2027届高三英语读后续写专项复习---The Fox and the Hawk---续写导学案

该高中英语高考复习学案聚焦读后续写专题，系统梳理文本分析（角色、时空线、情节线等）、情节逻辑构建、情感线把握及句式运用等核心考点，通过结构化知识网络（如情节线从“友好共处”到“背叛复仇”的递进）组织考点，以问题导向（细节问答）和任务驱动（续写框架设计）引导学生自主分析故事要素，构建续写逻辑体系。 亮点在于自主诊断与思维品质培养，开篇设置细节问答自测工具（如“Why did the hawk steal the little fox?”）帮助学生精准定位文本理解薄弱点，通过情节构造和情感线分析任务（如Fox从“真诚”到“隐忍”的情感变化）提升逻辑推断与批判性思维能力。每个模块配有续写框架模板和满分范文赏析，支持学生自主总结续写策略，教师可依据学情数据实施分层指导，有效培养学生自主复习能力与语言表达素养。

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 A fox and a hawk became close friends and decided to live together for safety. The fox built a home under a big tree, while the hawk made its nest high up in the tree. They lived peacefully for quite a long time, sharing food and protecting each other. One hot summer day, the fox went out to hunt food early in the morning. Before leaving, it warned the hawk seriously, “Never touch my kids no matter what happens. Please keep an eye on them for me.” The hawk nodded sincerely and promised to look after the little foxes carefully. However, not long after the fox left, a strong wind blew violently. The hawk’s baby birds were frozen and hungry, lying weakly in the nest. Staring at the lovely little foxes below, the hawk struggled for a long time. Finally, driven by hunger, it flew down secretly and took away one little fox to feed its own babies. When the fox came back with plenty of food, it soon found one of its children missing. It asked the hawk anxiously, but the hawk denied everything and pretended to know nothing. The fox figured out the truth immediately but kept calm without blaming the hawk on the spot. It chose to wait for a proper chance to get justice. 注意： （1）续写词数应为 150个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 One day, people held a sacrifice ceremony in the forest nearby. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Seeing its baby birds burnt to death, the hawk screamed painfully and regretted deeply. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 A fox and a hawk became close friends and lived together--- _________________ ---the fox went out hunting and warned the hawk--- _________________ ---the hawk stole a little fox to feed its babies--- _________________ ---the fox found out the truth and waited for a chance 4. 细节问答 Why did the fox and the hawk live together? ：___________________________________ Where were their homes respectively?：_________________________________ What did the fox warn the hawk before leaving?：________________________________________________ Why did the hawk steal the little fox?：__________________________________________ How did the hawk react when questioned by the fox?：_____________________________________________ What did the fox do after learning the truth?_________________________________________________ What lesson can we learn from the story?________________________________________________________ 5．情节线 狐狸和鹰结为好友，比邻而居→_________________ →狐狸外出觅食，再三叮嘱鹰照看幼崽→_________________ →狂风来袭，鹰为养活自己幼崽偷走一只小狐狸→狐狸看破真相，隐忍不发伺机报复→_________________ →（续写）祭祀大典上狐狸巧妙复仇→（续写）鹰追悔莫及，明白背叛朋友终会自食恶果 6．情感线 Fox：warm and sincere→___________→heartbroken and angry→___________→calm and determined→___________（续写） Hawk：faithful and friendly→___________→guilty and nervous→___________→desperate and regretful（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 寓言哲理类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: One day, people held a sacrifice ceremony in the forest nearby. 衔接句1——What did the fox do? How did the fox take revenge? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: Seeing its baby birds burnt to death, the hawk screamed painfully and regretted deeply. 衔接句2——What did the hawk say to the fox? What is the final moral of the story? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：一天，人们在附近森林举办祭祀大典。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：看着被烧死的幼鸟，老鹰痛苦嘶鸣，满心悔恨。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写 One day, people held a sacrifice ceremony in the forest nearby. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Seeing its baby birds burnt to death, the hawk screamed painfully and regretted deeply. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 Fox（真诚友善、有仇必报、心思缜密的狐狸）；Hawk（背信弃义、自私贪婪、最终悔不当初的老鹰） 2．视角 第________三____人称 3．时空线 A fox and a hawk became close friends and lived together--- they lived peacefully and looked out for each other---the fox went out hunting and warned the hawk--- a fierce wind made hawk’s babies suffer from cold and hunger---the hawk stole a little fox to feed its babies--- the fox found out the truth and waited for a chance 4. 细节问答 Why did the fox and the hawk live together? ：They decided to live together for safety. Where were their homes respectively?：The fox lived under a big tree while the hawk built a nest in the tree. What did the fox warn the hawk before leaving?：It warned the hawk not to hurt its little kids and asked the hawk to take care of them. Why did the hawk steal the little fox?：A strong wind froze its baby birds, which were hungry and weak. It stole the fox cub out of selfishness to feed its own children. How did the hawk react when questioned by the fox?：It denied the truth and pretended to know nothing about the missing little fox. What did the fox do after learning the truth?：It kept calm, did not quarrel immediately and waited for a proper opportunity to punish the hawk. What lesson can we learn from the story?：Never betray your friends. Dishonesty and betrayal will eventually bring self-destruction. 5．情节线 狐狸和鹰结为好友，比邻而居→二者互帮互助，安稳共处许久→狐狸外出觅食，再三叮嘱鹰照看幼崽→狂风肆虐，鹰的幼鸟饥寒交迫→狂风来袭，鹰为养活自己幼崽偷走一只小狐狸→狐狸看破真相，隐忍不发伺机报复→祭祀大典燃起篝火，狐狸引燃树枝报复老鹰→（续写）祭祀大典上狐狸巧妙复仇→（续写）鹰追悔莫及，明白背叛朋友终会自食恶果 6．情感线 Fox：warm and sincere→anxious and worried→heartbroken and angry→calm and patient→calm and determined→relieved and sensible（续写） Hawk：faithful and friendly→struggling and selfish→guilty and nervous→shocked and frightened→desperate and regretful（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：狐狸与老鹰本是互帮互助的好友，老鹰却自私背信偷走小狐狸，狐狸没有当场争执，而是借森林祭祀的机会展开报复，最终老鹰自食恶果，懂得了背叛朋友的代价。 英文：The fox and the hawk were once close friends. However, the selfish hawk betrayed their friendship and killed a fox cub. The fox waited patiently for revenge and finally made the hawk pay for its mistake, teaching us that betrayal hurts both sides. 8. 句式 状语从句：Before leaving, it warned the hawk seriously never to touch its kids. 非谓语动词：Staring at the lovely little foxes below, the hawk struggled for a long time. 宾语从句：The fox figured out that the hawk had killed its child. 定语从句：A strong wind blew violently, which made the baby hawks suffer a lot. 并列句：They lived peacefully for quite a long time, sharing food and protecting each other. 9. 本文主题 寓言哲理类：背信弃义终将害人害己，坚守诚信、珍惜友谊是人际交往的底线；不要以伤害他人的方式谋取私利。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: One day, people held a sacrifice ceremony in the forest nearby. 衔接句1——What did the fox do? How did the fox take revenge? The fox secretly carried burning branches from the sacrificial fire to the root of the tree, setting fire to the dry leaves beside the hawk’s nest. Paragraph 2: Seeing its baby birds burnt to death, the hawk screamed painfully and regretted deeply. 衔接句2——What did the hawk say to the fox? What is the final moral of the story? The hawk apologized sincerely to the fox, admitting its selfish mistake. The story tells us that betraying friends will lead to our own destruction. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：一天，人们在附近森林举办祭祀大典。 →①森林燃起祭祀篝火，狐狸抓住绝佳复仇机会→②狐狸悄悄搬运火种，引燃大树干枯枝叶→③大火蔓延至鹰巢，幼鸟无处逃生； 第二段：看着被烧死的幼鸟，老鹰痛苦嘶鸣，满心悔恨。 →①老鹰终于明白这一切都是自己背信弃义的报应→②老鹰低头向狐狸诚恳道歉，为自己伤害幼崽的行为忏悔→③故事点明主旨：伤害朋友，终会反噬自身。 四.段落续写（高考满分范文，词数148，句式高级） One day, people held a sacrifice ceremony in the forest nearby. Thick smoke rose and bright flames burned fiercely. Seizing the perfect chance, the fox sneaked close to the fire and carried several burning dry branches to the big tree. It placed the branches at the tree root quietly. Soon, the dry branches caught fire and the flames spread rapidly upwards. Before the hawk could fly back to rescue its babies, the fierce fire had surrounded the high nest completely. Seeing its baby birds burnt to death, the hawk screamed painfully and regretted deeply. It landed weakly in front of the fox, hanging its head in shame. It admitted that its selfishness and betrayal of friendship led to the terrible disaster. The fox sighed and said calmly, “You should never hurt your friend even when you are in trouble.” From this painful lesson, the hawk realized that anyone who betrays friendship will eventually suffer from their own bad deeds. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $