Unit 5 Looking into nature 书面表达10篇（单元话题：自然探索）-2025-2026学年八年级英语下册单元重难点易错题精练（新教材外研版）

**基本信息** 聚焦“自然探索”主题，通过基础与重难分层设计，系统训练初中英语书面表达能力，融合语言运用与文化意识培养。 **专项设计** |模块|题量/典例|题型特征|知识逻辑| |----|-----------|----------|----------| |基础语篇练习|5篇（如介绍胡先骕、林涛探险）|以人物介绍、经历叙述为主，注重基础表达|从单一信息整合到简单观点阐述，构建自然探索主题基础写作框架| |重难语篇练习|5篇（如屠呦呦事迹、社会实践活动）|含演讲稿、综合活动描述等，强调多要点整合|从人物精神提炼到跨文化对比，深化自然探索主题的思维与表达层次|

Unit 5 Looking into nature 书面表达10篇 内容导航 单元话题 基础语篇练习 重难语篇练习 单元话题聚焦 自然探索 基础语篇练习 稳扎稳打 必拿分数：聚焦稳拿分数题目，确保基础分值 重难语篇练习 突破瓶颈 争夺高分：聚焦高难度题目，争夺关键分数 基础语篇练习 1．在植物探索的征程中，无数先驱者留下足迹。请你根据以下提示写一篇英语短文，介绍中国植物探索者胡先骕，展现其贡献与精神。 (1) 胡先骕生于1894年； (2) 他发现许多新物种； (3) 1948年，他与郑万钧共同鉴定“活化石”水杉 (Metasequoia glyptostroboides Hu et Cheng) 注意： (1) 词数80～100，开头已给出，不计入总词数； (2) 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； (3) 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 Hu Xiansu is a remarkable Chinese plant explorer. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Hu Xiansu is a remarkable Chinese plant explorer. He was born in 1894. He dedicated his life to exploring and studying plants. He travelled across mountains and through forests, enduring harsh conditions to collect specimens. Hu discovered many new plant species and made significant contributions to plant classification in China. His work laid a solid foundation for the understanding of China’s rich plant resources. In 1948, he, together with Zheng Wanjun, identified Metasequoia glyptostroboides Hu et Cheng, the living fossil, which shocked the international botanical community. Hu Xiansu’s spirit of exploration and dedication continues to inspire generations. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：人物介绍类作文 ②时态：以“一般过去时”为主 ③提示：根据所给三点信息介绍胡先骕，需适当补充细节，保持连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步：承接开头句，介绍其出生年份及总体贡献。 第二步：具体说明其发现新物种和鉴定水杉的成就。 第三步：总结其科学精神或影响。 [亮点词汇] ①explorer探索者 ②discovered发现 ③a solid foundation一个坚固的基础 ④the living fossil活化石 [高分句型] ①Hu discovered many new plant species and made significant contributions to plant classification in China. (运用了and连接的并列谓语动词) ②..., which shocked the international botanical community.(运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 2．热爱大自然的林涛，在阳光明媚的上周日踏入神秘森林探险，意外发现奇异花草与灵动小鸟，收获惊喜与成长。根据以上提示写一篇英语作文。 注意：(1)词数80~100； (2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； (3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The Forest Adventure Last Sunday, nature-loving student Lin Tao went to a forest. As he walked on a small path, he saw a plant with bright pink flowers. It looked different from others he knew. He quickly took photos with his phone. Suddenly, he heard some sound in the grass. To his surprise, a small, colourful bird jumped out. Lin Tao watched it carefully and wrote down its features in his notebook. When he showed his findings to his science teacher, everyone was excited. This trip made him want to explore more places in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：内容包含时间、人物、地点、事件、发现与收获，要点完整，语句通顺，符合80~100词要求。 [写作步骤] 第一步：开篇交代时间、人物、事件，点明林涛热爱大自然，上周日去森林探险； 第二步：中间具体描写探险过程，依次写发现奇异的粉色花朵、听到声音并看到彩色小鸟，记录发现； 第三步：结尾写回到学校与老师同学分享收获，表达此次探险带来的成长与未来想继续探索的愿望。 [亮点词汇] ①nature-loving热爱大自然的 ②take photos拍照 ③to one’s surprise令某人惊讶的是 ④write down写下，记下 [高分句型] ①As he walked on a small path, he saw a plant with bright pink flowers.（as引导时间状语从句） ②When he showed his findings to his science teacher, everyone was excited.（when引导时间状语从句） 3．自然充满了奥秘，探索自然能让我们更好地了解世界。请以“My View on Nature Exploration”为题，写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对自然探索的看法。 要求： 1.内容包括：自然探索的意义、你知道的自然探索成就以及我们应该如何对待自然探索； 2.词数 80~100 左右； 3.语句通顺，语法正确，条理清晰。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文： My View on Nature Exploration Nature is full of mysteries, and exploring it helps us understand the world better. It allows us to discover unknown species and learn about the past. Many great achievements come from nature exploration. For example, amber has helped scientists find that dinosaurs had feathers. Wang Wencai devoted his life to studying plants and discovered over 1,370 new species. These achievements show the value of exploration. We should take a positive attitude towards nature exploration. We need to put more effort into research and protect the environment. Only in this way can we unlock more secrets. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 确定文体：观点阐述类议论文，以一般现在时为主 明确要点：包含三个方面——自然探索的意义、自然探索的成就、我们应该如何对待自然探索 确定人称：第一人称（I/we）和第三人称（it/they） 注意事项：不得透露真实姓名和学校名称；观点要明确，论据要有说服力；可从个人、科学、社会等多个角度阐述 [第二步：构思布局] 四段式结构： 开头段：引出话题，并阐述自然探索的意义 主体段：举例说明自然探索的成就 结尾段：提出对待自然探索的态度 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：自然探索的意义 认知层面：helps us understand the world better/discover unknown species/learn about the past 科学层面：push science forward/bring new findings/expand human knowledge 个人层面：satisfy curiosity/inspire creativity/make life more interesting 要点二：自然探索的成就 古生物方面：amber has helped scientists find dinosaurs had feathers 植物学方面：Wang Wencai discovered over 1,370 new species/devoted his life to studying plants 其他例子：medicine from nature/new materials found/inventions inspired by nature 要点三：对待自然探索的态度 行动建议：put more effort into research/support scientific exploration/learn about nature 保护意识：protect the environment/explore responsibly/respect all life 未来展望：unlock more secrets/make new discoveries/live in harmony with nature 要点四：总结升华 价值重申：nature exploration is valuable/meaningful/important 信念表达：only in this way can we.../we must keep exploring 4．为了鼓励青少年亲近大自然、走进大自然，某青少年英文网站举办了主题为“Nature”的征文比赛。假如你是李明，请根据以下要点写一篇英文短文投稿。 要点：1. 记录一次走进大自然的经历及感受；2. 走进大自然的好处 (放松身心，……) ；3. 呼吁人们走进大自然。 注意： 1. 短文须包含以上要点，可增加细节以使行文连贯； 2. 词数80-100 (开头已为你写好，不计入总词数) 。 Nature Nature is our home. It’s a part of our life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Nature Nature is our home. It’s a part of our life. Last summer, I went hiking in the mountains. The fresh air, green trees, and singing birds made me feel really relaxed and happy. I forgot all my worries and just enjoyed the beautiful scenery around me, taking in its charm. Walking in nature has many benefits. It helps us relax both our body and mind completely. We can also learn about different plants and interesting animals there. Let’s walk into nature more often. It will surely make our life more colorful and meaningful, don’t miss it! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇征文比赛短文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，包括记录一次走进大自然的经历及感受、走进大自然的好处以及呼吁人们走进大自然。考生应注意不要遗漏这些要点，并适当添加细节以使行文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作主题。借用“Nature is our home. It’s a part of our life.”来引出主题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。首先记录一次走进大自然的经历及感受，接着阐述走进大自然的好处； 第三步，书写结语。呼吁人们走进大自然，享受大自然的美丽和宁静。 [亮点词汇] ①take in吸收，领略 ②both...and... ……和……都 ③don’t miss it不要错过 [高分句型] ①The fresh air, green trees, and singing birds made me feel really relaxed and happy.（“make sb do sth”句型） 5．假设你是李华，你的外国笔友Mike来信想了解自然界的未解之谜，请你写一封邮件，介绍你知道的自然谜题，并谈谈你的看法。要求：100词左右，语句通顺。 范文 Dear Mike, I’m glad to receive your letter. You asked about mysteries in nature, so I’d like to share something with you. There are many strange natural puzzles around the world. For example, some rivers and lakes have unusual phenomena that people cannot explain now. Scientists say that nature hides countless secrets waiting for us to find out. I believe that these mysteries make nature more attractive. They encourage us to keep learning and exploring. I hope we can discover more truths about nature together. Yours, Li Hua 6.你的英语课要求介绍一位探索自然的中国名人，请你介绍李时珍，讲述他的事迹与带给你的启发。要求：100词左右。 范文 A Great Explorer of Nature Li Shizhen is a great ancient explorer in China. He loved studying plants and medical herbs all his life. He travelled across the country to observe different wild plants and recorded their features carefully. People say that he spent many years finishing his great work. He helped people know more about natural plants. I learn that we should hold a serious attitude when we explore things. His spirit tells me that hard work will finally bring great achievements. 7．学校英语活动举行演讲比赛，主题为 Learn from Nature Explorers。请写一篇演讲稿，介绍中外探索者，表达你的想法。要求：100词左右。 范文 Hello everyone, Today my topic is Learn from Nature Explorers. Many great people devote their lives to exploring nature. Darwin from abroad and Wang Wencai in China are all famous explorers. They travelled widely and studied plants and animals day after day. We all know that they found lots of important facts about nature. I think that their curiosity and perseverance are worth learning. Let’s take them as examples and keep exploring the amazing nature around us. Thank you! 8．请以 Explore the Secrets of Nature 为题，写一篇短文，结合自然现象、未解之谜和探索者精神，谈谈你的理解。要求：100词左右。 范文 Explore the Secrets of Nature Nature is like a big book with countless unknown secrets. We can see different natural phenomena everywhere, and some of them are still hard for people to understand. Many explorers never stop studying nature. They believe that constant exploration can unlock these puzzles. They set good examples for all of us. I realize that we should learn to observe carefully and keep curious. I will try my best to learn more knowledge and explore more wonderful secrets of nature in the future. 重难语篇练习 9．探索自然，探寻未知。为发扬求知精神，感受自然之美，你所在班级上周日组织了一次以“Nature Exploration and Environmental Protection Action”为主题的社会实践活动。假设你是李华，请你根据下面表格中的信息，谈谈当天的活动经历和感受。 注意：1. 须包含表格中的提示信息，可增加细节；2. 词数80-100。 When Last Sunday Where Mangrove Nature Reserve Who I, my classmates What visited the nature reserve, took part in a tree-planting activity, watched some birds A Meaningful Social Practice Activity __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A Meaningful Social Practice Activity Last Sunday, our class organized a social practice activity with the theme of “Nature Exploration and Environmental Protection Action” at the Mangrove Nature Reserve from 10 a. m. to 4 p. m. First, we visited the nature reserve, where we learned a lot about nature. Then, we took part in a tree-planting activity. After that, we watched some rare birds. Besides, we also picked up the litter in the reserve to keep the environment clean. Through this activity, I not only got close to nature but also realized the importance of environmental protection. It was a really meaningful day. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，描述了一次社会实践活动； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中的信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“Last Sunday, our class organized a social practice activity”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“参观自然保护区、植树、观鸟、捡垃圾”几个方面重点介绍活动当天的具体情况; 第三步，书写结语。表达“这次活动很有意义”的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①took part in参加 ②picked up捡起 ③not only...but also...不但……而且…… [高分句型] ①First, we visited the nature reserve, where we learned a lot about nature.（where引导的非限制性定语从句） 10．在你的学习生涯中，一定有很多科学家给你留下了深刻的印象。屠呦呦教授是中国第一位获得诺贝尔科学奖项的科学家，她和她的团队发现的青蒿素拯救了全球数百万人的生命。请你根据以下要点，写一篇作文，介绍她的付出与收获。 Name Pain Solution Gain Tu Youyou 1. did many experiments 2. failed 190 times 1. didn’t give up 2. read old Chinese medical books 3. tried again 1. found artemisinin 2. In 2015, won the Nobel Prize. 要求：1．分享一下你从屠呦呦的故事中学到了什么。 2．包含以上所有要点，并适当发挥。 3．80词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 No pain, no gain — The Story of Tu Youyou There is an old saying, “No pain, no gain”. Tu Youyou’s story perfectly shows us the meaning of this saying. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文： Tu Youyou is a great Chinese scientist. She did many experiments to find a cure for malaria. She failed 190 times, but she never gave up. Instead, she read old Chinese medical books and tried again. Finally, she found artemisinin, which has saved millions of lives around the world. In 2015, she won the Nobel Prize. From her story, I learn that success comes from hard work and never giving up. We should keep trying even when we face difficulties. 【详解】写作步骤 [第一步：审题立意] 文体：介绍性记叙文，以一般过去时为主（描述屠呦呦的研究历程），结尾感悟用一般现在时 核心要点：屠呦呦的付出（实验与失败）、应对方式（不放弃+查阅古籍）、收获（发现青蒿素+获诺贝尔奖）、个人感悟 人称：第三人称（she/Tu Youyou）介绍事迹，第一人称（I）表达感悟 注意事项：词数控制在80词左右，不得遗漏表格要点，感悟需贴合主题 [第二步：构思布局] 一段式结构 开头：总起句，点明屠呦呦的身份与核心成就，引出她的研究背景 主体：按“付出-应对-收获” 的逻辑，依次描述她的实验过程、失败后的坚持与突破 结尾：总结她的精神价值，升华主题，分享个人感悟 [第三步：要点展开] 要点一：屠呦呦的付出（Pain） 关键信息：did many experiments; failed 190 times 写作表达：She did many experiments to find a cure for malaria, but failed 190 times. 作用：体现研究过程的艰辛，为下文“坚持”做铺垫 要点二：屠呦呦的应对方式（Solution） 关键信息：didn’t give up; read old Chinese medical books; tried again 写作表达：She never gave up. Instead, she read old Chinese medical books and tried again and again. 作用：展现她面对挫折的态度，突出 “永不放弃” 的精神 要点三：屠呦呦的收获（Gain） 关键信息：found artemisinin; won the Nobel Prize in 2015 写作表达：Finally, she found artemisinin, which has saved millions of lives. In 2015, she won the Nobel Prize. 作用：点明她的研究成果与荣誉，呼应开头的 “伟大科学家” 定位 要点四：个人感悟 关键信息：从她的故事中学到的道理 写作表达：From her story, I learn that success comes from hard work and never giving up. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $ Unit 5 Looking into nature 书面表达10篇 内容导航 单元话题 基础语篇练习 重难语篇练习 单元话题聚焦 自然探索 基础语篇练习 稳扎稳打 必拿分数：聚焦稳拿分数题目，确保基础分值 重难语篇练习 突破瓶颈 争夺高分：聚焦高难度题目，争夺关键分数 基础语篇练习 1．在植物探索的征程中，无数先驱者留下足迹。请你根据以下提示写一篇英语短文，介绍中国植物探索者胡先骕，展现其贡献与精神。 (1) 胡先骕生于1894年； (2) 他发现许多新物种； (3) 1948年，他与郑万钧共同鉴定“活化石”水杉 (Metasequoia glyptostroboides Hu et Cheng) 注意： (1) 词数80～100，开头已给出，不计入总词数； (2) 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； (3) 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 Hu Xiansu is a remarkable Chinese plant explorer. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．热爱大自然的林涛，在阳光明媚的上周日踏入神秘森林探险，意外发现奇异花草与灵动小鸟，收获惊喜与成长。根据以上提示写一篇英语作文。 注意：(1)词数80~100； (2)可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； (3)文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．自然充满了奥秘，探索自然能让我们更好地了解世界。请以“My View on Nature Exploration”为题，写一篇英语短文，谈谈你对自然探索的看法。 要求： 1.内容包括：自然探索的意义、你知道的自然探索成就以及我们应该如何对待自然探索； 2.词数 80~100 左右； 3.语句通顺，语法正确，条理清晰。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．为了鼓励青少年亲近大自然、走进大自然，某青少年英文网站举办了主题为“Nature”的征文比赛。假如你是李明，请根据以下要点写一篇英文短文投稿。 要点：1. 记录一次走进大自然的经历及感受；2. 走进大自然的好处 (放松身心，……) ；3. 呼吁人们走进大自然。 注意： 1. 短文须包含以上要点，可增加细节以使行文连贯； 2. 词数80-100 (开头已为你写好，不计入总词数) 。 Nature Nature is our home. It’s a part of our life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．假设你是李华，你的外国笔友Mike来信想了解自然界的未解之谜，请你写一封邮件，介绍你知道的自然谜题，并谈谈你的看法。要求：100词左右，语句通顺。 6.你的英语课要求介绍一位探索自然的中国名人，请你介绍李时珍，讲述他的事迹与带给你的启发。要求：100词左右。 7．学校英语活动举行演讲比赛，主题为 Learn from Nature Explorers。请写一篇演讲稿，介绍中外探索者，表达你的想法。要求：100词左右。 8．请以 Explore the Secrets of Nature 为题，写一篇短文，结合自然现象、未解之谜和探索者精神，谈谈你的理解。要求：100词左右。 重难语篇练习 9．探索自然，探寻未知。为发扬求知精神，感受自然之美，你所在班级上周日组织了一次以“Nature Exploration and Environmental Protection Action”为主题的社会实践活动。假设你是李华，请你根据下面表格中的信息，谈谈当天的活动经历和感受。 注意：1. 须包含表格中的提示信息，可增加细节；2. 词数80-100。 When Last Sunday Where Mangrove Nature Reserve Who I, my classmates What visited the nature reserve, took part in a tree-planting activity, watched some birds A Meaningful Social Practice Activity __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．在你的学习生涯中，一定有很多科学家给你留下了深刻的印象。屠呦呦教授是中国第一位获得诺贝尔科学奖项的科学家，她和她的团队发现的青蒿素拯救了全球数百万人的生命。请你根据以下要点，写一篇作文，介绍她的付出与收获。 Name Pain Solution Gain Tu Youyou 1. did many experiments 2. failed 190 times 1. didn’t give up 2. read old Chinese medical books 3. tried again 1. found artemisinin 2. In 2015, won the Nobel Prize. 要求：1．分享一下你从屠呦呦的故事中学到了什么。 2．包含以上所有要点，并适当发挥。 3．80词左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 No pain, no gain — The Story of Tu Youyou There is an old saying, “No pain, no gain”. Tu Youyou’s story perfectly shows us the meaning of this saying. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $