专题10 书面表达（专项训练）小升初英语暑假专项提升（教科版广州）

**基本信息** 聚焦小学英语书面表达，构建“技巧分类+题型应用”双维体系，通过命题/看图/应用文三类方法提炼与10道梯度典例，系统培养语言表达与逻辑思维能力。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |答题技巧|3类方法（命题/看图/应用文）|命题作文分写人/物/景/事四维度，看图作文按“观察-概括-补充-连接”四步骤，应用文强调格式规范与简明表达|从基础方法分类到具体写作要素，形成“类型识别-要点提取-语言组织”的逻辑链条| |小试牛刀|10道梯度题（含写人/事/物/景）|结合范文解析渗透“You should/shouldn’t”等核心句型与连接词运用|覆盖校园规范、环保、人物介绍等真实话题，实现方法迁移与语言能力提升|

专题10 书面表达 · 内容导航 · 01：答题技巧 02：小试牛刀 答题技巧 命题作文 常考的英语命题作文可归纳为写人、写物、写景、写事四个方面： （1）写 “人” 的作文，可以从人物的籍贯、五官、衣着、喜好、性格特点等方面加以描述。 （2）写 “物” 的作文，同学们平时要多观察身边的一草一木，注意它们的颜色、形状、大小、习性等细节。 （3）写 “景” 的作文命题也是多种多样的。比如描写季节、你所生活的城市、学校等等。写景时，我们要按时间或空间的顺序来写。当然也可以根据内容的不同加以评价或陈述你喜欢的原因。 （4）写 “事” 时，要注意条理性，一般按时间、地点、人物、事件来记叙。运用时态要准确。 看图作文 写好看图作文的几个步骤： （1）仔细观察每幅图片； （2）把握每幅图的要点和图画间的内在联系，用最简单的词句概括每幅图的内容； （3）补充每幅图的细节，如：时间、地点等； （4）运用恰当的连接词或过渡词，连接成文。 应用文 应用文包括：通知、书信、日记、便条、启事、贺卡等。写应用文要注意： （1）应用文的写作格式。应用文的格式是约定俗成的，不能独创一格。 （2）应用文的内容要力求简明扼要。应用文一定要把意思表达清楚。 （3）语言方面要求文字准确无误，通顺朴实。 小试牛刀 （一） 同学们，在学校里需要注意些什么行为规范呢？请以“Being polite at school”为题，运用”You should／shouldn’t. . . ／Don’t. . . “等句型写一篇短文，不少于40个单词。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （二） 根据提示，写一篇关于“保护地球”的短文 提示： 1. Why is Earth important? 2. What can we do to protect it? ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （三） 同学们，动物是我们的好朋友。请介绍一种你喜欢的动物，可以从动物的外表、习性、栖息 (生活) 地、饮食 (喜欢吃什么) 、能力 (擅长做什么) 以及你喜欢的理由等方面进行描写。要求：1.不少于50个单词：2.内容切题，语法正确，语句流畅，书写工整。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （四） 用不少于45个单词复述你读过的一个故事，并评价故事或故事中的角色。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （五） 英语写作。 同学们，每年《感动中国》节目都为我们介绍了很多杰出的人物，每个人物身上都有一种让观众感到心灵震撼的精神力量。 请你在以下两位代表人物中选择一位人物，根据所提供的信息，为他写出英文介绍词，可以从他的生平、外貌、职业、成就等方面来介绍。 要求内容清晰、语言达意、连贯顺畅；不少于40个词；书写工整。请将短文写在答题卡上。 ·Name: Su Bingtian ·Date of birth: August 29th, 1989 ·Place of birth: Guangdong ·Job: an athlete ·Achievements: won many gold medals, China’s “flying man” … ·Name: Zhang Guimei ·Date of birth: June, 1957 ·Place of birth: Heilongjiang ·Job: a teacher ·Achievements: began to teach in Yunnan in 1974, built the first free high school for girls, help the girls from poor families to keep studying … ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （六） 看图并参考所提供的信息，按要求写一段话。 暑假快到了，李明报名参加伦敦游。假设你是李明，请参考旅行社的海报，写一段完整的话介绍你的伦敦旅游计划。（要求：不少于40个单词，条理清楚，句式丰富，连贯通顺。） Hi, I am Li Ming. I’m going to travel to London this summer holiday. ____________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （七） 写作。暑假就要来了，如果你打算在国内旅游，你将选择去哪个城市？根据以下思维导图，请你写一篇小短文计划一下，要求不少于40个单词，语句通顺，主题突出。 My trip places people activities time transport (交通方式) …… ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （八） 根据表格中的个人信息，用英文简单介绍袁隆平。要求语句通顺，不少于40个单词。 Name Yuan Longping “ the father of hybrid rice” Job a Chinese agriculture scientist Was born September , 1930, in Beijing died May, 2021 at the age of 91 Achievement(成就) invented the hybrid rice, made our lives better ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （九） 作文：同学们，世界万物都在不断地变化，我们自己、身边的人和环境也一直在变化中。请根据提示，围绕changes这个主题，介绍某一个人或某一个地方从过去到现在的变化。（要求：文中不要出现自己的真实姓名和学校，不少于6句，40词） 提示：Before …, but now … ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （十） 根据图片和问题提示，用英语写一段话，介绍老虎的情况，并提出保护建议。 (要求：不少于40个单词，条理清楚，句式丰富，连贯通顺。) ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文及解析 （一） 范文：                                                                 Being polite at school     Being polite at school is very important. First, you should listen carefully and raise your hand before speaking in class. Second, you should finish your homework on time every day. Third, you should keep the classroom clean and tidy. Fourth, you shouldn’t talk loudly in class. Finally, don’t run or play ball games in the classroom. 【解析】1.题干解读：该题目要求以“Being polite at school”为题写一篇短文。人称用第二人称，同时注意句子数量符合要求。 2.参考词汇和句型： 参考词汇：important重要的，raise your hand举手，finish完成，on time按时，every day每天，keep保持，clean and tidy干净整洁，Finally最后 参考句型：First, you should…；Fourth, you shouldn’t…；Finally, don’t run… （二） 范文： Earth is our only home. It gives us clean air, water, and food. However, many animals are in danger because people cut down forests and pollute rivers. To protect Earth, we should plant more trees, stop using plastic bags, and recycle waste. If everyone works together, Earth will stay beautiful and healthy. 【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求介绍保护地球的短文。根据提示阐述地球的重要性以及做些什么来保护地球，注意文章为一般现在时并要符合逻辑。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考词汇：air空气，water水，food食物，in danger处在危险当中，cut down砍伐，plastic bags塑料袋 参考句型：It gives…；To protect Earth, we should…；If everyone works together... （三） 范文：     My favorite animal is rabbit. Its body is white. Its eyes are red. Its ears are long. It can run and jump. It likes to eat grass. It usually lives in the grass. I like it because it is very cute. It’s very kind. Rabbits are good friends of human beings.We should protect them.We can’t hurt them. 【解析】该题目要求介绍一种你喜欢的动物，可以从动物的外表、习性、栖息 (生活) 地、饮食 (喜欢吃什么) 、能力 (擅长做什么) 以及你喜欢的理由等方面进行描写。时态是一般现在时态，人称是第三人称，同时注意词数的要求。 参考词汇和句型： 参考词汇：rabbit兔子，body身体，run跑，jump跳，grass草，cute可爱的，kind友善的 参考句型：My favorite animal is...；Its body is...；It can...；It usually lives...；I like it because... （四） 范文： One day, Mr Green took a train to mountains for holiday. When he was looking out of the window on the train. The wind blew his hat off. Then he quickly threw his bag outside. Many people on the train were confused. Mr Green told them that there was no name and no address on his hat. But his bag had. If someone found both of them. They would help to send them back to him. We can see that Mr Green is not so clever. It is probably impossible for him to get his hat and bag back again. 【解析】1.题干解读：该题目要求复述你读过的一个故事，并对故事或故事中的人物做出评价，可以写你最近读过的故事或者选择一个经典故事来写，时态以一般过去时为主，故事情节需描述清晰，语义连贯，字数要符合题干要求。 2.参考词汇和句型： 参考词汇和短语：look out of向外看，blew(blow的过去式)off 吹掉，confused困惑的，address地址，clever聪明的，probably大概，impossible不可能 参考句型：…took a train to…；…was/were confused；We can see that+从句；It is probably impossible for sb to do sth （五） 范文： Zhang Guimei was born in June, 1957 in Heilongjiang. She is a thin and kind teacher with glasses. She began to teach in Yunnan in 1974. Many girls there stopped studying. She felt very sorry for that and wanted to do something for them. So she built the first free high school for girls. She wanted to help the girls from poor families to keep studying. She helped many girls there. She is one of the greatest teachers in China. 【解析】1.题干解读：该题目要求根据给所信息给杰出人物写英文介绍词，选一个人物来介绍，内容可适当延伸但要符合实际。时态用一般现在时和一般过去时，注意表达完整，句意连贯，字数要符合题干要求。 2. 参考词汇和句型： 参考单词：thin瘦的，built(build的过去式)建造，free免费的，poor families贫困家庭 参考句型：…was born in…；She/He is a…teacher with…；…felt sorry for that and wanted to…；She helped…；She/He is one of…in China （六） 范文： Hi, I am Li Ming. I’m going to travel to London this summer holiday. I will go there by plane. The plane will start at 11:00 am., July 10th. I will stay in London for four days. On the first day, I plan to visit Big Ben and Tower Bridge. On the second day, I will take a ride on London Eye and take a walk along the River Thames. On the third day, I want to visit British Museum. I will stay there all day. And on the fourth day, I will visit Buckingham Palace in the morning and then go shopping in the afternoon. On July 15th, I will fly back to Guangzhou. I’m so excited! I can’t wait to visit London! 【解析】1.题干解读：该题要求以第一人称写一段完整的话介绍伦敦旅游计划，注意文章时态为一般现在时并符合单词数量要求。 2.参考词汇和参考句型： 参考单词：travel旅行，by plane乘飞机，stay停留，plan计划，Big Ben大本钟，Tower Bridge塔桥，take a ride兜风，London Eye摩天轮，take a walk散步，along沿着，the River Thames泰晤士河，British Museum大英博物馆，Buckingham Palace白金汉宫，excited兴奋的 参考句型：I will go there by plane.；The plane will…；I will stay…；On the first day, I…；On the second day, I…；On the third day, I…；And on the fourth day, I…；I’m so excited!；I can’t wait to… （七） 范文： The summer holiday is coming. I am going to have a trip to Beijing with my parents. I’m going to get there by plane. There are lots of famous places in Beijing. We are going to visit the Great Wall and the Summer Palace. We will eat some Chinese food. I am going to find out more about Chinese history. We are going to take photos. We will have a great time in Beijing. 【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求根据思维导图写一写暑假我的旅行计划。先确定要去的城市，然后再阐述怎么去，和谁去，做什么等。注意文章为一般将来时态并要符合单词字数要求。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：famous著名的，the Great Wall长城，Chinese中国的，take photos拍照，have a great time玩得开心 参考句型：I am going to...；We are going to...；There are...；We will... （八） 范文： Yuan Longping is China’s “the father of hybrid rice”. He is also a great Chinese agricultural scientist. In 1930, he was born in Beijing. He worked hard on the farm. He invented the hybrid rice and made our lives better. He died at the age of 91 on May, 2021. We were all sad. 【解析】1.题干解读：该题目要以第三人称介绍袁隆平，时态以一般过去时为主，按照表格中信息提示描述，注意语言简洁，书写规范，字数要满足题目要求。 2.参考词汇和句型： 参考单词与短语：invent发明 ，the father of hybrid rice杂交水稻之父， agricultural 农业的，scientist科学家，made one’s lives better让某人的生活变得更好。 参考句型：He was born in…；He died at the age of… （九） 范文： I’ve changed a lot in the last six years. I was short before, but now I am tall. Before I couldn’t ride a bike, but now I can go to school by bike. I used to be quiet and shy, but now I’m very active. I wasn’t good at English before, but now I am good at English. 【解析】1. 题干解读：要求以“Changes”为主题，介绍某一个人或某一个地方从过去到现在的变化。可以写自己的变化，从外貌的变化，能力的变化，性格的变化以及学习的变化等方面来写作。句子时态用一般过去时和一般现在时且符合句子数量和单词要求。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：a lot许多；short矮的；tall高的；ride a bike骑自行车；by bike骑自行车；quiet安静的；active活跃的；be good at擅长 参考句型：Before I couldn’t...but now I can...；I used to...；I wasn’t...but now I am... （十） 范文：      A tiger is a kind of catamount animal. It looks like a cat, but much bigger than a cat. It lives in the mountains. A tiger is very ferocious and it eats mainly meat. It has yellow and black streaks all over its body and it looks very beautiful. Its tail is long and strong.  We should protect tigers. We shouldn’t kill them. 【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用英语写一段话，介绍老虎的情况。然后再阐述老虎的外貌，居住地，饮食等。注意文章为一般现在时态并要符合句子数量要求。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：catamount猫科动物，mountains大山，ferocious凶猛的，mainly主要的，streaks条纹，beautiful漂亮的，protece保护，kill杀死 参考句型：A tiger is...；It looks like...；It looks like...；It has...；We should... 第 1 页 共 8 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $