2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---Kindness Beats Money 导学案

该高中英语高考复习学案聚焦读后续写核心考点，通过角色分析、时空线梳理、情节与情感线构建等模块，系统整合文本解读、逻辑衔接与语言表达知识点，以问题链（如细节问答）和任务单（如情节构造）引导学生自主搭建续写能力框架，体现考点梳理的系统性与层次性。 亮点在于自主诊断与思维品质培养，如细节问答模块设置7个关键问题（如Rahim对捕猎的态度）帮助学生精准定位文本理解薄弱点，续写框架通过“发现-抉择-行动”步骤分解，引导学生运用推断与评价思维完成逻辑构建。每个环节配备句式示例与情感线分析表，助力学生个性化提升语言表达能力，教师可依据学情数据实施针对性指导，有效培养学生自主复习能力。

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 “Tonight,” Grandpa clapped me on the back, “we work, Rahim. We work like men.” Outside stars were beginning to appear. Grandpa climbed on his bicycle. My friend Aslam and I jogged beside him. A sweet smell rose from Mr. Ahmed’s mango trees as we passed. Aslam slowed his jog, picked a few mangoes, and stuffed them into his pockets. I wished I were as lucky as Aslam with his movie-star hair, always making trouble, never getting caught. I wished I were at home, studying for the coming exam. I wished... But Grandpa was counting on me. We needed the money. He worked hard so I could stay in school. When we reached the Lawachara National Park, the moon had risen midway into the sky. We entered the shadows of the forest. Aslam feared there might be tigers behind the trees. I told him they were rarely seen there. He then reminded me of our task of catching pangolins (穿山甲), and warned me not to be overly merciful. He still remembered how I’d saved a snake from those boys the week before. My stomach began to turn. I knew what the traders would do with the pangolin if we found one. “A den (兽穴)is near. Stay and watch. I’m going further on to another.” Grandpa handed Aslam a cardboard box. “Remember, the traders won’t pay for an empty box. They want big pangolins with many scales (鳞). The better the scales, the better the money. I’m counting on you, boys.” Then he walked away. Aslam asked why people would pay so much for pangolins. I told him they thought the scales were magical and could cure all kinds of diseases. Then he went on with his movie-star dream, promising all our money troubles would end once he made it. We chatted away, watching the moon climbing higher into the sky. 注意： （1）续写词数应为 150 左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: Suddenly we heard a low noise from among the fallen leaves. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: After a while, Grandpa came back and saw the empty box. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 Grandpa took Rahim and Aslam to catch pangolins for money at night--- _________________ ---Aslam stole mangoes on the way and dreamed of becoming a movie star--- _________________ ---They entered the forest and knew traders sold pangolins for their scales--- _________________ ---Grandpa left separately and asked them to catch pangolins for payment 4. 细节问答 Why did Grandpa take Rahim to catch pangolins? ：___________________________________ What was Aslam like according to Rahim?：_________________________________ Why did traders want pangolins with more scales?：________________________________________________ What was Rahim’s attitude towards catching pangolins?：__________________________________________ What did Aslam remind Rahim of before Grandpa left?：_____________________________________________ Why did people buy pangolin scales crazily?_________________________________________________ What does the story want to tell us?________________________________________________________ 5．情节线 夜晚爷爷带着我和好友阿斯兰进山捕捉穿山甲赚钱补贴家用→_________________ →路上好友调皮偷摘芒果，一心幻想成为电影明星→_________________ →进入森林，我内心抵触捕捉野生动物，知晓穿山甲会被商人残忍伤害→爷爷分头行动，叮嘱二人务必抓到穿山甲换取酬劳→_________________ →（续写）二人发现穿山甲，我内心挣扎后心软放走它→（续写）爷爷发现空盒子，我坦诚心声，爷爷最终理解并认同保护野生动物的选择 6．情感线 Rahim：helpless and unwilling→___________→uneasy and guilty→___________→brave and firm（续写） Aslam：carefree and greedy→___________→surprised and confused→___________→understanding and supportive（续写） Grandpa：determined and anxious→___________→angry and confused→___________→enlightened and supportive（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 人与自然类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Suddenly we heard a low noise from among the fallen leaves. 衔接句1——What did they see? What choice did Rahim make and why? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: After a while, Grandpa came back and saw the empty box. 衔接句2——How did Grandpa react? What did Rahim explain and what was Grandpa’s final decision? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：突然，落叶堆里传来一阵低沉的声响。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：过了一会儿，爷爷折返回来，看见了空空的盒子。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写 Suddenly we heard a low noise from among the fallen leaves. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ After a while, Grandpa came back and saw the empty box. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 Rahim（内心善良、敬畏生命、坚守良知，即便家境贫寒也不愿伤害野生动物的男主）；Aslam（调皮贪玩、看重钱财、现实功利但最终理解男主的好友）；Grandpa（为生计奔波、迫于生活压力捕猎穿山甲，最终醒悟敬畏生命的爷爷） 2．视角 第________一____人称 3．时空线 Grandpa took Rahim and Aslam to catch pangolins for money at night---Rahim was unwilling to do such wrong things but had no choice---Aslam stole mangoes on the way and dreamed of becoming a movie star---They entered the dark forest and talked about traders’ cruel deals---They knew traders sold pangolins for their precious scales---Grandpa left separately and asked them to catch pangolins for payment 4. 细节问答 Why did Grandpa take Rahim to catch pangolins? ：Their family suffered from financial difficulties and they needed money to support daily life and Rahim’s schooling. What was Aslam like according to Rahim?：He was naughty, adventurous and always got away with his mischief. Why did traders want pangolins with more scales?：Because pangolin scales were considered valuable and could be sold at a high price. What was Rahim’s attitude towards catching pangolins?：He felt extremely uncomfortable and opposed to hurting innocent wild animals. What did Aslam remind Rahim of before Grandpa left?：He warned Rahim not to show mercy to pangolins while catching them. Why did people buy pangolin scales crazily?：They mistakenly believed that pangolin scales had magic power to cure various diseases. What does the story want to tell us?：Every wild life deserves to be protected. We should never hurt innocent animals for money regardless of living pressure. 5．情节线 夜晚爷爷带着我和好友阿斯兰进山捕捉穿山甲赚钱补贴家用→我内心十分抵触捕猎野生动物，却迫于家庭经济压力不得不听从安排→路上好友调皮偷摘芒果，一心幻想成为电影明星摆脱贫困→进入森林，我清楚商人会残忍对待穿山甲，内心愈发不安→爷爷分头行动，叮嘱二人务必抓到穿山甲换取酬劳→二人发现穿山甲，我内心挣扎后心软放走它，违背赚钱任务→爷爷发现空盒子十分生气，我坦诚心声，爷爷最终理解并认同保护野生动物的选择，放弃捕猎 6．情感线 Rahim：helpless and unwilling→uneasy and disturbed→guilty and struggling→brave and firm（续写） Aslam：carefree and greedy→excited and eager→surprised and confused→understanding and supportive（续写） Grandpa：determined and anxious→expectant and hopeful→angry and disappointed→enlightened and supportive（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：家境贫寒的男主被迫和爷爷、好友进山捕捉穿山甲换取生活费，发现可怜的穿山甲后，他坚守良知放走野生动物，即便遭到爷爷质问也依旧坦诚内心想法，最终爷爷醒悟，明白生命远比金钱更加珍贵。 英文：For living expenses, Rahim went to catch pangolins with his grandpa and friend. However, out of kindness and respect for life, he set the poor pangolin free bravely. Finally, his grandpa realized his mistake and gave up catching wild animals. 8. 句式 状语从句：Aslam feared there might be tigers behind the trees when walking in the forest. 非谓语动词：Aslam slowed his jog, picked a few mangoes, and stuffed them into his pockets. 宾语从句：I knew what the traders would do with the pangolin if we found one. 定语从句：He still remembered how I’d saved a snake from those boys the week before. 并列句：The better the scales, the better the money. 9. 本文主题 人与自然类：生命无价，野生动物需要人类保护；切勿因金钱利益伤害无辜生灵，守住内心善良与敬畏，远比物质财富更重要。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Suddenly we heard a low noise from among the fallen leaves. 衔接句1——What did they see? What choice did Rahim make and why? We spotted a frightened pangolin curling up in leaves. Though needing money badly, Rahim couldn’t bear to hurt it and secretly set it free despite Aslam’s disagreement. Paragraph 2: After a while, Grandpa came back and saw the empty box. 衔接句2——How did Grandpa react? What did Rahim explain and what was Grandpa’s final decision? Grandpa felt angry at first. Rahim explained his thoughts sincerely. Eventually, Grandpa realized that protecting wildlife was more important than money and gave up catching pangolins. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：突然，落叶堆里传来一阵低沉的声响。 →①我们低头看见一只弱小的穿山甲蜷缩在落叶中，害怕地缩成一团→②阿斯兰想要立刻抓住它换取酬劳，极力劝说我不要心软→③我看着可怜的穿山甲，终究不忍伤害，悄悄将它放生回归森林； 第二段：过了一会儿，爷爷折返回来，看见了空空的盒子。 →①看到空盒子，爷爷满心失望，十分生气地质问我们→②我平静说出自己不忍心伤害野生动物的心声，诉说生命的珍贵→③爷爷沉默反思，最终放下生计压力，决定再也不捕猎野生动物。 四.段落续写（高考满分范文，精准150词，高分复合句适配高考评分） Suddenly we heard a low noise from among the fallen leaves. Looking closely, we found a small trembling pangolin curling itself up tightly, full of fear. Aslam immediately urged me to catch it and put it into the box to earn money. However, staring at its helpless appearance, my heart softened completely. I could not bear to send this lovely creature to cruel traders. Without hesitation, I gently moved aside the leaves and guided the frightened pangolin back into the deep forest. Aslam was confused but chose to keep silent finally. After a while, Grandpa came back and saw the empty box. Frowning sharply, he felt annoyed and asked us the reason angrily. I told Grandpa honestly that I couldn’t hurt such a lovely wild animal just for money. Hearing my sincere words, Grandpa fell into deep thought. He realized that no matter how hard life was, we had no right to hurt precious wildlife. He sighed and made a decision: he would never catch pangolins again, for every life deserved equal respect and protection. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $