专题 08 书面表达专项（专项训练）五升六年级英语暑假专项提升（人教新起点）

**基本信息** 以“工具包-闯关-奖励”三阶体系构建书面表达能力，通过时态罗盘等工具提炼实用方法，形成从句子到创意写作的递进逻辑，提升语言能力与学习能力。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|方法提炼|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |暑期写作能量包|3工具+3技巧|时态罗盘（过去/将来时结构）、逻辑胶水（顺序/转折连词）、亮点添加剂（好词升级+万能句）|从基础语言工具到表达优化，构建写作基础能力链| |闯关游戏（Level 1-3）|10Task+6写作|句子变形（扩句/连词成句）、段落构建（逻辑顺序）、创意表达（情感/格式）|从句子到段落再到篇章，实现语言能力阶梯式提升| |学习小贴士|4实用方法|照片日记、时态自查法、朗读法、阅读积累|融合学习策略，培养自主学习能力与思维品质|

专题08 书面表达专项（暑期英语大闯关） 温故知新·趣味进阶 第一部分：暑期写作能量包 (Writing Energy Pack) 在开启创意写作之旅前，请检查你的写作背包。好作文不在单词多，而在结构清、时态准、句子顺！ 工具一：时态罗盘（Tense Compass） 回忆过去（一般过去时）：写周末、旅行、成长经历 关键词：last weekend, yesterday, last summer, when I was… 结构：主语 + 动词过去式（cleaned, went, learned…） 规划未来（一般将来时）：写计划、节日、打算 关键词：tomorrow, this weekend, next week 结构：be going to /will + 动词原形 建议句型（should /shouldn't）：写健康、习惯、提醒 结构：You should… / You shouldn't + 动词原形 工具二：逻辑胶水（Logic Glue） 让句子更连贯的小连词： 顺序：First → Next → Then → Finally 转折：But 原因：Because 工具三：亮点添加剂（Sparkle Additives） 好词升级：good → great /wonderful；fun → interesting /fantastic 感受句：I was very happy. / It was wonderful. 开头结尾万能句： 开头：I want to tell you about… 结尾：I had a great time. / I love it very much. 第二部分：闯关游戏 Level 1: 基础营地 (Basic Camp) - 句子魔法师 场景：魔法学院初级班，用 10 个微任务掌握句子变形、扩写与连贯魔法。 规则：共 10 个 Task，每完成 1 题得 1 颗魔法星。 即刻闯关(Challenging) Task 1: 扩句魔法（Expand the Sentence） 基础句：The boy played. 扩写句：_________________________________________________________ Task 2: 连词成句（Unscramble the Words） 词: went / I /beach/the /last/summer /. 句子: _________________________________________________________ Task 3: 时态变身（改为一般过去时） 现在时：I visit my grandparents. 过去时：_________________________________________________________ Task 4: 否定咒语（改为否定句） 肯定：You should eat too much candy. 否定：_________________________________________________________ Task 5: 疑问魔镜（对划线部分提问） 句子：I went to Hangzhou last trip. 问句：_________________________________________________________ Task 6: 合并大师（用 and /but合并） 句子：It was rainy. We didn't stay at home. 合并：_________________________________________________________ Task 7: 情感表达（写出心情） 情境：You had a wonderful trip. 句子：I felt ____________________________________________________! Task 8: 建议使者（用 should 写建议） 问题：I have a headache. 建议：You ______________________________________________________. Task 9: 成长描述（用 when 写句子） 提示：一岁学走路 句子：When I was one, I ___________________________________________. Task 10: 终极造句（用 I'm going to 写计划） 题目：This weekend 句子：_________________________________________________________ Level 2: 提升峡谷 (Improvement Canyon) - 段落建造师 场景：用完整段落写生活故事，内容完整、逻辑清晰。 规则：共 3 篇写作，每篇 5–8 句话。 即刻闯关(Challenging) Writing 1: My Happy Weekend（我的快乐周末） 主题：用一般过去时写一次真实周末经历 提示： What was the weather like? What did you do? Who did you go with? How did you feel? 选词库：sunny, cleaned, played, visited, happy, great 写作区： Writing 2: My Wonderful Trip（我的精彩旅行） 主题：写一次旅行见闻 提示： Where did you go? What did you do there? What did you eat? How was your trip? 选词库：went to, took photos, swam, delicious, wonderful, exciting 写作区： Writing 3: How to Keep Healthy（如何保持健康） 主题：给同学写健康建议（用 First/Next/Finally） 提示：运动、饮食、作息 选词库：exercise, vegetables, go to bed early, shouldn't 写作区： Level 3: 拓展巅峰 (Expansion Peak) - 创意作家 场景：自由创作，更真实、更有情感。 规则：3 篇任选，8–10 句以上。 即刻闯关(Challenging) Creative 1: My Favourite Festival（我最爱的节日） 提示：日期、活动、原因、感受 写作区： Creative 2: My Growth Story（我的成长故事） 提示：出生、学说话、学走路、上学、感受 写作区： Creative 3: Email to My Friend（给朋友的邮件） 内容：介绍你的暑假计划（将来时） 格式： Dear ______, Yours, 🏆 闯关奖励站 (Reward Station) 1. 第一关完成 8/10 Task：解锁见习魔法师称号，奖励荧光笔一支，用于标记作文中的好词好句。 2. 第二关完成 2/3 篇作：解锁资深建筑师称号，奖励精美笔记本，记录生活中的灵感瞬间。 3. 第三关完成 1 篇创意写作：解锁创意故事王称号，奖励英文绘本一本或一次“免做家务卡”（需父母批准）。 4. 完成所有关卡：解锁金牌小作家称号，挑选最满意的一篇作文，工整抄写在A4纸上，配上插图。将作品贴在家庭冰箱或书房显眼处展示一周，并获得全家人的“点赞签名”。 第三部分：学习小贴士（tips） 暑期学习小贴士 (Summer Tips) 照片日记：每天拍一张照片，尝试用 1-2 句英语描述它。例如：Today I went to the park. I was happy. 积少成多，素材满满。 时态自查法：写完问自己 3 句：过去时？将来时？建议句？ 朗读法：把作文大声读 2 遍，不通顺的地方立刻改简单。 阅读积累：每天记 1 句万能句，写作直接套用。 参考答案与范文 Level 1：句子魔法师（示例） Task 1: The little boy played happily in the park. Task 2: I went to the beach last summer. Task 3: I visited my grandparents. Task 4: You shouldn't eat too much candy. Task 5: Where did you go last trip? Task 6: It was rainy, but we didn't stay at home. Task 7: I felt so excited and happy! Task 8: You should have a rest. Task 9: When I was one, I learned to walk. Task 10: I'm going to climb a hill this weekend. Level 2：段落建造师（范文） Writing 1: My Happy Weekend Last weekend was great. It was sunny. On Saturday, I cleaned my room and washed my clothes. On Sunday, I visited my grandparents with my parents. We watched TV together. I was very happy. Writing 2: My Wonderful Trip Last summer, I went to Qingdao with my family. The sea was blue. I swam in the sea and took many photos. We ate fresh seafood. It was delicious. My trip was wonderful. Writing 3: How to Keep Healthy It's important to keep healthy. First, you should exercise every day. Next, you should eat more vegetables and fruit. Finally, you should go to bed early. You shouldn't watch too much TV. Level 3：创意写作（范文） Creative 1: My Favourite Festival My favourite festival is the Mid-Autumn Festival. It's on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month. My family and I watch the moon and eat mooncakes. They are delicious. I love this festival because it's warm and happy. Creative 2: My Growth Story I want to tell you about my growth. I was born on July 10th, 2014. When I was one, I learned to walk. When I was six, I went to school. Now I study hard. I feel happy every day. Creative 3: Email to My Friend Dear Tom, Hello! Summer vacation is coming. I'm going to Sanya with my family. We will swim in the sea and take photos. I will eat ice cream, too. I think it will be fun. What about you? Yours, Mike 第8页，共8页 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $