专题09 书面表达（专项训练）小升初英语暑假专项提升（外研版三起）

专题09 书面表达 · 内容导航 · 01：写作技巧 02：小试牛刀 写作技巧 一、写作的步骤： 步骤 1：审题圈画（3 要素） · 圈时态、主题、字数：本册 4 大核心时态（一般将来 / 现在进行 / 一般过去 / Why-Because），先锁定时态再动笔。 · 将来时：M2、M9、M10（计划、升学） · 现在进行：M3、M4、M5（正在做、突发打断） · 过去时：M6、M7（生日、人物事迹） · 原因句：M8（提问原因） 步骤 2：列要点（who/when/where/what/feeling 五要素） · 按题干提示逐条罗列，不漏要点，不超纲生词。 步骤 3：三段式成文（标配结构，所有作文通用） · 开头（1 句）：总起，点明场景 / 时间 · 中间（3～5 句）：细节描述，用课本重点句型 · 结尾（1 句）：心情、感受、总结 步骤 4：自查改错（3 查） · ①时态单复数 ②拼写标点 ③字数达标（小升初要求 50 词 +） · 加分小技巧 · 连词升级：and/but/so（本册高频 but 转折句，M5 必考） · 形容词替换：happy→excited；good→delicious/great · 不会写的长词换简单同义句，不生造句子 二、Module1～Module10 分模块主题 Module 1 主题：Restaurant Ordering 餐馆点餐（一般现在时） 写作考点：介绍一次就餐经历、菜单点餐、价格描述 【核心句型】What do you want to eat/drink? I want a hot dog and a cola. How much is it? It’s ... dollars. 【模板】 · 开头：Yesterday I went to a restaurant with my friend. · 中间：I wanted a hamburger and juice. The hamburger was twelve dollars. · 结尾：The food was delicious, we had e a good time. Module 2 主题：Weekend/Travel Plan 出行计划（be going to/will 一般将来时） 写作考点：周末计划、出游安排、天气 + 出行 【核心句型】When are you going to ...? I’m going to ... at ... o’clock. It will be sunny tomorrow. 【模板】 · 开头：This weekend I have a nice plan. · 中间：I’m going to the park with my mum. We will have a picnic. It will be warm. · 结尾：I’m very excited about the weekend. 常考作文：My Weekend Plan（小升初高频） Module 3 主题：Outdoor Scenes 郊外风景（现在进行时 am/is/are doing） 写作考点：看图写话，描述照片 / 郊外正在发生的事 【核心句型】主语 + be+doing… The sun is shining. 【模板】 · 开头：Look at this photo, we are in the countryside. · 中间：The sun is shining. Cows are drinking water. Birds are flying in the sky. · 结尾：We are having a lovely day. Module 4 主题：Unexpected Accidents 突发意外（现在进行时） 写作考点：东西掉落、飞走、突发事件（气球飞走、苹果滚落楼梯） 【核心句型】...is falling/flying away. 【模板】 · 开头：I’m helping my mum carry apples. · 中间：But the apples are falling down the stairs. The balloons are flying away. · 结尾：I feel worried and try to pick them up. Module 5 主题：Actions interrupted 动作被打断（现在进行 + but 转折）【本册语法难点】 写作考点：正在做某事，突然发生另一件事（吹唢呐电话响、骑车下雨） 【万能句型】Sb is doing..., but ... He is playing the suona, but the phone rings. 【模板】 · 开头：It’s Sunday, I’m playing my favourite instrument. · 中间：I’m playing the piano, but my dog comes in. I’m riding a bike, but it starts to rain. · 结尾：It’s funny but interesting. Module 6 主题：Birthday & Space 生日 + 航天（一般过去式 was/were/ 动词过去式） 写作考点：描述过去生日、介绍神舟飞船 【核心句型】It was ... yesterday. We had ... 【模板】 · 开头：It was Daming’s birthday last Sunday. · 中间：We had a birthday party. We ate cake and sang songs. We watched a video about Shenzhou V. · 结尾：We had a happy birthday. 常考作文：My last birthday Module 7 主题：Great People 名人传记（一般过去式 spent/could/couldn’t） 写作考点：介绍杨利伟、海伦凯勒生平（小升初人物作文必考） 【核心句型】He spent ... in space. She couldn’t see or hear. 【模板】 · 开头：Yang Liwei is a great Chinese taikonaut. · 中间：He flew into space. He spent about 21 hours there. He made a video in space. · 结尾：I’m proud of him. I want to be an astronaut. 常考作文：My favourite famous person Module 8 主题：Reason & Explanation 缘由问答（Why…? Because…） 写作考点：解释穿戴、物品摆放的原因（头上放杯子、戴帽子） 【核心句型】Why do you…? Because… 【模板】 开头：We have cups on our heads in the class. 中间：Why? Because we are going to play a funny game. I wear a hat because it’s hot. 结尾：It’s an interesting game. Module 9 主题：Graduation Wishes 毕业祝福（书信格式）【书信作文必考】 写作考点：写给同学毕业贺卡、书信（书信格式：称呼 + 正文 + 祝福语） 【万能祝福语】Best wishes to you! Wishing you happiness every day. 【书信模板】 Dear XX, · 开头：We are going to leave our primary school soon. · 中间：We had a good time together. I will miss you. · 结尾：Best wishes to you! Yours, XX 常考作文：Write a goodbye letter Module 10 主题：New School Life 中学规划（be going to 将来时） 写作考点：即将升入中学、将要学习的科目、未来打算 【核心句型】We’re going to different schools. I’m going to study… 【模板】 · 开头：I will finish primary school soon. · 中间：I’m going to middle school. I’m going to study Physics and Chemistry. · 结尾：I’m excited for my new school life. 常考作文：My middle school plan 三、常考的时态梳理： 时态 适用模块 标志词 动词变化 一般将来 M2/M9/M10 tomorrow/next week/be going to be going to + 动词原形 现在进行 M3/M4/M5 now/look/listen am/is/are+doing 一般过去 M6/M7 yesterday/last… 动词变过去式 Why-Because M8 why/because 一般现在原形 小试牛刀 一、请以“My weekend plan”为题写一篇作文。根据表格提示描写周末天气情况、活动计划等，注意用一般将来时态。要求语句通顺，条理清晰，不少于50词。 Day Weather Morning Afternoon Saturday sunny have a picnic learn English Sunday sunny learn to dance go to the supermarket _________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ 二、请根据表格提示，写一写下周天气情况以及活动安排。要求语句通顺、连贯，书写规范，不少于50 词。 Monday Tuesday Wednesday Thursday Friday sunny cold windy hot cloudy play basketball watch TV fly a kite swim read a book _________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ 三、请以“ China is changing ”为题，根据下列图片写一写三十年前和现在的生活。 要求：语法正确，语句通顺、流畅，无单词拼写错误，不少于40词。 参考词汇: supermarket, enough food China is changing Life was very different in China thirty years ago. At that time,___________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ 四、请试着做一次天气预报员吧! (要求：语句通顺连贯，不少于5句话) Good evening, everyone. Let's look at the weather tomorrow. ___________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________Thank you for listening. 五、根据图片内容，写一写公园里的人们正在做什么。可任选4-5个活动进行描述。要求语句通顺连贯,不少于50词。可适当发挥想象。 Word bank: skip, play football, fly kites, play chess, go fishing, do taijiquan It is Sunday today. The sun is shining.__________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ 六、下午五点钟，Amy 和家人正在做着自己的事情。假如你是 Amy你会如何记录这些美好瞬间呢？快来写一写吧！ 要求：书写规范，条理清晰，不少于50词。 Word bank: cook dinner, clean the house, watch TV, wash clothes, eat an/the apple Now, it's five o'clock in the afternoon. Everyone in my family is at home.______________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ 七、在周末，Guoguo一家人都在家忙着不同的事情，但他们总是被其他事情打断。根据表格内容,发挥想象，写一写Guoguo家正在发生的事情。要求语句通顺、连贯，不少于5句话。 Father reading newspapers The dog runs around him. Mother cooking The bell rings. Guoguo playing computer games Her friends come. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ 八、根据提示，向大家介绍一下我们的榜样——袁隆平。 要求:1.条理清晰，意思明确，用词得当，句子连贯通顺； 2.书写工整、规范； 3.50 个单词以上。 Name: Yuan Longping Born:1930.9 Country：China · He developed the first hybrid rice(杂交水稻) in the 1970s. · He was called "the Father of Hybrid Rice". · He won the World Food Prize in 2004. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ 九、难忘的小学生活马上就要结束，你即将进入初中。请根据提示，用英语介绍一下你将学习的科目、你初步的打算、你的心情和想对朋友说的话。 要求:语句通顺，意思连贯，不少于五句话。 提示:1. What subjects are you going to study? (Geography, History, Physics ...) 2. What are you going to do? (make new friends, learn a lot of things ...) 3. How do you feel? (happy, excited, sad ...) 4. What will you say to your friends? (miss you, write letters ...) Dear friends, we are going to say goodbye this September. I'm going to Yangguang Middle School.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ 十、小学生活即将结束,哪一位老师或同学给你留下了难忘的印象?请根据表格的提示，给他(她)写封告别信吧。 要求：1.补充完整题目。 2.围绕表格提供的五个要点表达(要点信息仅供参考）。 3.不少于 6 句话。 A Goodbye Letter to My_______ Dear _______, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ Love, _______. 十一、假如明天是周日，请你根据表格提示写一篇短文，介绍一下你的朋友们各自所在城市的天气情况及他们的活动安排。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ 十二、你的上一个生日是如何度过的？请根据思维导图，以“My last birthday”为题，写一篇短文描述一下你过生日的经历。 要求：语法正确，语句通顺；不少于6 句话。 My last birthday ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 （一） My weekend plan The weekend is coming. It will be sunny on Saturday and Sunday. On Saturday morning, I am going to have a picnic with my family. In the afternoon, I will learn English. On Sunday morning, I plan to learn to dance. I will go to the supermarket in the afternoon. I will have a happy weekend. 【点拨】 · 核心时态：一般将来时，两种结构 will+动词原形 / be going to+动词原形（本册 M2 重点）。 · 写作结构：三段式（开头点题→中间罗列活动→结尾抒发心情），要点无遗漏。 · 重点短语：have a picnic 野餐；learn English 学英语；learn to dance 学跳舞；go to the supermarket 去超市。 · 易错提醒：星期、时间前介词用 on（on Saturday morning）；两个将来结构不要混用出错。 （二） Next week will be great. Let me tell you the weather and my activities. It will be sunny on Monday, and I will play basketball. Tuesday is cold, so I will watch TV at home. It will be windy on Wednesday. I want to fly a kite outside. Thursday will be hot, I am going to swim. On Friday, it will be cloudy and I will read a book. 【点拨】 · 时态：全程使用一般将来时 It will be + 天气。 · 句式技巧：用 so 表因果，让句子衔接更自然，提升作文分数。 · 固定搭配：play basketball 打篮球；fly a kite 放风筝；go swimming 游泳。 · 易错提醒：球类运动不加 the；swim 表活动常用 go swimming。 （三） China is changing Life was very different in China thirty years ago. At that time, there were no big supermarkets. We didn’t have enough food. Life was hard. But now everything changes. We have many big supermarkets. We have enough delicious food. Our life is happy and comfortable. I love our great country. 【点拨】 · 时态混搭：一般过去时描述过去（was/were/didn’t），一般现在时描述现在，是小升初常考对比类作文。 · 必用词汇：supermarket（超市），enough food（充足的食物），严格按照题干要求作答。 · 句式：There be 句型（某地有某物），六下核心句型。 · 易错提醒：thirty years ago 是过去时标志词，动词必须变过去式。 （四） Good evening, everyone. Let's look at the weather tomorrow. It will be cold in Harbin. Shanghai will be rainy. It will be windy in Changsha. Beijing will be warm. And Haikou will be hot. Please wear warm clothes if you go out in Harbin. Wish you a nice day. Thank you for listening. 【点拨】 · 核心句型：It will be + 形容词 / It will rain（描述天气两大基础句型）。 · 词汇积累：cold 寒冷的；warm 温暖的；windy 有风的；hot 炎热的。 · 结构：开场白→逐城市播报→结束语，符合口语表达逻辑。 · 易错提醒：rain（动词 / 名词）和 rainy（形容词）区分：It will rain = It will be rainy。 （五） It is Sunday today. The sun is shining. There are many people in the park. Look! Some boys are playing football. Some girls are skipping. Two old men are playing chess. A man is going fishing by the lake. Some children are flying kites. Everyone is having a good time. 【点拨】 · 核心时态：现在进行时 主语 + am/is/are + doing（M3/M4 重点），Look! 是现在进行时标志词。 · 必用短语：play football 踢足球；fly kites 放风筝；play chess 下棋；go fishing 钓鱼。 · 易错提醒：现在分词变化：skip→skipping；注意主谓一致，复数主语搭配 are。 （六） Now, it's five o'clock in the afternoon. All my family stay at home after a busy day. Everyone is busy with their own things. Ms Smart is cleaning the house carefully. Mr Smart is cooking delicious dinner in the kitchen. Sam is lying on the sofa and watching funny cartoons. Little Tom is eating a sweet apple. As for me, I am helping wash clothes. We are busy but we feel warm and happy. 【点拨】 · 时态：全程现在进行时，描述当下场景。 · 细节扩充：添加地点（sofa/kitchen）、形容词（delicious/funny/sweet）。 · 句型：be busy with 忙于……，拓展课本短语。 （七） Today is Saturday. It is a quiet weekend at first, but many funny things happen in Guoguo’s family. Her father is quietly reading newspapers in the room, but the lovely dog runs around him and plays with him. Her mother is busy cooking nice food in the kitchen, but the doorbell rings loudly. Guoguo is playing computer games happily, but her good friends come to visit her. Their house is full of laughter now. 【点拨】 · 核心句型：sb is doing..., but...（六下 M5 重难点）。 · 时态组合：前半句现在进行时，后半句一般现在时，语法考点突出。 · 细节描写：增加神态、环境，篇幅饱满。 （八） Yuan Longping is one of the greatest people in China. He was born in September, 1930. When he was young, he loved farming very much. In the 1970s, he developed the first hybrid rice in the world. People warmly called him "the Father of Hybrid Rice". In 2004, he won the famous World Food Prize. He helped millions of people get enough food. He is always my hero and role model. 【点拨】 · 时态：一般过去时为主，描述人物生平事迹。 · 词汇升级：millions of 数百万的；role model 榜样。 · 动词变形：develop→developed /win→won，重点不规则变形。 （九） Dear friends, we are going to say goodbye to our primary school this September. I will go to Yangguang Middle School soon. I am going to learn many new subjects there, such as Geography, History and Physics. I plan to make more new friends and learn lots of useful knowledge. I feel so excited about the new school life, and I also feel a little sad to leave you. I will miss all of you. Let’s keep in touch and write letters to each other later. 【点拨】 · 时态：一般将来时（be going to /will），M10 升学主题。 · 短语拓展：such as 例如；keep in touch 保持联系。 · 情感描写更细腻，符合毕业作文语境。 （十） A Goodbye Letter to My Friend Dear Lucy, How time flies! We will leave our lovely primary school soon. I feel really sad because we have spent six happy years together. We studied, played and shared joy with each other every day. You are kind, friendly and always ready to help me when I am in trouble. I will never forget our sweet days. I will miss you forever. Wish you happy and healthy every day. Best wishes to you! Love, Lily A Goodbye Letter to My Teacher Dear Miss Li, We are going to finish our primary school life. I want to say thanks to you from my heart. You are a warm and patient teacher. You taught us knowledge and told us how to be a good person. All of us love you very much. I will remember your words forever. I hope you can relax and stay happy all the time. Best wishes! Love, Daming 【点拨】 · 格式：严格遵循六下 M9书信格式（称呼、正文、祝福语、署名）。 · 加分句型：How time flies! 时光飞逝；be ready to help 乐于助人。 · 篇幅充足，语句深情，符合考场高分作文标准。 （十一） Tomorrow is Sunday. It will be a nice day. My good friends live in different cities across our country. The weather will be rainy in Beijing, so my friend will stay at home and read books. Xi’an will be windy, and he plans to fly a kite in the park. It will be hot in Sanya, so they will go swimming in the sea. It will be cold in Harbin, so they choose to make a snowman outside. 【点拨】 · 时态统一为一般将来时，天气 + 活动一一对应。 · 增加地点细节（playground/park/sea），内容更丰富。 · 衔接词 so/and 合理运用，句式连贯。 （十二） My last birthday My last birthday was on last Sunday. It was a wonderful and unforgettable day for me. Early in the morning, my parents prepared a big birthday party for me. All my close friends came to my house. We sang birthday songs loudly and ate a big sweet birthday cake together. I also got many lovely gifts from my family and friends. I laughed and talked happily all day. I really enjoyed my great birthday. 【点拨】 · 时态：一般过去时，last Sunday 为标志词，动词全部变为过去式。 · 不规则动词复习：sing→sang /get→got，本册重点。 · 按照思维导图四大要点（时间、活动、礼物、心情）展开，逻辑完整。 第 1 页 共 8 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $