专题08 应用文写作（期末真题汇编，黑吉辽蒙专用）高一英语下学期

**基本信息** 高一下应用文写作专题汇编，精选辽宁、内蒙古、吉林等多地区期末真题，涵盖人与社会、人与自我主题，包含书信、演讲稿、短文等题型，情境真实且贴近时代。 **题型特征** |题型|题量/分值|知识覆盖|命题特色| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |应用文写作|约12篇/每篇80-100词|邀请信（传统乐器学习）、倡议信（绿色校园）、演讲稿（音乐与生活）、观点讨论短文（课外活动利弊）等|情境融合文化传承（如中国特色礼物推荐）、科技前沿（如春晚机器人表演）、社会热点（如网上交友讨论），问题设计从基础信息传递到复杂观点表达，梯度清晰。|

专题08 应用文写作 主题01 人与社会 Passage 1 （24-25高一下·辽宁丹东·期末） 假定你是李华，你的英国留学生朋友Kevin即将回国，想给家人买一件具有中国特色的礼物，来信咨询你的意见，请你给他回信，内容包括： 1.推荐礼物； 2.推荐理由。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Kevin, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage 2 （24-25高一下·内蒙古·期末） 假定你是李华，你想邀请外国友人Michel一同去琴艺社学习中国传统乐器。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 琴艺社可以学习的中国传统乐器； 2. 学习的具体地点和时间。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Michel, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage 3 （24-25高一下·内蒙古·期末） 假设你是李华，你校将举办“Effective Learning Strategies”英语演讲比赛，特邀你校外籍教授Dr. Smith担任评委.请你用英语写一封邀请信，内容包括： 1．比赛基本信息（时间：7月20日下午3点；地点：学校报告厅）； 2．评委职责（评分+点评选手表现）； 3．邀请原因（Dr. Smith的专业背景及参与意义）； 4．期待回复 注意： 1．词数80字左右； 2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 Dear Dr. Smith, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua Passage 4 （24-25高一下·吉林长春·期末） 你校学生会将举办“用英语讲中国故事”活动。本期主题为“我最喜欢的城市”。请写一篇短文，介绍你最喜欢的中国城市并说明理由。 内容包括： 1. 城市基本概况； 2. 著名景点； 3. 特色饮食。 注意： 1.词数80左右； 2.可适当增加细节，使内容连贯。 My Favourite City _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 5 （24-25高一下·内蒙古呼和浩特·期末） 假设你是李华，你所在的学校正在开展“创建绿色校园”活动。请你代表学生会，用英语写一封倡议信，呼吁同学们积极参与到绿色校园建设中来。内容包括以下几点： 1. 说明倡议背景； 2. 提出具体倡议； 3. 呼吁同学们积极参与，并表达对绿色校园建设的期望。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 主题02 人与自我 Passage 1 （24-25高一下·吉林延吉·期末） 假定你是李华，你的英语老师发现你的近期作业都是AI完成的，请给老师写一封邮件说明一下情况，并提出整改措施。 注意：(1)词数80左右；(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 My dear English teacher, I am writing to… ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely, Li Hua Passage 2 （24-25高一下·黑龙江大庆·期末） 假定你是李华，因为对太空很感兴趣，想要参加一个有关探索太空的夏令营，但是你的父母却以关注学习为理由反对你参加。因此，你很苦恼。请你给英国网友Henry发送电子邮件寻求建议，内容包括： 1. 阐述问题； 2. 寻求建议。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Henry, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua Passage 2 （24-25高一下·内蒙古赤峰·期末） 假定你是李华，学校将举办以“How Music Has Changed My Life”为题的英语演讲比赛。请结合自己的经历撰写一篇演讲稿参赛，内容包括： 1.你的经历; 2.音乐对你的影响。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80个左右; 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 How Music Has Changed My Life ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 主题01 人与社会 Passage 1 （24-25高一下·吉林长春·期末） 你校英语报开展以Should Senior High School Students Take Part in After-school Activities? 为题的讨论。一些同学认为参加课外活动占用时间影响作业完成、分散精力；另一些同学则认为其能培养兴趣、提升协作能力、缓解压力。 请写一篇短文介绍讨论情况并谈谈自己的看法。 注意： 1. 词数80 左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，使内容连贯。 Should Senior High School Students Take Part in After-school Activities? _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 2 （24-25高一下·吉林·期末） 假设你是李华，举行了一次班会，班会的主题是：太空探索的意义。请结合下表内容，用英语给校报写一篇文章，客观地介绍班会上同学们讨论的情况并表达你自己的观点。 赞同的理由 反对的理由 你自己的观点 1.获得新知识；2.从太空取得新资源； 3.扩大人类未来的生存空间。 1.耗资巨大；2.宇航员的安全问题。 …… 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Outer Space Exploration, YES or NO? _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 3 （24-25高一下·吉林白山·期末） 近期，很多外国友人来到中国旅行，他们体验汉服、学习中国功夫、品尝中国美食的视频收获了很多海外友人的关注。针对中华文化在国外的流行，请你用英语写一篇短文，内容包括： 1.描述现象； 2.你的看法； 3.分析流行的原因。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 4 （24-25高一下·吉林长春·期末） 假定你是李华，你班组织了一次话题为关于学生网上交友的讨论，对此同学们持不同意见。请你用英语为校园英语报纸写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文。 内容包括：1. 同学们的不同观点； 2. 表达自己的看法。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 首段已给出。 Should Students Make Friends Online? Recently, our class had a heated discussion about students making friends online, and opinions are divided. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 5 （24-25高一下·黑龙江鸡西·期末） 假定你是李华，你校英文报正在举办主题为“My Favorite Scientist”的征文活动，请写一篇短文投稿。内容包括： 1. 人物介绍； 2. 你受到的启发。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 My Favorite Scientist ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Passage 6 （24-25高一下·辽宁·期末） 假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Eric在视频网站上看到了机器人在中国春晚上跳中国传统舞蹈的视频，对此非常感兴趣，向你询问有关事项，写一封回复邮件，相关内容要点如下。 1.介绍春晚机器人的特点和功能。 2.分享观看春晚机器人表演的感受。 3.鼓励对方了解中国文化和科技。 注意： 1.词数80左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Eric, I’m glad to hear that you’re interested in the robots at the Chinese Spring Festival Gala! ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best regards, Li Hua 主题02 人与自我 Passage 1 （24-25高一下·辽宁大连·期末） 假定你是李华，上周五你校上了一堂特别的美术课——通过虚拟现实技术云游知名美术馆。请你给英国朋友Tom写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括： 1. 你印象最深刻的画作； 2. 这次线上参观的感想。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Tom, I’m writing to share with you a special art class I had last Friday. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua Passage 2 （24-25高一下·黑龙江哈尔滨·期末） 假定你是李华，前天在其进口商店买了一件衬衣，回家后发现衬衣有瑕疵，昨天去商店处理，但无货可换，同时店员也拒绝退款，请给商店经理发封邮件，内容包括：1．购物与售后处理经过；2．你的诉求。 注意：词数80左右。 Dear Sir or Madam, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 专题08 应用文写作 参考答案 主题01 人与社会 Passage 1： Dear Kevin, Learning that you’re looking for a gift with Chinese characteristics for your family, I strongly recommend Chinese paper-cuttings. Paper-cuttings are deeply rooted in Chinese traditional culture. They come in diverse themes, such as lucky animals and blooming flowers, vividly showcasing the charm of Chinese art. Moreover, they’re portable and can be easily framed as a decoration for any room. Your family can hang them on the wall or put them on a table. Every time they see the paper-cuttings, they will be reminded of China’s unique culture. I’m convinced your family will love this special gift. Hope you have a good trip back. Yours, Li Hua Passage 2： Dear Michel,     I’m writing to invite you to join me at the Guqin Club to learn traditional Chinese instruments.     The club offers lessons on the guzheng (a 21-string zither) and the erhu (a two-string fiddle), both famous for their beautiful sounds. Classes are held every Saturday afternoon from 2:00 to 4:00 p.m. at the School Art Center, Room 305. It’s a great chance to learn Chinese traditional art, which can help you to experience Chinese culture as well!     Let me know if you’re interested.     Yours, Li Hua Passage 3： Dear Dr. Smith, I’m writing to invite you to be a judge in our school’s “Effective Learning Strategies” English speech competition. The competition will be held at 3 p.m. on July 20th in the school lecture hall. As a judge, you’ll rate the contestants and comment on their performances. We sincerely hope you can come because of your profound expertise in English and education. Your presence will surely add authority to the event, offering valuable guidance to the students. Looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua Passage 4： My Favourite City My favourite city is Beijing, the capital of China, which has a long history and culture. Beijing has many places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum, the Summer Palace and so on. If you come to visit Beijing, you can watch the flag-raising ceremony at Tian’anmen Square. Also, you can try some delicious food like Beijing duck. If you want to learn more about Chinese art, don’t miss the opera shows there. I think Beijing is worth a visit. I hope you can visit it some day. Passage 5： Dear fellow students,   As we all know, our school is launching a campaign to build a green campus. This is not only beneficial to our health but also contributes to environmental protection.   Therefore, I would like to propose some specific initiatives. Firstly, let’s save water and electricity by turning off taps and lights when not in use. Secondly, we should reduce waste by recycling and reusing materials whenever possible. Lastly, let’s plant more trees and flowers to beautify our campus.   I sincerely hope that everyone can actively participate in this campaign. Together, we can create a greener, more beautiful campus for ourselves and future generations. 主题02 人与自我 Passage 1： My dear English teacher, I am writing to sincerely apologize for submitting AI-generated assignments recently. I admit that I took a shortcut due to heavy academic pressure and a lack of confidence in my own writing, which was dishonest and irresponsible. To correct this mistake, I promise to complete all future tasks independently without any AI assistance. I will also actively seek your guidance during office hours to improve my genuine writing skills. I hope you can accept my apology and give me a chance to prove my determination. Sincerely, Li Hua Passage 2： Dear Henry, How is everything going? Recently I feel upset and am eager for your suggestion. As you know, I have a preference for space exploration and have a good command of it. However, whenever I read relevant books and watch videos, my parents will explode with anger. They even command me to give it up and focus on my study. I have no idea how to change their minds, and I’m wondering whether you can offer me some advice. I would be thankful if you could give me some help. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua Passage 3： How Music Has Changed My Life Good morning, respected teachers and dear fellow students! My name is Li Hua. I feel incredibly honored to stand here today, ready to share with you my story, which was completely transformed by music. Once too shy to speak in public, I decided to join the school choir, hoping to overcome my fear. There, singing together with classmates, I finally felt a strong sense of belonging that I had never experienced before. Music, becoming my source of courage, taught me to express myself bravely and face challenges confidently. Gradually, encouraged by my newfound confidence, I started taking part in more activities and making new friends. Thanks to music, I’ve grown from a timid person into someone full of energy and passion, making my life brighter than ever. So, let’s all embrace music, for it has the power to change our lives, just as it changed mine! Thank you! 主题01 人与社会 Passage 1： 范文一（反对） Our school newspaper asked if senior high students should join after-school activities. Some students say yes, believing activities help them find new interests, learn to work with others, and reduce worry. However, others feel differently. I believe these activities are not a good idea for most students. High school study is very important for our future. We need to work hard every day. After-school activities take valuable time away from finishing homework and preparing for tests. They also use energy we need to focus on our lessons. With so much schoolwork, adding activities makes life harder, not easier. It is better to wait until we have less school pressure. 范文二（支持） Our school newspaper discusses whether senior high students should join after-school activities. Some worry these activities take time from homework and make students tired. Others argue that they help develop interests, improve teamwork skills, and reduce stress. I strongly support joining these activities. While study is important, after-school activities teach us things books cannot. They let us explore new interests like music or sports. Working with classmates helps us learn to solve problems together and build friendships. Most importantly, they offer a break from heavy schoolwork, refreshing our minds and making learning easier later. Balancing activities and study is key, but their benefits shape us beyond the classroom. Passage 2： Outer Space Exploration, YES or NO? We had an argument over whether it is necessary to carry out outer space exploration at a class meeting the other day. Different students have different views. Some students think it important to research the outer space. On the one hand, people can get new resources and a better understanding of the outer space. On the other hand, this exploration can possibly bring about new living space for humans in the near future. However, others are against it because they believe that it takes so much money, which is not worth the value. Besides, it is dangerous for astronauts to do such work in the outer space. As for me, people should be pioneering, and therefore such explorations into the outer space are worth trying out. Passage 3： Recently, plenty of foreigners have travelled to China. Videos of them experiencing Hanfu, learning Chinese kung fu and tasting Chinese cuisine have attracted a lot of attention from overseas. Chinese culture is becoming increasingly popular abroad. In my opinion, this trend is unstoppable. It shows the global appeal and influence of Chinese culture. Reasons for its popularity abroad are as follows. Firstly, globalization and the Internet have made it easier for people from different countries to explore and appreciate diverse cultures. Secondly, Chinese culture has a rich history and unique charm, which can be quite attractive to foreigners. Lastly, the rise of social media platforms enables individuals to share their experiences with a wider audience, further arousing the interest in Chinese cultural practices. Passage 4：Should Students Make Friends Online? Recently, our class had a heated discussion about students making friends online, and opinions are divided. Some students hold a positive attitude towards it. They think that the Internet breaks the limitations of time and space, allowing them to meet people from different regions and backgrounds. Through online communication, they can broaden their horizons, learn about diverse cultures, and even find like-minded friends. However, other students are against it. They argue that it’s hard to tell whether the information others provide on the Internet is true or not, which may lead to being cheated. Moreover, spending too much time making friends online will take up time that should be used for studying or communicating with friends in real life. In my opinion, making friends online is not completely good or bad. We can make friends online, but we must be cautious. At the same time, we should balance the time spent online and in real life. Only in this way can we enjoy the benefits of online friendship while avoiding potential risks. Passage 5： My Favorite Scientist My favorite scientist is Marie Curie, a brilliant physicist and chemist. She was the first woman to win a Nobel Prize and the only person to win it in two different fields. Her discovery of radium revolutionized science and made groundbreaking contributions to physics and chemistry.  .     Her perseverance inspires me deeply. Despite facing numerous difficulties, she never gave up on her research. Her story teaches me that hard work and dedication can lead to great achievements and overcome any obstacle. I hope to follow her example in my studies.   Passage 6： Dear Eric, I’m glad to hear that you’re interested in the robots at the Chinese Spring Festival Gala! The robots are truly amazing. They are designed to dance perfectly and create a visually stunning performance. Each robot is equipped with advanced sensors and AI technology, allowing them to move gracefully and precisely. Watching their performance was a unique experience. The robots not only danced but also interacted with human performers, blending technology with traditional Chinese art forms. It was fascinating to see how modern innovation meets ancient culture. I highly wish you to have a chance to experience Chinese traditional culture and modern technology. Best regards, Li Hua 主题02 人与自我 Passage 1： Dear Tom,   I’m writing to share with you a special art class I had last Friday. We used virtual reality technology to visit famous art galleries online. The most impressive painting for me was Van Gogh’s Starry Night. Seeing it up close, with swirling colors and vivid brushstrokes, felt magical. I could almost imagine him painting it. The VR experience made art come alive in a way I’d never imagined. It was amazing to explore world-class galleries without leaving school. I felt both inspired and deeply connected to the beauty of art. Yours sincerely,   Li Hua Passage 2： Dear Sir or Madam, I am Li Hua. I am writing to complain/make a complaint about the shirt that I bought from your store. The day before yesterday, I bought a green long shirt from your store. The shirt is medium sized and made from cotton. It cost me 150 yuan. When I got home, I discovered there was a small hole in the left sleeve. Yesterday I returned to your shop to ask for an replacement. Unfortunately there were none left in stock. Therefore, I asked for a refund. However, the shop assistant refused to give me a refund. I feel extremely awful about the terrible shopping experience. I sincerely hope that you can help me solve/settle/address the problem properly. I demand a refund or a replacement. If I do not get a satisfactory response, I will have to seek legal advice. I would be very grateful if you could look into the matter as soon as possible. And I am looking forward to an early reply. Yours Li Hua / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ 专题08 应用文写作 主题01 人与社会 Passage 1 （24-25高一下·辽宁丹东·期末） 假定你是李华，你的英国留学生朋友Kevin即将回国，想给家人买一件具有中国特色的礼物，来信咨询你的意见，请你给他回信，内容包括： 1.推荐礼物； 2.推荐理由。 注意：1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Kevin, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Kevin, Learning that you’re looking for a gift with Chinese characteristics for your family, I strongly recommend Chinese paper-cuttings. Paper-cuttings are deeply rooted in Chinese traditional culture. They come in diverse themes, such as lucky animals and blooming flowers, vividly showcasing the charm of Chinese art. Moreover, they’re portable and can be easily framed as a decoration for any room. Your family can hang them on the wall or put them on a table. Every time they see the paper-cuttings, they will be reminded of China’s unique culture. I’m convinced your family will love this special gift. Hope you have a good trip back. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给英国留学生朋友Kevin回信，推荐具有中国特色的礼物并说明理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 特色：characteristic→feature 各种各样的：diverse→various 此外：moreover→in addition 装饰品：decoration→ornament 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：They come in diverse themes, such as lucky animals and blooming flowers, vividly showcasing the charm of Chinese art. 拓展句：They come in diverse themes, which include lucky animals and blooming flowers, vividly showcasing the charm of Chinese art. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Learning that you’re looking for a gift with Chinese characteristics for your family, I strongly recommend Chinese paper-cuttings. (运用了that引导的宾语从句) 【高分句型2】Every time they see the paper-cuttings, they will be reminded of China’s unique culture. (运用了every time引导的时间状语从句)。 Passage 2 （24-25高一下·内蒙古·期末） 假定你是李华，你想邀请外国友人Michel一同去琴艺社学习中国传统乐器。请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 琴艺社可以学习的中国传统乐器； 2. 学习的具体地点和时间。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Michel, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Michel,     I’m writing to invite you to join me at the Guqin Club to learn traditional Chinese instruments.     The club offers lessons on the guzheng (a 21-string zither) and the erhu (a two-string fiddle), both famous for their beautiful sounds. Classes are held every Saturday afternoon from 2:00 to 4:00 p.m. at the School Art Center, Room 305. It’s a great chance to learn Chinese traditional art, which can help you to experience Chinese culture as well!     Let me know if you’re interested.     Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于邀请信。要求考生邀请外国友人Michel一同去琴艺社学习中国传统乐器，说明琴艺社可以学习的中国传统乐器，以及学习的具体地点和时间。 【详解】1. 词汇积累： 提供：offer→provide 课程：lesson→class 著名的、出名的：famous→noted 机会：chance→opportunity 2. 句式拓展： 同义句转换： 原句：The club offers lessons on the guzheng (a 21-string zither) and the erhu (a two-string fiddle), both famous for their beautiful sounds. 拓展句：The club offers lessons on the guzheng (a 21-string zither) and the erhu (a two-string fiddle), which are both famous for their beautiful sounds. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m writing to invite you to join me at the Guqin Club to learn traditional Chinese instruments.（运用了不定式作目的状语。） 【高分句型2】It’s a great chance to learn Chinese traditional art, which can help you to experience Chinese culture as well!（运用了It为形式主语、动词不定式作真正的主语，以及关系代词which引导的非限制性定语从句）。 Passage 3 （24-25高一下·内蒙古·期末） 假设你是李华，你校将举办“Effective Learning Strategies”英语演讲比赛，特邀你校外籍教授Dr. Smith担任评委.请你用英语写一封邀请信，内容包括： 1．比赛基本信息（时间：7月20日下午3点；地点：学校报告厅）； 2．评委职责（评分+点评选手表现）； 3．邀请原因（Dr. Smith的专业背景及参与意义）； 4．期待回复 注意： 1．词数80字左右； 2．可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。 Dear Dr. Smith, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Dr. Smith, I’m writing to invite you to be a judge in our school’s “Effective Learning Strategies” English speech competition. The competition will be held at 3 p.m. on July 20th in the school lecture hall. As a judge, you’ll rate the contestants and comment on their performances. We sincerely hope you can come because of your profound expertise in English and education. Your presence will surely add authority to the event, offering valuable guidance to the students. Looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给外教Dr. Smith写邀请信，邀请他担任学校“Effective Learning Strategies”英语演讲比赛的评委，内容包括比赛基本信息、评委职责、邀请原因及期待回复。 【详解】1.词汇积累： 评级：rate →grade 评论：comment on →remark on 深厚的：profound →deep 答复：reply →answer 2.句式拓展： 同义句转换 原句：We sincerely hope you can come because of your profound expertise in English and education. 拓展句：Due to your profound expertise in English and education, we sincerely hope you can come. 【点睛】【高分句型 1】Your presence will surely add authority to the event, offering valuable guidance to the students..（运用了现在分词作状语） 【高分句型 2】 We sincerely hope you can come because of your profound expertise in English and education. （运用了省略that的宾语从句）。 Passage 4 （24-25高一下·吉林长春·期末） 你校学生会将举办“用英语讲中国故事”活动。本期主题为“我最喜欢的城市”。请写一篇短文，介绍你最喜欢的中国城市并说明理由。 内容包括： 1. 城市基本概况； 2. 著名景点； 3. 特色饮食。 注意： 1.词数80左右； 2.可适当增加细节，使内容连贯。 My Favourite City _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文: My Favourite City My favourite city is Beijing, the capital of China, which has a long history and culture. Beijing has many places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum, the Summer Palace and so on. If you come to visit Beijing, you can watch the flag-raising ceremony at Tian’anmen Square. Also, you can try some delicious food like Beijing duck. If you want to learn more about Chinese art, don’t miss the opera shows there. I think Beijing is worth a visit. I hope you can visit it some day. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇短文介绍自己最喜欢的中国城市并阐述理由。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 游览：visit → pay a visit to 而且：also → besides 美味的：delicious → tasty 想要：want → would like 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Beijing has many places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum, the Summer Palace and so on. 同义句：Beijing has many places of interest, which include the Great Wall, the Palace Museum, the Summer Palace and so on. 【点睛】【高分句型1】My favourite city is Beijing, the capital of China, which has a long history and culture. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】If you want to learn more about Chinese art, don’t miss the opera shows there. (运用了if引导的条件状语从句） Passage 5 （24-25高一下·内蒙古呼和浩特·期末） 假设你是李华，你所在的学校正在开展“创建绿色校园”活动。请你代表学生会，用英语写一封倡议信，呼吁同学们积极参与到绿色校园建设中来。内容包括以下几点： 1. 说明倡议背景； 2. 提出具体倡议； 3. 呼吁同学们积极参与，并表达对绿色校园建设的期望。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear fellow students,   As we all know, our school is launching a campaign to build a green campus. This is not only beneficial to our health but also contributes to environmental protection.   Therefore, I would like to propose some specific initiatives. Firstly, let’s save water and electricity by turning off taps and lights when not in use. Secondly, we should reduce waste by recycling and reusing materials whenever possible. Lastly, let’s plant more trees and flowers to beautify our campus.   I sincerely hope that everyone can actively participate in this campaign. Together, we can create a greener, more beautiful campus for ourselves and future generations. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以学生会的名义写一封倡议信，呼吁同学们积极参与“创建绿色校园”活动。 【详解】1.词汇积累 发起：launch → initiate 有益的：beneficial → advantageous 建议：propose → suggest 真诚地：sincerely → genuinely 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：This is not only beneficial to our health but also contributes to environmental protection. 拓展句：Not only is this beneficial to our health but also it contributes to environmental protection. 【点睛】【高分句型1】As we all know, our school is launching a campaign to build a green campus.(运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】Firstly, let’s save water and electricity by turning off taps and lights when not in use.(运用了when引导的时间状语从句的省略 主题02 人与自我 Passage 1 （24-25高一下·吉林延吉·期末） 假定你是李华，你的英语老师发现你的近期作业都是AI完成的，请给老师写一封邮件说明一下情况，并提出整改措施。 注意：(1)词数80左右；(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 My dear English teacher, I am writing to… ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】One possible version: My dear English teacher, I am writing to sincerely apologize for submitting AI-generated assignments recently. I admit that I took a shortcut due to heavy academic pressure and a lack of confidence in my own writing, which was dishonest and irresponsible. To correct this mistake, I promise to complete all future tasks independently without any AI assistance. I will also actively seek your guidance during office hours to improve my genuine writing skills. I hope you can accept my apology and give me a chance to prove my determination. Sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份，给英语老师写邮件，就近期作业均由AI完成一事说明情况、表达歉意，并提出具体的整改措施，词数控制在80左右，语气诚恳、态度端正，贴合学生向老师认错的场景。 【详解】1.词汇积累 诚挚地：sincerely → earnestly 承认：admit → acknowledge 由于：due to → owing to 改正：correct → rectify 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I will also actively seek your guidance during office hours to improve my genuine writing skills. 拓展句：I will also actively seek your guidance during office hours so that I can improve my genuine writing skills. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I admit that I took a shortcut due to heavy academic pressure and a lack of confidence in my own writing, which was dishonest and irresponsible.（运用了that引导的宾语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】I hope you can accept my apology and give me a chance to prove my determination.（运用了省略that的宾语从句作hope的宾语以及不定式短语作定语）。 Passage 2 （24-25高一下·黑龙江大庆·期末） 假定你是李华，因为对太空很感兴趣，想要参加一个有关探索太空的夏令营，但是你的父母却以关注学习为理由反对你参加。因此，你很苦恼。请你给英国网友Henry发送电子邮件寻求建议，内容包括： 1. 阐述问题； 2. 寻求建议。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Henry, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Henry, How is everything going? Recently I feel upset and am eager for your suggestion. As you know, I have a preference for space exploration and have a good command of it. However, whenever I read relevant books and watch videos, my parents will explode with anger. They even command me to give it up and focus on my study. I have no idea how to change their minds, and I’m wondering whether you can offer me some advice. I would be thankful if you could give me some help. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生根据提示就父母反对自己参加一个关于太空探险的夏令营这事向网友Henry寻求建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 建议：suggestion → advice 精通：have a good command of → have a good knowledge of 专注于：focus on→ concentrate on 感激的：thankful → grateful 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：As you know, I have a preference for space exploration and have a good command of it. 拓展句：As you know, not only do I have a preference for space exploration, but also I have a good command of it. 【点睛】【高分句型1】However, whenever I read relevant books and watch videos, my parents will explode with anger. （运用了whenever引导的时间状语从句） 【高分句型2】 I have no idea how to change their minds, and I’m wondering whether you can offer me some advice.（运用了whether引导的宾语从句 Passage 3 （24-25高一下·内蒙古赤峰·期末） 假定你是李华，学校将举办以“How Music Has Changed My Life”为题的英语演讲比赛。请结合自己的经历撰写一篇演讲稿参赛，内容包括： 1.你的经历; 2.音乐对你的影响。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80个左右; 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 How Music Has Changed My Life ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 How Music Has Changed My Life Good morning, respected teachers and dear fellow students! My name is Li Hua. I feel incredibly honored to stand here today, ready to share with you my story, which was completely transformed by music. Once too shy to speak in public, I decided to join the school choir, hoping to overcome my fear. There, singing together with classmates, I finally felt a strong sense of belonging that I had never experienced before. Music, becoming my source of courage, taught me to express myself bravely and face challenges confidently. Gradually, encouraged by my newfound confidence, I started taking part in more activities and making new friends. Thanks to music, I’ve grown from a timid person into someone full of energy and passion, making my life brighter than ever. So, let’s all embrace music, for it has the power to change our lives, just as it changed mine! Thank you! 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“How Music Has Changed My Life”为题结合自己的经历撰写一篇演讲稿参赛。 【详解】1.词汇积累 决定：decide→resolve 荣幸：honored→privileged 表达：express→convey 由于：thanks to→due to 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Music, becoming my source of courage, taught me to express myself bravely and face challenges confidently. 拓展句：Music, which has become my source of courage, taught me to express myself bravely and face challenges confidently. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I feel incredibly honored to stand here today, ready to share with you my story, which was completely transformed by music.（运用了which引导非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】So, let’s all embrace music, for it has the power to change our lives, just as it changed mine!（运用了for引导原因状语从句） 主题01 人与社会 Passage 1 （24-25高一下·吉林长春·期末） 你校英语报开展以Should Senior High School Students Take Part in After-school Activities? 为题的讨论。一些同学认为参加课外活动占用时间影响作业完成、分散精力；另一些同学则认为其能培养兴趣、提升协作能力、缓解压力。 请写一篇短文介绍讨论情况并谈谈自己的看法。 注意： 1. 词数80 左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，使内容连贯。 Should Senior High School Students Take Part in After-school Activities? _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文一（反对） Our school newspaper asked if senior high students should join after-school activities. Some students say yes, believing activities help them find new interests, learn to work with others, and reduce worry. However, others feel differently. I believe these activities are not a good idea for most students. High school study is very important for our future. We need to work hard every day. After-school activities take valuable time away from finishing homework and preparing for tests. They also use energy we need to focus on our lessons. With so much schoolwork, adding activities makes life harder, not easier. It is better to wait until we have less school pressure. 范文二（支持） Our school newspaper discusses whether senior high students should join after-school activities. Some worry these activities take time from homework and make students tired. Others argue that they help develop interests, improve teamwork skills, and reduce stress. I strongly support joining these activities. While study is important, after-school activities teach us things books cannot. They let us explore new interests like music or sports. Working with classmates helps us learn to solve problems together and build friendships. Most importantly, they offer a break from heavy schoolwork, refreshing our minds and making learning easier later. Balancing activities and study is key, but their benefits shape us beyond the classroom. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇短文介绍同学们关于“Should Senior High School Students Take Part in After-school Activities? ”的讨论情况并并谈谈自己的看法。 【详解】1.词汇积累（以范文1为例） 然而：however →nevertheless 重要的：important→significant 专注于：focus on→concentrate on 艰难的：hard→tough 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：With so much schoolwork, adding activities makes life harder, not easier. 拓展句：As we have much schoolwork, adding activities makes life harder, not easier. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Our school newspaper asked if senior high students should join after-school activities.（运用了if引导的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】Some students say yes, believing activities help them find new interests, learn to work with others, and reduce worry. （运用了现在分词作状语）。 Passage 2 （24-25高一下·吉林·期末） 假设你是李华，举行了一次班会，班会的主题是：太空探索的意义。请结合下表内容，用英语给校报写一篇文章，客观地介绍班会上同学们讨论的情况并表达你自己的观点。 赞同的理由 反对的理由 你自己的观点 1.获得新知识；2.从太空取得新资源； 3.扩大人类未来的生存空间。 1.耗资巨大；2.宇航员的安全问题。 …… 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Outer Space Exploration, YES or NO? _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Outer Space Exploration, YES or NO? We had an argument over whether it is necessary to carry out outer space exploration at a class meeting the other day. Different students have different views. Some students think it important to research the outer space. On the one hand, people can get new resources and a better understanding of the outer space. On the other hand, this exploration can possibly bring about new living space for humans in the near future. However, others are against it because they believe that it takes so much money, which is not worth the value. Besides, it is dangerous for astronauts to do such work in the outer space. As for me, people should be pioneering, and therefore such explorations into the outer space are worth trying out. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就班会讨论的太空探索意义这个主题写一篇短文介绍正方和反方的观点并陈述自己的看法。 【详解】1.词汇积累 观点：view→viewpoint 重要的：important→significant 人类：human→human being 然而：however→ nevertheless 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Some students think it important to research the outer space. 拓展句：Some students think that it is important to research the outer space. 【点睛】【高分句型1】We had an argument over whether it is necessary to carry out outer space exploration at a class meeting the other day.（运用了whether 引导的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】However, others are against it because they believe that it takes so much money, which is not worth the value. （运用了because引导的原因状语从句，that引导的宾语从句以及which引导的非限制性定语从句）。 Passage 3 （24-25高一下·吉林白山·期末） 近期，很多外国友人来到中国旅行，他们体验汉服、学习中国功夫、品尝中国美食的视频收获了很多海外友人的关注。针对中华文化在国外的流行，请你用英语写一篇短文，内容包括： 1.描述现象； 2.你的看法； 3.分析流行的原因。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80个左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】       Recently, plenty of foreigners have travelled to China. Videos of them experiencing Hanfu, learning Chinese kung fu and tasting Chinese cuisine have attracted a lot of attention from overseas. Chinese culture is becoming increasingly popular abroad. In my opinion, this trend is unstoppable. It shows the global appeal and influence of Chinese culture. Reasons for its popularity abroad are as follows. Firstly, globalization and the Internet have made it easier for people from different countries to explore and appreciate diverse cultures. Secondly, Chinese culture has a rich history and unique charm, which can be quite attractive to foreigners. Lastly, the rise of social media platforms enables individuals to share their experiences with a wider audience, further arousing the interest in Chinese cultural practices. 【导语】这是一篇应用文。要求考生针对近期很多外国友人来到中国旅行体验中国传统文化的情况写一篇短文。 【详解】1.词汇积累 大量：plenty of→a number of 在我看来：in my opinion→as far as I am concerned 表明：show→indicate 魅力：charm→glamour 2.句式拓展 句型转换 原句： Lastly, the rise of social media platforms enables individuals to share their experiences with a wider audience, further arousing the interest in Chinese cultural practices. 拓展句：Lastly, it is the rise of social media platforms that enables individuals to share their experiences with a wider audience, further arousing the interest in Chinese cultural practices. 【点睛】【高分句型1】 Firstly, globalization and the Internet have made it easier for people from different countries to explore and appreciate diverse cultures.（运用了固定句型：make it+adj. for sb. to do sth.，it是形式宾语，不定式是真正的宾语） 【高分句型2】Lastly, the rise of social media platforms enables individuals to share their experiences with a wider audience, further arousing the interest in Chinese cultural practices.（运用了现在分词作状语） 【高分句型3】Secondly, Chinese culture has a rich history and unique charm, which can be quite attractive to foreigners.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） Passage 4 （24-25高一下·吉林长春·期末） 假定你是李华，你班组织了一次话题为关于学生网上交友的讨论，对此同学们持不同意见。请你用英语为校园英语报纸写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文。 内容包括：1. 同学们的不同观点； 2. 表达自己的看法。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 首段已给出。 Should Students Make Friends Online? Recently, our class had a heated discussion about students making friends online, and opinions are divided. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考例文 Should Students Make Friends Online? Recently, our class had a heated discussion about students making friends online, and opinions are divided. Some students hold a positive attitude towards it. They think that the Internet breaks the limitations of time and space, allowing them to meet people from different regions and backgrounds. Through online communication, they can broaden their horizons, learn about diverse cultures, and even find like-minded friends. However, other students are against it. They argue that it’s hard to tell whether the information others provide on the Internet is true or not, which may lead to being cheated. Moreover, spending too much time making friends online will take up time that should be used for studying or communicating with friends in real life. In my opinion, making friends online is not completely good or bad. We can make friends online, but we must be cautious. At the same time, we should balance the time spent online and in real life. Only in this way can we enjoy the benefits of online friendship while avoiding potential risks. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份为校园英语报纸写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文，需涵盖同学们的不同观点以及个人看法。 【详解】1.词汇积累 限制：limitation → restriction 多样的：diverse → varied 欺骗：cheat → deceive 占据：take up → occupy 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：They think that the Internet breaks the limitations of time and space, allowing them to meet people from different regions and backgrounds. 拓展句：They think that the Internet breaks the limitations of time and space, which allows them to meet people from different regions and backgrounds. 【点睛】【高分句型1】They think that the Internet breaks the limitations of time and space, allowing them to meet people from different regions and backgrounds.（运用了that引导的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】They argue that it’s hard to tell whether the information others provide on the Internet is true or not, which may lead to being cheated.（运用了that引导的宾语从句、whether引导的宾语从句、省略that引导的限制性定语从句、which引导的非限制性定语从句） Passage 5 （24-25高一下·黑龙江鸡西·期末） 假定你是李华，你校英文报正在举办主题为“My Favorite Scientist”的征文活动，请写一篇短文投稿。内容包括： 1. 人物介绍； 2. 你受到的启发。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 My Favorite Scientist ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 My Favorite Scientist My favorite scientist is Marie Curie, a brilliant physicist and chemist. She was the first woman to win a Nobel Prize and the only person to win it in two different fields. Her discovery of radium revolutionized science and made groundbreaking contributions to physics and chemistry.  .     Her perseverance inspires me deeply. Despite facing numerous difficulties, she never gave up on her research. Her story teaches me that hard work and dedication can lead to great achievements and overcome any obstacle. I hope to follow her example in my studies.   【导语】本篇书面表达属于征文投稿类应用文。要求考生以李华的身份介绍自己最喜爱的科学家，并阐述从中获得的启发。 【详解】1. 词汇积累      杰出的：brilliant → distinguished     开创性的: groundbreaking → pioneering      坚持不懈：perseverance → persistence     奉献，投入： dedication → devotion 2. 句式拓展       并列句变复合句 原句：Her discovery of radium revolutionized science and made groundbreaking contributions to physics and chemistry.       拓展句：Her discovery of radium revolutionized science ,which  made groundbreaking contributions to physics and chemistry.   【点睛】【高级句型1】She was the first woman to win a Nobel Prize and the only person to win it in two different fields.（运用了不定式作后置定语） 【高级句型2】Her story teaches me that hard work and dedication can lead to great achievements and overcome any obstacle.（运用了that引导的宾语从句 Passage 6 （24-25高一下·辽宁·期末） 假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Eric在视频网站上看到了机器人在中国春晚上跳中国传统舞蹈的视频，对此非常感兴趣，向你询问有关事项，写一封回复邮件，相关内容要点如下。 1.介绍春晚机器人的特点和功能。 2.分享观看春晚机器人表演的感受。 3.鼓励对方了解中国文化和科技。 注意： 1.词数80左右，开头已经给出，不计入总词数； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Eric, I’m glad to hear that you’re interested in the robots at the Chinese Spring Festival Gala! ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best regards, Li Hua 【答案】Dear Eric, I’m glad to hear that you’re interested in the robots at the Chinese Spring Festival Gala! The robots are truly amazing. They are designed to dance perfectly and create a visually stunning performance. Each robot is equipped with advanced sensors and AI technology, allowing them to move gracefully and precisely. Watching their performance was a unique experience. The robots not only danced but also interacted with human performers, blending technology with traditional Chinese art forms. It was fascinating to see how modern innovation meets ancient culture. I highly wish you to have a chance to experience Chinese traditional culture and modern technology. Best regards, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生给英国朋友Eric回复邮件，介绍春晚机器人的相关情况。 【详解】1.词汇积累 令人惊讶的：amazing→surprising 允许某人做某事：allow sb to do sth→permit sb to do sth 机会：chance→opportunity 精确地：precisely→accurately 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Each robot is equipped with advanced sensors and AI technology, allowing them to move gracefully and precisely. 拓展句：Each robot is equipped with advanced sensors and AI technology, which allows them to move gracefully and precisely. 【点睛】[高分句型1]The robots not only danced but also interacted with human performers, blending technology with traditional Chinese art forms.（运用了现在分词作状语） [高分句型2]It was fascinating to see how modern innovation meets ancient culture.（运用了how引导宾语从句） 主题02 人与自我 Passage 1 （24-25高一下·辽宁大连·期末） 假定你是李华，上周五你校上了一堂特别的美术课——通过虚拟现实技术云游知名美术馆。请你给英国朋友Tom写一封邮件分享这次经历，内容包括： 1. 你印象最深刻的画作； 2. 这次线上参观的感想。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80个左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Tom, I’m writing to share with you a special art class I had last Friday. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】One possible version: Dear Tom,   I’m writing to share with you a special art class I had last Friday. We used virtual reality technology to visit famous art galleries online. The most impressive painting for me was Van Gogh’s Starry Night. Seeing it up close, with swirling colors and vivid brushstrokes, felt magical. I could almost imagine him painting it. The VR experience made art come alive in a way I’d never imagined. It was amazing to explore world-class galleries without leaving school. I felt both inspired and deeply connected to the beauty of art. Yours sincerely,   Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以李华的身份给英国朋友Tom写邮件，分享上周五学校通过虚拟现实技术云游知名美术馆的特别美术课经历。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 令人印象深刻的：impressive→striking 生动的：vivid→lively 探索：explore→venture into 激励：inspire→motivate 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：We used virtual reality technology to visit famous art galleries online. 拓展句：We used virtual reality technology, which allowed us to visit famous art galleries online. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m writing to share with you a special art class I had last Friday.（运用了省略关系代词的定语从句） 【高分句型2】It was amazing to explore world-class galleries without leaving school.（运用了“it作形式主语，不定式短语作真正主语”结构）。 Passage 2 （24-25高一下·黑龙江哈尔滨·期末） 假定你是李华，前天在其进口商店买了一件衬衣，回家后发现衬衣有瑕疵，昨天去商店处理，但无货可换，同时店员也拒绝退款，请给商店经理发封邮件，内容包括：1．购物与售后处理经过；2．你的诉求。 注意：词数80左右。 Dear Sir or Madam, ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文： Dear Sir or Madam, I am Li Hua. I am writing to complain/make a complaint about the shirt that I bought from your store. The day before yesterday, I bought a green long shirt from your store. The shirt is medium sized and made from cotton. It cost me 150 yuan. When I got home, I discovered there was a small hole in the left sleeve. Yesterday I returned to your shop to ask for an replacement. Unfortunately there were none left in stock. Therefore, I asked for a refund. However, the shop assistant refused to give me a refund. I feel extremely awful about the terrible shopping experience. I sincerely hope that you can help me solve/settle/address the problem properly. I demand a refund or a replacement. If I do not get a satisfactory response, I will have to seek legal advice. I would be very grateful if you could look into the matter as soon as possible. And I am looking forward to an early reply. Yours Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的投诉信。要求考生给商店经理写封信，就自己购买了一件有瑕疵的衬衣想要退款却遭到拒绝一事提出诉求。 【详解】1.词汇积累 不幸地：unfortunately→ unluckily 糟糕的：awful→ horrible 真诚地：sincerely→ genuinely 感激的：thankful→ grateful 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：The day before yesterday, I bought a green long shirt from your store. The shirt is medium sized and made from cotton. 拓展句：The day before yesterday, I bought a green long shirt from your store, which is medium sized and made from cotton. 【点睛】【高分句型1】When I got home, I discovered there was a small hole in the left sleeve.（运用了when引导的状语从句和省略that的宾语从句） 【高分句型2】I sincerely hope that you can help me solve/settle/address the problem properly.（运用了that引导的宾语从句）。 / 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $