内容正文:
倡议信写作指导
假定你是校学生会主席李华,你校将在5月开展“校园劳动周”(Campus Labor Week)活动。请你用英文写一封倡议信发布在校英文网站上,号召同学们积极参与,内容包括:
1.活动目的;
2.活动内容。
校园劳动周倡议信写作指导
一、审题定位
试题体裁
起草者
阅读者
语体
落款
情景
内容
写作意图
写作期待
倡议信
校学生会主席李华
全体同学
半正式(友好且有号召力)
The Student Union
5 月开展 “校园劳动周” 活动
活动目的、活动内容
号召同学们积极参与活动
同学们响应倡议,参与活动
(1)明确文体:倡议信(Call for Participation)
(2)确定时态:一般现在时(介绍活动目的)、一般将来时(描述活动内容)
(3)划出关键词:校园劳动周(Campus Labor Week)、活动目的、活动内容、号召参与
二、结构搭建
(1)Para 1:开篇引入
①自我介绍(身份)+ 活动宣布(主题 + 时间)
➔示例:I’m Li Hua from Class 3, president of the Student Union. We’re excited to announce that "Campus Labor Week" will be held in May, and we warmly call on all of you to join us!
(2)Para 2:主体内容
①活动目的:强调劳动意义(如培养责任感、美化校园、增强团队精神)
➔示例:This activity aims to help us develop a sense of responsibility and make our campus more beautiful through teamwork.
②活动内容:具体列举 2-3 项活动(如校园清洁、绿植养护、班级卫生评比等),简洁明了
➔示例:During the week, we’ll take part in campus cleaning, plant maintenance, and class hygiene competitions.
(3)Para 3:结尾呼吁
①重申号召 + 表达期待
➔示例:Your participation will make a big difference. Let’s work together to create a better campus!
三、常见开头与结尾
(1)开头:正式场合(面向全校师生 / 上级部门)
①直接式:
✅ On behalf of the Student Union, I am writing to earnestly call on everyone to participate in...
✅ It is our great pleasure to launch [活动名称] and sincerely appeal to you to join us.
②寒暄 + 目的:
✅ I hope this message finds you well. We are initiating [活动名称] and kindly urge your active involvement.
③半正式场合(面向同学 / 同辈群体)
轻松友好:
✅ How’s campus life going? We’re organizing [活动名称] and would love you to be part of it!
✅ Everyone, there’s an exciting activity coming up—let’s join hands for [活动名称]!
④通用万能句式
✅ I’m writing to call on you to participate in [活动名称], which will be held in [时间] across [地点].
✅ You are warmly encouraged to take part in[活动名称 to make a difference.
(2)结尾:
①请求响应
✅ Kindly confirm your participation by [日期] if possible./ Your active response will be highly appreciated.
✅ Let me know if you’re in—we’d love to count you in!
②表达期待
✅ We firmly believe your participation will make this event more meaningful./ Your involvement will be the key to the success of the activity.
✅ Really hope to see you all join in and make it awesome!
③提供帮助(可选)
Should you have any questions about the activity, feel free to contact the Student Union at [联系方式].
四、高分技巧
(1)语言得体:对同学使用友好且积极的语气,避免过于正式或生硬(如用 "Let’s work together" 而非 "You must participate")。
(2)细节具体化:将 "labor activities" 细化为 "cleaning the playground" "watering the flowers in the garden" 等具体活动,增强画面感。
(3)句式多样化:
疑问句:Would you like to be part of this meaningful activity?
祈使句:Join us and let’s make our campus better!
五、常见错误避雷
(1)格式错误:称呼后用逗号(Dear fellow students,),落款为 "The Student Union" 且单独成行。
(2)信息缺失:务必明确写出活动时间(in May)和核心内容,避免笼统表述。
(3)语气不当:避免命令式表达(如 "You have to join"),改用鼓励性语句(如 "Your participation is highly expected")。
(4)词汇错误:注意劳动相关词汇准确使用,如 "labor"(名词)、"clean"(动词)、"maintain"(维护)等。
六、本文可用开头结尾句
(1)可替换的开头
①I’m writing to call on all fellow students to join our "Campus Labor Week" activity, which will be held in May across the school campus.
②How’s your campus life going? The Student Union is organizing "Campus Labor Week" in May, and we warmly hope every one of you can take part!
③On behalf of the Student Union, I’m excited to announce that "Campus Labor Week" will be launched in May. Your active participation will make this event meaningful.
(2)可替换的活动内容
①Cleaning public areas like the playground, corridors, and garden to keep our campus tidy.
②Taking care of campus plants, including watering flowers, trimming shrubs, and planting saplings.
③Holding a class hygiene competition where each class will decorate their classroom and share labor tips.
④Volunteering in the school cafeteria to help with table cleaning and food waste sorting.
⑤Organizing a "Labor Story Sharing Session" where students can talk about their labor experiences and feelings.
(3)可替换结尾
①As members of the school, it’s our duty to contribute to our campus. Please join us in "Campus Labor Week" and let’s make our school more beautiful. Looking forward to your active participation!
②Labor brings joy and growth. We believe this "Campus Labor Week" will be a great chance for us to learn and cooperate. Let me know if you have any ideas, and see you in May!
③Your effort will make a real difference to our campus environment. Kindly take part in the activities you’re interested in. Should you need more information, feel free to contact the Student Union.
七、范文赏析:
范文一
Call for Participation in Campus Labor Week
Dear fellow students,
I'm Li Hua from Class 3.In an effort to promote the spirit of labor and cultivate practical skills,our school will launch the“Campus Labor Week”from May 10th to 16th.
This meaningful event features diverse activities.Participants can choose to join the organic farming program at the school garden,learning planting techniques under teachers' guidance.Alternatively,the handicraft workshop offers opportunities to create traditional clay sculptures using eco-friendly materials.For those interested in social services,community cleaning campaigns will be organized near the campus.
Labor shapes character and creates value.We hereby appeal to every one of you to participate actively.Your active involvement will make this event a success!
The Student Union
范文二
Call for Participation in Campus Labor Week
Dear fellow students,
I hope this letter finds you well. The Student Union is excited to announce the "Campus Labor Week" in May and sincerely hopes you'll take part.
As the playground is a place full of our laughter and energy, cleaning it will make it safer and more enjoyable for our sports activities. By helping in the school cafeteria, such as wiping tables and arranging chairs, we can not only lighten the staff's burden but also learn about teamwork in a real - life setting. Moreover, the "Labor - themed Handmade Works" activity, where we can create handicrafts using recycled materials, will stimulate our creativity and environmental awareness.
Let's embrace this opportunity. Your efforts will surely make our campus more vibrant!
The Student Union
范文三
Call for Participation in Campus Labor Week
Dear fellow students,
I'm Li Hua, president of the Student Union, and I'm writing to invite you to the "Campus Labor Week" in May.
Not only will cleaning the library shelves help everyone find books more easily, but it also allows us to show respect for knowledge. Considering that the school's bulletin boards are important for information dissemination, decorating and maintaining them neatly is our responsibility, which can also display our aesthetic sense. Additionally, the "Sharing Labor Experiences" session, where we exchange stories about our labor - related moments, will strengthen our bond and let us learn from each other's perspectives.
Your active participation is highly anticipated. Let's make this labor week a huge success!
The Student Union
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