2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习 冬日里的邻里温情 导学案

该高中英语高考复习学案系统梳理了读后续写专题核心考点，涵盖角色分析、情节发展、情感线索等要素，按文本理解、情节构造、语言表达的逻辑构建知识网络。通过细节问答和续写框架设计，引导学生自主分析文本内在联系，形成完整的读写思维体系。 亮点在于诊断性自测与分层指导结合，开篇设置细节问答诊断文本分析能力，续写框架提供情节构建方法，培养学生思维品质和语言能力。每个模块配有情感线梳理和段落框架任务，帮助学生自主提升写作逻辑，教师可依据学情精准指导，实现个性化复习。

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 The first cold snap of winter hit Willow Creek violently. Heavy snow had been falling for two days, and the sidewalk outside Mrs. Grant's house was covered with thick, hard ice. The elderly lady, living alone, had been looking forward to her daily visit to the community library. But the slippery path made her anxious, as she was afraid of falling. Mrs. Grant was a bit reserved and suspicious by nature. She had lived alone for years and preferred to keep to herself. The Carter family, who moved in next door last month, were always noisy with their two energetic boys. To Mrs. Grant's ordered mind, their yard was always a mess with scattered toys. She secretly thought the family was uncivilized and didn't care about community rules. Just as she was feeling lonely and worried about going out, a soft knock sounded at the door. She opened it with caution and saw 12-year-old Tommy, the boy next door , standing outside with a broom（扫帚）in his hand." Aunt Maria, I saw the snow!" shouted Tommy. "I cleared a path for you, but it's still icy. Can I help you walk to the library?" Astonished by the unexpected visit, Mrs. Grant frowned and hesitated. She didn't want to trouble the boy, but her fear of falling won out. She nodded weakly. Tommy put on a pair of old gloves and held her arm tightly as they walked slowly to the library. On the way, Tommy chatted happily about his school life, distracting Mrs. Grant from the cold. She felt a strange warmth, though she still kept a certain distance. After the visit, Tommy accompanied her back home. Before leaving, he even helped clear a small area of ice from her steps. To thank him, Mrs. Grant prepared a plate of freshly baked cookies. Tommy accepted them with a big smile and then ran back to clear more snow from the street corner. 注意： （1）续写词数应为 150个左右； （2）请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 The next morning, Mrs. Grant looked out of the window and was deeply moved by what she saw. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ This incident deeply touched Mrs. Grant and changed her view on neighborhood relationships. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1．角色 ________________________________________________________ 2．视角 第________人称 3．时空线 Heavy snow and ice covered the neighborhood--- _________________ --- Mrs. Grant disliked the noisy Carter family--- _________________ --- Tommy offered to help Mrs. Grant walk to the library--- _________________ --- Tommy cleared ice for her and received her cookies 4. 细节问答 Why was Mrs. Grant unable to go out easily? ：___________________________________ What was Mrs. Grant’s personality?：_________________________________ What did Mrs. Grant think of the Carter family at first?：________________________________________________ What did Tommy do to help Mrs. Grant?：__________________________________________ How did Mrs. Grant feel when Tommy helped her?：_____________________________________________ What did Mrs. Grant do to thank Tommy?：_________________________________________________ What mistake did Mrs. Grant make at first?：________________________________________________________ What does the story tell us?：________________________________________________ 5．情节线 寒冬大雪封路，独居的格兰特太太因路面结冰不敢出门→_________________ →她性格孤僻，一直对吵闹邋遢的邻居卡特一家抱有偏见→_________________ →邻居男孩汤米主动上门，搀扶她去图书馆、清扫门前冰雪→_________________ →格兰特太太烤饼干感谢汤米，内心生出暖意→（续写）次日清晨她目睹汤米兄弟扫雪的暖心场景→（续写）她彻底改变偏见，主动亲近邻居，收获温暖邻里情 6．情感线 Mrs. Grant：anxious and lonely→___________→hesitant and reserved→___________→soft and warm→___________（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式 宾语从句；定语从句；状语从句；非谓语；并列句 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 温情励志类：_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: The next morning, Mrs. Grant looked out of the window and was deeply moved by what she saw. 衔接句1——What did Mrs. Grant see? How did she react? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: This incident deeply touched Mrs. Grant and changed her view on neighborhood relationships. 衔接句2——What change happened to her? What was the final ending? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三．段落续写框架 第一段：第二天早上，格兰特太太望向窗外，被眼前的一幕深深打动。 →①__________________→②__________________→③_______________； 第二段：这件事深深触动了格兰特太太，改变了她对邻里关系的看法。 →④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四.段落续写 The next morning, Mrs. Grant looked out of the window and was deeply moved by what she saw. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ This incident deeply touched Mrs. Grant and changed her view on neighborhood relationships. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1．角色 Mrs. Grant（性格孤僻、心存偏见、内心善良、懂得感恩的独居老人）；Tommy（热情善良、乐于助人、淳朴懂事的邻家男孩）；Carter family（热闹友善、热心助人的邻居一家） 2．视角 第三人称 3．时空线 Heavy snow and ice covered the neighborhood--- Mrs. Grant was afraid of slipping and unable to go out--- Mrs. Grant disliked the noisy Carter family--- Tommy took the initiative to offer help--- Tommy accompanied and helped Mrs. Grant a lot--- Tommy cleared ice for her and received her cookies 4. 细节问答 Why was Mrs. Grant unable to go out easily? ：Because heavy snow and hard ice covered the road, making it slippery and dangerous to walk. What was Mrs. Grant’s personality?：She was reserved, suspicious, quiet and used to living alone. What did Mrs. Grant think of the Carter family at first?：She thought they were noisy, messy, uncivilized and ignored community rules. What did Tommy do to help Mrs. Grant?：He cleared snow and ice, escorted her to the library and chatted with her to cheer her up. How did Mrs. Grant feel when Tommy helped her?：She felt surprised, a little awkward but warm inside. What did Mrs. Grant do to thank Tommy?：She prepared a plate of freshly baked cookies for him. What mistake did Mrs. Grant make at first?：She judged the Carter family arbitrarily only by their appearance and noise. What does the story tell us?：We should never judge others hastily, and kindness can bridge the gap between people and warm neighbors. 5．情节线 寒冬大雪封路，独居的格兰特太太因路面结冰不敢出门→她性格孤僻，常年独居，不喜与人交往→她一直对吵闹、院子杂乱的邻居卡特一家抱有偏见→邻居男孩汤米主动上门帮忙，搀扶她出行、清扫冰雪→汤米的贴心帮助让冷漠的格兰特太太心生暖意→格兰特太太烤饼干答谢汤米→（续写）次日她目睹汤米和弟弟义务清扫街区冰雪→（续写）她摒弃偏见，主动亲近邻居，懂得了邻里善意与温暖 6．情感线 Mrs. Grant：anxious and lonely→biased and cold→hesitant and reserved→surprised and touched→soft and warm→regretful and grateful（续写） 7. 综合概括（中英各一句） 中文：独居的格兰特太太因刻板印象对吵闹的邻居心存偏见，大雪天邻家男孩汤米主动贴心相助，用纯粹的善意融化了她内心的冷漠与偏见，让她读懂了温暖的邻里情谊。 英文：Suffering from prejudice against her noisy neighbors, the lonely elderly Mrs. Grant was deeply touched by little Tommy’s selfless help on a snowy day, which completely changed her attitude towards neighborhood relationships. 8. 句式 状语从句：But the slippery path made her anxious, as she was afraid of falling. 非谓语动词：Heavy snow had been falling for two days, making the sidewalk icy and dangerous. 宾语从句：She secretly thought the family was uncivilized and didn't care about community rules. 定语从句：The Carter family, who moved in next door last month, were always noisy. 并列句：Tommy chatted happily on the way, and his joy drove away Mrs. Grant’s coldness and loneliness. 9. 本文主题 温情励志类：不要以表象随意评判他人，真诚的善意能够消解偏见、温暖人心，成就美好的邻里温情。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: The next morning, Mrs. Grant looked out of the window and was deeply moved by what she saw. 衔接句1——What did Mrs. Grant see? How did she react? She saw Tommy and his younger brother clearing snow and ice for the whole neighborhood with great effort, and she felt ashamed of her previous prejudice. Paragraph 2: This incident deeply touched Mrs. Grant and changed her view on neighborhood relationships. 衔接句2——What change happened to her? What was the final ending? She abandoned her prejudice, took the initiative to get along with neighbors, and finally gained warm and harmonious neighborhood friendship. 三．段落续写框架 第一段：第二天早上，格兰特太太望向窗外，被眼前的一幕深深打动。 →①她看到汤米和弟弟正在义务清扫整条街道的冰雪→②兄弟俩不畏严寒、认真付出的模样让她无比愧疚→③她终于意识到自己一直误解了善良的邻居； 第二段：这件事深深触动了格兰特太太，改变了她对邻里关系的看法。 →④她放下孤僻与偏见，主动和邻居友好相处→⑤她时常准备小零食招待两个男孩，主动维系邻里情谊→⑥冷漠被善意消融，邻里之间收获双向奔赴的温暖。 四.段落续写（满分范文） The next morning, Mrs. Grant looked out of the window and was deeply moved by what she saw. Tommy and his little brother were bending over the road, sweeping snow and scraping ice nonstop. Despite the biting cold wind, their small figures worked diligently to clear the icy path for every household in the neighborhood. They even tidied up the scattered branches and snow piles along the street. Staring at their earnest and kind actions, Mrs. Grant felt a sharp sense of guilt. She realized she had judged the lovely family unfairly merely by their noise and messy yard. This incident deeply touched Mrs. Grant and changed her view on neighborhood relationships. She completely abandoned her previous prejudice and reserved attitude. She walked out warmly to greet the two boys and offered them hot drinks to warm themselves up. From then on, she began to take the initiative to communicate with the Carter family. She no longer minded their laughter and noise, but cherished such lively warmth. Gradually, harmonious laughter filled the neighborhood, and Mrs. Grant finally got rid of her loneliness with sincere neighborhood love. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $