专题10 书面表达（专项训练）五升六年级英语暑假专项提升（人教PEP版·新教材）

**基本信息** 聚焦小学英语书面表达三大题型，构建“方法分类+步骤拆解+实战应用”的系统化训练体系，强化语言表达与逻辑思维能力。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |答题技巧|3类方法（命题/看图/应用文）|命题作文按题材（人/物/景/事）分类指导细节描写；看图作文四步法（观察-概括-补充-连接）；应用文强调格式规范与简明表达|方法与题型一一对应，从技巧学习到真题演练，形成“输入-内化-输出”的完整闭环，培养语言组织与逻辑思维能力| |小试牛刀|7道梯度题（含思维导图新考法）|结合范文解析提供词汇句型支持，强化时态运用与内容连贯|覆盖高频话题（计划/家乡/规则等），通过“题目-范文-解析”三步训练，提升语言表达准确性与学习策略运用能力|

专题10 书面表达 · 内容导航 · 01：答题技巧 02：小试牛刀 答题技巧 命题作文 常考的英语命题作文可归纳为写人、写物、写景、写事四个方面： （1）写 “人” 的作文，可以从人物的籍贯、五官、衣着、喜好、性格特点等方面加以描述。 （2）写 “物” 的作文，同学们平时要多观察身边的一草一木，注意它们的颜色、形状、大小、习性等细节。 （3）写 “景” 的作文命题也是多种多样的。比如描写季节、你所生活的城市、学校等等。写景时，我们要按时间或空间的顺序来写。当然也可以根据内容的不同加以评价或陈述你喜欢的原因。 （4）写 “事” 时，要注意条理性，一般按时间、地点、人物、事件来记叙。运用时态要准确。 看图作文 写好看图作文的几个步骤： （1）仔细观察每幅图片； （2）把握每幅图的要点和图画间的内在联系，用最简单的词句概括每幅图的内容； （3）补充每幅图的细节，如：时间、地点等； （4）运用恰当的连接词或过渡词，连接成文。 应用文 应用文包括：通知、书信、日记、便条、启事、贺卡等。写应用文要注意： （1）应用文的写作格式。应用文的格式是约定俗成的，不能独创一格。 （2）应用文的内容要力求简明扼要。应用文一定要把意思表达清楚。 （3）语言方面要求文字准确无误，通顺朴实。 小试牛刀 （一） 以 My travel plan 为题，写一篇80—100词的短文。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （二） 题目：My beautiful hometown 要求：写一写你的家乡，介绍它的位置、景色、特色，不少于60词。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （三） 看图或想象，写5句话描述动物们正在做什么。 提示：The panda is... The rabbits are... _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （四） 写作要求： 请你写一段话，介绍你的社区 (community)。 内容必须包括： 1. 社区里有哪些场所 (library, park, cinema, bus station 等) 2. 它们的位置 (next to, between, far from 等) 3. 社区里的规则 (Don’t litter, recycle paper 等) 要求：不少于5句话，语句通顺，意思连贯。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （五） 题目：School rules 要求：写一篇不少于100词的短文，介绍学校的规则，用 must 和 mustn’t。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （六） 【新考法·思维导图】假如你是李明，请根据思维导图的提示，以“读万卷书，行万里路”为主题制定暑假计划，完成短文写作。要求：至少写五句话。 Hello, I’m Li Ming. Summer holiday is coming. I have a reading plan. I’m going to read three books. I’m going to read for an hour every day. I’m going to read some picture books. I also have a travel plan. I’m going to _____________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （七） 以“My Favourite Season”为题，写一篇40词左右的短文。要求： 1. 介绍自己最喜欢的季节； 2. 说明该季节的天气特点； 3. 写出在该季节可以做的事情； 4. 语句通顺，语法正确。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考范文及解析 （一） 范文： My travel plan The summer holiday is coming soon. I will make a good travel plan for my holiday. I will go to a beautiful city with my parents. Before the trip, we can get information from the Internet. During our trip, we will eat fresh seafood and explore green hills. We can also learn about the local culture and history. I think we will take many nice photos too. I believe we will have a happy and interesting trip. I’m looking forward to it. 【解析】1. 题干解读：注意文章为一般将来时。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：travel plan旅行计划，beautiful美丽的，information信息，seafood海鲜，explore探索，learn about了解 参考句型：I will...；We can...；I think...；I believe... （二） 范文： My beautiful hometown My hometown is a small but beautiful village. It lies in the south of China. There are many green trees and colorful flowers around it. The air is fresh and the sky is blue. There is a clear river running through the village. I often go fishing and boating on the river with my friends. My hometown is famous for sweet fruits. I love my hometown. Welcome to my hometown. 【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目用一般现在时。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考词汇：village村庄，south南部，fresh新鲜的，go fishing去钓鱼，be famous for因……而著名 参考句型：My hometown is…；There are…；There is…；I often… （三） 范文： Look at the animals! They are so cute. The panda is eating bamboo. The rabbits are jumping. The dog is sleeping under the tree. The cat is playing with a ball. The monkey is climbing the tree. I love these animals! 【解析】1. 题干解读：注意文章是一般现在时态和现在进行时态。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：eat bamboo吃竹子，jump跳，sleep睡觉，play with a ball玩球，climb the tree爬树 参考句型：They are...；The panda is...；The rabbits are...；I love... （四） 范文： I live in a nice community. There is a big park, a library and a cinema in it. The park is next to my home. The library is between the cinema and the bus station. We have rules in our community. Don’t litter everywhere. We should recycle paper and bottles. My neighbors are friendly. I love my community very much. 【解析】1. 题干解读：注意文章为一般现在时态。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：park公园，library图书馆，cinema电影院，next to在……旁边，between... and...在……和……之间，rule规则，litter乱扔垃圾，recycle回收利用，friendly友好的 参考句型：There is …；... is …；Don’t …；We should …；My neighbors are ... （五） 范文： School rules There are many rules in our school. We must get to school on time. We must wear school uniforms on Mondays. We mustn’t run or fight in the hallway, because it is dangerous. We mustn’t talk loudly in the classroom. We must listen to the teacher carefully. We must raise our hands before speaking. We mustn’t eat or drink in class. We mustn’t bring mobile phones to school. We also mustn’t draw on the walls or desks. We must keep our classroom clean and tidy. Following the rules helps us study better. I like our school rules. We can have a happy and safe school life. 【解析】1. 题干解读：注意文章为一般现在时态。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考单词：must必须，mustn’t不准，get to school on time准时到校，wear school uniforms穿校服，talk loudly高声交谈，raise our hands before speaking举手发言，eat or drink in class在课堂上饮食，keep our classroom clean and tidy保持教室干净整洁 参考句型：There are...；We must...；We mustn’t...；I like...；We can... （六） 范文：     Hello, I’m Li Ming. Summer holiday is coming. I have a reading plan. I’m going to read three books. I’m going to read for an hour every day. I’m going to read some picture books. I also have a travel plan. I’m going to go to Shanghai. I will go there in July. I will go there by plane. I will stay there for seven days. I will visit museums. I will have a good time. 【解析】1. 题干解读：该题目要求用第一人称介绍自己的暑假计划。阐述读书计划和旅游计划。注意文章为一般将来时并要符合句子数量要求。 2. 参考词汇与句型： 参考词汇：July七月，plane飞机，museums博物馆 参考句型：I’m going to…；I will… （七） 范文： My Favourite Season   My favourite season is spring. It is warm and sunny everywhere. There are many beautiful flowers and green trees. I can fly kites and plant trees happily with my friends. I love spring very much. 【解析】题干解读：该题目要求写自己最喜欢的季节，文章时态为一般现在时，人称是第一人称。 参考词汇：favourite season最喜欢的季节，warm and sunny温暖晴朗，beautiful flowers and green trees美丽的花草树木，fly kites放风筝，plant trees种树，happily开心地 参考句型：My favourite season is…；It is…；There are…；I can…；I love… 第 1 页 共 8 页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $