Unit 6 Hitting the road（单元同步写作讲义）英语新教材外研版七年级下册

本讲义聚焦“旅行与探索”主题写作，系统梳理旅行计划、经历及旅行家介绍三类写作任务，明确时间顺序运用及一般过去时、现在时、将来时的时态规则，通过审题指导、写作框架、词汇句型积累构建从内容构思到语言表达的完整学习支架。 该资料亮点突出，素材宝库分类提供地理位置、景点特色等词汇及开头中间结尾句型，助力学生提升语言表达能力，范文与拓展训练融入桂林等中国文化元素，增强文化意识，写作框架引导逻辑组织内容发展思维品质。课中辅助教师高效授课，课后拓展训练帮助学生迁移应用，查漏补缺。

Unit 6 Hitting the road 同步写作课讲义-外研版七年级下册 ( 话题解读 ) 本单元的主题是“旅行与探索”，主要围绕前往中外各地的旅行经历和介绍著名的旅行家的主要事迹展开。与此相关的写作主要涉及： ①介绍自己的旅行计划； ②介绍自己的旅行经历和文化体验； ③介绍一位伟大的旅行家及其生平经历。 写这类文章时，一般按照时间顺序进行介绍，使用一般过去时，但在介绍旅行计划时常使用一般现在时和一般将来时。其中在介绍自己的旅行经历时，通常包含以下几点：①旅行中发生的难忘的事情；②旅行目的地的自然景观、历史遗迹、特色美食、风土人情和文化习俗等；③自己的心情和感悟，以及从旅行中学到的知识。 ( 写作任务 ) ①介绍自己的旅行计划； ②介绍自己的旅行经历和文化体验； ③介绍一位伟大的旅行家及其生平经历。 ( 审题指导 ) 假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom即将到桂林旅游。请你从出行方式、主要活动及旅行感受三个方面给他写一封信，分享五一假期你与家人的桂林之旅，供他参考。 写作要求： 1.包含所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.不得透露个人信息； 3.词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：Elephant Trunk Hill（象鼻山）, Lijiang River（漓江）, Guilin Rice Noodles（桂林米粉） Dear Tom, During the May Day holiday, I had a wonderful trip to Guilin. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 审主题：旅行经历 审人称：以第一人称为主 审时态：一般过去时 审体裁：书信 审要点：出行方式、主要活动及旅行感受 ( 写作框架 ) ( 素材宝库 ) ( 词汇积累 ) 地理位置 ( 1 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 be located in 位于 in the heart of 在……的中心 in the middle of 在……的中间 景点特色 be famous/known for 以……闻名 fantastic 极好的，吸引人的 a natural wonder 自然奇观 breathtaking 令人惊叹的 places of interest 名胜 a beautiful place with a long history 有着悠久历史的美丽地方 as beautiful as a painting 美得像一幅画 旅行活动 travel by boat 乘船旅行 take a boat ride 乘船旅行 try local food 品尝当地美食 climb mountains 爬山 take photos/pictures 拍照 visit the museum 参观博物馆 enjoy the beautiful scenery 欣赏美丽的风景 心情与感受 excited 激动的 hopeful 充满希望的 curious 好奇的 amazing 令人惊奇的 surprised 惊奇的 relaxed 放松的 happy 开心的 proud 骄傲的 unforgettable 难忘的 be full of fun 充满乐趣 look forward to 期待 have a good time 玩得开心 can’t wait to do sth. 迫不及待做某事 ( 句型积累 ) 开头句 Guilin’s scenery is the best in the world./East or west, Guilin’s scenery is the best. 桂林山水甲天下。 Read ten thousand books and travel ten thousand miles.读万卷书，行万里路。 I want to tell you something about my travel experience.我想告诉你一些有关我的旅行经历的事情。 中间句 1.与景色/历史有关 ...is a great country/city with a long history.……是一个拥有悠久历史的伟大国家/城市。 ...is a great country/city with beautiful scenery. ……是一个拥有美丽风光的伟大国家/城市。 It is famous/known for its... 它因其……而闻名。 2.与活动有关 We tried local food and talked with local people there.在那里我们品尝了当地美食，并且与当地人一同交谈。 In Guilin, we took a boat ride on the river.在桂林，我们在水上泛舟游玩。 I took lots of pictures there.在那里，我拍了很多照片。 结尾句 I felt excited and happy in Guilin.我在桂林感到兴奋和开心。 I had an unforgettable experience in Guilin.我在桂林有着难忘的体验。 What a wonderful trip!多么美好的一次旅行啊！ ( 参考范文 ) Dear Tom, During the May Day holiday, I had a wonderful trip to Guilin. Let me tell you something about my travel.My family and I arrived by train in the morning. Guilin is famous for its breathtaking view. The Elephant Trunk Hill and the Lijiang River are a must.The water and mountains are as beautiful as a painting. We took a boat ride on the river, and it felt like rowing in a picture. We took lots of photos there. In the evening, we just couldn’t wait to try the local food—Guilin Rice Noodles. They tasted very delicious. There is a saying goes, “Guilin’s scenery is the best in the world.” I really enjoyed this trip. And I wish you could have a good time in Guilin. Yours， Li Hua ( 写作拓展 ) ( 变式提升训练 ) （1） （25-26七年级下·江苏南通·阶段检测）假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Mary听说中国地大物博、山川秀丽、风景迷人，她对中国的自然景观很感兴趣，因此要来中国旅游。请你根据她的问题回复邮件。 提示问题： 1. What place should I visit and where is it? 2. How can I get there? 3. What’s it famous for? 4. What outdoor activity can I do there? 5. How do you feel about it? 要求： 1. 内容应包含所有提示，可适当发挥； 2. 语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯； 3. 100词左右。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mary, I’m glad to hear that you are interested in natural landscapes in China. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ All the Best Li Hua （2） （25-26七年级下·江苏泰州·阶段检测）近年来，越来越多的交流学生来到中国。为了让他们更好地了解中国，《21世纪英文报》开辟了 “Cities in China” 专栏，鼓励广大中小学生用英文介绍中国城市。假如你是张华，请你选择中国的一个城市，根据以下要点完成一篇征文。 1. 选择一个城市（如北京、桂林等） 2. 描述该城市（地理位置、当地美食、名胜古迹、特色动物/景观等） 3. 说明你选择这座城市的原因 注意事项： 1.短文需根据要点自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2.词数100左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； 短文开头： There are many beautiful cities in China. Among them, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （3） （2026七年级下·内蒙古·专题练习）请根据提示用英语写一篇70词左右的短文。 提示：1. 暑假快到了，你和你的家人打算到北京度假； 2. 北京是我国的首都，有很多名胜古迹，你们准备在那待三天； 3. 计划去游览颐和园，故宫，长城……，品尝美味的食物； 4. 你期盼度过一个放松的假期。 要求：1. 条理清楚，语意连贯、通顺。   2. 可适当发挥。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （4） （24-25七年级下·江苏无锡·阶段检测）假如你是张华，你的美国朋友John计划暑假来中国旅游。请你根据以下提示，用英语给他写一封邮件，介绍并推荐我国一处美丽、且奇特有趣的风景。 注意事项： 1. 邮件须包含所有提示信息，要求意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 2. 词数80左右，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Hi, John I’m glad to hear that you’re planning to travel around China. I’d like to ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to meeting you. Yours, Zhang Hua （5） （24-25七年级下·江苏无锡·阶段检测）一座无锡城，半部江南梦。学校将举行一次“最美家乡代言人”演讲活动，假设你是某中学七年级学生李华，请你根据以下提示，以“Wuxi—a city full of beauty”为题写一篇英语短文投稿， 向大家介绍你的家乡——无锡。 地理位置 江苏省南部；距离上海不远，乘火车一小时左右 民间艺术 有鲜明地方特色的惠山泥人 旅游景点 鼋头渚 (Yuantouzhu Scenic Park)、南长街 (Nanchang Street)、惠山古镇 (Huishan Ancient Town)…… 个人感受 …… 注意事项： 1. 发言稿须根据提示内容自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2. 词数不少于80个，稿件开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 稿件中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称等信息。 Wuxi—a city full of beauty Now I’ll introduce my hometown Wuxi to you. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Welcome to my hometown! （6） （24-25七年级下·山东德州·阶段检测）有朋自远方来，不亦乐乎。假设你是 Li Na，你想邀请你的好朋友们在暑假期间来你家所在的小镇玩，请从以下几个方面介绍一下你的家乡吧！ 要求： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当拓展； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名； 4. 词数70左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数) 。 My Hometown My hometown is ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you can visit my hometown this holiday! （7） （24-25七年级下·福建宁德·阶段检测）假如你是李华，你笔友Jack给你发了一份电子邮件想了解你上周去福州的旅行情况。请根据以下表格内容给他回一封电子邮件，谈谈你这次福州之旅。词数80左右。 When Last week Where Fuzhou Things to do First day: visit Sanfang Qixiang, learn about the history and stories of Fuzhou Second day: try fish balls (鱼丸) Third day: go to a park, enjoy flowers, have a picnic on the grass Feelings unforgettabe, hope to go there again 注意事项： 1．必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2．意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3．请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。 Dear Jack, How is everything going? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua $Unit 6 Hitting the road 同步写作课讲义-外研版七年级下册 ( 话题解读 ) 本单元的主题是“旅行与探索”，主要围绕前往中外各地的旅行经历和介绍著名的旅行家的主要事迹展开。与此相关的写作主要涉及： ①介绍自己的旅行计划； ②介绍自己的旅行经历和文化体验； ③介绍一位伟大的旅行家及其生平经历。 写这类文章时，一般按照时间顺序进行介绍，使用一般过去时，但在介绍旅行计划时常使用一般现在时和一般将来时。其中在介绍自己的旅行经历时，通常包含以下几点：①旅行中发生的难忘的事情；②旅行目的地的自然景观、历史遗迹、特色美食、风土人情和文化习俗等；③自己的心情和感悟，以及从旅行中学到的知识。 ( 写作任务 ) ①介绍自己的旅行计划； ②介绍自己的旅行经历和文化体验； ③介绍一位伟大的旅行家及其生平经历。 ( 审题指导 ) 假设你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom即将到桂林旅游。请你从出行方式、主要活动及旅行感受三个方面给他写一封信，分享五一假期你与家人的桂林之旅，供他参考。 写作要求： 1.包含所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.不得透露个人信息； 3.词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：Elephant Trunk Hill（象鼻山）, Lijiang River（漓江）, Guilin Rice Noodles（桂林米粉） Dear Tom, During the May Day holiday, I had a wonderful trip to Guilin. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 审主题：旅行经历 审人称：以第一人称为主 审时态：一般过去时 审体裁：书信 审要点：出行方式、主要活动及旅行感受 ( 写作框架 ) ( 素材宝库 ) ( 词汇积累 ) 地理位置 ( 1 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 be located in 位于 in the heart of 在……的中心 in the middle of 在……的中间 景点特色 be famous/known for 以……闻名 fantastic 极好的，吸引人的 a natural wonder 自然奇观 breathtaking 令人惊叹的 places of interest 名胜 a beautiful place with a long history 有着悠久历史的美丽地方 as beautiful as a painting 美得像一幅画 旅行活动 travel by boat 乘船旅行 take a boat ride 乘船旅行 try local food 品尝当地美食 climb mountains 爬山 take photos/pictures 拍照 visit the museum 参观博物馆 enjoy the beautiful scenery 欣赏美丽的风景 心情与感受 excited 激动的 hopeful 充满希望的 curious 好奇的 amazing 令人惊奇的 surprised 惊奇的 relaxed 放松的 happy 开心的 proud 骄傲的 unforgettable 难忘的 be full of fun 充满乐趣 look forward to 期待 have a good time 玩得开心 can’t wait to do sth. 迫不及待做某事 ( 句型积累 ) 开头句 Guilin’s scenery is the best in the world./East or west, Guilin’s scenery is the best. 桂林山水甲天下。 Read ten thousand books and travel ten thousand miles.读万卷书，行万里路。 I want to tell you something about my travel experience.我想告诉你一些有关我的旅行经历的事情。 中间句 1.与景色/历史有关 ...is a great country/city with a long history.……是一个拥有悠久历史的伟大国家/城市。 ...is a great country/city with beautiful scenery. ……是一个拥有美丽风光的伟大国家/城市。 It is famous/known for its... 它因其……而闻名。 2.与活动有关 We tried local food and talked with local people there.在那里我们品尝了当地美食，并且与当地人一同交谈。 In Guilin, we took a boat ride on the river.在桂林，我们在水上泛舟游玩。 I took lots of pictures there.在那里，我拍了很多照片。 结尾句 I felt excited and happy in Guilin.我在桂林感到兴奋和开心。 I had an unforgettable experience in Guilin.我在桂林有着难忘的体验。 What a wonderful trip!多么美好的一次旅行啊！ ( 参考范文 ) Dear Tom, During the May Day holiday, I had a wonderful trip to Guilin. Let me tell you something about my travel.My family and I arrived by train in the morning. Guilin is famous for its breathtaking view. The Elephant Trunk Hill and the Lijiang River are a must.The water and mountains are as beautiful as a painting. We took a boat ride on the river, and it felt like rowing in a picture. We took lots of photos there. In the evening, we just couldn’t wait to try the local food—Guilin Rice Noodles. They tasted very delicious. There is a saying goes, “Guilin’s scenery is the best in the world.” I really enjoyed this trip. And I wish you could have a good time in Guilin. Yours， Li Hua ( 写作拓展 ) ( 变式提升训练 ) （1） （25-26七年级下·江苏南通·阶段检测）假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Mary听说中国地大物博、山川秀丽、风景迷人，她对中国的自然景观很感兴趣，因此要来中国旅游。请你根据她的问题回复邮件。 提示问题： 1. What place should I visit and where is it? 2. How can I get there? 3. What’s it famous for? 4. What outdoor activity can I do there? 5. How do you feel about it? 要求： 1. 内容应包含所有提示，可适当发挥； 2. 语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯； 3. 100词左右。邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mary, I’m glad to hear that you are interested in natural landscapes in China. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ All the Best Li Hua 【答案】 例文 Dear Mary, I’m glad to hear that you are interested in natural landscapes in China. I recommend Huangshan Mountain located in Anhui Province. It’s easy for you to get there by high-speed train from major cities. The mountain is widely famous for odd pines, unique stones and magical cloud seas, attracting visitors worldwide. While staying there, you can hike along mountain paths and enjoy spectacular views. I’m convinced its amazing natural beauty will surprise you, and it’s absolutely a perfect destination for your nature tour. I hope you will have a wonderful trip. All the Best Li Hua 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 文体：书信应用文，一般现在时为主，少量将来时，客观推荐自然景点 人称：第一人称 I/my，第二人称you 核心要点：推荐景点+地理位置、出行交通、知名特色、户外项目、个人评价感受 注意事项：100词左右，必须包含题干5个提示问题，语句连贯通顺 [第二步：构思布局]   三段式结构 开头段：总起句，直接点明推荐的景点 主体段：分层展开：①出行交通方式；②景点闻名的自然特色；③当地可体验的户外活动 结尾段：个人对景点的评价感受+出行祝愿 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：景点阐述 常用表达：I recommend you visit/lies in/I’d like to等 要点二：交通+特色+户外活动 常用表达：It’s convenient for you to get there by/be famous for/be widely famous for/go hiking/climb mountains等 要点三：个人评价感受 原因描述：amazing natural beauty/it’s absolutely a perfect destination for your nature tour/I think it’s a fantastic tourist spot/I hope you/leave you an unforgettable memory等 （2） （25-26七年级下·江苏泰州·阶段检测）近年来，越来越多的交流学生来到中国。为了让他们更好地了解中国，《21世纪英文报》开辟了 “Cities in China” 专栏，鼓励广大中小学生用英文介绍中国城市。假如你是张华，请你选择中国的一个城市，根据以下要点完成一篇征文。 1. 选择一个城市（如北京、桂林等） 2. 描述该城市（地理位置、当地美食、名胜古迹、特色动物/景观等） 3. 说明你选择这座城市的原因 注意事项： 1.短文需根据要点自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2.词数100左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； 短文开头： There are many beautiful cities in China. Among them, ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文1 There are many beautiful cities in China. Among them, I would like to introduce Beijing . As the capital of China, Beijing lies in the northern part of the country. It has amazing beautiful landscapes, such as the Great Wall and the Summer Palace. When you walk in Beihai Park, you can see lovely squirrels jumping in the trees and cute pigeons flying over the lakes. These animal friends make the ancient city feel warm and lively. Besides, you can also try delicious local food like Beijing roast duck. I choose Beijing because it perfectly mixes rich history, wonderful views and cute animals. It’s a city full of charm! 例文2 There are many beautiful cities in China. Among them, I would like to introduce Guilin to you . Guilin lies in the south of China. It is famous for its beautiful landscapes—the strange-shaped mountains and the clear Li River look like a traditional Chinese ink painting. When you take a boat trip along the river,you can see colorful fish swimming in the river and little birds singing in the bamboo forests. These animal friends make the quiet scenery more lively. Don’t forget to try Guilin rice noodles, the most popular local food there. I choose Guilin because of its natural beauty. It shows the magic of China’s nature and helps people feel relaxed and peaceful. 【详解】写作步骤 第一步：审题立意 确定文体：介绍类征文（说明文），时态以一般现在时为主，面向外国交换生介绍城市，语言通俗易懂 明确要点：选定一座城市/介绍地理位置+美食+名胜+特色动植物/说明选择该城市的理由，词数100词左右，给定开头不计入总词数 确定人称：第一人称（I/My） 注意事项：不出现真实个人信息，行文连贯自然，适配报刊专栏投稿语境 第二步：构思布局 三段式结构： 开头段：沿用题目给出开头，点明将要介绍的城市名称 主体段：分层介绍城市地理位置、名胜古迹、特色美食、小动物与自然景观 结尾段：阐述选择这座城市的缘由，收尾全文   第三步：要点展开 要点一：点明介绍的城市 would like to/introduce Beijing There are many beautiful cities in China. Among them, Beijing catches my eye and I’d love to introduce it to foreign friends.   要点二：介绍城市区位、景观、美食、特色小动物 lies in the northern part of the country/amazing beautiful landscapes/Beihai Park/lovely squirrels/cute pigeons/delicious local food/Beijing roast duck Being China’s capital, Beijing is located in North China. It owns world-famous sights including the Great Wall. Cute squirrels and pigeons live in city parks, and visitors shouldn’t miss tasty Beijing roast duck.   要点三：说明选择城市的原因 mixes rich history/wonderful views/full of charm I pick Beijing for its long history, fantastic scenery and lovely little animals. It combines tradition and daily warmth, so it’s worth visiting. （3） （2026七年级下·内蒙古·专题练习）请根据提示用英语写一篇70词左右的短文。 提示：1. 暑假快到了，你和你的家人打算到北京度假； 2. 北京是我国的首都，有很多名胜古迹，你们准备在那待三天； 3. 计划去游览颐和园，故宫，长城……，品尝美味的食物； 4. 你期盼度过一个放松的假期。 要求：1. 条理清楚，语意连贯、通顺。   2. 可适当发挥。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文： Summer holiday is coming. My family and I are planning a trip to Beijing. As the capital of China, Beijing is full of amazing places of interest, so we plan to stay there for three days. During the trip, we want to climb the Great Wall, explore the Palace Museum and enjoy the beauty of the Summer Palace. And we will also try delicious food like Beijing Roast Duck. I’m looking forward to having a wonderful holiday. 【详解】写作步骤： [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：记叙文，以一般现在时和一般将来时为主 明确要点：①暑假将至，全家计划北京旅行；②北京是首都，名胜多，停留三天；③游览长城、故宫、颐和园，品尝烤鸭；④期盼轻松假期 确定人称：第一人称 (I/my family) 注意事项：70词左右 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，点明暑假将至，全家计划去北京度假 主体段：分述北京优势、行程安排（景点+美食） 结尾段：总结心情，期盼美好假期 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：出行背景与停留规划 点明出行目的地：plan a trip to Beijing/take a journey to Beijing/go on a visit to Beijing等 说明城市优势：the capital of China/is full of amazing places of interest/has lots of famous sights/owns long history and rich culture等 要点二：旅途行程安排与内心期盼 罗列景区游览项目：climb the Great Wall/explore the Palace Museum/enjoy the beauty of the Summer Palace/visit Tian’anmen Square /walk around Beihai Park等 写明特色美食体验：try delicious food like Beijing Roast Duck/taste local snacks /enjoy traditional dishes等 抒发对假期的期待：be looking forward to having a relaxing and wonderful holiday/expect a pleasant vacation/hope for an unforgettable trip等 （4） （24-25七年级下·江苏无锡·阶段检测）假如你是张华，你的美国朋友John计划暑假来中国旅游。请你根据以下提示，用英语给他写一封邮件，介绍并推荐我国一处美丽、且奇特有趣的风景。 注意事项： 1. 邮件须包含所有提示信息，要求意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 2. 词数80左右，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Hi, John I’m glad to hear that you’re planning to travel around China. I’d like to ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to meeting you. Yours, Zhang Hua 【答案】Hi, John      I’m glad to hear that you’re planning to travel around China. I’d like to recommend the West Lake to you. It lies in Hangzhou, a beautiful city in eastern China. The views here are wonderful. There is clear blue water, green willows and pretty bridges around the lake. You can take a boat on the lake, drink famous Longjing tea and taste delicious local food. It is one of the most beautiful places in China, and many people visit it every year. I’m sure you will love it.      I’m looking forward to meeting you. Yours, Zhang Hua 【详解】写作步骤 【第一步：审题立意】 确定文体：这是一封电子邮件，用一般现在时为主 明确要点：景点名称、地理位置、特色风景、有趣的事、其他方面 确定人称：第一人称（I/my），第二人称（you） 注意事项：不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息 【第二步：构思布局】 三段式结构： 开头段：引出主题，介绍杭州西湖 主体段：具体阐述写作内容。从地理位置、特色风景、有趣的事以及其他方面进行介绍 结尾段：书写结语，表达祝愿 【第三步：要点展开】 要点一：景点名称 the West Lake/the Great Wall等 要点二：地理位置 in eastern China/in the north of China等 要点三：特色风景 clear blue water/green willows/pretty bridges/beautiful mountains and trees等 要点四：有趣的事 take a boat/drink famous Longjing tea/taste delicious local food/walk along the wall/take photos等 要点五：其他方面 beautiful place/many people visit it/learn a lot about Chinese history等 （5） （24-25七年级下·江苏无锡·阶段检测）一座无锡城，半部江南梦。学校将举行一次“最美家乡代言人”演讲活动，假设你是某中学七年级学生李华，请你根据以下提示，以“Wuxi—a city full of beauty”为题写一篇英语短文投稿， 向大家介绍你的家乡——无锡。 地理位置 江苏省南部；距离上海不远，乘火车一小时左右 民间艺术 有鲜明地方特色的惠山泥人 旅游景点 鼋头渚 (Yuantouzhu Scenic Park)、南长街 (Nanchang Street)、惠山古镇 (Huishan Ancient Town)…… 个人感受 …… 注意事项： 1. 发言稿须根据提示内容自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意； 2. 词数不少于80个，稿件开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 稿件中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称等信息。 Wuxi—a city full of beauty Now I’ll introduce my hometown Wuxi to you. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Welcome to my hometown! 【答案】 Wuxi—a city full of beauty Now I’ll introduce my hometown Wuxi to you. Wuxi is in the south of Jiangsu Province. It is not far from Shanghai, and you can get there by train in less than one hour. The city is famous for its Huishan clay figurines, a folk art with strong local character. There are also many wonderful places to visit, such as Yuantouzhu Scenic Park, Nanchang Street, and Huishan Ancient Town. I feel relaxed and amazed when I walk along the ancient streets. Wuxi is really a great place to learn about Chinese culture and enjoy a slow lifestyle. Welcome to my hometown! 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：演讲稿（地点介绍类），以一般现在时为主 明确要点：地理位置（江苏省南部，距离上海不远，乘火车一小时以内）、民间艺术（有鲜明地方特色的惠山泥人）、旅游景点（鼋头渚、南长街、惠山古镇）、个人感受 确定人称：第三人称（Wuxi, it）和第一人称（I） 注意事项：词数不少于80；不得出现真实姓名、校名；语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：引出家乡无锡 主体段：介绍无锡的地理位置和交通便利性、民间艺术、旅游景点、个人感受 结尾段：向大家表示欢迎 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：地理位置 位置：in the south of Jiangsu Province/lies in the southern part of Jiangsu等 距离：not far from Shanghai/near Shanghai等 交通：by train in less than one hour/within one hour by train等 要点二：民间艺术 艺术名称：Huishan clay figurines/Huishan clay sculptures等 特色：a folk art with strong local character/famous for its unique style等 要点三：旅游景点 景点列举：Yuantouzhu Scenic Park/Nanchang Street/Huishan Ancient Town等 要点四：个人感受 感受表达：I feel relaxed and amazed when I walk along the ancient streets./Wuxi makes me forget the busy life./It is a perfect place to slow down.等 （6） （24-25七年级下·山东德州·阶段检测）有朋自远方来，不亦乐乎。假设你是 Li Na，你想邀请你的好朋友们在暑假期间来你家所在的小镇玩，请从以下几个方面介绍一下你的家乡吧！ 要求： 1. 必须包含所有提示信息，可适当拓展； 2. 意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名； 4. 词数70左右 (开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数) 。 My Hometown My hometown is ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you can visit my hometown this holiday! 【答案】例文： My Hometown My hometown is a beautiful town. It’s close to Yangzhou, and it takes about 40 minutes by bus. The town is quiet. You can smell the flowers and hear birds singing. There’s a park with a lake in the center of the town. People take a walk or chat there. There’re several shopping malls and restaurants where you can taste famous local snacks. I live in a big two-floor house. My neighbors are kind and helpful. I am lucky to live in such a town. I hope you can visit my hometown this holiday! 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：介绍性说明文，用一般现在时为主。 明确要点：小镇位置（离扬州近、车程）、环境（安静、花香、鸟鸣、公园活动）、购物餐饮（商场、当地小吃）、住宅居民（两层楼房、邻居善良）、总结幸运感。 确定人称：第一人称（I/my）和第二人称（you）结合。 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名、校名及地名，词数70左右。 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构： 开头段：总起句，点明家乡是小镇，靠近扬州，车程40分钟。 主体段：分环境、购物餐饮、住宅居民三部分展开，每部分结合提示信息描述。 结尾段：总结幸运感，发出邀请。 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：位置 位置描述：close to Yangzhou/near Yangzhou/not far from Yangzhou 车程说明：about 40 minutes by bus/a 40-minute bus ride 要点二：环境 安静：quiet/peaceful 花香鸟鸣：smell the flowers and hear birds singing/enjoy the sweet smell of flowers and listen to birds’ songs 公园活动：take a walk/go for a walk/have a walk and chat with friends/talk with neighbors 要点三：购物和餐饮 商场餐馆：several shopping malls and restaurants/a few malls and eateries 当地小吃：taste famous local snacks/enjoy delicious local food 要点四：住宅和居民 住宅：a big two-floor house/a large house with two floors 邻居：kind and helpful/friendly and ready to help 幸运感：lucky to live here/happy to live in such a town （7） （24-25七年级下·福建宁德·阶段检测）假如你是李华，你笔友Jack给你发了一份电子邮件想了解你上周去福州的旅行情况。请根据以下表格内容给他回一封电子邮件，谈谈你这次福州之旅。词数80左右。 When Last week Where Fuzhou Things to do First day: visit Sanfang Qixiang, learn about the history and stories of Fuzhou Second day: try fish balls (鱼丸) Third day: go to a park, enjoy flowers, have a picnic on the grass Feelings unforgettabe, hope to go there again 注意事项： 1．必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2．意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3．请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名和地名。 Dear Jack, How is everything going? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Jack, How is everything going? Last week, I went to Fuzhou with my parents. We stayed there for three days. On the first day, we visited Sanfang Qixiang. We walked along the streets, learning about the history and stories of Fuzhou. On the second day, we were excited to try the famous fish balls. On the third day, we went to a park and enjoyed many beautiful flowers. We also played on the grass and had a picnic there. What a wonderful experience! It was an unforgettable trip. I hope I can go there again. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 文体：应用文，叙事类说明文，以一般过去时为主，客观叙述旅行经历 人称：第一人称I/my 核心要点：点明旅行时间与地点，按时间顺序叙述三天的活动安排，阐述旅行感受与未来期待 注意事项：包含所有提示信息，行文连贯，词数约80，不得使用真实信息 [第二步：构思布局] 三段式结构 开头段：回应问候，总起句点明旅行背景 中间段：按时间顺序分层展开三天的活动 结尾段：总结旅行感受，表达再次前往的期待，呼应主题 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：旅行背景阐述 常用表达：Last week/I went to Fuzhou with my parents/We stayed there for three days/It was a wonderful trip等 要点二：三天活动叙述 常用表达：visited Sanfang Qixiang/walked along the streets/learning about the history and stories of/were excited to try/had a picnic on the grass/take photos等 要点三：旅行感受与期待 常用表达：It was an unforgettable trip/I hope/I learned a lot about/had great fun等 $