专题10 书面表达（专项训练）四升五年级英语暑假专项提升（牛津上海版试用本）

**基本信息** 聚焦小学英语书面表达，系统梳理命题作文、看图作文、应用文三类题型方法，通过“技巧+实践”提升语言表达与逻辑思维能力。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |答题技巧|3类技巧总结|命题作文分写人/物/景/事四维度，看图作文四步法，应用文三要素（格式/内容/语言）|从方法归纳到主题实践，覆盖高频话题，培养语言组织与细节观察能力| |小试牛刀|8道练习题（含命题、应用文、看图等）|结合范文解析提供句型/词汇支持，强化句式多样性训练|通过节日、动物等生活化主题，落实语言能力与思维品质的协同发展|

专题10 书面表达 · 内容导航 · 01：答题技巧 02：小试牛刀 答题技巧 命题作文 常考的英语命题作文可归纳为写人、写物、写景、写事四个方面： （1）写 “人” 的作文，可以从人物的籍贯、五官、衣着、喜好、性格特点等方面加以描述。 （2）写 “物” 的作文，同学们平时要多观察身边的一草一木，注意它们的颜色、形状、大小、习性等细节。 （3）写 “景” 的作文命题也是多种多样的。比如描写季节、你所生活的城市、学校等等。写景时，我们要按时间或空间的顺序来写。当然也可以根据内容的不同加以评价或陈述你喜欢的原因。 （4）写 “事” 时，要注意条理性，一般按时间、地点、人物、事件来记叙。运用时态要准确。 看图作文 写好看图作文的几个步骤： （1）仔细观察每幅图片； （2）把握每幅图的要点和图画间的内在联系，用最简单的词句概括每幅图的内容； （3）补充每幅图的细节，如：时间、地点等； （4）运用恰当的连接词或过渡词，连接成文。 应用文 应用文包括：通知、书信、日记、便条、启事、贺卡等。写应用文要注意： （1）应用文的写作格式。应用文的格式是约定俗成的，不能独创一格。 （2）应用文的内容要力求简明扼要。应用文一定要把意思表达清楚。 （3）语言方面要求文字准确无误，通顺朴实。 小试牛刀 （一） 以The ugly duckling 为题写一篇不少于30字的短文，句式不少于3种。 The ugly duckling ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （二） 以“My favourite festival”为题，选择一个你喜欢的节日进行写话。要求：围绕主题，句意连贯，至少三种句型，五个句子。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （三） 请介绍你一周忙碌的生活，可以说说一周七天，你会做什么事？至少35个单词，3种以上句型。 A busy week _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ （四） 以“My favourite _______”为题描述一个你最喜爱的节日，至少35个字。 _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ （五） 作文：My shadow不少于3种句型，30个单词。 _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ （六） 以My favourite sport为题，写一篇短文，不少于三种句型，30个字以上。 ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________ （七） 以My favourite animal为题，写一篇短文，不少于三种句型，30个字以上。 _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ （八） 看图写话，至少30个单词。 On the beach ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 （一） 范文： The ugly duckling It is warm in spring. The eggs open. One duckling is ugly. The other ducklings often play together. The ugly duckling is sad and lonely. The ugly duckling swims away. It is so cold in winter. The ugly duckling goes into a house, but an old woman drives him away. It is spring again. The ugly duckling looks into the pond. Now it is a swan. 【解析】1. 题干解读：以The ugly duckling 为题写一篇不少于30字的短文。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合单词字数和句式数量的要求。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：egg蛋，ugly丑陋的，sad伤心的，lonely孤独的，drive away驱赶，pond池塘，swan天鹅 参考句型：It is …； The other ducklings often…；The ugly duckling is …； Now he is… （二） 范文： My favourite festival Mid-autumn festival is my favourite festival. It’s usually in September. My mother usually makes mooncakes before the festival. We have a big family dinner that evening. We eat mooncakes. We enjoy the moon after dinner. My grandpa usually tells stories about the moon. I like Mid-autumn festival very much. What about you? What’s your favourite festival? 【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求写自己喜欢的一个节日。文中阐述这个节日的时间以及在这个节日有什么活动。注意文章为一般现在时态，要符合句子结构和数量要求。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：favourite最喜欢的，Mid-autumn festival中秋节，September九月，dinner晚餐，mooncakes 月饼，stories故事 参考句型：…is my favourite season；It’s usually in…；I like…；We have…；We enjoy...；My grandpa usually tells... （三） 范文： A busy week From Monday to Friday, I go to school every day. After school, I do my homework and read books. After dinner, I sometimes help my mum do housework. On Saturday, I go to the music school to study music. On Sunday, I often visit my grandparents with my parents. What a busy week! 【解析】1.题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称写一周忙碌的生活，根据提示可以写一周七天，自己做的事情。用上3种以上句型，注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。 2.参考词汇和句型： 参考单词：Monday to Friday星期一至星期五，go to school去上学，do my homework做作业，Saturday星期六，Sunday星期天 参考句型：From Monday to Friday, I…；After dinner, I sometimes…；What a busy week！ （四） 范文： My favorite festival My favorite festival is the Spring Festival. It usually comes in late January or early February. Before the Spring Festival, Chinese people are usually busy cleaning their houses and buying new clothes for kids. On the last day of the old year, there is a big family dinner. After dinner, we usually watch TV or play games. At midnight, we don’t go to bed but wait for the new day. We always set off fireworks. It’s very exciting and interesting! On the first day of the New Year, we usually go out to visit relatives and friends. We often go to our relatives’ home and have a big dinner. We often have many things to talk and we are very happy. The Spring Festival is very interesting, isn’t it? 【解析】1.题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称描述自己最喜爱的节日，具体阐述人们通常在节日里做什么。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合单词数量要求。 2.参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：favorite festival最喜欢的节日，the Spring Festival春节，January or early February一月或二月初，a big family dinner一顿丰盛的家庭大餐，watch TV看电视，play games玩游戏，At midnight在午夜，set off fireworks放烟花，visit relatives and friends拜访亲戚和朋友， 参考句型：It usually...；At midnight, we...；We often...； （五） 范文： My shadow This is my shadow. My shadow often goes with me. She is also my friend. Sometimes my shadow stays behind me. Sometimes my shadow walks in front of me. When the sun goes down in the evening, my shadow grows long again. I like my shadow. 【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用用3种句型描述自己的影子。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：shadow影子，also也，behind在……后面，in front of在……前面 参考句型：This is...；My shadow often...；Sometimes my shadow...；When the sun...，my shadow... （六） 范文： My Favourite Sport My name is Anna. I like sports very much. My favourite sport is table tennis. My father teaches me how to play table tennis. I often play table tennis after school. I think it is very interesting. 【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称介绍自己最喜欢的运动。然后再阐述是什么运动以及自己经常为此做的事情及感受。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。 2.参考词汇与句型： 参考单词： favourite最喜欢的，table tennis乒乓球， 参考句型： I like...；My favourite sport is…；My father teaches…；I often…；I think… （七） 范文： My favourite animal My favourite animal is the panda. It is cute. It is black and white. It is fat. Its favourite food is bamboo. I often see it on TV. I like it very much. 【解析】1.题干解读：该题目要求写自己最喜欢的动物，可以写是什么，然后介绍动物的特点及爱好。写作时要用上至少三种句型，注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。 2.参考词汇和句型： 参考单词：cute可爱的，fat胖的，bamboo竹子 参考句型：My favourite animal is…；It is…；Its favourite food… （八） 范文： On the beach From the picture we can see a scene of great pleasure. It is a sunny day. On the seashore, all kinds of people enjoy the sunshine and seawater.　　　　 　　In the water, some people are swimming like fishes. Children are lying on the sea boats. On the beach, a man is watching football game on TV. Some people are playing volleyball, some are lying on the seashore. On the whole, all the people have a pleasure summer holiday. 【解析】1.题干解读：该题目要求介绍该图片中情景。具体描写图中的地点及人们都在干什么。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合单词数量要求。 2.参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：scene场面，pleasure愉快，sunny晴朗的，seashore海岸，sunshine阳光，seawater海水，watch football game看足球比赛，play volleyball打排球，summer holiday暑假 参考句型：It is…；there are…；some people…； 第 1 页 共 8 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $