2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---The Warmth of Volunteer Service 导学案

该高中英语高考复习学案聚焦读后续写核心考点，系统梳理角色分析、叙事视角、时空线索、情节逻辑及情感变化等要素，构建“文本解构-情节推演-语言表达”的知识网络，通过问题链（如细节问答）和任务单（如续写框架设计）引导学生自主推导文本内在联系，形成读后续写的完整认知体系。 亮点在于诊断性文本分析与分层续写指导，如设置角色情感线自测表和情节衔接诊断题，学生可根据作答定位薄弱环节，匹配基础巩固或逻辑提升模块，培养语言能力与思维品质。每个模块配有续写句式模板和反思总结表，帮助学生建立个性化写作策略，教师能通过学情数据精准指导，有效提升学生自主复习效率与备考实效。

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 My friend Emma has always been involved in community service. She and her husband founded a clothing center, offering free clothes, shoes, etc. to anyone who needs them. Then there’s me. I’d never been involved in community service. Instead, I spent my time and money buying snacks, dining out, watching TV and movies etc. That changed one evening last winter when Emma called me. She told me she needed my help and then asked what I would do the next evening. I replied briefly that I wanted to see a film. “But David, tomorrow I need your help for several hours at my clothing center,” Emma continued. “I had a family who signed up to help this week, but they’ve got the flu. My husband and I can’t run the place alone.” I hesitated, thinking I might not be able to help since I had never been to her clothing center before. But Emma insisted, saying that the next evening she needed me to boldly go where I had never gone before. Since my friend was desperate, I had to agree. At 6:45 the next evening, I showed up at the clothing center in an old brick building on Main Street. “Thank you,” said Emma when I arrived. “It’s really simple. My husband and I will manage the actual clothing room; we just need you to run the welcome table by the door. Have people line up, make sure they know what they need, give them a bag, and then we’ll take them in one at a time. In the past few weeks, we’ve got a ton of donations of clothes, shoes, gloves, etc., so we should be able to help many people.” The directions seemed clear enough; I figured I could handle it. How many people in my town were going to show up on a snowy Wednesday night for free clothes anyway? At 7:00 pm, Emma unlocked the front door. 注意： （1）续写词数应为 150 左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Looking out, I was surprised by the number of people who would come in. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That snowy Wednesday night marked the beginning of my journey into community service. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 Emma ran a free clothing center for people in need--- _________________ ---The author lived a leisurely life with no volunteer experience--- _________________ ---Volunteers fell ill and Emma turned to the author for help--- _________________ ---The author agreed unwillingly and arrived at the clothing center on a snowy night---He underestimated the number of people in need 4. 细节问答 What did Emma and her husband set up? ：___________________________________ How did the author spend his spare time before?：_________________________________ Why did Emma ask the author for help?：________________________________________________ What was the author’s job at the clothing center?：__________________________________________ What did the author think before opening the door?：_____________________________________________ What change will happen to the author after this experience?_________________________________________________ What does the story want to tell us?________________________________________________________ 5．情节线 好友艾玛夫妇开办免费衣物救助站，帮扶困难人群→_________________ →主人公平日只顾休闲享乐，从未参与任何公益志愿活动→_________________ →原定志愿者突发流感，艾玛无奈求助主人公→主人公不情愿答应帮忙，冒雪前往救助站值守门口接待→主人公误以为寒夜来人极少，内心十分轻视这份志愿工作→_________________ →（续写）开门后大批急需衣物的民众排队等候，主人公忙碌值守，真切看见众人困境→（续写）这次志愿经历彻底改变主人公，从此主动投身公益，读懂奉献的意义 6．情感线 Author：unwilling and casual→___________→shocked and busy→___________→grateful and devoted（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；并列句；非谓语动词 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 公益成长类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Looking out, I was surprised by the number of people who would come in. 衔接句1——What did the author see? How did he work and feel during the service? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: That snowy Wednesday night marked the beginning of my journey into community service. 衔接句2——What lasting change did the author have? What did he learn from volunteering? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：望向门外，我被前来求助的人数震惊了。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：那个飘雪的周三夜晚，开启了我的社区志愿服务之旅。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写 Looking out, I was surprised by the number of people who would come in. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That snowy Wednesday night marked the beginning of my journey into community service. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 The author (David)：原本贪图享乐、对公益毫无概念，经历志愿活动后蜕变成长的普通人；Emma：热心善良、长期坚持社区公益、开办免费衣物救助站的志愿者；People in need：寒冬缺少保暖衣物，急需公益帮扶的困难民众 2．视角 第________一____人称 3．时空线 Emma and her husband set up a free clothing center to help people in need---The author spent spare time on entertainment and never did volunteer work---Regular volunteers got sick unexpectedly, leaving Emma short-handed---Emma turned to the author for help and he agreed reluctantly---The author arrived at the center with a casual attitude and underestimated the demand---He witnessed people’s real need and gained new understanding of volunteer work 4. 细节问答 What did Emma and her husband set up? ：They founded a free clothing center providing daily clothes for people in need. How did the author spend his spare time before?：He just enjoyed all kinds of entertainment without doing any volunteer work. Why did Emma ask the author for help?：Her regular volunteers caught the flu and she lacked hands to run the center. What was the author’s job at the clothing center?：He needed to manage the welcome table, organize lines and hand out bags for visitors. What did the author think before opening the door?：He thought few people would come on such a cold snowy night. What change will happen to the author after this experience?：He will fall in love with volunteer work and devote himself to community service actively. What does the story want to tell us?：Small kindness matters a lot. Devoting ourselves to helping others can bring us unique happiness and spiritual growth. 5．情节线 热心公益的艾玛夫妇开设免费衣物救助站，无偿帮扶生活困难的邻里→主人公平日只顾吃喝玩乐，虚度空闲时光，从未参与任何公益活动→固定志愿团队突发流感无法到岗，救助站人手严重不足→艾玛无奈求助主人公，主人公不情愿但碍于情面答应帮忙→主人公抱着敷衍心态冒雪到岗，认为大雪寒夜不会有太多人前来求助→开门后长长的求助队伍颠覆他的想法，他认真值守全心服务，见证善意的力量→这次志愿经历彻底改变主人公，告别享乐生活，主动长期参与公益，收获精神成长 6．情感线 Author：unwilling and casual→shocked and busy→moved and reflective→grateful and devoted（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：原本贪图享乐、从不参与公益的主人公，被迫前往衣物救助站帮忙，目睹寒冬里大量需要帮扶的民众后深受触动，从此主动投身社区志愿服务，在奉献中收获成长与快乐。 英文：Once addicted to entertainment and indifferent to volunteer work, the author was forced to help at a free clothing center. Shocked by people’s need on a snowy night, he fell in love with community service and gained spiritual growth from helping others. 8. 句式 并列句：She and her husband founded a clothing center, offering free clothes, shoes, etc. to anyone who needs them. 宾语从句：I hesitated, thinking I might not be able to help since I had never been there. 状语从句：Since my friend was desperate, I had to agree. 非谓语动词：I showed up at the clothing center in an old brick building on Main Street. 定语从句：How many people would show up on a snowy Wednesday night for free clothes anyway? 9. 本文主题 公益成长类：微小善意亦可温暖寒冬，志愿服务从不渺小；走出自我的安逸享乐，帮助他人既能照亮他人，也能丰盈自我内心。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: Looking out, I was surprised by the number of people who would come in. 衔接句1——What did the author see? How did he work and feel during the service? A long queue had already formed outside in the heavy snow. I began to work attentively, guiding people to line up and giving out bags. Seeing needy people get warm clothes, I was deeply touched by the power of kindness. Paragraph 2: That snowy Wednesday night marked the beginning of my journey into community service. 衔接句2——What lasting change did the author have? What did he learn from volunteering? I gave up meaningless entertainment gradually. Instead, I spared time to join volunteer activities regularly. I realized that helping others brought me more lasting happiness than enjoying personal leisure. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：望向门外，我被前来求助的人数震惊了。 →①大雪纷飞的夜晚，门外早已排起长龙，不少老人和孩子冻得瑟瑟发抖→②我立刻收起敷衍心态，专心维持秩序、分发袋子，全程忙碌不停→③看着人们拿到御寒衣物展露笑容并真诚道谢，我内心满是触动； 第二段：那个飘雪的周三夜晚，开启了我的社区志愿服务之旅。 →①这次难忘的经历彻底扭转了我自私享乐的生活态度→②我开始主动抽空参与各类公益活动，长期帮扶困境人群→③我最终领悟，奉献带来的精神满足，远胜过单纯的个人娱乐。 四.段落续写（高考满分范文，精准150词，高分句式适配高考评分） Looking out, I was surprised by the number of people who would come in. Despite the freezing heavy snow, a long queue had already formed outside the door. Many poor families and elderly people waited quietly for warm clothes and gloves. I abandoned my casual attitude right away and devoted myself to my work earnestly. I guided visitors to line up orderly, explained rules patiently and handed out shopping bags nonstop. Watching those people leave with warm smiles and heartfelt thanks, I truly felt how meaningful and precious voluntary work was. That snowy Wednesday night marked the beginning of my journey into community service. I gradually cut down meaningless entertainment like eating out and watching movies. Instead, I spared my spare time to help at the clothing center every week actively. I no longer regarded volunteer work as a burden. From this experience, I learned that true happiness lies in giving rather than receiving. Small kindness can warm a cold winter and make the whole world better. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $