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讲解册
实战高考·英语
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怎么考⊙、
题型各个击破
高分攻略)
一、文本写作思路:细读信息,逻辑推测,合理结尾
宏观把握原文信息
读后续写
利用文本内容,找出有效信息
利用所给信息,推测后续情节
微观剖析文本细节
抓住动作、心理及环境描写
打造续写的龙头凤尾
润色、美化续写内容,完美呈现
二、读后续写策略总攻
l.通读全文,审好六要素。在续写时,要抓住六要素,即:when、where、who、what、why、how。
根据六要素,做好情节和结局的构思。
2.定准主题,把握好“正能量”原则。文章结局必须积极向上,充满“正能量”,弘扬社会主义核心
价值观。
3.准确推测。根据两段首句定发展。标出首句关键词,做好前后文的衔接和呼应。
4.精心构思。理清时间线、情节线和情感线。阅读文本时,要抓住这三条主线,把握好原文的脉
络线索和段落结构,使续写内容与原文紧密衔接,达到极高的情境融洽度。
5.遣词造句。分析文章用词特点,做好续写文章中高级词汇、亮点句型和高级语法结构的应用。
6.完美成文。卷面整洁,字迹工整,誊写清晰,逻辑合理,高分佳篇。
三、高级句式表达:语言升级表达
1.非谓语作状语
(1)现在分词的使用:动词与主语之间构成逻辑上的主谓关系
精美例句:
Feeling unbearably cold and extremely exhausted,he was extremely at a loss as to how to
tackle the terrible situation.
他觉得冷到难以忍受,精疲力竭,完全不知道如何应对这种糟糕的局面。
Burning with curiosity,he stormed away from the riverbank and across the field to chase
after the rabbit..非常好奇,他从河岸边快速跑开,穿过田野去追赶兔子。
He sensed exhausted and sat by the stream,resting his aching feet.
他感到精疲力竭,坐在溪边,让疼痛的双脚放松一下。
(2)过去分词的使用:动词与主语之间构成逻辑上的动宾关系,或表状态
精美例句:
Dressed in a fancy costume,the boy slipped into the room without being caught sight of.
穿着花哨的服饰,那个男孩悄悄地溜进房间,没有被看到。
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Immersed in a extraordinary sense of scare,she couldn't convey a single word.
她沉浸在强烈的恐惧感中,一句话也说不出来。
Worn out and tired,the boy still seemed extremely delighted.
累得精疲力竭,但是这个男孩仍然看起来非常高兴。
2.with复合结构:with复合结构表示原因、结果或伴随状态,其构成形式为“with+宾语+宾语补
足语”。
精美例句:
He unwrapped his delicate gift box,with his heart pounding wildly.
他打开精致的礼品盒,心怦怦直跳。
With his painting ruined by accident,he burst out a cry of rage.
因画作被意外摧毁了,他愤怒地大叫一声。
I stormed into my bedroom,with anger mounting up within me.
我气冲冲地跑进卧室,怒不可遏。
3.形容词作状语:形容词作状语,用来表达人物做某个动作的原因、结果或伴随状态。
精美例句:
Depressed and low-spirited,the little boy dragged at the end of the line with his head
drooping.小男孩既沮丧又情绪低落,低着头,走在队伍的最后。
Jack paced up and down in his room,deep in thought.
杰克在他的房间里来回踱步,陷入了深思。
Trapped in the dense mist,I could do nothing but burst into tears,helpless and disappointed.
困在浓雾中,我什么也做不了,只能哭泣,无助又失落。
4.名词性从句:使用名词性从句可以使语言表达更加丰富、地道,彰显句式的高级。
精美例句:
What appealed to me most were the shells scattered on the beach,which showed incredible
beauty in the sun.最吸引我的是散落在沙滩上的贝壳,在阳光下呈现出难以置信的美丽。
What impressed him most was that his mother never lost faith in finding him.
给他印象最深的是他的妈妈从来没失去找到他的信心。
It is known to all that where there is a will,there is a way.众所周知,有志者事竟成。
5.定语从句:定语从句修饰一个中心名词或代词,它的正确使用能够比较明显地反映出考生对于
语言具有较高的运用能力。
精美例句:
Seeing his mother,he couldn't conceal his sorrow,pouring the incident out to her,who
would always be there for him whenever he felt down.看到他的妈妈,他再也不掩饰自己的
悲伤了,向妈妈倾诉自己的遭遇,妈妈就是那个无论何时他悲伤时,总是站在他身边的人。
As we all know,Hong Kong is a shopping paradise,where Tom anticipates buying what he
needs.众所周知,香港是一个购物天堂,汤姆期盼着在那里买他需要的东西。
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Only those who spare no effort to confront problems can gain what they are eager for.
只有那些不遗余力解决问题的人才能获得他们想要的东西。
6.倒装句:倒装句分为全部倒装和部分倒装。全部倒装是为了强调时间、地点,将时间、地点状语
放在句首,构成全部倒装;部分倒装往往是为了强调某种情绪,可以使用so..that..等结构。
精美例句:
Out of the darkness came a voice he had never heard before.
黑暗中传来了一个他从来没听到过的声音。
Such is the key to success-a little bit more efforts and a little bit more determination will
create a little bit more miracle.
这就是成功的秘诀一多一点儿努力,多一点儿决心,你就能创造出多一点儿的奇迹。
So shocked was I that I was dumbfounded with my eyes wide open.
我震惊得睁大眼睛,目瞪口呆。
Not until the rabbit got completely out of sight did we stop chasing after it.
直到那只兔子完全消失在我们的视线中,我们才不追了。
7.强调句:Itis/was+被强调部分+that/who+其他部分。
精美例句:
My mind went blank,and it was not until a sudden push from behind that I came to myself.
我的大脑一片空白,直到有人突然从后面推了我一把,我才回过神来。
It was she that inspired not only the disabled but also countless healthy people.
就是她,不仅激励了残疾人,也激励了无数健康人。
8.无灵主语:把没有生命力的东西,赋予有生命力的动作,比如时间、地点、自然现象等。
精美例句:
Tears streamed down his cheek.眼泪沿着他的脸颊流下来。
The moment she caught sight of the helicopter,a bright smile lit up Jane's face.
看到直升机的那一刻,简高兴地笑了起来。
His face flushed with embarrassment.他因尴尬而满脸通红。
A terrible thought suddenly struck me.我突然有了一个可怕的想法。
四、主题升华
类型一人与自然一惊险类
主旨升华句:
Only then did I realize that it was bravery that can conquer whatever difficulty came in the
wy.直到那时我才意识到,正是勇气才能克服任何挡在路上的困难。
Finally,we went out of the forest that trapped us.What an unforgettable experience!It turns
out that there's always a way out of any plight as long as we stay calm.最后,我们走出了困住我
们的森林。多么难忘的经历啊!事实证明,我们只要保持冷静,就总有办法摆脱困境。
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The rescue satisfied our desire to help and restored a bird's shattered faith in humans.
这次拯救满足了我们想帮助的愿望,同时恢复了一只鸟对于人类的破碎的信任。
That was the most unforgettable day in my life.那是我一生中最难忘的一天。
Honestly,I was grateful to the experience,which was risky but also fruitful.
诚实地说,我感激这次经历,虽然有危险但是收获颇丰。
类型二人与社会一情感类
主旨升华句:
Sometimes,a small act of kindness may be powerful enough to make a huge difference.
有时,一些小的善行可能足以产生巨大的影响。
Sometimes,a small gesture of care will possibly melt people's loneliness.
有时,表达小小的关爱也可能融化人们内心的孤单。
One simple act of kindness is a blessing for both the giver and the receiver alike.
一个小小的善行,无论是对施予者还是接受者,都是一份祝福。
When awkward situations happen to others,we should put ourselves into their shoes.
当别人遭遇尴尬时,我们应该设身处地为他们着想。
The tension in the house began to melt,melting our different worlds into a harmonious and
understanding one.
房子里的紧张气氛开始缓和了,把我们不同的世界变成了一个和谐的、彼此理解的世界。
类型三人与自我一励志类
主旨升华句:
As long as we dare to dream and don't let difficulties get in our way,anything is possible-
there's no end to where our dreams can take us
只要我们敢于梦想,不被困难所阻挡,一切皆有可能—梦想永无止境。
Age was anything but a barrier for a diligent soul and a willing heart.
对于勤奋且积极肯干的心而言,年龄永远不会成为障碍。
Determination and optimism are what it takes to conquer your fear and accomplish your goal.
战胜恐惧和实现目标需要决心和乐观。
Actually,every individual possesses talent.Be brave when you find it and also make efforts.
You can create miracles in the end.
事实上,每个人都有天赋。发现它的时候要勇敢,也要付出努力。最终,你会创造奇迹。
That my hard work finally paid off was actually what cheered me most,making the most
colorful day of my life.
我的努力付出最终得到回报实际上是最让我高兴的事,成就了我人生中最丰富多彩的一天。
经典感悟
(2024烟台、德州二模:人与社会)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
American football can be pretty competitive.From old opponents to fan drama,it's just
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another part of the game.There have even been all-out violent fights in the name of defending
your team.However,one high school football player Mario Hoefer showed that his love for the
sport didn't take priority over helping a person in need.
One afternoon in September,Charles City High School football team which Mario was on
faced New Hampton in a Friday football game.Mario was captain of his team and Carter was
the quarterback of the opposing team.
It was really foggy and awfully hot.Filled with excited audience in the stands,the stadium
felt like a heated steamer.Every player was wet with sweat even during the warm-ups.All this
meant the game would be a tough one and a test of the mind and body for both teams.
Soon the game began and for the first three quarters,each team seemed to have a chance
to win and they took the lead by turns.So exhausted was Mario running back and forth that he
cramped()up twice.Each time he got a cramp near the New Hampton sideline,his team-
mates came to his assistance and stretched his leg to ease the cramp.Though feeling uncom-
fortable and worn out,Mario soldiered on as Charles City protected a slim lead and New
Hampton attempted a late comeback.
In the fourth quarter,Mario saw his teammates across the field break up a crucial pass
intended for Carter.Mario was about to cross over to the other side of the field to high five his
teammates when he noticed that beside him,Carter fell onto the ground,screaming in pain.His
eyes were wide open and a look of panic appeared on his face.Carter grabbed his left calf(
)trying to move his leg in different positions.Judging from Carter's desperate expres-
sion,Mario realized Carter was possibly experiencing an unbearable cramp just as he himself
had gone through minutes before.But the New Hampton players were farther away from the
quarterback.
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
Mario knew what to do next.
The photo was posted on social media.
范文赏析:
Mario knew what to do next.He bent over to check Carter.Having made sure Carter was
indeed merely experiencing a cramp,he knelt down on the ground and held his left foot,
pulling it towards himself to relieve Carter's pain.Meanwhile,he comforted Carter,"Take it
easy.You'll be all right soon.Gradually,Carter's panicked and painful expression began to
soften.When his teammates and trainer made it to him,he had recovered.Carter rose to his
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feet,giving Mario a big hug to express his heartfelt gratitude.The game continued,nobody
realizing the moment had been captured by a viewer in the stands.
The photo was posted on social media.Surprisingly,it received a flood of supportive
responses.Thousands of netizens sang high praise for Mario's act of kindness.Many thought
what he did showed the true sportsmanship on the field and that the world needed to see more
of such touching pictures.Mario didn't expect his instinctive action would arouse such a big
reaction,saying modestly,"It was no big deal to step in to stretch Carter's leg out.It was more
like a brotherly thing to help him out.Mario and Carter,the two former opponents,have
since become sincere friends,whose story convinces people of the true spirit of sports.
【导语】本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了在一场橄榄球比赛中,当一名球员卡特遭遇抽筋时,对手
马里奥毫不犹豫地跨越场地去帮助他。马里奥拉伸卡特的腿并安慰他,最终帮助他缓解了疼痛。
这一幕被观众拍摄并在社交媒体上发布,受到了成千上万的赞扬。许多人认为马里奥的行为展
现了真正的体育精神,人们需要更多这样感人的瞬间。马里奥谦虚地表示他的行为只是兄弟般
的帮助,但这一举动却让他和卡特成为真诚的朋友,他们的故事证明了真正的体育精神。
【详解1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“马里奥知道下一步该怎么做。”可知,第一段可描写马里奥走过去帮助卡特
的过程。
②由第二段首句内容“这张照片被发布在社交媒体上。”可知,第二段可描写马里奥的行为在网上
得到了大量的支持。
2.续写线索:马里奥知道怎么做—过去帮助卡特一卡特恢复伤情一这一幕被一位观众拍
到——照片被发布在网上一行为得到了大量的支持—一感悟
3.词汇激活
行为类
①检查:check,/examine/,inspect
②意识到:realize/be aware of
③引起:arouse/cause/lead to
情绪类
①惊慌失措的:panicked/scared
②令人惊讶的是:surprisingly/amazingly
【点睛】[高分句l]Having made sure Carter was indeed merely experiencing a cramp,he
knelt down on the ground and held his left foot,pulling it towards himself to relieve Carter's
pain.(运用了现在分词短语作状语)
[高分句型2]Mario and Carter,the two former opponents,have since become sincere friends,.
whose story convinces people of the true spirit of sports.(运用了关系代词whose引导的定语从句)
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