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高中英语 求助信
应用文写作: 求助信Writing ----a letter of request
一、文体概述
求助信是向他人请求帮助、支持或建议的书信体应用文。
常用于表达学习、生活、工作中遇到的困难并寻求解决方案
文体特点
1. 目的明确,开门见山说明求助事项;
2. 语气诚恳礼貌,避免生硬;
3. 条理清晰,详细阐述困难背景;
4. 结尾表达感谢与期待。
二、范文赏析 1
假定你是李华,自制了一些中国结(Chinese knot),给开网店的美国朋友Tom写封信,请他代卖,要点包括:
1. 外观(尺寸,颜色,材料);
2. 象征意义; 3. 价格
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好,不计人总词数。
Dear Tom,
How are you doing recently? Learning that you're running an online shop, I'm writing to ask for your help.
As you know, I've made some red Chinese knots with silk threads, cloth and some other materials, which make the Chinese knots look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond. They each are about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide.As is universally acknowledged, Chinese knots represent friendship, love as well as good luck. People can either send them as gifts to friends and relatives or hang them in their houses. As for the price, they only cost $ 4.99 each. I would be grateful if you could sell them in your online shop.
Thanks for your kindness! Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
范文赏析 2
假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外资公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历(resume),给外教Ms.Jenkins写封信,请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format).
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
Dear Ms Jenkins,
I'm Li Hua and I plan to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company during the summer holiday. I have already filled in my application form and resume. However, I'm not sure about the words and format. Therefore, I'm writing to ask for your help.
Would you mind finding out the mistakes in terms of words and format? Besides, I'd like you to correct the mistakes found in the materials. I'd be most grateful if you could do me the favor.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
3、 结构总结
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开头:(第一段) _______________________
主体:(第二段) ________________________求助信
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结尾:(第三段) ________________________
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4、 语言表达
(1) 相关短语
ask for help / ask for a favor /turn to sb for help /seek assistance from sb.
do me a favor 帮我一个忙
be faced with difficulties / encounter problems; 面临困难
be stuck with troubles 陷入...困境
have some difficulty (in) doing 做...有困难
… is beyond my ability ...超越我的能力改编...
give guidance on; offer suggestions about; provide tips for 指导;建议
adapt a ...; revise a ... 改编...
have a good command of ... 对...掌握的好
spare some time; make time 抽空
valuable experience; precious advice 宝贵经验
be deeply grateful; appreciate it very much 感激不尽
look forward to your reply; anticipate your response 期待回复
(2)委婉请求
Would you be so kind as to…?
If possible, could you spare a few minutes to…?
I would appreciate it very much if…
(3)表达谢意
Many thanks for your time and support. 感谢您的时间和支持
Your timely help will make a big difference. 你及时的帮助将对我有很大的影响。
(4)衔接词
therefore (因此), otherwise(否则) besides, most importantly…
五、求助信的写作思路
Para 1. 开头:自我介绍+点明求助目的(说明困难)
1. I'm Li Hua, a senior one student. I'm writing to ask you for help with ..., which has been troubling me for a long time.
我是高一学生李华,写信恳请你就我的...问题给予帮助,这个问题已经困扰我许久了.
2. I'm Li Hua, who is in charge of the school's... club. I'm writing to seek your assistance in ..
我是负责学校...社团的李华,写信是为了...一事上寻求你的协助。
Para 2. 主体:阐述困难/需求+说明帮助方向
1. The biggest problem I'm facing now is that I always feel nervous when...
我目前面临的最大问题是,在...总会感到紧张。
2. We lack professional guidance on how to do... and how to do ...
3. 我们在如何...以及如何...方面,缺少专业的指导。
3. I have tried practicing with sb and doing sth...., but the improvement is not as obvious as I expected. 我已经尝试过和sb一起练习并且...,但进步并没有达到我预期的效果。
4. We would be grateful if you could provide us with some professional advice or connect us with ... experts.
如果你能为我们提供一些专业建议,或是帮我们联系一些...专家,我们将万分感激。
Para 3. 结尾:致谢+期待回复
1. I would be extremely grateful if you could spare some time to help me solve this problem.
如果你能抽出些许时间帮我解决这个问题,我将不胜感激。
2. We sincerely appreciate your time and effort, and we are looking forward to eagerly await your favorable reply at your earliest convenience.
我们衷心感谢你的时间与付出,期待能尽快收到你的肯定答复。
3. Thank you again for your generous help. Please feel free to contact me if you need any further information.
再次感谢你的慷慨相助,如果你需要更多相关信息,请随时与我联系。
六、迁移运用
假设你是李华,你校将举办英语戏剧节(English Drama Festival),你负责班级戏剧的编排,但在剧本改编和演员台词训练方面遇到困难。请你给外教Mr. Smith写一封求助信,内容包括:1. 说明写信目的;
2. 阐述遇到的具体困难;
3. 希望得到的帮助。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯;3. 开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
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咨询信Writing---- ----a letter of request 参考答案
自我介绍
点明写信目的:说明困难
的
开头(第一段)
阐述困难
咨询信
困难带来的影响
主体(第二段)
具体请求
表示感谢+期待回复
结尾(第三段)
迁移运用:
参考答案
Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m Li Hua, and I’m writing to ask for your help with our class’s drama for the upcoming English Drama Festival. As the person in charge of arranging the play, I’ve run into two main problems recently.
First, we find it really hard to adapt the script properly. We’re not sure how to make the dialogue sound natural and authentic in English, especially when it comes to the emotional expressions of the characters. Second, my classmates struggle a lot with their lines. They can’t pronounce some words correctly and fail to deliver the lines with the right tone and feeling.
I wonder if you could spare some time to give us advice on script adaptation and help us practice the lines. Your guidance would mean a lot to us.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely, Li Hua
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应用文写作: 求助信 Writing
---- a letter of request
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文体概述
范例欣赏
结构总结
迁移运用
目
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CONTENTS
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语言表达
写作思路
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文体概述
Part 1
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文体概念:
求助信是向他人请求帮助、支持或建议的书信体应用文。
常用于表达学习、生活、工作中遇到的困难并寻求解决方案。
核心特点:
1. 目的明确,开门见山说明求助事项;
2. 语气诚恳礼貌,避免生硬;
3. 条理清晰,详细阐述困难背景;4. 结尾表达感谢与期待。
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范例欣赏
Part 2
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典例展示
假定你是李华,自制了一些中国结(Chinese knot),给开网店的美国朋友Tom写封信,请他代卖,要点包括:
1. 外观(尺寸,颜色,材料);
2. 象征意义; 3. 价格
注意:
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 开头和结尾已为你写好,不计人总词数。
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佳作欣赏
Dear Tom,
How are you doing recently? Learning that you're running an online shop, I'm writing to ask for your help.
As you know, I've made some red Chinese knots with silk threads, cloth and some other materials, which make the Chinese knots look really beautiful in the shape of a diamond. They each are about 5 inches long and 4 inches wide.As is universally acknowledged, Chinese knots represent friendship, love as well as good luck. People can either send them as gifts to friends and relatives or hang them in their houses. As for the price, they only cost $ 4.99 each. I would be grateful if you could sell them in your online shop.
Thanks for your kindness! Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
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假定你是李华,暑假想去一家外资公司兼职,已写好申请书和个人简历(resume),给外教Ms.Jenkins写封信,请她帮你修改所附材料的文字和格式(format).
1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
典例展示
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Dear Ms Jenkins,
I'm Li Hua and I plan to take a part-time job in a foreign capital company during the summer holiday. I have already filled in my application form and resume. However, I'm not sure about the words and format. Therefore, I'm writing to ask for your help.
Would you mind finding out the mistakes in terms of words and format? Besides, I'd like you to correct the mistakes found in the materials. I'd be most grateful if you could do me the favor.
I'm looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
佳作欣赏
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结构总结
Part 3
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求助信
Para 1.开头
Para 2.主体
自我介绍
点明写信目的:说明困难
阐述困难
Para 3.结尾
困难带来的影响
具体请求
表达感谢
期待回复
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语言表达
Part 4
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1. 求助
ask for help / ask for a favor /turn to sb for help /seek assistance from sb. 向sb 求助
do me a favor 帮我一个忙
2. 难面临困难
be faced with difficulties / encounter problems; 面临困难
be stuck with troubles 陷入...困境
have some difficulty (in) doing 做...有困难
… is beyond my ability ...超越我的能力
3. 委婉请求
Would you be so kind as to…?
If possible, could you spare a few minutes to…?
I would appreciate it very much if…
添加文本信息
求助信相关的表达
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4. 表达谢意
Many thanks for your time and support.
感谢您的时间和支持
Your timely help will make a big difference.
你及时的帮助将对我有很大的影响。
5.衔接词
therefore (因此), otherwise(否则),
besides, most importantly…
添加文本信息
添加文本信息
求助信相关的表达
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指导;建议 give guidance on; offer suggestions about;
provide tips for
改编... adapt a ...; revise a ...
对...掌握的好 have a good command of ...
抽空 spare some time; make time
宝贵经验 valuable experience; precious advice
感激不尽 be deeply grateful; appreciate it very much
期待回复 look forward to your reply; anticipate your response
求助信相关的表达
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写作思路
Part 5
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1. I'm Li Hua, a senior one student. I'm writing to ask you for help with ..., which has been troubling me for a long time.
我是高一学生李华,写信恳请你就我的...问题给予帮助,这个问题已经困扰我许久了.
2. I'm Li Hua, who is in charge of the school's... club. I'm writing to seek your assistance in ..
我是负责学校...社团的李华,写信是为了...一事上寻求你的协助。
Para 1. 开头:自我介绍+点明求助目的(说明困难)
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1. The biggest problem I'm facing now is that I always feel nervous when...
我目前面临的最大问题是,在...总会感到紧张。
2. We lack professional guidance on how to do... and how to do ... 我们在如何...以及如何...方面,缺少专业的指导。
3. I have tried practicing with sb and doing sth...., but the improvement is not as obvious as I expected.
我已经尝试过和sb一起练习并且...,但进步并没有达到我预期的效果。
4. We would be grateful if you could provide us with some professional advice or connect us with ... experts.
如果你能为我们提供一些专业建议,或是帮我们联系一些...专家,我们将万分感激。
添加文本信息
标题数字等都可以通过点击和重新输入进行更改。建议正文14号字,1.3倍字间距
Para 2. 主体:阐述困难/需求+说明帮助方向
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Para 3. 结尾:致谢+期待回复
1. I would be extremely grateful if you could spare some time to help me solve this problem.
如果你能抽出些许时间帮我解决这个问题,我将不胜感激。
2. We sincerely appreciate your time and effort, and we are looking forward to eagerly await your favorable reply at your earliest convenience.
我们衷心感谢你的时间与付出,期待能尽快收到你的肯定答复。
3. Thank you again for your generous help. Please feel free to contact me if you need any further information.
再次感谢你的慷慨相助,如果你需要更多相关信息,请随时与我联系。
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迁移运用
Part 6
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假设你是李华,你校将举办英语戏剧节(English Drama Festival),你负责班级戏剧的编排,但在剧本改编和演员台词训练方面遇到困难。请你给外教Mr. Smith写一封求助信,内容包括:
1. 说明写信目的;
2. 阐述遇到的具体困难;
3. 希望得到的帮助。
注意:1. 词数100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯;3. 开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
迁移运用
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Dear Mr. Smith,
I’m Li Hua, and I’m writing to ask for your help with our class’s drama for the upcoming English Drama Festival. As the person in charge of arranging the play, I’ve run into two main problems recently.
First, we find it really hard to adapt the script properly. We’re not sure how to make the dialogue sound natural and authentic in English, especially when it comes to the emotional expressions of the characters. Second, my classmates struggle a lot with their lines. They can’t pronounce some words correctly and fail to deliver the lines with the right tone and feeling.
I wonder if you could spare some time to give us advice on script adaptation and help us practice the lines. Your guidance would mean a lot to us.Looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
参考答案
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