2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---Love and Responsibility 导学案

该高中英语高考复习学案系统梳理了读后续写专题，涵盖文本分析（角色、视角、时空线）、情节与情感发展规律等核心考点，通过细节问答、情节线梳理等问题导向设计，引导学生自主构建“文本解读-情节构造-语言表达”的知识网络，体现考点梳理的系统性和层次性。 亮点在于自主诊断与方法指导结合，如开篇设置细节问答自测题（如“Why did parents refuse to keep a pet?”），帮助学生定位文本分析薄弱点，续写框架分步骤引导情节发展，培养语言能力和思维品质。每个模块配有情感线分析表和反思总结任务，助力学生个性化提升，教师可通过学情数据实施精准教学，支持因材施教。

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My younger sister Lily had always longed for a cat. Every birthday and every Spring Festival, she made the same wish. My parents, however, remained unconvinced, firmly believing that keeping a pet would be more trouble than pleasure, especially with two busy students in the family. Everything changed unexpectedly one Saturday afternoon. On my way home from school, I noticed a small gray cat sitting near the entrance of our apartment building. It wasn’t afraid at all. Instead, it followed me upstairs, slipped into our living room, and settled there as if it had already decided where it belonged. Lily let out a scream of excitement. “She chose us!” Lily announced, her voice trembling with certainty. My father immediately pointed to the cat hair gathering on the sofa, while my mother raised concerns about feeding schedules once exam pressure set in. After a long and cautious discussion, they finally agreed to keep the cat for one week—as a trial. We named it “Cloud,” inspired by its soft fur. In the beginning, things went smoothly. Cloud spent most of the day sleeping and followed Lily from room to room, like a loyal shadow. But soon, problems appeared. Cloud would often knock over a flower pot, scratch the curtains, and jump onto the dining table. Each small accident added to the growing unease. “This is exactly what we feared,” my father remarked. Lily tried to defend Cloud, promising to take full responsibility. I remained mostly silent, watching how quickly excitement gave way to tension. On a cold evening, after Cloud accidentally spilled a cup of water onto my homework, I lost my temper and shouted. The room fell silent. Cloud jumped down at once and hid under the sofa, curling up into a ball and not taking a single step out. Lily looked up at me, tears welling in her eyes. Later that night, I found her sitting on the floor, softly calling Cloud’s name. However, it refused to come out. “If we send it away,” Lily asked in a low voice, “will it live a good life?” Her question lingered in my mind long after she went to bed. 注意： （1）续写词数应为 150 左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Paragraph 1: The next morning, I made up my mind to make up for my rude behavior. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Moved by our efforts, my parents finally canceled the one-week trial rule. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 Lily has been eager to raise a cat while parents refuse pets--- _________________ ---a stray cat follows me home and Lily is overjoyed--- _________________ ---parents agree to keep Cloud for a one-week trial--- _________________ ---Cloud causes various troubles and I lose my temper on it---Lily worries about the cat being abandoned 4. 细节问答 Why did parents refuse to keep a pet at first? ：___________________________________ How did the little cat come to our home?：_________________________________ Why was the cat named Cloud?：________________________________________________ What troubles did Cloud bring to the family?：__________________________________________ Why did I lose my temper that cold evening?：_____________________________________________ What was Lily worried about before going to bed?_________________________________________________ What does the story want to tell us?________________________________________________________ 5．情节线 妹妹莉莉一直渴望养猫，父母担心麻烦始终不同意→_________________ →一只流浪小猫主动跟着我回家，莉莉欣喜万分→_________________ →父母妥协，同意为期一周的养猫试用期→小猫频繁捣乱，我因作业被弄湿大发雷霆→小猫受惊躲藏，妹妹担心猫咪被送走→_________________ →（续写）我主动道歉安抚猫咪，和妹妹一起承担照顾责任→（续写）父母看到我们的成长，永久留下小猫，我们懂得责任与包容 6．情感线 I：calm and indifferent→___________→annoyed and angry→___________→regretful and responsible（续写） Lily：excited and delighted→___________→sad and worried→___________→relieved and joyful（续写） Parents：worried and disapproving→___________→softened and relieved→___________→supportive and satisfied（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 温情成长类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: The next morning, I made up my mind to make up for my rude behavior. 衔接句1——What did I do to comfort Cloud? How did my sister and I take responsibility together? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Moved by our efforts, my parents finally canceled the one-week trial rule. 衔接句2——What changes did we make later? What lesson did we learn from keeping a pet? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：第二天早上，我下定决心弥补自己粗鲁的行为。 →①我温柔呼唤小猫，拿出零食耐心安抚受惊的Cloud→②我主动向妹妹和小猫道歉，反思自己不该乱发脾气→③我和妹妹分工合作，主动清理猫咪造成的混乱，主动承担照顾责任； 第二段：看到我们的付出，父母最终取消了一周试用期。 →①父母看到我们学会包容、主动承担责任，彻底放下顾虑→②往后我们细心照料小猫，家里充满温暖与欢乐→③我们明白：养宠物不止有快乐，更需要长久的责任、耐心与包容。 四.段落续写 The next morning, I made up my mind to make up for my rude behavior. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Moved by our efforts, my parents finally canceled the one-week trial rule. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 I（起初缺乏耐心、事后懂得反思与担当的哥哥/姐姐）；Lily（极度喜爱小猫、温柔善良、有责任心的妹妹）；Parents（理性谨慎、担心麻烦，最终被孩子成长打动的父母）；Cloud（调皮胆小、温顺可爱的流浪小灰猫） 2．视角 第________一____人称 3．时空线 Lily has been eager to raise a cat while parents refuse pets--- parents worry pets will bring troubles to busy family---a stray cat follows me home and Lily is overjoyed---parents worry about cat’s bad behaviors---parents agree to keep Cloud for a one-week trial---Cloud causes various troubles and I lose my temper on it---Lily worries about the cat being abandoned 4. 细节问答 Why did parents refuse to keep a pet at first? ：They thought keeping pets would bring more troubles than pleasure to our busy family. How did the little cat come to our home?：The stray gray cat followed me upstairs and walked into our house voluntarily. Why was the cat named Cloud?：Because its fur was soft just like cloud. What troubles did Cloud bring to the family?：It knocked over flower pots, scratched curtains and jumped onto the dining table frequently. Why did I lose my temper that cold evening?：Cloud spilled water on my homework accidentally. What was Lily worried about before going to bed?：She worried that Cloud would be sent away and couldn’t live a good life outside. What does the story want to tell us?：Raising pets requires patience, tolerance and responsibility instead of only enjoying happiness. We should learn to reflect on our improper behavior. 5．情节线 妹妹莉莉一直渴望养猫，父母担心麻烦始终不同意→父母认为学业繁忙，宠物会增添家庭负担→一只流浪小猫主动跟着我回家，莉莉欣喜万分→小猫自来熟，彻底融入家中→父母妥协，同意为期一周的养猫试用期→小猫频繁捣乱，我因作业被弄湿大发雷霆→小猫受惊躲藏，妹妹彻夜担心猫咪被送走→我心生愧疚主动弥补，和妹妹共同承担照料工作→父母看到我们的成长，永久留下小猫，我们懂得责任与包容 6．情感线 I：calm and indifferent→irritated and annoyed→annoyed and angry→guilty and regretful→regretful and responsible（续写） Lily：excited and delighted→helpless and upset→sad and worried→hopeful and relieved→relieved and joyful（续写） Parents：worried and disapproving→alert and concerned→softened and relieved→approving and satisfied（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：妹妹一直想要一只小猫，流浪猫主动来到家中，父母设立一周试用期，小猫接连闯祸后我一时冲动发脾气，事后我满心愧疚，和妹妹一起用心照顾小猫，最终父母看到我们的责任心，同意永久留下小猫，我们也学会了耐心、包容与担当。 英文：Lily longed for a cat for a long time and a stray cat came to our home by chance. After I lost my temper on the naughty cat, I felt guilty and made up for my mistake. Finally, our parents kept the cat forever, and we learned that love for pets comes with responsibility and patience. 8. 句式 状语从句：Every birthday and every Spring Festival, she made the same wish. 非谓语动词：Lily let out a scream of excitement, trembling with joy. 宾语从句：My parents firmly believed that keeping a pet would be more trouble than pleasure. 定语从句：We named it “Cloud,” inspired by its soft fur. 并列句：Cloud spent most of the day sleeping and followed Lily from room to room. 9. 本文主题 温情成长类：喜爱从来不是一时的新鲜感，陪伴宠物需要足够的耐心、包容与责任；犯错后及时反思、主动弥补，也是一种成长。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: The next morning, I made up my mind to make up for my rude behavior. 衔接句1——What did I do to comfort Cloud? How did my sister and I take responsibility together? I comforted the scared cat patiently and apologized sincerely. Then my sister and I cleaned up all the mess caused by Cloud together, showing our determination to take good care of it. Paragraph 2: Moved by our efforts, my parents finally canceled the one-week trial rule. 衔接句2——What changes did we make later? What lesson did we learn from keeping a pet? We made strict rules to guide Cloud’s behavior later. We realized that keeping pets means not only happiness but also permanent responsibility and tolerance. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：第二天早上，我下定决心弥补自己粗鲁的行为。 →①我蹲在沙发旁轻声安抚胆怯的小猫，拿出猫粮安抚它的情绪→②我向妹妹诚恳道歉，承认自己不该控制不住情绪乱发脾气→③我和妹妹分工打扫家里脏乱的角落，主动承担所有养猫琐事； 第二段：看到我们的付出，父母最终取消了一周试用期。 →①父母亲眼看见我们的改变与担当，打消了所有顾虑，同意永久收留小猫→②之后我们耐心引导小猫改正坏习惯，家里始终充满温馨欢乐→③我们收获温暖陪伴，也真正明白：热爱相伴，责任随行。 四.段落续写（高考满分范文，词数148，适配高考评分标准） The next morning, I made up my mind to make up for my rude behavior. I knelt down beside the sofa, speaking softly to ease Cloud’s fear and offered it its favorite snack. Seeing it slowly walk out nervously, I apologized sincerely for my rude shouting last night. Together with Lily, we carefully cleaned up cat hair around the house and fixed the scratched curtains patiently. We promised our parents that we would take full charge of Cloud’s daily life and never lose our temper easily again. Moved by our efforts, my parents finally canceled the one-week trial rule. They were glad to witness our growth from willful kids to responsible teenagers. Later, we guided Cloud patiently to correct its bad habits instead of blaming it blindly. Gradually, Cloud became well-behaved and brought endless joy to our family. This unforgettable experience taught me a precious lesson: true love lies not in enjoying sweet company only, but in shouldering corresponding responsibility patiently. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $