2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---老兵深山迷路遇暖心救援 导学案

该高中英语高考复习学案系统梳理了读后续写题型的核心考点，涵盖文本分析（角色、视角、时空线等）、情节构造、语言运用等模块，通过问题导向的细节问答和任务驱动的段落框架设计，引导学生自主构建“文本分析-情节发展-语言表达”的知识网络，体现考点梳理的系统性和层次性。 亮点在于自主诊断与思维品质培养，如开篇设置文本细节问答（如Bill的年龄身份、迷路原因等）帮助学生自测学情，通过情节线和情感线分析任务引导学生逻辑推断，培养语言能力和思维品质。每个模块配有续写框架和满分范文示例，支持学生自主提升，教师可依据学生答题情况精准指导，实现因材施教。

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 Bill McDonnell, a 92-year-old former soldier, remained energetic and still had a great passion for hunting, a hobby he had kept since his young adulthood. As the annual deer season kicked off in early autumn, he insisted on going hunting alone in Shenandoah Mountain, despite his wife Joanna’s constant worries — their son, Bill Jr., had an important football game that day and couldn’t accompany him. Joanna, knowing her husband’s stubbornness, finally gave in after much persuasion, forcing him to make a firm promise to return home by 3 pm before the sun set and the temperature dropped sharply. Early the next morning, Bill woke up promptly at 4 o’clock, grabbed his old but well-maintained muzzleloader, and drove his rusty but reliable Jeep to the foot of the mountain. He parked the car carefully at the end of a narrow, overgrown old logging road and started hiking slowly into the dense woods, wearing his thick hunting boots. At 7:30 am, the soft sun peeked through the dense leaves, casting warm spots on the moss-covered ground, with the temperature hovering around 25 degrees. Curious and eager to find a big male deer, he took an unfamiliar winding path that led deeper into the mountain. By 11 am, he reached a small clearing covered with wild grass but suddenly realized he had wandered too far from his starting point. When he tried to head back, no clear path could be found in the thick, overgrown forest, where tall trees and bushes blocked his view. At 2 pm, exhausted and increasingly anxious, he took out his old mobile phone and GPS device, only to find both were dead — he’d completely forgotten to charge them the night before. Panic quietly crept in as he thought of Joanna’s worried face and her repeated warning, but he forced himself to calm down, recalling his military training. He noticed a line of tall oaks he’d passed earlier, their straight trunks standing out in the forest, and hoped they would guide him safely back to his car. 注意： （1）续写词数应为 150 个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 He was moving slower and slower, Joanna’s 3 pm deadline having passed. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ It was about 9:45 pm when Bill heard the whoop-whoop of a helicopter. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 92-year-old Bill was an energetic former soldier and loved hunting--- _________________ --- Bill promised his wife to return home by 3 pm before temperature dropped--- _________________ --- He ventured deep into the mountain and got lost in the dense forest--- _________________ --- His phone and GPS died, but he calmed down and tried to find the way out with military experience 4. 细节问答 What was Bill’s age and identity? ：___________________________________ Why did Bill go hunting alone?：_________________________________ What promise did Bill make to his wife?：________________________________________________ How did Bill get lost in the mountain?：__________________________________________ What trouble did Bill meet at 2 pm?：_____________________________________________ How did Bill deal with his panic?：_________________________________________________ What kind of person is Bill?：________________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 92岁老兵比尔热爱狩猎，精力充沛、性格坚毅→_________________ →秋季狩猎季，他不顾妻子担忧，独自进山狩猎并承诺下午3点前归家→_________________ →比尔为寻找猎物误入陌生小路，深入山林后彻底迷路→_________________ →手机和GPS没电失联，他短暂恐慌后凭借军人素养冷静自救→依靠沿途橡树尝试寻路→（续写）天色渐晚、气温骤降，比尔体力透支被困山林，妻子焦急报警求助→（续写）深夜救援直升机赶来，比尔成功获救、平安归家 6．情感线 Bill：passionate and eager→___________→anxious and panicked→___________→hopeful and relieved（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 独立主格；非谓语动词；状语从句；定语从句；结果状语 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 冒险求生类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: He was moving slower and slower, Joanna’s 3 pm deadline having passed. 衔接句1——What difficulties did Bill face after the deadline? What did his wife do? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: It was about 9:45 pm when Bill heard the whoop-whoop of a helicopter. 衔接句2——How did Bill respond? What was the final result of the rescue? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：下午三点的归期已过，他的脚步愈发沉重迟缓。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：晚上九点四十五分左右，比尔听到了直升机的轰鸣声。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写 He was moving slower and slower, Joanna’s 3 pm deadline having passed. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ It was about 9:45 pm when Bill heard the whoop-whoop of a helicopter. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 Bill（92岁退役老兵、性格坚毅、热爱狩猎、冷静自律、拥有良好求生素养）；Joanna（细心温柔、担忧丈夫、体贴牵挂的妻子）；Rescue workers（专业负责的救援人员） 2．视角 第三人称 3．时空线 92-year-old Bill was an energetic former soldier and loved hunting--- He insisted on hunting alone and promised his wife a 3 pm return time--- Bill promised his wife to return home by 3 pm before temperature dropped--- He drove to the mountain and hiked into the dense woods early in the morning--- He ventured deep into the mountain and got lost in the dense forest--- He failed to find his way back with no accessible path--- His phone and GPS died, but he calmed down and tried to find the way out with military experience 4. 细节问答 What was Bill’s age and identity? ：He was a 92-year-old energetic former soldier who loved hunting. Why did Bill go hunting alone?：It was the annual deer season, and his son had a football game and couldn’t accompany him. What promise did Bill make to his wife?：He promised to return home by 3 pm before sunset and the sharp temperature drop. How did Bill get lost in the mountain?：He took an unfamiliar path to hunt deer and wandered too deep into the forest with no clear way back. What trouble did Bill meet at 2 pm?：His mobile phone and GPS device were out of power, leaving him completely disconnected. How did Bill deal with his panic?：He recalled his military training, calmed himself down and tried to find directions via tall oak trees. What kind of person is Bill?：He is persistent, tough-minded, calm in crisis and self-disciplined. What does the story tell us?：We should stay calm in danger, and timely help and kindness can bring hope to people in trouble. 5．情节线 92岁退役老兵比尔精力充沛，毕生热爱狩猎运动→秋季猎鹿季来临，他执意独自进山狩猎，向妻子承诺下午3点前准时归家→凌晨四点比尔独自驱车进山，深入茂密山林准备狩猎→为寻觅猎物，他误入陌生小径，不知不觉走入山林深处、彻底迷失方向→午后发现手机和GPS全部没电，陷入失联困境→短暂恐慌后，他凭借军人素养冷静镇定，依托记忆中的橡树尝试自救→（续写）归期已过，天色入夜、气温骤降，比尔体力透支被困深山，妻子久等无果果断报警求助→（续写）深夜救援直升机赶赴山林，比尔成功获救，平安与家人团聚 6．情感线 Bill：passionate and eager→calm and focused→anxious and panicked→sober and determined→hopeful and relieved（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：92岁的退役老兵比尔独自进山狩猎时不慎迷路失联，绝境中凭借军人素养冷静自救，最终在深夜被救援直升机成功营救，平安脱险。 English：92-year-old former soldier Bill got lost and lost contact while hunting alone in the mountain. He stayed calm in danger and was finally rescued by a rescue helicopter late at night. 8. 句式 独立主格：Joanna’s 3 pm deadline having passed. 非谓语动词：Curious and eager to find a big male deer, he took an unfamiliar winding path. 结果状语：He took out his phone, only to find it was dead. 定语从句：He noticed a line of tall oaks he’d passed earlier. 状语从句：Panic quietly crept in as he thought of Joanna’s worried face. 9. 本文主题 冒险求生类：危难时刻保持冷静、坚守希望，强大的心理素质是绝境求生的关键，人间善意与救援守护生命平安。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: He was moving slower and slower, Joanna’s 3 pm deadline having passed. 衔接句1——What difficulties did Bill face after the deadline? What did his wife do? As night fell and the temperature dropped sharply, Bill suffered from exhaustion and cold, while his worried wife called the police for rescue after waiting in vain. Paragraph 2: It was about 9:45 pm when Bill heard the whoop-whoop of a helicopter. 衔接句2——How did Bill respond? What was the final result of the rescue? Bill gathered his last strength to signal for help, was spotted and rescued by the rescue team, and finally returned home safely to reunite with his anxious wife. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：下午三点的归期已过，他的脚步愈发沉重迟缓。 →①夜幕降临，山林气温骤降，比尔体力透支、又冷又累→②他强忍不适坚持前行，始终保持冷静不放弃→③妻子久等不归、联系不上，焦急万分并报警求助； 第二段：晚上九点四十五分左右，比尔听到了直升机的轰鸣声。 →①他瞬间燃起希望，用尽余力挥舞衣物、发出求救信号→②救援人员发现被困的他，成功实施救援→③比尔平安获救，心怀感恩，深刻体会到家人的牵挂与温暖。 四.段落续写（满分范文） He was moving slower and slower, Joanna’s 3 pm deadline having passed. As dusk fell gradually, the mountain wind grew bitter cold, sweeping through the dense woods. Exhausted and chilled to the bone, Bill leaned against a thick oak tree to rest, his body trembling slightly. Despite the desperate situation, his military instinct kept him awake and hopeful. Meanwhile, Joanna had grown extremely anxious after waiting for hours. Unable to get in touch with Bill, she immediately called the local rescue team for help, praying anxiously for his safe return. It was about 9:45 pm when Bill heard the whoop-whoop of a helicopter. The familiar sound filled his heart with huge hope. He struggled to stand up, waving his hunting coat vigorously and shouting for help with all his remaining strength. Fortunately, the rescue workers spotted him soon and lowered a rope to pull him up. Safe and sound, Bill was sent back home. Hugging his worried wife tightly, he felt extremely grateful for this precious second chance and the warmth of being rescued. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $