliar culture and terrain. Yet, relaxation — reveling in a quiet café or basking on a beach — prevents burnout.
My advice? Slow down and unwind. Allow room for serendipitous adventures. Focus on experiences, not just ticking off sites. The allure of travel lies in being wholly present. Whether you’re navigating a bustling market or simply admiring a flaming sunset, do savor each instant. Travel isn’t about a singular purpose — it’s about embracing life’s beauty in each moment.
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以旅游博主身份就“Travel: Exploration or Relaxation?”话题写一篇英文博客,发表观点,并给旅行者提出建议。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
不同的:different→diverse
同样地:equally→similarly
建议:suggestion→advice
令人激动的:exciting→thrilling
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:Exploring new places lets us experience different cultures and see amazing things.
拓展句:Exploring new places lets us not only experience different cultures but also see amazing things.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Taking time to rest and enjoy peaceful moments can make travel more fun.(运用动名词短语作主语)
【高分句型2】My suggestion is to find a balance.(运用动词不定式作表语)
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(24-25高二下·四川绵阳·期末)假定你是李华,在上周的高二年级读后续写竞赛中,你的得分为14分(满分25分),你觉得此分数偏低不太合理。请你给外教评委Ryan用英语写一份邮件,内容包括:
1.说明问题;
2.给出理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
参考词汇:读后续写 continuation writing
Dear Ryan,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Possible version 1:
Dear Ryan,
I am Li Hua from Grade 2, a participant in the last continuation writing competition. Having scored only 14 for my continuation writing, I felt it unfair, so I am writing to you to state my reasons.
For my writing, I felt it totally meets the requirements put forward in the contest. To begin with, the structure of my composition is definitely clear and the plot develops reasonably, no prolixity at all. Additionally, the words and sentences used are colorful, without repeatedly using the same word. I even wrote some compound sentences to update my writing, such as attributive clause, the emphatic pattern, inverted sentence and so on. Finally, a well-known saying is used to end my article, which I think is a perfect highlight of the passage.
In a word, with the merits mentioned above, I wonder why I got such a low score. If it is convenient for you, please give me an explanation.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
Possible version 2:
Dear Ryan,
I am Li Hua from Grade 2, a participant in the last continuation writing competition. I received a score of 14 out of 25, and I believe this score is unreasonably low.
Firstly, I carefully followed the guidelines and requirements of the competition. I made sure to address the given topic and structure my writing appropriately. Secondly, I also paid attention to grammar, vocabulary, and coherence in my composition. Therefore, I believe my writing should have been evaluated more favorably.
In conclusion, I feel that my score of 14 does not accurately represent my writing abilities. I kindly request you to reconsider my score and provide me with a fair evaluation.
Thank you for your attention to this matter. I look forward to your prompt response.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给外教评委Ryan写邮件,反映读后续写竞赛中得分偏低的问题并说明理由。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
满足:meet → satisfy
首先:to begin with → first of all
此外:additionally → furthermore
总之:in a word → in short
2. 句式拓展
同义句转换
原句:For my writing, I felt it totally meets the requirements put forward in the contest.
拓展句:For my writing, I felt it totally meets the requirements that were put forward in the contest.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Finally, a well-known saying is used to end my article, which I think is a perfect highlight of the passage. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
【高分句型2】In a word, with the merits mentioned above, I wonder why I got such a low score. (运用了why引导的宾语从句)
(5)
(24-25高二下·上海浦东新·期末)Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.
你的英国笔友 Jenny计划今年暑假与父母一同来中国旅游。为期一周的中国之行中,他们将在上海停留一天。Jenny的父亲对中国历史比较感兴趣,她的母亲对中式建筑饶有兴致,而 Jenny本人则对中华美食情。有独钟。她希望你能为他们一家设计一个旅行安排,满足三人的各自需求。你的回信需包含以下内容:
1. 具体的行程安排(可以从参观景点、游览顺序、食宿推荐等方面展开);
2. 如此安排的理由。
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____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Dear Jenny,
I’m thrilled to hear that your family is planning a trip to China this summer vacation. Here’s a detailed itinerary I’ve designed.
Day 1: After arriving in Shanghai, the family can settle into their hotel and rest from their journey. Day 2: Explore Shanghai- Start with a visit to the Shanghai Museum to explore China’s rich history. Day 3- 4: Traveling to Nanjing will give your father the chance to delve into China’s ancient history. You can visit the Sun Yat-sen Mausoleum and the Ming Xiaoling Mausoleum. Day 5-6: Travel to Hangzhou- A short train ride to Hangzhou will allow your mother to appreciate China’s beautiful scenery and culture. Day 7: Departure - On your last day, you can do some last-minute shopping in Shanghai.
This schedule balances culture, history, and cuisine, making your trip unforgettable. I hope this helps and you will enjoy your holiday!
Yours,
Wang Lei
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。英国笔友 Jenny计划今年暑假与父母一同来中国旅游。要求考生按照所给的要求对其旅行进行安排并回信告知。
【详解】1.词汇积累
激动的:thrilled → excited
设计的:designed → planned
探索:explore → discover
深入了解:delve into → explore in depth
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:This schedule balances culture, history, and cuisine, making your trip unforgettable.
拓展句:This schedule balances culture, history, and cuisine, which will make your trip unforgettable.
【点睛】【高分句型1】Here’s a detailed itinerary I’ve designed.(运用了省略关系代词的定语从句)
【高分句型2】Day 3- 4: Traveling to Nanjing will give your father the chance to delve into China’s ancient history. (运用了动名词作主语的结构)
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