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Unit 1 Career talks
同步写作课讲义-外研版八年级下册
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话题解读
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本单元以“职业”为话题,主要围绕全面认识职业、理解职业的意义、职业的发展趋势等方面展开。与其相关的写作通常涉及以下几个方面:
1.介绍一种自己想从事的职业;
2.对未来职业做出预测和设想;
3.写一则招聘启事。
写作时,人称多用第一、三人称,时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主,部分句子使用被动语态表达效果会更好。结构多为“总—分—总”:开头导入,中间具体阐述,结尾总结升华。
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写作任务
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1.介绍一种自己想从事的职业;
2.对未来职业做出预测和设想;
3.写一则招聘启事。
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审题指导
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你校的英语俱乐部为成员提供寒假兼职(a part-time job)体验。成员可以选择做图书管理员(librarian)、手艺人(craftsperson)、书法家(calligrapher)、裁缝(tailor)、厨师(cook)等传统职业,也可以选择做电脑程序员(computer programmer)、人工智能工程师(AI engineer)、环境科学家(environmental scientist)等现代新兴职业。请你用英语写一篇发言稿,谈谈你的选择。
写作提示:
1.What part-time job do you choose?
2.What is the key responsibilities of the job?
3.What’s the benefits and challenges of the job?
要求:
1.词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.短文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Hello, I would like a part-time job as
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写作步骤
审主题:寒假兼职
审体裁:应用文
审人称:第一人称、第三人称
审时态:一般现在时、一般将来时
审要点:职业名称、职业职责、职业的益处与挑战
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写作框架
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素材宝库
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词汇积累
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职业名称
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学科网(北京)股份有限公司
librarian 图书管理员
craftsperson 手艺人
calligrapher 书法家
tailor 裁缝
cook/chef 厨师
computer programmer 电脑程序员
AI engineer 人工智能工程师
environmental scientist 环境科学家
fashion designer 时装设计师
工作特点
interesting 有趣的
challenging 有挑战性的
full of joys充满乐趣
exciting 令人兴奋的
creative 有创造力的
dangerous 危险的
boring 无聊的
relaxing 轻松的
busy 忙碌的
well-paid 高薪的
respectable 值得尊敬的
技能与品质
skill 技能
talent 天赋
creativity 创造力
patience 耐心
responsibility 责任
communication skills 沟通技巧
teamwork 团队合作
leadership 领导才能,领导素质
skillful 熟练的
hard-working 勤奋的
kind 善良的
smart/intelligent 聪明的
brave 勇敢的
careful 细心的
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句型积累
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开头句
Hello, I would like a part-time job as a librarian/computer programmer/... 大家好,我想申请一份图书管理员/计算机程序员/……的兼职工作。
Hello everyone! I’d love to take the part-time job as a...this winter vacation. 大家好!这个寒假,我想找一份……的兼职工作。
中间句
1.与职责相关
My main responsibility would be... 我的主要职责将会是……
My main task would involve... 我的主要任务将会包括……
I might also...and work with other team members to... 我可能还会……并且与其他团队成员合作……
During the winter vacation, I will not only help..., but also... 寒假期间,我不但会帮忙……,还会……
2.与益处相关
The benefit of this job is that... 这份工作的益处是……
This job will help me improve... 这份工作将会帮助我提升……
It also allows me to... 它还使我能够……
The best part of this job is that I can learn more about...and develop... skills. 这份工作最好的部分在于我能学习更多关于……的知识,并且能锻炼……技巧。
3.与挑战相关
However, the challenge is that... 然而,挑战是……
However, the job might be challenging because... 然而,这份工作可能会很有挑战性,因为……
Creativity and responsibility are required.需要有创造力和责任感。
I might need to... 我可能需要……
结尾句
It’s a wonderful opportunity to learn more about...这是一个了解更多……的好机会。
I believe/hope that... 我相信/希望……
That’s all for my part-time job choice. 这就是我的兼职选择。
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参考范文
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Hello, I would like a part-time job as a computer programmer.
During the winter vacation, I will not only help write and test computer programs, but also take part in the design of some new software. I’ll also be responsible for fixing software bugs.This job will be filled with both benefits and challenges. It can help me improve my logical thinking and problem-solving abilities. However, programming can be challenging, as creativity and great patience are required. I might need to spend hours dealing with a single issue.
It’s a wonderful opportunity to learn more about technology and gain practical skills. ⑥I believe this experience will be rewarding.
That’s all for my part-time job choice. Thank you!
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写作拓展
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变式提升训练
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(25-26八年级下·海南省直辖县级单位·期中)梦想是指路明灯。没有梦想,我们就没有坚定的方向。作为新时代的青少年,你的梦想是什么呢?某英文报社正在举办题为“My dream job”的征文活动,请根据以下提示,用英文写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1.你梦想的职业(教师、作家、医生等);
2.你拥有这个梦想的原因;
3.你实现梦想的具体计划。
注意:1.词数为80左右,必须包含以上所有提示内容;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯,书写规范;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:illness (n.疾病), completely (adv.完全地), effort (n.努力), stick to (坚持)
My dream job
Dreams play an important role in our lives. We all have dream jobs. As for me, I want to be a
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【答案】范文:
My Dream job
Dreams play an important role in our lives. We all have dream jobs. As for me, I want to be a doctor.
Last year, my grandma was badly ill. The doctors saved her life and she got well completely. I was touched by their excellent medical skills and promised to become a doctor when I grew up.
To achieve my dream, I’ll study hard and try my best to get into a medical college. After graduating, I plan to work in a hospital. If I stick to my plan and keep trying, I’m sure I can make my dream come true.
【详解】[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:介绍性记叙文,用一般现在时介绍梦想,用一般过去时讲解原因,用一般将来时描述计划
明确要点:包含 “梦想职业、拥有梦想的原因、实现梦想的具体计划” 三个核心要点
确定人称:第一人称 (I/my) 为主
注意事项:不得透露真实姓名和学校名称
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:题目已给出开头,可在此基础上总起句,引出自己的梦想职业
主体段:介绍拥有该梦想的原因
结尾段:写实现梦想的具体计划,总结感受,升华主题,表达对梦想的坚持与信心,呼应开头
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:梦想职业
职业选择:teacher/writer/doctor/scientist/ engineer等
具体说明:As for me, I want to be a doctor.
要点二:拥有该梦想的原因
事件起因:Last year, my grandma was badly ill./I saw a lot of sick people.等
触动点:The doctors saved her life and she got well completely./Doctors can help people live longer.等
感受:I was touched by their excellent medical skills./I wanted to help others like them.等
承诺:promised to become a doctor when I grew up/made up my mind to be a doctor等
具体说明:Last year, my grandma was badly ill. The doctors saved her life and she got well completely. I was touched by their excellent medical skills and promised to become a doctor when I grew up.
要点三:具体计划
学习计划:study hard and try my best to get into a medical college/study biology and chemistry well/do well in all subjects等
行动计划:work in a hospital after graduating/learn from experienced doctors等
决心表达:stick to my plan and keep trying/never give up/keep working hard等
结果展望:I’m sure I can make my dream come true./I will become a good doctor one day.等
具体说明:To achieve my dream, I’ll study hard and try my best to get into a medical college. After graduating, I plan to work in a hospital. If I stick to my plan and keep trying, I’m sure I can make my dream come true.
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(25-26八年级下·天津·期中)亲爱的同学,初中的学习生活即将结束,你也渐渐长大,你和同学们的理想职业是什么?请你根据表格提示,以“What do you want to be?”为题写一篇80—100词的英语短文,介绍你们组就此问题的讨论结果,同时告诉大家你自己的理想职业。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
组员
理想职业
原因
Mary
时装设计师 (fashion designer)
喜欢漂亮衣服,擅长绘画
Kate
园艺工 (gardener)
喜爱植物,想让城市更美
Tom
厨师
为他人制作健康美味的食物
What do you want to be?
Hello, everyone. My name is Li Hua. What type of job do you dream about?
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What do you want to be?
Hello, everyone. My name is Li Hua. What type of job do you dream about?
In our group, Mary wants to be a fashion designer because she likes beautiful clothes and is good at drawing. Kate dreams of being a gardener. She loves plants and hopes to make our city more beautiful. Tom would like to be a cook. He enjoys making healthy and delicious food for others. As for me, I want to be a teacher. I think teaching is a great job because I can help children learn and grow.
We all believe that working hard can make our dreams come true.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:介绍类短文,以一般现在时为主
明确要点:介绍组员的理想职业及原因 ;自己的理想职业及原因
确定人称:第三人称(介绍组员)+ 第一人称(介绍自己)
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:引出话题,承接题目给出的开头句
主体段:依次介绍Mary、Kate、Tom 的理想职业及原因,再介绍自己的理想职业
结尾段:总结升华,表达努力实现梦想的决心
[第三步:要点展开]
职业选择:fashion designer/gardener/cook/doctor/engineer/pilot等
原因表达:be good at…/make … more beautiful/be interested in …等
愿望展现:help children learn and grow/want to help…/hope to make people happy/wish to …等
主题升华:We all believe that…/With hard work, our dreams will surely come true one day/As long as we never give up, our dreams will come true in the end等
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(25-26八年级下·安徽合肥·期中)假设你是李华。你校英文报“My Future”专栏正在举办征文活动,请你根据以下图示信息,以“My Dream Job”为题,用英语写一篇短文投稿。
My Dream Job
Job
teacher/ doctor/pilot/ lawyer/…
Reasons
personal interests/ influence from others/ social responsibility /…
Efforts
What do you often do to achieve your dream?
Hope
What’s your confidence in achieving your dream?
注意:1.词数80-100;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4.稿件的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Dream Job
Everyone has their dream jobs.
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【答案】例文:
My Dream Job
Everyone has their dream jobs. My dream is to become a pilot. I have always been interested in airplanes and the sky. This interest grew stronger after I learned that pilots can travel to many different places and help people, which makes the job meaningful.
To achieve my dream, I often read books about planes and watch videos about flying. I also exercise to stay healthy, because pilots need to be strong. In the future, I plan to study hard and learn more about science and geography.
I am sure I can make my dream come true.
【详解】[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:征文类短文(My Future专栏投稿)
明确要点:以李华的身份,以“My Dream Job”为题,写一篇短文投稿,需包含理想职业、选择该职业的理由、为实现梦想所做的努力以及对实现梦想的信心与希望
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)
注意事项:词数80-100,开头已给出不计入总词数,文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称,可适当增加细节使行文连贯
[第二步:构思布局]
总分总结构
开头:沿用给定开头,点明自己的理想职业
主体:依次说明选择该职业的理由、为实现梦想所做的努力
结尾:表达对实现梦想的信心与希望
[第三步:要点展开]
理想职业:My dream job is to become a pilot / teacher / doctor / lawyer等
选择理由:I have always been interested in airplanes and the sky / I want to help people and take on social responsibility / I was influenced by my favorite teacher and love working with students等
所做努力:To achieve my dream, I often read books about planes and watch videos about flying / I also exercise to stay healthy / I study hard and learn more about science and geography等
信心与希望:I am sure I can make my dream come true / If I keep trying, I believe I will achieve my goal one day等
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(25-26八年级下·广东深圳·期中)假如你是Li Hua,你所在的学校将于本周日组织一次环保志愿活动,现面向全体学生招募有环保经验的志愿者。请你根据以下提示,用英语写一封申请信。
提示:
(1) 阐述你的优势
(2) 分享你做过的环保相关志愿活动
(3) 申请参加此次活动
要求:
(1) 短文须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥。
(2) 短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(3) 80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear organizer,
I would like to take part in the voluntary activity this weekend.
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Best regards,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear organizer,
I would like to take part in the voluntary activity this weekend.
I am an active student who cares about the environment. I have some experience in protecting it. For example, I often pick up rubbish in parks and tell my friends to save water. Last month, I joined a tree-planting activity and learned how to take care of young trees. I believe I can do a good job in your activity.
I really hope to join you and make our school greener. Thank you for considering my application.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【详解】写作步骤
【第一步:审题立意】
确定文体:申请信,用一般现在时为主
明确要点:阐述优势/分享环保志愿经历/申请参加活动
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)
注意事项:不得透露真实姓名和学校名称
【第二步:构思布局】
三段式结构:
开头段:承接给定开头,点明申请意愿
主体段:分别阐述自身优势、分享过往环保志愿活动
结尾段:表达信心与期待,礼貌收尾
【第三步:要点展开】
要点一:阐述你的优势
性格特质:outgoing and patient/responsible and careful等
环保意识:care for the environment/have strong environmental awareness等
实践能力:good at teamwork/learn things quickly等
要点二:分享你做过的环保相关志愿活动
日常行动:pick up rubbish/save water and electricity等
专项活动:join tree-planting activity/attend waste-sorting lecture等
宣传行动:tell friends to protect environment/make environmental posters等
要点三:申请参加此次活动
表达信心:can do a good job/be fit for this activity等
表达期待:hope to join you/wish to be chosen等
礼貌收尾:thank you for considering my application/look forward to your reply等
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(25-26八年级下·安徽合肥·期中)“少年强则国强”,作为青少年的我们应该树立远大的理想。学校英文报正在开展以“My dream job”为题的征文活动,鼓励同学们畅谈自己的理想职业。假如你是李华,请你根据以下要点和提示写一篇英语短文投稿。
要求:
1.短文须包含要点提示中的所有信息,可适当增加细节;
2.词数80左右;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
My dream job
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【答案】例文
My dream job
My dream job is to be a teacher.
I want to be a teacher because I love working with children and hope to help them learn useful knowledge and grow up happily. Teachers are great. They can share knowledge and guide students to become better people.
To realize my dream, I will study hard at all my subjects now. I will also practice my communication skills and be patient with others. I believe my dream will come true one day.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:说明文,用一般现在时为主,描述未来理想职业时可用一般将来时相关表达体现决心和期望。
明确要点:理想职业(是什么)、喜欢原因(为什么)、实现梦想的做法(怎么做)
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)
注意事项:不得透露真实姓名和学校名称
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:直接表明自己的理想职业是什么
主体段:阐述喜欢该职业的原因
结尾段:说明为实现梦想将采取的行动
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:理想职业
职业选择:teacher/doctor/scientist/artist/engineer等
具体表达:My dream job is to be.../I hope to work as.../I dream of becoming...等
要点二:喜欢原因
原因描述:love working with.../hope to help.../can share.../can guide.../is interesting/is meaningful等
具体表达:I want to be a teacher because I love working with children and hope to help them learn useful knowledge and grow up happily./I want to be a doctor because I love helping sick people and hope to make them healthy./I want to be an artist because it is interesting and I can express my feelings through art.
要点三:实现梦想的做法
做法描述:study hard at all my subjects/practice...skills/be patient with.../read more books about.../join relevant clubs等
具体表达:To realize my dream, I will study hard at all my subjects now./To realize my dream of being a scientist, I will read more books about science./To achieve my goal of becoming an engineer, I will join the engineering club at school.
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(25-26八年级下·天津河西·期中)每个人都有自己理想的职业,并且希望成为对国家和社会有用的人。你校正在开展“My Dream, Chinese Dream”系列英语演讲比赛,请以“My dream job”为题,写一篇演讲稿。
要点:(1)你理想的职业;
(2)你选择的理由(不少于2点);
(3)你的计划或做法(不少于2点)。
注意:(1)80词左右;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。
My dream job
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【答案】例文
My dream job
My dream job is to be a volleyball player. I love volleyball. I was chosen for the school volleyball team at the age of ten because I was taller than many other students at that time. I look up to the Chinese women’s volleyball team. Their spirit always encourages me.
I will keep on training to improve my skills. I want to join a professional volleyball team and then the national team. I hope to win an Olympic gold medal for China. I will spare no effort to achieve my dream!
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:应用文(演讲稿)。主要使用一般现在时陈述理想与计划,使用一般过去时叙述既往经历。
明确要点:理想职业、选择理由(不少于2点)、具体计划或做法(不少于2点)。
确定人称:第一人称(I/my)。
注意事项:词数80左右;适当增加细节使行文连贯;不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。
[第二步:构思布局]
两段式结构:
开头段:点明理想职业,并从身体条件及榜样力量两个角度阐述选择该职业的理由。
主体段:详述实现梦想的具体步骤(坚持训练、加入专业队),并表达为国争光的决心。
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:理想职业
具体职业:volleyball player/teacher/scientist/doctor/engineer等
要点二:选择理由
理由细节:taller than many other students/look up to the Chinese women’s volleyball team/their spirit always encourages me/be interested in/be good at/be helpful/important to society等
要点三:计划做法
具体计划:keep on training to improve my skills/join a professional volleyball team/join the national team/hope to win an Olympic gold medal for China/spare no effort to achieve my dream/study hard/practice every day/take part in competitions等
(7)
(22-23八年级下·陕西西安·期末)每个人都对自己的未来充满期待,未来的你会做着怎样的职业?假如你是李华,你校英文网站正在征集以“My Future Job”为题的英文稿,请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文并投稿。
提示:1. What will you do in 20 years?
2. Why do you want to do it?
3. How will you achieve it?
参考词汇:in order to, study, college, volunteer work, in need, a better place, come true, …
要求:1. 可选择使用参考词汇,亦可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4. 词数:不少于60词。(开头已给出,但不计入总词数)
My Future Job
I’ll be very different in the future. In 20 years, I’ll be a(n)
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【答案】例文:
My Future Job
I’ll be very different in the future. In 20 years, I’ll be a doctor. When I was a child, Mom and Dad were very nervous every time I got sick. I don’t want my parents to be worried about me so much. So I want to be a good doctor. I can help people when they are suffering from illness.
In order to become a doctor, I’ll study hard, and then I’ll get into a good medical college to learn more knowledge. I’ll also make it a habit to do volunteer work for people in need. I want to make the world a better place.
I believe my dream will come true in the future.
【详解】写作步骤
[第一步:审题立意]
确定文体:说明文(展望未来职业)
时态:一般将来时为主
人称:第一人称
写作要点:20年后的职业、选择该职业的原因、实现目标的具体做法
注意事项:词数不少于60词;不得出现真实信息;开头已给出,不计入总词数
[第二步:构思布局]
三段式结构:
开头段:使用题目给出的句子,点明20年后的职业
主体段:阐述选择该职业的原因,以及为实现目标将采取的行动
结尾段:表达对梦想实现的信心
[第三步:要点展开]
要点一:未来职业
In 20 years, I’ll be a doctor. 20年后,我将成为一名医生。
要点二:职业原因
When I was a child, my parents worried about me when I was sick. 小时候我生病时父母很担心。
I want to help people who are suffering from illness. 我想帮助受疾病困扰的人。
要点三:实现途径
In order to become a doctor, I’ll study hard and enter a good medical college. 为了成为医生,我会努力学习,考入好的医学院。
I’ll also do volunteer work to help people in need. 我也会做志愿工作帮助有需要的人。
I want to make the world a better place. 我想让世界变得更美好。
要点四:结尾展望
I believe my dream will come true in the future. 我相信我的梦想终将实现。
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Unit 1 Career talks
同步写作课讲义-外研版八年级下册
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话题解读
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本单元以“职业”为话题,主要围绕全面认识职业、理解职业的意义、职业的发展趋势等方面展开。与其相关的写作通常涉及以下几个方面:
1.介绍一种自己想从事的职业;
2.对未来职业做出预测和设想;
3.写一则招聘启事。
写作时,人称多用第一、三人称,时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主,部分句子使用被动语态表达效果会更好。结构多为“总—分—总”:开头导入,中间具体阐述,结尾总结升华。
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写作任务
)
1.介绍一种自己想从事的职业;
2.对未来职业做出预测和设想;
3.写一则招聘启事。
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审题指导
)
你校的英语俱乐部为成员提供寒假兼职(a part-time job)体验。成员可以选择做图书管理员(librarian)、手艺人(craftsperson)、书法家(calligrapher)、裁缝(tailor)、厨师(cook)等传统职业,也可以选择做电脑程序员(computer programmer)、人工智能工程师(AI engineer)、环境科学家(environmental scientist)等现代新兴职业。请你用英语写一篇发言稿,谈谈你的选择。
写作提示:
1.What part-time job do you choose?
2.What is the key responsibilities of the job?
3.What’s the benefits and challenges of the job?
要求:
1.词数100左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.短文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Hello, I would like a part-time job as
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写作步骤
审主题:寒假兼职
审体裁:应用文
审人称:第一人称、第三人称
审时态:一般现在时、一般将来时
审要点:职业名称、职业职责、职业的益处与挑战
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写作框架
)
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素材宝库
)
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词汇积累
)
职业名称
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1
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学科网(北京)股份有限公司
librarian 图书管理员
craftsperson 手艺人
calligrapher 书法家
tailor 裁缝
cook/chef 厨师
computer programmer 电脑程序员
AI engineer 人工智能工程师
environmental scientist 环境科学家
fashion designer 时装设计师
工作特点
interesting 有趣的
challenging 有挑战性的
full of joys充满乐趣
exciting 令人兴奋的
creative 有创造力的
dangerous 危险的
boring 无聊的
relaxing 轻松的
busy 忙碌的
well-paid 高薪的
respectable 值得尊敬的
技能与品质
skill 技能
talent 天赋
creativity 创造力
patience 耐心
responsibility 责任
communication skills 沟通技巧
teamwork 团队合作
leadership 领导才能,领导素质
skillful 熟练的
hard-working 勤奋的
kind 善良的
smart/intelligent 聪明的
brave 勇敢的
careful 细心的
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句型积累
)
开头句
Hello, I would like a part-time job as a librarian/computer programmer/... 大家好,我想申请一份图书管理员/计算机程序员/……的兼职工作。
Hello everyone! I’d love to take the part-time job as a...this winter vacation. 大家好!这个寒假,我想找一份……的兼职工作。
中间句
1.与职责相关
My main responsibility would be... 我的主要职责将会是……
My main task would involve... 我的主要任务将会包括……
I might also...and work with other team members to... 我可能还会……并且与其他团队成员合作……
During the winter vacation, I will not only help..., but also... 寒假期间,我不但会帮忙……,还会……
2.与益处相关
The benefit of this job is that... 这份工作的益处是……
This job will help me improve... 这份工作将会帮助我提升……
It also allows me to... 它还使我能够……
The best part of this job is that I can learn more about...and develop... skills. 这份工作最好的部分在于我能学习更多关于……的知识,并且能锻炼……技巧。
3.与挑战相关
However, the challenge is that... 然而,挑战是……
However, the job might be challenging because... 然而,这份工作可能会很有挑战性,因为……
Creativity and responsibility are required.需要有创造力和责任感。
I might need to... 我可能需要……
结尾句
It’s a wonderful opportunity to learn more about...这是一个了解更多……的好机会。
I believe/hope that... 我相信/希望……
That’s all for my part-time job choice. 这就是我的兼职选择。
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参考范文
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Hello, I would like a part-time job as a computer programmer.
During the winter vacation, I will not only help write and test computer programs, but also take part in the design of some new software. I’ll also be responsible for fixing software bugs.This job will be filled with both benefits and challenges. It can help me improve my logical thinking and problem-solving abilities. However, programming can be challenging, as creativity and great patience are required. I might need to spend hours dealing with a single issue.
It’s a wonderful opportunity to learn more about technology and gain practical skills. ⑥I believe this experience will be rewarding.
That’s all for my part-time job choice. Thank you!
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写作拓展
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变式提升训练
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(1)
(25-26八年级下·海南省直辖县级单位·期中)梦想是指路明灯。没有梦想,我们就没有坚定的方向。作为新时代的青少年,你的梦想是什么呢?某英文报社正在举办题为“My dream job”的征文活动,请根据以下提示,用英文写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1.你梦想的职业(教师、作家、医生等);
2.你拥有这个梦想的原因;
3.你实现梦想的具体计划。
注意:1.词数为80左右,必须包含以上所有提示内容;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯,书写规范;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4.开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:illness (n.疾病), completely (adv.完全地), effort (n.努力), stick to (坚持)
My dream job
Dreams play an important role in our lives. We all have dream jobs. As for me, I want to be a
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(2)
(25-26八年级下·天津·期中)亲爱的同学,初中的学习生活即将结束,你也渐渐长大,你和同学们的理想职业是什么?请你根据表格提示,以“What do you want to be?”为题写一篇80—100词的英语短文,介绍你们组就此问题的讨论结果,同时告诉大家你自己的理想职业。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
组员
理想职业
原因
Mary
时装设计师 (fashion designer)
喜欢漂亮衣服,擅长绘画
Kate
园艺工 (gardener)
喜爱植物,想让城市更美
Tom
厨师
为他人制作健康美味的食物
What do you want to be?
Hello, everyone. My name is Li Hua. What type of job do you dream about?
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(3)
(25-26八年级下·安徽合肥·期中)假设你是李华。你校英文报“My Future”专栏正在举办征文活动,请你根据以下图示信息,以“My Dream Job”为题,用英语写一篇短文投稿。
My Dream Job
Job
teacher/ doctor/pilot/ lawyer/…
Reasons
personal interests/ influence from others/ social responsibility /…
Efforts
What do you often do to achieve your dream?
Hope
What’s your confidence in achieving your dream?
注意:1.词数80-100;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称;
4.稿件的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Dream Job
Everyone has their dream jobs.
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(4)
(25-26八年级下·广东深圳·期中)假如你是Li Hua,你所在的学校将于本周日组织一次环保志愿活动,现面向全体学生招募有环保经验的志愿者。请你根据以下提示,用英语写一封申请信。
提示:
(1) 阐述你的优势
(2) 分享你做过的环保相关志愿活动
(3) 申请参加此次活动
要求:
(1) 短文须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥。
(2) 短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。
(3) 80词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear organizer,
I would like to take part in the voluntary activity this weekend.
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Best regards,
Li Hua
(5)
(25-26八年级下·安徽合肥·期中)“少年强则国强”,作为青少年的我们应该树立远大的理想。学校英文报正在开展以“My dream job”为题的征文活动,鼓励同学们畅谈自己的理想职业。假如你是李华,请你根据以下要点和提示写一篇英语短文投稿。
要求:
1.短文须包含要点提示中的所有信息,可适当增加细节;
2.词数80左右;
3.文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
My dream job
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(6)
(25-26八年级下·天津河西·期中)每个人都有自己理想的职业,并且希望成为对国家和社会有用的人。你校正在开展“My Dream, Chinese Dream”系列英语演讲比赛,请以“My dream job”为题,写一篇演讲稿。
要点:(1)你理想的职业;
(2)你选择的理由(不少于2点);
(3)你的计划或做法(不少于2点)。
注意:(1)80词左右;
(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
(3)文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称。
My dream job
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(7)
(22-23八年级下·陕西西安·期末)每个人都对自己的未来充满期待,未来的你会做着怎样的职业?假如你是李华,你校英文网站正在征集以“My Future Job”为题的英文稿,请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文并投稿。
提示:1. What will you do in 20 years?
2. Why do you want to do it?
3. How will you achieve it?
参考词汇:in order to, study, college, volunteer work, in need, a better place, come true, …
要求:1. 可选择使用参考词汇,亦可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4. 词数:不少于60词。(开头已给出,但不计入总词数)
My Future Job
I’ll be very different in the future. In 20 years, I’ll be a(n)
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