2026届高三英语读后续写专项复习---邻里隔阂与和解 导学案

2026-05-29
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该高中英语高考复习导学案系统覆盖读后续写核心考点,通过角色分析、时空线梳理、情节与情感变化追踪等多维度文本解构,构建“文本理解-逻辑衔接-语言表达”的知识网络,以问题链(如细节问答)和任务驱动(如情节构造)引导学生自主梳理续写规律,形成系统性写作认知框架。 亮点在于分层自主学习设计,开篇设置细节问答诊断题检测文本解读能力,中段通过情节线填空、情感变化分析等任务培养思维品质,结尾提供续写框架模板与范文对比,帮助学生自主诊断薄弱环节并针对性提升。教师可通过学生任务完成情况精准把握学情,有效培养学生自主复习能力与语言运用素养。

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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 For years, I had lived behind an invisible wall with my neighbor, Mr. Miller. The misunderstanding started on my tenth birthday. I had accidentally kicked my soccer ball into his rose bushes, crushing several of his most beautiful blooms. He had rushed out of his house, shouting at me with anger I had never seen before. I was so hurt and embarrassed that I shouted back, calling him an unreasonable old man. Since that day, we had exchanged no more than cold nods and uneasy silences. Over the years, that small moment grew into a wall. We avoided eye contact. We crossed the street to avoid walking past each other. My parents tried to smooth things over, but I refused. “He started it,” I would say. And so the distance between us became a habit — a cold, quiet routine of pretending the other didn’t exist. That belief was broken on a cold November evening six years later. My parents were away for the weekend, leaving me alone. Around 9 PM, while carrying a stack of books down the stairs, I missed a step and tumbled to the bottom. A sharp pain shot through my ankle, so intense that I screamed. I tried to stand, but my leg wouldn’t hold me. I dragged myself to the living room, only to find my phone dead on the sofa. No charger nearby. I shouted for help, but the wind outside swallowed my voice. Fifteen minutes passed. Twenty. Panic began to creep in. I thought about how foolish I had been to push everyone away. Then came a soft knock at the door. “Hello? Are you okay? I heard someone shouting.” It was Mr. Miller. The man I had avoided for six years. The man whose rose bushes I had crushed. The man I had called unreasonable. 注意: (1)续写词数应为 150个左右; (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 续写开头: I hesitated, then told him I had fallen and couldn’t move. ___________________________________________________________________________ The next day, Mr. Miller came by, and my mother brought up the past. ___________________________________________________________________________ 一、文本分析 1.角色 ________________________________________________________ 2.视角 第________人称 3.时空线 I accidentally ruined Mr. Miller’s roses on my tenth birthday--- _________________ --- We kept cold distance and avoided each other for six years--- _________________ --- I fell down stairs, hurt my ankle and had no way to call for help--- _________________ --- Mr. Miller came to my door and offered help 4. 细节问答 What caused the misunderstanding between the author and Mr. Miller? :___________________________________ How did the author and Mr. Miller get along in the following six years?:_________________________________ What happened to the author on a cold November evening?:________________________________________________ Why couldn’t the author ask for help normally?:__________________________________________ Who came to help the author finally?:_____________________________________________ What did the author realize before Mr. Miller’s arrival?:_________________________________________________ 5.情节线 作者十岁时不小心弄坏邻居米勒先生的玫瑰,双方争吵结怨→_________________ →六年间两人刻意回避、形同陌路,隔阂越来越深→_________________ →作者独自在家摔伤脚踝、手机没电,陷入无助→_________________ →米勒先生主动上门询问、伸出援手→(续写)邻居暖心救助、照顾作者→(续写)双方解开多年误会,冰释前嫌 6.情感线 I:embarrassed and angry→___________→scared and regretful→___________→grateful and guilty→___________(续写) 7. 综合概括(中英各一句) 中文:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 英文:______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 句式积累 摘抄文中宾语从句、定语从句、状语从句、非谓语、并列句并理解用法: ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 9. 本文主题 温情成长类:_______________________________________ 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1: I hesitated, then told him I had fallen and couldn’t move. 衔接句1——What did Mr. Miller do to help me? How did I feel? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Paragraph 2: The next day, Mr. Miller came by, and my mother brought up the past. 衔接句2——How did we resolve the misunderstanding? What was the final ending? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 三.段落续写框架 第一段:我犹豫片刻,告知米勒先生自己摔伤无法动弹。 ①__________________→②__________________→③_______________; 第二段:第二天,米勒先生登门拜访,妈妈提起了过往的误会。 ④__________________→⑤__________________→⑥_______________。 四、标准续写(150词左右) I hesitated, then told him I had fallen and couldn’t move. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ The next day, Mr. Miller came by, and my mother brought up the past. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 一、文本分析 1.角色 I(年少执拗、心存愧疚、最终学会释怀成长的少年);Mr. Miller(外表严厉、内心善良、宽容大度的暖心邻居);my parents(试图调和矛盾的家人) 2.视角 第一人称 3.时空线 I accidentally ruined Mr. Miller’s roses on my tenth birthday--- a quarrel broke out between us --- We kept cold distance and avoided each other for six years--- I held a grudge and refused to make up --- I fell down stairs, hurt my ankle and had no way to call for help--- I felt panicked and regretful for my stubbornness --- Mr. Miller came to my door and offered help 4. 细节问答(标准答案) What caused the misunderstanding between the author and Mr. Miller? :The author accidentally crushed Mr. Miller’s rose blooms, and they quarreled with each other. How did the author and Mr. Miller get along in the following six years?:They avoided each other, kept silent and only gave cold nods, living with a long-term cold war. What happened to the author on a cold November evening?:The author fell down the stairs, got a severe ankle injury and couldn’t move. Why couldn’t the author ask for help normally?:The author’s phone was dead, and the strong wind outside swallowed her shouts for help. Who came to help the author finally?:Her neighbor Mr. Miller came to offer help. What did the author realize before Mr. Miller’s arrival?:She realized she was foolish to be stubborn and push others away for a small misunderstanding. 5.情节线(标准答案) 作者十岁时不小心弄坏邻居米勒先生的玫瑰,双方争吵结怨→小小的矛盾演变成隔阂,两人彻底疏远 →六年间两人刻意回避、形同陌路,隔阂越来越深→作者一直固执记恨,拒绝和解 →作者独自在家摔伤脚踝、手机没电,陷入无助→作者陷入恐慌,懊悔自己的固执 →米勒先生主动上门询问、伸出援手→(续写)邻居暖心救助、照顾作者→(续写)双方解开多年误会,冰释前嫌、重归于好 6.情感线 I:embarrassed and angry→stubborn and cold→scared and regretful→surprised and guilty→grateful and guilty→relieved and warm(续写) 7. 综合概括(中英各一句) 中文:作者因儿时一场小小的误会与邻居冷战六年,在自己意外受伤陷入绝境时,曾被自己误解的邻居主动伸出援手,最终二人解开隔阂、冰释前嫌。 英文:The author kept a six-year cold war with his neighbor because of a trivial misunderstanding. When he got injured and helpless, the misunderstood neighbor kindly helped him, and they finally cleared up the misunderstanding. 8. 句式积累(例句参考) 状语从句:When I missed a step and tumbled to the bottom, a sharp pain shot through my ankle. 非谓语动词:I tried to stand, but my leg wouldn’t hold me, leaving me trapped in the living room. 宾语从句:I thought about how foolish I had been to push everyone away. 并列句:We avoided eye contact. We crossed the street to avoid walking past each other. 定语从句:The misunderstanding that separated us started on my tenth birthday. 9. 本文主题 温情成长类:不要因小事心存隔阂与执念,善意能够化解矛盾,宽容与和解是成长的必修课。 二.情节构造 Paragraph 1 衔接句: He rushed in immediately, checked my injured ankle and comforted me gently, taking good care of me all night, which made me feel extremely guilty for my past stubbornness. Paragraph 2 衔接句: We sincerely apologized to each other for our impolite behavior six years ago, let go of the long-time misunderstanding, and rebuilt the friendly neighborly relationship. 三.段落续写框架 第一段:我犹豫片刻,告知米勒先生自己摔伤无法动弹。 ①米勒先生立刻进门查看我的伤势,温柔安抚慌乱的我→②他细心帮我处理脚踝伤口,全程耐心照顾我→③我内心满是愧疚,为自己六年的固执冷漠深感自责; 第二段:第二天,米勒先生登门拜访,妈妈提起了过往的误会。 ④双方坦诚诉说当年的想法,解开长久的隔阂→⑤我主动道歉,米勒先生也表示早已释怀→⑥往事烟消云散,我们冰释前嫌,重拾温暖的邻里情谊。 四、标准续写范文(150词左右) I hesitated, then told him I had fallen and couldn’t move. Without hesitation, Mr. Miller pushed the door open and came in. Seeing me lying on the floor with a swollen ankle, he rushed over immediately to check my injury. He comforted me softly and gently helped me onto the sofa. Knowing my phone was dead, he charged my phone and stayed with me to make sure I was safe. His kindness and patience totally melted my heart. I felt extremely guilty for being cold and hostile to him over the past six years. The next day, Mr. Miller came by, and my mother brought up the past. Surprisingly, Mr. Miller smiled and said he had long forgiven my childish behavior. I mustered up my courage and apologized sincerely for my rudeness and stubbornness years ago. He patted my shoulder and told me he had overreacted that day too. The invisible wall between us finally collapsed. From then on, we got along well as close neighbors, and I learned that tolerance can bridge any gap between people. 学科网(北京)股份有限公司 $

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