专题10 书面表达（专项训练）五升六年级英语暑假专项提升（教科版广州）

**基本信息** 以“方法分类+情境应用”构建书面表达训练体系，系统提炼命题/看图/应用文写作技巧，通过梯度化情境任务培养语言表达与逻辑思维能力。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |答题技巧|3类写作方法|命题作文分题材描述要点，看图作文按观察-概括-补充-连接四步法，应用文强调格式规范与简明表达|从写作类型分类到具体方法拆解，形成“类型-方法-要点”的逻辑链| |小试牛刀|10道情境题|涵盖邀请信、计划、景点介绍等高频题型，提供参考句型与范文解析|以真实情境任务为载体，实现方法迁移与语言能力综合应用|

专题10 书面表达 · 内容导航 · 01：答题技巧 02：小试牛刀 答题技巧 命题作文 常考的英语命题作文可归纳为写人、写物、写景、写事四个方面： （1）写 “人” 的作文，可以从人物的籍贯、五官、衣着、喜好、性格特点等方面加以描述。 （2）写 “物” 的作文，同学们平时要多观察身边的一草一木，注意它们的颜色、形状、大小、习性等细节。 （3）写 “景” 的作文命题也是多种多样的。比如描写季节、你所生活的城市、学校等等。写景时，我们要按时间或空间的顺序来写。当然也可以根据内容的不同加以评价或陈述你喜欢的原因。 （4）写 “事” 时，要注意条理性，一般按时间、地点、人物、事件来记叙。运用时态要准确。 看图作文 写好看图作文的几个步骤： （1）仔细观察每幅图片； （2）把握每幅图的要点和图画间的内在联系，用最简单的词句概括每幅图的内容； （3）补充每幅图的细节，如：时间、地点等； （4）运用恰当的连接词或过渡词，连接成文。 应用文 应用文包括：通知、书信、日记、便条、启事、贺卡等。写应用文要注意： （1）应用文的写作格式。应用文的格式是约定俗成的，不能独创一格。 （2）应用文的内容要力求简明扼要。应用文一定要把意思表达清楚。 （3）语言方面要求文字准确无误，通顺朴实。 小试牛刀 （一） 五一劳动节 (May Day) 马上到来，你有什么计划呢？请你以“My holiday plan”为题，写一写你的假期计划，注意用一般将来时，要求：不少于5句话，35个单词：句子正确，表达连贯，语言得体，书写工整， (开头已给出，不计入字数) 参考句型：I am going to/will/plan to...         On the first/second/third day... 参考短语：go mountain climbing，go shopping，visit the museum，visit a farm，go for a picnic，play on the beach My holiday plan May Day is coming. ___________________________________________________________ _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （二） ●情境：下周六是Lily的生日，她想邀请同学Amy一起去看电影。 ●任务：帮助Lily完成写给Amy的邀请信。 ●要求：用上表格的全部信息，内容完整，表达连贯，语言正确，书写工整，不少于30个单词。 Cinema Feiyang Cinema Time the film starts 2:30 p.m. When to meet 1:45 p.m. Where to meet at the school gate How to go by bus Lily’s Phone No. 6581-8802 Dear Amy, Next Saturday is my birthday. I’d like to invite you to see the film Ne Zha 2 together. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Lily （三） 暑假将至，Ben计划举行一个美食派对，他想邀请Janet参加。请根据以下信息，帮助Ben写一封邀请函给Janet。 要求：内容完整；语言正确；连贯顺畅；书写工整。 Time: July 12th, 2:30 p.m. Place: Ben’s house Activities: enjoy delicious food, sing and dance, see a film, play games … ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （四） 参考所提供的信息，按要求写一段话。 暑假快到了，假设你是Ben，计划去海南旅行。参考以下行程表，写一段完整的话介绍你的旅行计划。(不少于40词，条理清晰，句式丰富。) Hainan Trip Plan 出发/返回：7月10日白云机场 / 7月15日美兰机场 Day 1：沙滩野餐 Day 2：爬山 Day 3：农场参观 Day 4：购物 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （五） 请给出一些安全建议，不少于30个单词。(不要出现姓名和学校)。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （六） 书面表达。 Welcome to the bonfire(篝火) party! To: Mary                                  From: Alice Time: next month  (August 6th, 8: 00 p.m.) Place: Xin Yuan Farm Activities: 1. listen to music, play the guitar(吉它) and sing songs 2. guess riddles(猜谜语) and eat delicious food (You can bring your friends, too.) 请你按照第上面邀请卡的信息，以Alice的身份给Mary写一封邀请函。 要求：1. 包含邀请卡的所有信息；2. 注意邀请函的格式与时态。3. 书写规范，语句通顺，句子表达流畅。(不少于5句话或40个词) ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （七） 作者从三亚回来后想和好朋友分享旅游见闻和照片，请根据提示帮作者完成邀请函。要求包含以下四个信 息点，语言准确、语句通顺、句式丰富, 不少于40个单词。 Time: 10: 00﹣11: 30 am Share: photos, interesting experiences (经历) What’s more: bring your travel photos Telephone: 13652481996 Dear Jenny, I had a wonderful summer holiday. I’d like to invite you and some of our good friends to my home on August 15th.Let’s have a sharing party of our holiday. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Hope to see you soon. Yours （八） Ann计划参加图书馆的“儿童阅读分享会”活动。请你以Ann的身份邀请你的好朋友Sue参加。要求：根据以下信息写邀请卡，格式正确，可参考提示词，不少于6句话。 活动主题 Children’s Book Sharing Party 活动时间 this Sunday, begin at 9: 00 in the morning, arrive at 8: 50 in the morning (提前集中时间) 活动地点 Conghua Library 活动要求 take your favourite book 咨询电话 020-879123456 提示词：I’d like to. . . , invite, It will begin at. . . , If you can come. . . Dear __________, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, __________ （九） Dear Annie, I’d like to invite you to go to the food show with my family. I know you like eating different foods. At the food show, we can eat foods from different places, such as dimsum from Guangzhou, zongzi from Zhaoqing, roast duck from Beijing, sweet and sour meat from Shanghai and some very hot food from Sichuan. Among them, I like hot food from Sichuan best. And we can try Japanese sushi and Korean (韩国的) cold noodles. We can also try your favourite English food, fish and chips. The food show will begin on July 2nd, next month. If you can come, please call me on 81287501. This is my home telephone number. Yours, Xiaoling 同学们，请仿照上面的邀请信，帮Annie给Xiaoling写封回信，表达感谢和意愿。不少于5句话。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （十） 请参考所给例文中关于顺德的介绍，写一写南沙的景点及可做的活动。要求：1. 至少选择一个图中所提供的景点信息，可适当拓展；2. 不少于35个单词；3. 句子正确、表达连贯、语言得体、书写工整。 Shunde is in Foshan. It’s near Guangzhou. It takes about one hour to Shunde from Nansha. The weather is nice. Sometimes it is wet. But it is often sunny. Shunde is a good place to travel. Here are some of the most interesting places in Shunde. Qinghui Garden is a Lingnan(岭南) garden building. People built it in 1607. It’s not big. But it’s one of the most famous gardens in Lingnan. It’s a beautiful place like a picture. Fengjian Water Town is not in the centre of the city(城市). There are many old trees and more than one hundred old houses there. You can enjoy the fresh and clean air. And you can go boating there. People built Chencun Flower World in 1998. It’s very large. It has more than 300 flower companies(公司) from all over the world. It is the world of flowers. You can enjoy lots of beautiful flowers. There are many beautiful gardens there, too. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 （一） 范文： My holiday plan May Day is coming. I plan to have a great holiday with my family. On the first day, we are going to visit my uncle’s farm. I will help feed small animals and pick fresh vegetables there. On the second day, we will go mountain climbing, and then go for a picnic at the foot of the mountain. On the third day, I plan to visit the city museum with my mom, and we will go shopping for my favorite books after that. I think I will have a wonderful May Day holiday. 【解析】1. 题干解读：注意文章时态为一般将来时。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考词汇：On the first day第一天，visit看望，feed animals喂动物，go mountain climbing去爬山，go for a picnic去野餐，visit the museum参观博物馆，go shopping去购物 参考句型：I plan to…；On the first day, we are going to…；I will…；I think I will… （二） 范文： Dear Amy,            Next Saturday is my birthday. I’d like to invite you to see the film Ne Zha 2 together. We will go to Feiyang Cinema. The film starts at 2:30 p.m. So we will meet at 1:45 p.m. at the school gate. We will go there by bus. If you want to see the film, call me please. My phone number is 6581-8802. Yours, Lily 【解析】题干解读：该题目要求以Lily的名义给Amy写一封一起去看电影的邀请信。可以写一写在哪个电影院，电影开始时间，集合地点和交通方式等。注意文章为一般将来时态，单词数量要符合要求。 参考词汇和句型： 参考词汇：start开始，meet见面，at the school gate在学校门口，by bus乘公交车 参考句型：We will… （三） 范文： Dear Janet,     I am writing to invite you to my food party. It will be on July 12th. You can come to my home before 2:30 p. m. We will enjoy delicious food. We will sing and dance. We will see a film and play games. We will have a good time. Yours Ben 【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称帮助本给珍妮特写一封邀请函邀请珍妮特参加美食派对。阐述派对上具体做的事情。注意文章为一般将来时并要符合题干所给信息。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考词汇：invite邀请，delicious food美味的食物，see a film看电影，play games玩游戏 参考句型：I am…；We will… （四） 范文： Hi, I’m Ben. I’m going to visit Hainan this summer holiday. I will fly from Baiyun Airport on July 10th. On the first day, I’ll have a picnic on the beach. On the second day, I’ll go mountain climbing. On the third day, I’ll visit a farm. On the last day, I’ll go shopping and buy gifts for my friends. I will return to Guangzhou on July 15th. I can’t wait! 【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称写出自己的旅行计划，结合所给的提示要点，注意文章为一般将来时态并要符合词数要求。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考词汇：summer holiday暑假，go mountain climbing去爬山，have a picnic去野餐，on the beach在沙滩上，go shopping去购物 参考句型：I’ll...；I’m going to...；I can’t ... （五） 范文：       Hello, everyone. Today I will tell you some advices about safety. Firstly, don’t cross the road when the traffic light is red. Secondly, don’t play in the street and climb the tall trees. Lastly, don’t take any monkey or candy from strangers in the street. 【解析】1.题干解读：该题目要求给出一些安全建议，不能出现姓名和学校，注意词数的要求。 2.参考词汇及句型： 参考词汇：advice建议，safety安全，cross穿过，road马路，traffic light交通信号灯，play玩，street街道，take拿，money钱，candy糖果，stranger陌生人 参考句型：Firstly, don’t...；Secondly, don’t...；Lastly, don’t... （六） 范文： Invitation Dear Mary, I would like to invite you to the bonfire party at Xin Yuan Farm next month. The party will be on August 6th. It will begin at 8: 00 p.m. We will listen to music, play the guitar and sing songs. We will guess riddles and eat delicious food. You can bring your friends, too. It will be great fun. Hope to see you soon. Alice 【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求以Alice的身份给Mary写一封邀请函。内容要包含邀请卡里的所有信息，注意邀请函的格式与时态，并要符合句子数量要求。 2. 参考词汇和句型： 参考单词：invite邀请，begin开始，play the guitar弹吉他，sing songs唱歌 参考句型：I would like to invite you to…；The party will be on…；We will… （七） 范文： Dear Jenny, I had a wonderful summer holiday. I’d like to invite you and some of our good friends to my home on August 15th. Let’s have a sharing party of our holiday. The party begins at 10: 00 o’clock. And it ends at 11: 30 am. I’m going to share some photos with you. And I’m going to share my interesting experiences with you too. Please bring your travel photos. We’re going to share them together. If you have questions, you can call me. My telephone number 13652481996. I can’t wait to see you. Hope to see you soon. Yours 【解析】1.题干解读：该题目要求根据提示完成邀请函，要包含题干中的四个信息点。注意语言准确，语句通顺，句式丰富和单词的数量要求。 2.参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：experience经历，travel旅行，share分享 参考句型：I’m going to...；I can’t wait to...；share... with... （八） 范文： Dear Sue,       We will have a Children’s Book Sharing Party this Sunday. I’d like to invite you to it. It will begin at 9: 00 in the morning. If you can come, you should arrive at 8: 50 in the morning. We will have the party in Conghua Library. Remember to take your favourite book there. If you want to know more about it , you can call 020-879123456 for help.                                                                                                                                                                                Yours                Ann 【解析】1.题干解读：该题目要求以Ann的身份邀请好朋友Sue参加“儿童阅读分享会”活动。可以写一写分享会的时间，地点，需要带的东西，联系电话等。注意文章为一般现在时和一般将来时态，句子数量要符合要求。 2.参考词汇和句型： 参考词汇：invite 邀请，begin 开始，arrive 到达，remember 记得，call 打电话 参考句型：I’d like to. . .；We will …；It will begin at. . .；If you can come. . . （九） 范文： Dear Xiaoling, Thanks for your invitation. I like eating different foods. My favourite food is fish and chips. I would like to go to the food show with your family. I’ll call you then. Yours, Annie 【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称给Xiaoling写回信。阐述对小玲邀请的感谢和意愿。注意文章为一般现在时和一般将来时并要符合句子数量要求。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考词汇：invitation邀请，fish and chips鱼和薯片，call打电话 参考句型：Thanks for…；I like…；My favourite food is…；I would like to…；I’ll… （十） 范文：     Nansha is in Guangzhou. It is near Shunde. The weather is nice. Nansha is a good place to travel. Here are some of interesting places in Nansha. Xian Xianghai’s Former resident is a good place. You can learn stories about Xian Xinghai. If you like climbing the mountains, you can go to Eighteen-Arhat Mountain Forest Park. Welcome to visit Nansha. 【解析】该题目要求参考所给例文中关于顺德的介绍，写一写南沙的景点及可做的活动。时态是一般现在时态，人称是第三人称，同时注意词数的要求。 参考词汇和句型： 参考词汇：Guangzhou广州，near在……附近，weather天气，interesting places有趣的地方，Xian Xianghai’s Former resident 冼星海故居，Eighteen-Arhat Mountain Forest Park十八罗汉山 参考句型：It is in/near...；...is a good place.；You can...；If you like... 第 1 页 共 8 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $