摘要:
该高中英语高考复习课件聚焦建议信写作专项,依据高考评价体系梳理了核心词汇(如persuade, addict)、关键短语(be addicted to, persuade sb to do sth)及常考结构(三段式:目的-内容-祝愿)。通过典例分析明确危害阐述、建议提出等核心考点权重,归纳应用文写作规范,体现备考针对性与实用性。
课件亮点在于“考点-谋篇-实战”三阶训练,以Peter沉迷游戏的模拟真题为例,指导学生用连接词(first, additionally)和建议句型(Why not...)构建逻辑,培养语言能力与思维品质。提供模板库、易错点提示(如时态一致),助力学生掌握高分技巧,教师可据此实施精准教学,提升复习效率。
内容正文:
Hey, here you go. guys, breakfast . guys. So everybody . get down now. Why are you freaking families are supposed to talk? What are you're doing? It's so important. I'm looking to my fantasy rossiter, i'm unvetted. We're totally getting an above ground pool die. stupid. That look, I told you to put . down that you heard your mother. What is so funny. mom, insane. Thank you. healing. At least we talk. After go, so我咋送。
suggestion letter
高考写作专项
说服,劝说v:
沉迷v
有害的adj:
花时间v:
锻炼v:
戒掉v:
习惯n:
负面的adj:
词汇
persuade
addict
harmful
spend
exercise
quit
考点梳理案
habit
negative
给一些建议:
说服某人(不)做某事
电脑游戏:
沉迷于:
损害,对……有害:
浪费时间:
远离:
花时间在某事上:
锻炼:
做有意义的事:
短语
persuade sb(not) to do sth
computer games
be addicted to
be harmful to / do harm to
waste time on sth
keep away from
spend time on sth
take exercise
do meaningful things
give some suggestions/advice
Facing the terrible habits/lifestyle, what will you do?
Change
假定你是李华,你的笔友Peter最近沉迷于电脑游戏,这给他带来很多危害。请你给他写一封书信,劝说他戒掉这个不良习惯,并提出建议。内容包括:
1.沉迷电脑游戏的危害;
2.你的建议。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
典例展示
考点探究案
审题
1.确定文体: _____________________
2.主体时态:______________________
3.主体人称:______________________
建议信
一般现在时/一般将来时
第一/二人称
假定你是李华,你的笔友Peter最近沉迷于电脑游戏,这给他带来很多危害。请你给他写一封书信,劝说他戒掉这个不良习惯,并提出建议。内容包括:
1.沉迷电脑的危害;
2.你的建议。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
典例展示
paragraph 1
paragraph 2
paragraph 3
谋篇
第一段:________________
第二段:___________________
第三段:___________________
写信的目的
内容(写作要求)
最后表达祝愿
Brainstorm
suggestions
read more books
do some exercise
go to bed/get up early
talk with friends
negatives
waste study time
harm your eyes
harm your family relationship
Dear Peter,
(得知) you are addicted to (玩电脑游戏), I felt very worried.It will make you (浪费太多时间)on your (学习)and be harmful to your (健康).Therefore, I strongly hope that you can keep away from it.
......
I hope the advice will be helpful for you.(期待你的好消息) .
Yours,
Li Hua
完成下列作文开头、结尾模板
Hearing that
playing computer games
waste too much time
Looking forward to your good news.
study
health
小组合作
Suggestion 1:____________________________________
Suggestion 2:____________________________________
Suggestion 3:____________________________________
...
建议句型常用表达:
1.I would like to suggest that......
2.It is adj. for sb. to do sth......
3.I think it would be beneficial if you could......
4.If I were you, I would......
5.Why not do sth......
连接词:
first,second,third,last but not least,moreover,what’s more,additionally......
Writing time
考点过关案
Evaluation time
评分时,应主要从内容、词汇语法和篇章结构三个方面考虑,具体为:(1) 对内容要点的覆盖情况以及表述的清楚程度和合理性;(2) 使用词汇和语法结构的准确性、恰当性和多样性;(3) 上下文的衔接和全文的连贯性。
范文
Dear Peter,
Hearing that you are addicted to playing computer games, I felt very worried.It will make you waste too much valuable time on your study and be harmful to your health .Therefore, I strongly hope that you can keep away from it.
First of all, what you need to do is to read more good books, because it can improve your self-control ability.Additionally, if I were you, I would take more exercise or participate in some social activities to broaden my horizons.What’s more, It’s important for you to go to bed early so you will be more energetic.
I hope the advice will be helpful for you.Looking forward to your good news.
Yours,
Li Hua
Homework:
Please rewrite your letter and evaluate it with your partner then hand it tomorrow.
Peer Checklist Total(15)
内容 £覆盖一些要点?
£体现自己的建议?
£表达自己的感受和观点?
£有3-4个段落?
结构 £使用一些本节课所学的句子结构?
£使用正确的时态?
语言 £使用3个及以上本节课所学的表达?
£使用连接词使语言更有连贯性?
流畅 £书面整洁?
Thanks for your listening!
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高考写作专项
建议信
【学习目标】
1. 能够明白沉迷电子产品带来的不良影响;
2. 能掌握该主题词块,有效拓展主题词汇网络;
3. 了解并进一步掌握建议信的审题谋篇、提高语言运用能力。
【学习重难点】
1. 进一步学习主题词块,有效拓展主题词汇网络;
2. 掌握建议信的审题谋篇、提高语言运用能力。
【考点梳理案】(课前)
Activity 1. 话题词块梳理
词汇:
1.说服,劝说v: 2.沉迷v:
3.有害的adj: 4.花时间v:
5.锻炼v: 6.戒掉v:
7.习惯n: 8.负面的adj:
短语:
1.给一些建议: 2.说服某人(不)做某事
3.电脑游戏: 4.沉迷于:
5.损害,对……有害: 6.浪费时间:
7.远离: 8.花时间在某事上:
9.锻炼: 10.做有意义的事:
【考点探究案】(课中)
Activity 2. 典例展示
假定你是李华,你的笔友Peter最近沉迷于电脑游戏,这给他带来很多危害。请你给他写一封书信,劝说他戒掉这个不良习惯,并提出建议。内容包括:
1.沉迷电脑游戏的危害;
2.你的建议。
注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
审题 谋篇
1.确定文体: 第一段:
2.主体时态: 第二段:
3.主体人称: 第三段:
Activity 3. 完成下列作文开头、结尾模板
Dear Peter,
(得知)you are addicted to (玩电脑游戏), I felt very worried.It will make you (浪费太多时间)on your (学习) and be harmful to your (健康).Therefore, I strongly hope that you can keep away from it.
......
I hope the advice will be helpful for you.(期待你的好消息) .
Yours,
Li Hua
Activity 4.小组合作
Suggestion 1:______________________________________________________________________
Suggestion 2:______________________________________________________________________
Suggestion 3:______________________________________________________________________
...
拓展延申:
建议句型常用表达
1.I would like to suggest that......
2.It is adj. for sb. to do sth......
3.I think it would be beneficial if you could......
4.If I were you, I would......
5.Why not do sth......
语篇衔接常用连接词
first,second,third,last but not least,moreover,what’s more,additionally
......
【考点过关案】(课后)
完成写作任务:
为了帮助中学生健康成长,你校英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假定你是该栏目的编辑Jamie,你收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰:最近压力大,容易失眠,使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请你用英文给该同学回一封信,内容包括:
1.表示理解并给予安慰;
2.提出建议并说明理由。
注意:
1.写作词数应为80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Worried,
I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment.______________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Peer Checklist
Total(15)
内容
£覆盖一些要点?
£体现自己的建议?
£表达自己的感受和观点?
£有3-4个段落?
结构
£使用一些本节课所学的句子结构?
£使用正确的时态?
语言
£使用3个及以上本节课所学的表达?
£使用连接词使语言更有连贯性?
流畅
£书面整洁?
Yours,
Jamie
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