摘要:
该初中英语中考复习课件聚焦“问题与建议”话题写作核心考点,严格对接中考应用文考查要求,按学习、生活、关系三大类问题梳理考点,结合写作流程三阶段明确内容(共情、原因、3条建议、鼓励共6要点)和表达(句型运用)的考查权重,归纳邮件写作常考题型,体现备考针对性。
课件亮点在于“写作流程三阶段+五步法”实战模式,如以给Jack写减压邮件任务为例,示范审题(邮件体裁、人称及时态)、列提纲(分析原因+具体建议),运用原因句型(One reason is that…)和建议句型(Because…you should…),培养语言能力与思维品质。配套自我评价清单和评分标准,帮助学生掌握答题技巧,教师可依此制定高效复习计划,提升中考冲刺效果。
内容正文:
话题十二
2026年英语中考话题复习
Problems & Advice
Be a Real Problem Solver
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By the end of this lesson,
Language: I can name different problems and give advice using 5+ sentence patterns.
Thinking: I can analyze the possible causes of a problem.
Communication: I can write a supportive email to help a friend.
Learning: I can evaluate my own and others’ writing with a checklist.
Learning Objectives
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Watch a video
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太多作业
注意力不集中
缺乏学习兴趣
记不住单词
太多压力
担心考试
考试不及格
不擅长数学
too much homework
be not good at math
forget English words easily
lack interest in study
fail the exam
worry about exams
too much pressure
can`t focus on study
(1) I can`t .
(2) The biggest problem is that_____________.
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Problems in study
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have trouble falling asleep
stay up late
eat too much junk food
do little exercise
too much screen time
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Problems in life
(1) __________________is my biggest problem.
(2) I ______________, which I know is bad for my health.
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不能与家人和睦相处
与朋友/父母争吵
相互误解
与......比较
抄作业
对......要求严格
有不同的爱好
生某人的气
can’t get on well with family
argue with friends/parents
misunderstand each other
compare with
be strict with sb.
Have different habbies
be angry with sb.
copy one’s homework
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Relationship problems
(1) The biggest problem is that_____________.
(2) We ______________, which nearly destroyed our friendship.
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Write down the biggest problem you have now on a piece of paper by using the follow structures.
(1) I can`t .
(2) The biggest problem is that_____________.
(1) __________________is my biggest problem.
(2) I ______________, which I know is bad for my health.
(1) The biggest problem is that_____________.
(2) We ______________, which nearly destroyed our friendship.
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When you have problems, what will you do?
Will you...
keep them to yourself?
talk to other people?
Remember, it is very common(常见) for teenagers to have such problems. Sharing is halfway to solving a problem(分享本身就是解决问题的一半)
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Problem
Analyze causes
分析原因
Give specific advice
给出具体建议
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How to be a real problem solver?
表达原因的句型:
One reason is that…
This happens because…
The main cause could be…
Problem solver
将原因与建议连接的句型:
Because [cause], you should…
Since [cause], why don’t you…?
If [cause], then it’s best to…
To solve it, you could…
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Let me show you how to find the cause of a problem and then give useful advice. Listen to this problem:
“I can’t sleep well before exams.”
First, let’s ask why. What are the possible causes? Raise your hand.
(学生回答:too much pressure / fear of failure / drinking coffee / looking at phone before bed…)
Great. Now, based on these causes, I can give specific advice:
Because of too much pressure, you should take deep breaths before sleep.
If you fear failure, why don’t you talk to your parents or a teacher?
Since you drink coffee, you’d better stop drinking it after 4 p.m.
See? When you know the cause, your advice becomes much more helpful. Now it’s your turn.
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Now each group choose one problem from the box, you need to analyze causes(分析原因), and based on these causes, give specific advice. The follow structures may help you.
表达原因的句型:
One reason is that…
This happens because…
The main cause could be…
将原因与建议连接的句型:
Because [cause], you should…
Since [cause], why don’t you…?
If [cause], then it’s best to…
To solve it, you could…
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随着中考临近,你的好朋友Jack出现了睡不好,焦虑等现象,请你简要分析其原因,并给出合适的建议。请根据以下思维导图的提示,用英语写一封电子邮件,跟他分享一些有用的减压方法,帮助他战胜压力。
作文要求:
1.可在思维导图内容提示上适当拓展信息。
2.不能照抄原文;不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。
3.语句连贯,词数80个左右。作文的开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
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2
3
4
5
Examine
审题
List
列提纲
Add
添加优美句子
Connect
连接全文
Correct
修改错误
写作五步法
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随着中考临近,你的好朋友Jack出现了睡不好,焦虑等现象。请根据以下思维导图的提示,用英语写一封电子邮件,跟他分享一些有用的减压方法,帮助他战胜压力。
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1. Examine
审题
6 points
3
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体裁:
人称:
时态:
要点:
邮件
第一人称; 第二人称
一般现在时;一般将来时
6个小要点
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Beginning
Body
Ending
表达共情
给出建议
着重方法
表达鼓励
表达祝愿
It is common for you to have such problem.
You can`t sleep well and feel anxious, maybe because…
过渡
It’s a good idea to…
You can...
…
Hope
2.List
列提纲
Here are some advice for you to relieve stress.
First of all,…
What’s more,…
Last but not least…
3.Connect
连接全文
I sure...
分析原因
May you everything goes well.
祝你万事如意。
Believe in yourself and stay positive.
相信自己,保持积极心态。
4. Add
添加优美句子
No pains, no gains.
没有付出,就没有收获。
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格式
字数
书写
标点
句式
字母大小写
名词单复数
5.Correct
修改错误
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Start Writing & Share Your Work
Writing Time
10 Minutes
评分标准
Content 内容 (6分):__________
Expression 表达 (9分):__________
Total:______________________
Comments:
e.g., "Good structure!" "More details."
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1.7.2013
You have 10 minutes to write your composition. Remember to write neatly, organize your ideas into paragraphs, and use the words, phrases, and sentences we've learned. After writing, we will invite a few students to share their work with the class.
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Show Time
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Evaluation Standard
Content (6 Points)
(1) 表达共情安慰------ 1分
(2) 分析原因------ 1分
(2)你的建议-------1分 + 1分 + 1分
(3)希望与鼓励------1分
Expression (9 Points)
8-9 Points:表达准确,意思连贯,符合逻辑,只有个别不影响交际的语言错误。
6-7 Points:表达清楚,意思连贯,符合逻辑,但有少量语言错误。
4-5 Points:表达较为清楚、连贯,基本符合逻辑,但有一些语言错误。
1-3 Points:能写出少数正确句子,但整体表达不连贯,且语言错误较多。
0 Points: 空白卷或完全没有相关内容。
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Now, let's learn how to evaluate a composition using the Guangdong High School Entrance Examination standard. It consists of two parts: Content (6 points) and Expression (9 points). Let's go through the criteria together. Evaluating others' work can also help you identify your own strengths and weaknesses in writing.
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Be a real problem solver – for yourself and for others.
We share problems. We give kind advice. We grow together.
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自我评价(Checklist)
评价项目 是 待改进
我写出了朋友的问题(睡不好、焦虑)
我分析了1-2个可能的原因
我给出了至少3条具体建议
我使用了不同的建议句型
我表达了鼓励和祝愿
我检查了语法和拼写错误
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Must-do:
Polish your composition to add more details and correct the grammar mistakes.
Choose to do:
Peer assessment.
Homework
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Thank you
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You should...
You shouldn’t...
You could...
Why don’t you...?
How about...?
You’d better...
Useful expressions
Why not...?
It’s best (not) to do...
Let’s do...
It might be a good idea to do...
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Beginning
Body
Ending
表达共情
给出建议
着重方法
表达鼓励
表达祝愿
It is common for you to have such problem.
You can`t sleep well and feel anxious, maybe because…
It’s a good idea to…
You can...
…
分析原因
I hope..
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